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The Crescent
The Crescent
The Crescent
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Becoming a werewolf is not an option for seventeen-year-old Lacey Quinn, but death can be a strong motivator.
Lacey is so focused on her future that everyday life has past her by. Counting down the days to her eighteenth birthday, Lacey is almost home free. But when she falls for the mysterious Alex Morris, she lands in the middle of an ancient war between two enemy wolf packs. Tempting dreams, tantalizing lies and a dangerous love triangle ensues leaving Lacey heartbroken and confused.

Lacey’s fate rests in the hands of Alex and Brandon, but both are pulling her strings for their own agendas. Even as she slips further into the dark world of werewolves, Lacey struggles to find the truth and save the only family she’s ever known.

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PublisherJordan Deen
Release dateDec 4, 2013
ISBN9781310519819
The Crescent
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Jordan Deen

Jordan Deen is a Young Adult and New Adult Fiction writer from a small suburb of East St. Louis, Illinois. Her novels are a mixture of urban fantasy, paranormal and edgy contemporary. In her free time, she loves to read, bake, attend concerts, travel and play with her two-legged and four-legged sons. She is known for her love of quirky clothes, multi-colored hair and has a fondness for tattoos, high heels and cupcakes. In addition, she is a tech junkie that can be found most mornings and early afternoons on her tablet talking to folks on Facebook and Twitter about books, current events and music.Her debut novel, 'The Crescent' was a 2010 Reader's Favorite Award Winner. Her third novel, 'Breaking Lauren' was a Texas Book Association Finalist in 2013.

