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As a small boy, Darren Kiel was witness to his father’s corruption and contemptible misconduct. As he grew, that experience gave rise to a seething need to atone for his father’s crimes, to set the world aright, to enforce order. Now an adult, Darren is thrust into a world far more horrific than he could ever have imagined: The Orchard, a region inundated by crime, violence, poverty, decay, and desperation. With swelling intolerance, hardening resolve, and miraculous technology, Darren sets upon an obsessive crusade to correct what has gone wrong in this society’s machine. As the campaign escalates, Darren sees the violence spread to every corner of his life and threaten or destroy everything he’s worked for and everyone he holds dear.
But is this truly Darren’s war or is all this just a small part of a much larger design that he is only now beginning to glimpse?

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Release dateMar 25, 2012
ISBN9781476235080
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Geoffrey Germann

Geoffrey Germann earned a B.S. from Rutgers University, an M.S. and a PhD from the University of California, Irvine, and has held research positions at both Fortune 500 corporate and national research laboratories. He has studied both the science of fiction and the tools of today’s most miraculous technological advancements so fervently that the two have begun to blend. His vast experience with today’s most cutting-edge and revolutionary technologies and his training in applying those to the most intriguing modern problems (real and, arguably, fictional) imbues his work with a magnetic, inescapable plausibility and puts him in a unique position as a fiction writer.

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  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Darren Kiel is on a mission to make sure justice is served. With his incredible technological savy he helps develop a suit which allows him to step in where the police have failed - to protect the Orchid. He risks his life to protect those who cannot protect themselves and to make up for the sins of his father.

    He creates a break in the crime to allow the good citizens of an area to start taking hold of their city.

    The story has an exciting plot and is action packed. The characters are well developed and original. This book is a must-read!

