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    First Mistakes: A Guide For Smashwords Fiction Writers
    First Mistakes: A Guide For Smashwords Fiction Writers
    First Mistakes: A Guide For Smashwords Fiction Writers
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    First Mistakes: A Guide For Smashwords Fiction Writers

    By David Blake

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    The most important sentence in any story is the very first one, and yet it is commonly neglected by novice writers. This simple advice guide uses real examples from works already published on Smashwords and examines some of the various tricks a writer can use with an opening sentence and also some of the common errors that can start turning the reader against your story before you've even got started.

    It demonstrates the importance of the opening line and how it can be used to create atmosphere, character and the vital 'hook' that captures the reader's interest.

    LanguageEnglish
    PublisherDavid Blake
    Release dateMay 12, 2013
    ISBN9781301364114
    First Mistakes: A Guide For Smashwords Fiction Writers
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    David Blake

    David Blake was born in the northwest of England in 1970 and grew up on a diet of Marvel comics, 2000 AD and television sci-fi. He has been writing for as long as he can remember and remains an avid reader. His other interests include travelling, vintage British television programmes, vintage cinema, football, eating toast and even having the occasional drink. If David Blake has reviewed your work on Smashwords, please do not take any criticism to heart. He tries to be unbiased and constructive, and will only award 5 stars to the absolute best works, which will be rare.

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      First Mistakes - David Blake

      -1First Mistakes

      Getting Your First Line Right

      By David Blake

      Smashwords Edition

      Copyright 2013 David Blake

      Smashwords Edition, License Notes

      Thank you for downloading this free ebook. You are welcome to share it with your friends. This book may be reproduced, copied and distributed for non-commercial purposes, provided the book remains in its complete original form, although sections of it may be quoted for the purposes of review. David Blake should be credited as the author at all times. Thank you for your support.

      Please note that this work merely reflects the opinion of David Blake and is not an attempt to denigrate the works of other writers. Lines quoted from other authors’ works are used in the context of review only and fall within the ‘Fair Use’ confines of copyright law

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      Okay, so you like writing. You’ve written some fiction and you’ve uploaded it to that wonderful website Smashwords so that you can share it with the whole world. That’s great.

      Until your story, your wonderful story which you love like it’s your child and which you possibly toiled over for weeks, months, or even years, starts getting criticism.

      Criticism hurts, doesn’t it? As writers, we all have to be prepared to take it. And whilst we’d all like our written

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