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  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
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    Read the full Review at Witchmag's BoekenplankFirst of all, I really loved the cover! It gives off such a mysterious feeling, you just don’t know what kind of story you’ll get ^^ The blurb on the other hand doesn’t work in favor of the book. When I read it, it didn’t attract me to start reading. It seems like it would be yet another story about a new boy arriving and it all starts. But this book definitely differs from all the others!The book went off with a powerful start with the appearance of a very big dog. Since this book is about werewolves, my mind was already working overtime and was connecting all the possible dots. In reality it went a little bit different than I expected ^^ I was also intrigued by the fact that Lacey appeared to have not one but two possible soul-mates and about all the visions she has about what their live will be like ^^I just thought that Lacey would be better off if she starts listening to what her body tells her. If your body tells you that something is not right, that your sick, you’d usually stay home, right? You wouldn’t think it’s a hallucination, right? Every time it happens? Wouldn’t you start thinking that maybe they’re not hallucinations?This book has opened my eyes about soul-mates. Before reading this book I always thought how great it would be to have one. But it actually means you’re obligated to love someone, because he’s your soul-mate. Even when you just fell in love with someone else. You’ll know you’ll break that someone’s heart, although you still love him. You just love someone else more, someone you just met a couple of seconds ago. Isn’t that a bit cruel for the one that’s left behind? This problem is described in detail and gave me a whole new look on soul-mates…Although I liked the fresh look on soul-mates, I didn’t like the soul-mates in question. Both Alex and Brandon didn’t seem to have a lot of “depth.” Not for the role they have in this book. Occasionally they were even annoying and boyfriend material. But alas, I had to cope with them, since there weren’t any other options available…Conclusion3 HEARTS. Although the start was strong, it became more fuzzy to the end and my attention wavered. After you read this book you’ll get a whole new look on the soul-mates problem and I really liked that, even when it became very hard for Lacey. She has my full support, even though I would like for her to listen to her body more. If you’re sick, you’re sick -.-
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    THE CRESCENT, by Jordan Deen, was an original spin on werewolves. Deen created the perfect setting for understanding her take on werewolves and the primal thoughts and urges that surround their being.This book stands out on its own in terms of creativity. The connection that Lacey shared with both Brandon and Alex was equally tempting and passionate. With Brandon it was more of a mental connection and with Alex it was definitely physical. The decision to choose from the brain or body was Lacey's impossible choice. I liked the tension created from both wolf packs to "get" Lacey on either side. This added tension created a really great love triangle and I soon became anxious for its resolution.One thing that bothered me about this book was the immediate romance between Lacey and Alex. I felt that there should have been a bit more of a courtship between the two, or at least more questions from Lacey on why he jumped right into the relationship. Alex was a bit too clingy for my taste and Lacey constantly wondered why, but hesitated to take a step back herself. And I wish there could have been more involvement for Brandon in the relationship, but maybe there will be in the sequel.How great is this cover? I was immediately drawn in by the midst-covered wolf. I enjoyed this supernatural tale of fate versus choice and I am excited to read the sequel Half Moon, where I hope many of my questions will be answered.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
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    Lacey just can’t wait until she can leave for college, and escape the constant fighting between her parents. She spends afternoons working in her aunt’s veterinarian hospital. She is definitely not considered one of the popular girls at school. Imagine her surprise when she captures the attention of not one, but both of the new boys. If only Lacey knew what that attention will cost her, and that her life is about to be turned upside down.I was pleasantly surprised with this little novel. It started out slow, but I really liked main character, Lacey. She kept me reading. Once the action picked up I found it hard to put down. This book contains a very intricate love triangle, and for the first time ever I wasn’t able to choose a side by the time I reached the end. Both love interests seem like perfect matches for Lacey. What a lucky girl! The author did a great job of creating a story that didn’t feel rushed, and held this reader’s attention. If you enjoy werewolf books, especially those from the young adult genre, give this one a try. It’s a quick read with an interesting plot. I look forward to seeing what happens in the next book of this series.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I didn't know what to expect going into this one. All I knew was to expect werewolves. One of the first things I couldn't help but notice was the odd way the paragraphs were spaced and quite a few grammatical errors. I knew this book wasn't published by a big publisher, so it wasn't "polished" as nicely. But I still went in with an open mind to focus on the story. As soon as I got into the story, I didn't even notice the errors.Lacey was a pretty likable main character. I immediately felt bad for her for living in a house where her parents fight all the time. That hits pretty close to home for me. One thing I really liked about Lacey was that she had an after school job. She helped her aunt at an animal shelter after school. That is something I'd like to see more of in YA lit. There was one thing that irritated me about Lacey, and that was her lack of questions. She had questions bouncing around in her head, but she wouldn't actually ask them. Especially with stuff going on with her parents. Any person in her situation would be asking "What the hell is going on?" more often than she did. It also seemed that her parents just stopped fighting all of a sudden, with no explanation why. The first few chapters made it seem like they do nothing but fight, but then you didn't see it anymore. That was a little confusing for me. The main focus of this story is the love triangle. But this love triangle is SO much more complex. First Lacey falls for Alex. Their relationships seems perfect. It moves way too fast, but you understand later in the story why. Then Brandon comes along, a guy Lacey knows nothing about, but is having flashes and daydreams that feel like they really happened. But this isn't as easy as picking one over the other. By choosing one, it could mean the death of the other. This is really a love story about the difference of who you love, and who you are supposed to love. At one point Lacey says she loves one with her head, and one with her heart. I loved that line. I honestly can't pick a team. There are qualities and flaws in both Brandon and Alex. Most of the book I was all for Brandon. But at the end, I started leaning towards Alex. I'll have to wait for the next book to see what I think!I loved the idea of one wolf pack against the other. I don't want to go into the details of what being a werewolf in Lacey's world means, because I don't want to spoil anything. But I will say that I thought Deen's idea was very unique and intriguing. The ending left at a cliffhanger that left me wanting to know what is going to happen. The Crescent was a quick and enjoyable read for me. It had a few flaws, but in the end I was left wanting more. The qualities outweigh the flaws for me. I have a good feeling about the next book in this series. Romance fans will enjoy this one. I, for one am waiting for the sequel!

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The Crescent - Jordan Deen

THE CRESCENT

by

Jordan Deen

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The Crescent

~ Book one of the Crescent trilogy ~

ISBN: 9781310519819

Smashwords Edition

Copyright 2009 by Jordan Deen

All rights reserved

Cover design by: K Keeton Designs

Edited by: Reader's Favorite

Interior Formatting by: Sharon Kay

http://www.jordandeen.net/

This is a work of fiction. All of the characters, organizations, and events portrayed in this novel are either products of the author's imagination or are used fictitiously. Any use of name brands herein is done so under the Fair Use Act.

Licensing Note: This eBook is licensed for your personal enjoyment only, and may not be resold or given away to other people. Thank you for respecting the author's work.

Table of Contents

Contents:

Acknowledgements

Chapter One

Chapter Two

Chapter Three

Chapter Four

Chapter Five

Chapter Six

Chapter Seven

Chapter Eight

Chapter Nine

Chapter Ten

Chapter Eleven

Chapter Twelve

Chapter Thirteen

Chapter Fourteen

Chapter Fifteen

Chapter Sixteen

Chapter Seventeen

Chapter Eighteen

Chapter Nineteen

Chapter Twenty

Chapter Twenty-One

Chapter Twenty-Two

Chapter Twenty-Three

Chapter Twenty-Four

Chapter Twenty-Five

Acknowledgements

Without my friends and family, this novel would never have happened. I appreciate having you in my life each and every day.