    Disclosure: I received a free copy of the novel from the author.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Dr. Darren Kiel is not your ordinary type of guy. Armed with his own brand of justice, great intellect, and a state of the art technologically savvy fighting suit he is able to brave the gang infested streets of the Orchard to atone for the sins of his criminal father. Readers will be entertained by this action packed novel of a modern day superhero. The plot of Prepare was very fast paced, original, and futuristic without being completely fantastic. This aspect of the novel definitely made it entertaining and worth reading. However, there were a couple of conflicts that I found unbelievable. For example, why would the main character, Darren, feel obligated to clean up crime in the Orchard due to his father's embezzlement? While both are examples of crime, there doesn't seem to be a strong enough connection to motivate Darren to take on the scum of the Orchard. Another example is the role of Walter in the novel. Despite his construction of a grocery store in the Orchard, what really motivates him to seek out a person like Darren and then give Darren free rein to solve this crime problem? This is a fabulously wealthy man without complex ulterior motives?The minor characters in the book, for the most part, only make one appearance which makes them rather flat but necessary. However, I felt that some of the main characters could have been given more depth and complexity to add to the motivations for their actions or to create some inner conflict. Beyond its entertainment value, this novel seems to lack any real depth of understanding about the human condition or the moral issues that really plague our thoughts.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Micro mechanical engineering and biotechnology makes for one exciting superhero in Germann's ficitional work, "Prepare". Daniel Kiel enlists the aid of a fellow student he had met in graduate school, while both were in a doctoral program for micro mechanical engineering. Using their combined talents, Daniel becomes a modern day vigilante fighting crime and violence. Germann leaves you wanting more as you see a much larger picture unfolding towards the conclusion of the book. It begs for a sequel . . .
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I was given a free copy from the author in order to give a rating and a review. TL;DR Summary.I loved it. There are minor issues like the cover, the blurb and some things left out that I want filled in during the next book but honestly, they don't detract much or at all. True, the book didn't get much in depth with characters, but it is the first book, it is more action centered and there's at least some involvement. It makes sense, for what we have. It did jump right into things, but I think it jumped too quickly. I wanted to know what happened but it was a struggle to get through the first bit since I had no idea what was really going on. The science read as believable, but I'm a layman, all the big fancy words convinced me. Ask a scientist how well done that part was. It was grounded in enough realism to get the job done, didn't distract from the story and it was indeed, readable and believable enough to continue reading. The author uses similes a lot, which is fine, and they are usually well done. However, there did come a point where I noticed how often "like" got used. Of course, those are all minor things. I think the story, the action, the twists, and the characters were well done. It was a fun, fast enjoyable ride. Once I got into the book, I didn't want to put it down. I definitely recommend this book, especially for sci-fi and superhero fans. I'm thoroughly looking forward to reading the sequel. --------------------The first 50,60 or so pages dragged for me. It starts off pure action but it was hard to get involved into. Maybe it was that I didn't have any background information. Maybe it wasn't an emotional grab for me because it read like a scientific report. Things were detailed and described but it was mostly emotionless, due to everyone being in shock or disbelieving. It really read as disconnected as the store clerk felt. Now, I still wanted to read it to find out what happened and to finish it, but it wasn't an impressive start for me. It then loosened up a bit, gave us more meat instead of energy drink action and I got hooked. The Chief of Police VS the Steps, which is the beginning of Chapter 5, is an awesome, well done passage for a character. His description, history and who he is now really comes through superbly. Love that part. It keep rolling with Daniel and Adam in the training area, which I wish they had shown more of. It was funny, touching, made you feel their connection to each other and made you feel connected to them. Daniel's failings were with planning, something he's suppose to be good at but since this is a new endeavor he's missing key things. It was nice to see the growth of Daniel in this aspect. It seems too good to be true how quickly Daniel picks things up, trains his reflexes and moves quickly with the buttons.We kept being told how much training he did, but it would have been really nice to see more of it. It would help with making Daniel more real, more down to earth, get to know him better, explore his relationship with Adam more and get to know Adam better. Which would have also helped making the ending of Daniel's partnership with Adam more emotionally impacting. For the end, I actually liked it. I get why some people had a problem with it but honestly, I liked the idea. It felt a bit James Bondish, a bit Heath Ledger Jokerish, a bit Unbreakable, and my favorite, a bit Criminal Minds in reverse. It was grand and added more to the story than just Batman/Ironman, and it also sets it up for more additions later on. It also is quite honestly one of the reasons why people love comic books, the wonder of "Could I be that good? Would I make that choice?". We rejoice the actions of heroes and applaud the downfall of villains, while seeing ourselves in the panels, while daydreaming of what could make us super, what choices we'd make and the good we would do. I'm definitely looking forward to reading the sequel. I can see possibilities of where it's going and possible fill ins for things not included, possibilities for growth and possibilities for greater character development.Hopefully, we get to see more of the mysterious woman that popped in and out to help save the day. Here's the thing about that. I like comic books. I want to read comic books. However, I cannot due to the sexism. I really can't stand it. Instead of making it enjoyable, it becomes a miserable reminder of a woman's place in society. I really really hope we see more this mysterious woman and that G.Germann doesn't let me down in the sexism department. As much as I love this book and want to read more from this author, if women are given the same treatment as in comic books, I will be miserable. It would be so disappointing. Please, Mr. Germann, I hope you or someone close to you has this in mind. Comics have driven a lot of women out due to this issue and I'd hate for that to happen with this awesome series. I must say though, please, please, work on your cover and blurb. I get what you were trying to go for with the cover but I think it fell flat. Yeah, you can't judge a book by it's cover, (this book is better than it looks), but at the same time, a book cover is a person's first impression of a book. And you know what they say about first impressions.I also think the blurb was off the mark. I think it gave away a part of Daniel before it was necessary. I think it would have been better to discover his past through the book, instead of reading the blurb and waiting for that shoe to drop all the way up to the half way point.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Like many readers I received this book directly from the author after I failed to win a drawing for a free copy. Mr. Germann was nice enough to contact me directly and send me a copy at his own expense. Despite his generosity, I set out to read his book with a candid and critical eye.Overall the book seems reasonably professional despite a few foibles of typography. The author's style though seems split between the preparatory phases of his novel and the more climactic ones. For the first half of the book the style is solid though undistinguished. He paints a cohesive, though at times overly brief picture of his characters that leaves the reader with a good conceptual and sympathetic image. It is during this phase too that we see the author's tendency towards paired similes; no sooner is one found then it can be guaranteed that another will soon follow. In many cases the comparisons seem forced and inappropriate but a few border on brilliance.When the climax of the novel begins Germann's tone shifts substantially and he provides a much more skillful and less tentative product. The author's portrayal of action sequences is immaculate and at times breathtaking. While the first pages stumble a bit the last half of the text veritably flies past.The story itself is cut from the cloth of the "man become superman" motif via innovation in technology. Generally speaking such ideas are nothing new but Germann does provide us with a fresh take on the idea and does present us with a deeper question of just what the word justice means and how that differs from society's enforcement of it. 'Prepare' is entertaining, at least mildly-thought provoking and well worth the few hours it takes to read it. I look forward to Germann's future contributions to the genre.Going beyond the inner contents I would be remiss if I didn't at least mention the book's packaging. Germann's novel is a dozen times better than its external appearance and since the cover is such a decided driver of sales I think it would be a shame if his work suffered in popularity for such a trite reason. The title too completely fails to inspire and puts one more in the mindset of a Christian rapture novel than hard-boiled crime noir. It is my hope that readers will be able to look past these two significant shortcomings and give the book a chance.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    I found the introduction a great lead to the story. Started reading the book on Monday, could not put it down, was fascinated with the main character, Darren Kiel. Found him to be a cross between Iron man and Batman. A new age superhero, trying to bring order to a chaotic city. The story line flowed without a lot of distraction, kept me intrigued and wanting to see what was next. I think Germann is an author to watch, and can't wait for the next book to come out. This is a must read and I highly recommend doing so.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I received a free copy of Prepare in exchange for my review. Superhero Darren Kiel uses his wealth and intelligence to design a suit that gives him the ability to protect himself while fighting violence against the innocent people living in the Orchard. Darren stops muggings, shootings, store robberies and drug manifacturing-all taking place in the gang infested Orchard. There is also some romance in this story when Darren meets Corrine Daniels, a doctor at Mercy Hospital. When Darren's identity is revealed as 'the guy in the hat', he finds out there is more than just his own need for justice that has helped to clean up the Orchard. Prepare is action packed and a really good read.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    This book was a page turner. The description was very good and with it brought a sense of realness to the story. Along with the his attention to detail in the story.Even though the story is a fictional book it has a sense of moral and social issues intertwined into the story. I loved Darren in this story. German has just made a new fan.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    I was offered a free copy of this book because I signed up for the Goodreads Giveaway.I was apprehensive about this book since it's a superhero kind of story and I don't usually care much for superheroes. It reminded me a lot of Batman. I thoroughly enjoyed this book though. There was plenty of action and the main character was very interesting. A little romance, some tragedy, and just overall a very well put together story. I'm thankful I was given this opportunity.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I was sent this book from the author, so a huge thanks to him I loved it! I rated 4 out of 5 stars only because in the beginning i had a hard time with the characters and a few clerical errors but the writing got amazing as of the third chapter and I couldn't put it down after that. I look forward to more books to come from this author.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    The author sent me this book at his own expense when I didn't win it in a contest on goodreads.I think he was rightfully proud of his book and wanted it to get a wider audience. It is a super hero book in which the "hero" is aided by a lot of high tech equipment. It reads like an adult graphic novel without the graphics. When I read it I just felt happy. Bad guys are dealt with and the intrepid hero gets out of all his scrapes but its all done with creativity and written with a tongue is cheek joy that makes you want to read on. The only negative for me was although the ":hero" seems to like the other characters there is very feeling that he even cares that much for them even what seems to be the "love interest" in the book. The book is pretty PG in its approach to things. All in all a very nice debut novel from an author that looks to be around for a long time.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    The author was kind enough to send me a copy of the book for in exchange for an honest review and I thank him for that opportunity .I got to tell you that I really enjoyed this book! The main character, Darren is awesome he is very likeable and intelligent . I mean , who doesn't like a smart masked vigilante superhero? There's a good amount of fast paced action throughout the whole book and I loved that. The plot line was great, and moved at a fast steady pace. if you're into superheroes, or if you just want to read a really good action story, I would recommend this book.