In loving memory of CJS. I miss you and I think of you often.

c h a p t e r

ONE

Blink 182 blared on my iPod as I shuffled down the sidewalk from my house leaving the stupidity behind me. My house slippers, wet from the dew on our lawn, left weird footprints as I walked. I tried to drown out the sound of my parents’ yelling in my head, their most recent argument still ringing in my ears. Being the only child meant being dragged into the middle of their arguments, each side using me as a pawn in their selfish and insensitive game of chess.

The war raging in my living room wasn’t about religious freedoms or Constitutional Rights; it wasn’t even about lying or cheating.

No, it’s midnight and the topic for tonight was who used their ATM card at the gas station. Yeah. That’s right. People are dying of AIDS, kids are being abused and abandoned, but my parents find it necessary to fight over $25.42. Oh, I forgot the $.50 processing fee for using debit instead of credit. So technically, the argument boiled down to $25.92 (including tax, of course). But if you asked my father, it’s about the principle.

The more they fought the more eager I became to get away from them. Next year I’d be enjoying the sand and sea in San Diego – the home of my aunt’s alma mater and my future college, not to mention that it is 500 miles away from this hellhole. My parents loved each other at some point, but it is obvious that had to be years ago, maybe even before I was born. As I walked past the Johnsons’ house, I wondered if they knew my father was a drunk-in-denial and my mother had recently started popping pills – uppers in the morning, downers in the evening. Then again, I always thought Mr. Johnson was a pedophile since he watched the preteen girls from the neighborhood playing hopscotch from his bedroom window with binoculars. My family secrets probably wouldn’t scare him in the slightest.

The streetlight at the end of the block turned my skin a fake tan color as if I had spent the whole summer at the beach, but I hadn’t. I looked towards my house; by going back now I’d risk being dragged into the argument. But it was already late and I had nowhere else to go. I could go to my best friend Jillian’s house, but it would be my luck if her brother would be outside smoking and rat me out. Ricky hit on me a few years ago and it freaked me out since he’s five years older than me and I had known him since second grade.

Kicking a few pebbles on the asphalt, I crossed the street and walked back towards my house. The faint shadows of my parents crossing the front room window of our house told me they were still fighting. I considered making another pass when an unsettling breeze rushed through my body, shaking me to the bone. PJ’s and slippers probably weren’t the greatest idea for walking around the block at night. This isn’t a bad neighborhood, but for all I knew, Mr. Johnson lurked in the bushes waiting to pounce. I quickened my pace as the sense of being watched grew in the pit of my stomach. I didn’t want to look behind me, but when I did no one was there. I contemplated pulling off my slippers and running barefoot, but decided that it would be a gross overreaction if I weren’t in danger. The Carsons’ cat was probably following me for a midnight snack. I hated that stupid cat; he always knocked over our trash cans and pooped in our yard.

I glanced behind me again and still nothing. My heart pounded in my ears and sweat collected in the bends of my arms and in the palm of my hands. Bushes on the opposite side of the street spooked me as they rustled in the wind. I broke into a run, the tail of my hoodie flying behind me like Superman’s cape, but I didn’t feel too super right now. All the houses on the street were dark other than mine and it felt like running in slow motion to the house; if only I could fly or have nerves of steel.

The road to my house had been stretched or maybe I was stuck on the treadmill from hell because it took forever to get to my house. My skin expanded with the force of blood rushing through me as my heart thumped in time with my feet on the pavement. I wondered if whatever pursued me enjoyed terrorizing teenage girls in the middle of the night.

Finally I rounded the end of the sidewalk in front of my house and bounded up the stairway to my front door. My hands shook as I turned the doorknob; the inherent danger that lurked in the yard relied on my failure, just waiting to claim me as its next victim. I considered pounding on the door, but that would alert my parents that I had left the house and then I’d really be in deep shit.

I briefly glanced over my shoulder just as the hedges in my lawn kicked up in the wind, blowing freshly fallen leaves into a cyclone. I would’ve stayed to watch the beauty of it longer – if I wasn’t shaking so badly. The door felt as if it were made out of cement as I got it open. I threw my body against it to get it closed, afraid that my weight wouldn’t be enough to stop whatever was about to start pushing it open. I twisted the deadbolt until the lock clicked, not that I really thought the small lock or door was any match for what my imagination knew had chased me to my house. My chest heaved as I struggled to catch my breath with my back firmly pressed to the door waiting for something, anything.