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Prepare - Geoffrey Germann

Prepare

a Novel

by

Geoffrey Germann

Smashwords edition

Copyright 2012 Geoffrey Germann

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Copyright 2011 by Geoffrey Germann. All rights reserved. CAUTION: Professionals and amateurs are hereby warned that Prepare is subject to a royalty. It is fully protected under the copyright laws of the United States of America and of all countries covered by the International Copyright Union (including the Dominion of Canada and the rest of the British Commonwealth), the Berne Convention, the Pan American Copyright Convention and the Universal Copyright Convention as well as all countries with which the United States has reciprocal copyright relations. All rights, including professional/amateur stage rights, motion picture, recitation, lecturing, public reading, radio broadcasting, television, video or sound recording, all other forms of mechanical or electronic reproduction, such as CD-ROM, CD-I, information storage and retrieval systems and photocopying, and the rights of translation into foreign languages are strictly reserved. Particular emphasis is laid on the matter of photocopying and electronic reproduction, permission for which must be secured from the author or his agent in writing.

Dedication

To Kana,

an oasis of serenity and reason

in an all-too-often chaotic and irrational world.

Thank you for the gifts you’ve brought to my life,

in particular, the most recent. : )

INTRODUCTION

The very purpose of scientific technology has always been the augmentation of human capability. Scientific theories and machines are the very tools by which mankind strives to become more than his body and senses grant him. It is, and always has been, through the application of our understanding in the practical world that we aspire to Hamlet’s ironic characterization What a piece of work is man, how noble in reason, how infinite in faculty, in form, in moving, how express and admirable, in action, how like an angel, in apprehension how like a god.

History is full of examples of people, scientists, using technology to enhance all of man's senses, all of man’s aptitudes.

Sight: In the 17th century Galileo, through patient improvement of the lens grinding process, advanced the science of optics tenfold. The result was an absolutely stunning leap forward in the human sense of sight. Perched on the tower in Venice’s Piazza San Marco, Galileo demonstrated his telescope to potential investors. They were staggered to very clearly see ships on the horizon that were entirely beyond detection by the unaided eye. The applications were numerous. Galileo's funding was assured, and in an instant, the science of astronomy was born.

Sound: Man’s necessity to communicate over vast distances, well beyond the range of his hearing, has led to a string of innovations, from the drum, to the trumpet, to the radio transmitter, to the telephone. The technology of audio communication has evolved to such an extent that any person on Earth can speak with any other person in the world virtually instantly and with no loss of fidelity. Our augmented sense of hearing now serves us virtually without limit.

Touch: In the early 1990's development of the scanning tunneling and atomic force microscopes enabled scientists to feel individual atoms on an atomically flat surface. The instruments sense subatomic-scale topography by using atomically sharp stylii, a sort of mechanical finger, not light or sound. Subsequent advances made it possible to push atoms around at will. This represented a million fold improvement in the human tactile capacity. It is arguably the first instance of atomic scale micro-machining.

Taste and smell: Particularly with the advent of the laser in the 1960's, the field of atomic and molecular spectroscopy enjoyed burgeoning growth in the latter part of the 20th-century. Within a short span of decades, a plethora of spectroscopic techniques had been developed to detect atomic and/or molecular species down to the parts per billion. We could smell just a few atoms of a certain type buried in a complex soup of gases. This would be akin to detecting a single human face from among the population of the entire United States and accomplishing the task in just seconds.

There are other examples, transportation technology augmenting mankind's ability to perambulate; the advent of manufactured shelters to enable mankind to better survive changing climatic conditions. The history of man is that of our species using tools and technology to achieve an advantage over our challenges and improve our control over our environment.

Since prehistory, man has used technology for the purpose of progress, for the betterment of his circumstances and for the comfort and survival of his species.

By the 20th century, technology had advanced to such a degree from our forebears that, indeed, man enjoyed progress toward his aspirations. From eyeglasses, to hearing aids, to cellular phones, to hip replacements, to heart surgery, and in other innumerable ways, man had shaken the limitations of his birth and extended his own life in duration and quality.

In the early 21st century, as microelectronics and the products of material science shrank to atomic dimensions, the augmentations were becoming invisible to the observer, some examples being lasik surgery and diminutive hearing aids, but the differentiations they brought were incalculable. It is no surprise that, on the cusp of these advances, certain outliers that amplified man’s capabilities in vivid and striking fashion would appear nothing less than miraculous to the uninitiated and have a substantial influence on their local environment if applied correctly.

In the early 21st century, the events peppered throughout a few dozen city blocks in the LA basin barely registered on the consciousness of the majority of inhabitants. Most citizens are not victims of violent crimes. So for a short time when the violent crime rate in some areas dropped to approximately one-third its previous value, those unaffected by the change remained blissfully unaware.

Even if the phenomena had been a front-line story for the local media, in centuries to come, they would garner no greater mention than a footnote in an anthropological text. But for those more directly affected at that moment in time, the events had a profound impact.

CHAPTER 1

He had taken the bell off the door the first week.

That was 40 years ago.

Having a bell ring every time someone entered was not only ridiculously redundant it was distracting. Anyone not dead from the neck up could tell when someone entered without even looking, the slight change in pressure as the customer broke the weather seal, the street sounds that spilled in when the door came open, the rustle of clothing as they moved, the click or squeak of shoes walking on the bare tile floor.

That part was not only easy; it was as obvious as a baby crying on an overcrowded airplane.

You had to have two brain cells to infer more and even then you didn’t have to open your eyes. How many people entered? You could tell by the length of time the door remained open. What was the sex of each customer? That could be determined by the pitch and cadence of the footsteps. What time of day was it? That was revealed by the depth of noise outside and the temperature of the puff of air that entered when the door allowed it.

And there was more. What scents came along in the bubble of external atmosphere as the air swept through the store clinging to the new patron like a smoker’s aura? What was the weather like? Did they smell of sunblock or rain?

Yeah that was the easy part. After that, Nikolai Adaireux, had to actually wake up; to keep track of how many were in the space at any one time. Where were they? The magazine section? The refrigerator section? The candy aisle? And of course what were they stealing?

Everyone stole.

Whether it was a child pilfering a gumball too quickly for a parent to stop it, an adolescent stealing a glance at a forbidden magazine, a teen-ager stealing the latest peel-off raffle ticket from some product with a half-baked marketing scheme, or an adult overfilling a drinking cup to the point that it spilled.

Everyone stole.

The trick was to keep it to a minimum and of course, particularly, a monetary minimum. That required a modicum of vigilance, an overt glare in the direction of the periodicals, a shift in his body posture to give him a better vista of the candy aisle, an almost subconscious whistle that bounced off the far wall and filled the refrigerator corner giving just enough sense of presence to deter moral transgression. With the slightest gesture he could fill the 60 foot by 60 foot space and herd the parade of patrons to their best behavior.

Most of the time.

Most of the time, the subtle control worked because the targets weren't actively trying to avoid it. For most, a stop at the store wasn't an event to notice, it was a task to execute. Most didn't need to have their full focus on buying a pack of gum or picking up a six-pack of beer. For most, a stop at the store was an afterthought, a breeze passing through their day. It was beneath their notice and that was the way Nikolai liked it.

Sometimes, he even made a game of it: how many seconds would it take him to sum up the life of the next person and divine what aisle they would choose? A child gravitating to the comic book rack, a female with slightly unkempt hair and a stained sweatshirt darting to the baby food aisle, a slouching youth with clunky untied boots, greasy hair hanging in his eyes, and a cigarette dangling in his mouth drifting toward the liquor shelves for, not wine, but Jack Daniels.

It was a small store, a small job, but it gave a panoramic view of a revealing cross-section of humanity. It kept him closer to the pulse and flow of the Earth than any other job he could imagine. He had been here through boom and bust, through heady bull markets and desperate recessions, and he had watched the parade of humanity almost as a single organism respond and react to the world outside just as plainly as a child might react to light or dark, hot or cold, cruelty or kindness.

The store had been robbed only twice when Nikolai was on duty. The first time was within a month of his starting the job. A single man about five foot ten and weighing 130 lbs., wearing a gray hooded sweatshirt and dark sunglasses walked in late at night when no one else was in the store. He put a long barreled 357 Magnum on the counter and said simply, Give me all the money.

Nikolai complied. The man took the money and left the store. Nikolai called police and the standard protocols ensued. Aside from Nikolai’s emotional upset, it had been a smooth transaction, but not one he ever wanted to repeat. It was his first lesson in increasing his vigilance.

The second time had been almost 25 years ago. His had been one of over a dozen stores on the street assaulted during a political riot. An indiscriminate rash of destruction had swept through the neighborhood smashing windows and grabbing anything within arm's reach. It had been a shameful episode in the city's history and, at the time, beyond Nikolai’s control.

He had been robbed only twice in 40 years.

The door opened ... make that three times.

In hindsight he should have seen this coming. It had been a horrible set of years in this part of the country. The district was feeling its decay. He could see it in his customers’ faces, the frustration, the fear, the resentment, the growing anger of caged animals. He could smell it in the air, like the rich mix of an old diesel truck driving over an ill patched stretch of reeking tarmac. He could hear it in the increasing length of time that motorists leaned on traffic horns and the lower, sadder, more timid voices of the store patrons. He could feel in the air as hope grew thinner and began to stretch like shrinking skin over emaciated bones.

It was coming.

Like a wrecking ball of despair and hatred, it was coming.

Like the four horsemen of the apocalypse, it was coming and today it walked into his life.

He was probably pushing 6 foot 8 or 6 foot 9 and Nikolai guessed 325 lbs. He wore a black tank top that clearly displayed his lean youthful muscles, the first tool of his trade: raw bone-crushing power. A black hair net and a pair of opaque glasses further protected his anonymity; another tactic to make sure his prey conceived him as a force, not a person.

It was working.

There were eight people in the store when he entered like some kind of revered gladiator into a combat ring. 30 seconds later there were none. Half the patrons consciously dropped whatever purchase they were pondering and moved for the door as inconspicuously as possible. The remainder did the same, but there was a lack of will to their movements, like they were just following the flow, emptying the store to make room for a presence that filled and over-pressurized the volume like hydraulic fluid in a trash compactor piston.

Then the others came in, three of them, like courtiers to the man mountain, accenting his malice, underlining his power, confirming his dominion.

He surveyed the scene like he owned it. Nikolai guessed, in his mind, he had. In his world, he owned every room he entered. The massive thing made a slow loop around the store, maybe to confirm the room was empty, maybe to heighten the sense of terror he was hoping to impose on Nikolai, the only remaining target.

Nikolai kept no weapons, no defensive tools whatsoever. In his experience, anyone who got past his passive vigilance only wanted money and, if they got that far, and they were that determined, he would give it to them and it would be done.

That was another miscalculation on his part.

Again he should've seen us coming. As the blackness, the malevolence, the hatred grew out in the streets, it was bound to come in here sooner or later. He just never imagined it would have been in such a pure form.

The thing picked up one of the more objectionable magazines and put it in his back pocket without a thought. He completed the loop, stopped about 3 feet from the door, then he twitched his head in Nikolai’s direction. The three other men approached Nikolai, two produced guns on the way, the other a barber's razor. Nikolai said nothing but raised his hands in a calming, submissive posture. He looked each man in the eye – or what he hoped was the eye, since he couldn't tell through the black glasses each wore.

The men rushed up like a surging black wave. The one with a razor took a swipe at Nikolai’s left hand. Nikolai was lucky enough to pull his hand back before the blade cut him to the bone, or worse severed his fingers completely. One of the thugs with a gun reached a hand over the counter and was ready to vault the barrier when it began.

It was a strange sound.

Nikolai would have guessed that no one else would've heard it. None of them was used to listening to the sounds of the street or was attuned to the signatures of the city from behind this particular front door. It sounded like footsteps but super accelerated, so the effect almost reminded Nikolai of a rattlesnake's warning. Something seemed to come in at the speed of a comet, then suddenly stop right at the front door, behind the man mountain. Nikolai looked in that direction and saw a man standing in the doorway.

That was impossible.

He had gotten used to hearing people come from 50 feet outside his door, even if they wore quiet shoes, the street outside just didn't lend itself to stealthy approach, but there he was. It almost felt like the new patron had winked in out of nowhere.

He wore a nondescript black rain hat with about a 6 inch brim and a lightweight but full length coat. In fact, all Nikolai could really see was the coat and the hat, just a dark shape in the doorway. The three men stopped their assault and looked back to the door, mostly in response to Nikolai noticing the patron. The man mountain looked at his three courtiers, confused for a moment before he realized they were looking not at him but behind him. The mountain of muscle spun around. His reaction was immediate. He drew a gun out of his oversized denim jeans with his left hand.

Fortunately, the patron was fast enough to block the gun with his right hand before the man pointed it at him.

Unfortunately, the gun had only been a distraction.

The mountain drew his right hand fully back to his shoulder. Nikolai saw the flash of brass knuckles before the hammer strike fell with the force of a 20 ton boat anchor dropped from high earth orbit. Nikolai couldn't even imagine the trauma that would be inflicted on the human body as the mountain leaned in with his hip and drove forward with his shoulder, throwing his full weight and strength down on this one man's unprepared an unsuspecting jaw.

Nikolai flinched and closed his eyes.

He felt a welling of sorrow for this man who, while trying to help, had sacrificed his life in an instant to this wild animal and his tools of destruction. Nikolai heard the sickening sound of metal impacting what would next be the shattering of bone, the splash of blood on the windows and sidewalk, the collapse of a limp body, dead before it even hit the floor ... or so he thought. What he actually heard sounded more like a metal sledge hammer striking a concrete monolith and the man mountain howling like he'd just broken his arm.

Nikolai opened his eyes.

The patron was standing exactly, to Nikolai’s perception exactly, as he had before the hammer strike. Even his hat hadn’t moved.

The man mountain dropped the gun and clutched his right wrist with his left hand, cradling it like it was in a sling.

The next 60 seconds felt very much like an ongoing car accident. It went by so fast that Nikolai had no time to react, but each second seemed like hours of frenetic activity. The stranger, seemingly completely oblivious to the man mountain’s attack, bolted in Nikolai’s direction. He covered the distance in a fraction of a second, far faster than any Olympic sprinter could ever have cleared the starting blocks. He plowed into the three courtiers in a move that reminded Nikolai of a bowling ball scattering a set of pins. He swept away the thug closest to Nikolai and crashed into the two remaining men sending all four bodies tumbling toward the back of the store. They landed in a chaotic heap of limbs and torsos as rolls of paper towels and loaves of bread fell from the shelves on top of them.

One of the thugs began to scramble away from the pile, but stopped with a jolt and began convulsing. Nikolai had seen a taser in action before. This first man's reaction was unmistakable. His head vibrated until his glasses fell off. His eyes rolled back into his head and his eyelids fluttered in a half-closed position, like he’d completely lost control of his ocular apparatus. His hands clutched and clawed at the floor as the muscles in his arms strained at nothing, his every nerve ending driven to frenetic confusion.

When his body went limp, Nikolai guessed it would be five minutes before he began to stir.

One down.

Even before the first man had stopped twitching, Nikolai heard the loud report of two gunshots. He jumped at the sound and his heart nearly punched a hole through his chest. After the echo died away, he saw the second man standing over the stranger with a smoking gun pointed directly at the stranger’s chest. Nikolai’s protector was flat on his back with his hand still on the ankle of the first man. There was a breathless pause, a moment of haunting stillness before all hell broke loose.

The stranger reached up with his left hand, grabbed the second man's wrist, which still held the gun, and yanked. As the second man fell forward, the stranger released the first man’s ankle and brought his right fist up to meet the side of the second man's head. The punch didn't seem fast, in fact it seemed ponderously slow. The stranger swung at an odd angle and swooped around to contact the second man's left temple. Slow as the strike looked, the thug’s head responded like a soccer ball off a lineman’s foot. It bounced off at alarming speed, his body went limp, and he fell to the floor on top of the first man.

Two down.

The third man, the same one that had threatened Nikolai with the straight razor, scrambled to his knees. He drew a long knife and threw his full weight behind it as he plunged it into the stranger’s stomach.

At least that was the plan.

Nikolai heard a loud crack when his weight came down on the knife and the attacker started screaming. The man pulled himself back off the stranger, clearly in agony. His wrist hung at the end of his arm at an odd angle.

As the thug stared at his broken arm, the stranger grabbed him by the throat and the thug began to convulse, again a taser-like reaction. Five more seconds and his body went limp.

Three down.

The stranger still hadn't stood up.

Now the man mountain lumbered in the stranger’s direction. It hadn't been 15 seconds since he’d struck the stranger with his brass knuckles. He was clearly favoring his right hand, but that wasn't slowing his approach. He pointed his gun at the stranger and rang off six shots. Nikolai winced as the bullets ricocheted around the store.

The man mountain tossed the gun aside.

He picked up one of the heavy wood display barrels Nikolai used in the store. Occasionally, Nikolai had tried to move one of these barrels. He guessed it weighed almost 300 lbs. The man mountain hoisted it over his head and rushed toward the stranger. The stranger now scrambled to get to his feet, pushing the bodies aside and slipping on the waxed tile surface. He had just made it to all fours when the barrel came down on his back like a wrecking ball.

The container made a sound like a small explosion and shattered like an eggshell.

The man mountain stood up from the blow.

So did the stranger.

He brushed wooden planks and snack cakes from his shoulders and stood up to his full height, maybe 6 feet. Incomprehensibly, he still had his hat on.

The man mountain, now enraged and howling like a mad dog, rushed forward and grabbed the stranger by the throat. He whipped the stranger off the floor and slammed him against the back wall. He held the stranger two feet off the ground as the man's

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