My parents’ argument was still in full swing and it was apparent that neither of them noticed my little excursion into the neighborhood. Swallowing hard, I glanced out of the front windows into the yard, not really sure I was ready to see what was waiting for me. I was disappointed and relieved to see that the yard was empty and the hedges were ghostly still: no monsters, no demons, and thankfully no Mr. Johnson. I just ran all the way back to my house over nothing; hopefully, none of my neighbors saw me. Maybe Jill and I had watched one too many slasher movies this summer.

Laughing at myself, I took several deep breaths to get my heart to catch up with the rest of my body. My breathing was almost normal again when I realized the voices coming from the kitchen were different from any other petty argument they’ve had. I sprinted to the doorway just in time to see my father’s fist land squarely on my mother’s jaw line. Time stood still as I watched my mother, all hundred and twenty pounds of her, fly backward and land on the kitchen table. She rolled onto the floor and tried to regain her composure. I focused on my father’s clenched fists and the veins protruding from his neck. I had never seen my father so upset, so enraged before in my whole life.

Dad, NO! I shouted when he started to step forward. Mom stood between us and pushed her weight against me trying to force me from the kitchen. Stop. What have you done? I screamed ignoring my mother’s firm grip. I was at least three inches taller than her and outweighed her by ten pounds. It would have been easy to push her out of my way.

My father slumped back onto one of the counters, as Mom whispered to me to go to my room. For some time I avoided looking into her eyes, but when I finally did I saw that we were both crying. The cheek beneath her left eye was already pink and swollen from the blow; I reached out and gently touched the spot with my fingertips, not sure it was real.

Shhh … My mother’s voice was almost a whisper as I started to talk again. Go … go to your room now. She turned to look at Dad; the counter was the only thing keeping him upright. I fought the urge to smack him by glaring at him instead; if I hit him then I would be no better than he was.

Is he drunk? I didn’t bother lowering my voice. I wanted him to be humiliated.

Go to your room, now. My mother’s blue eyes were unrelenting. She wasn’t up for my Joan of Arc routine tonight.

Scowling at my father, I pushed the earphones back into my ears and leapt up the stairs to my room. I got the music playing but not before my father and mother started yelling at each other again.

Their heavy footsteps on the stairs rattled my windows and then their bedroom door slammed shut. Now I wished I didn’t have the room right next to theirs. My iPod was loud, but not loud enough to block out my mother’s high pitched screaming. I couldn’t stand another round of this. I headed back downstairs and took one look at the front door. It wasn’t safe to venture out there again, not after the last experience. I went out into the backyard instead. I settled onto one of the swings of my old play set and pushed myself back with the tip of my toes. The rusted metal of the chain crackled and squeaked as I glided forward. The houses to either side were still dark and the small patio light cast creepy shadows across the grass. A cool breeze shook Mom’s rose bushes and the few hedges that surrounded one side of the patio. But when the wind stopped, the bushes didn’t. I froze staring into the darkness trying to see the threat that was waiting just to the side of my family home. I held my breath trying to decide whether or not to make a run for it. I couldn’t hesitate much longer. Rising slowly from the swing, I lingered again trying to judge the distance between the swings and the safety of the kitchen door.

Can I make it before it gets me? IT! Coming outside again tonight was a bad idea.

That’s when I saw them. Two monstrous golden brown eyes peered at me from the hedge. I wasn’t imagining those eyes. They were menacing as they went from full moons to half and then to crescents. My heart raced as I took possibly the last breath of my life and sprinted for the door.

c h a p t e r

TWO

Dad had gone to Grandma’s house again. I’m not sure whether Mom kicked him out or if he left on his own this time. After Mom left for work I headed to the kitchen to pull out the biggest butcher knife from the drawer, preparing to go to the backyard. At least I was ready, or thought I was ready, for whatever could be waiting for me. Just in case, I pulled on my best running shoes and headed out the sliding glass door, determined to flush out whatever was spying on me from the rosebush, although I really hoped it would be gone by now.

I knew I looked stupid as I kicked and hacked at the bush the eyes had been staring out of. HA! Now what? I said just as my neighbors’ nine-year old daughter, Megan, witnessed my insanity from over the wooden fence separating our yards. I slinked back into the house in shame and replaced the knife back into its hiding spot, hoping my mother wouldn’t realize I had defiled her bush with one of her most expensive knives.

I climbed the stairs back to my bathroom, pulled out a towel and hopped into the shower. My muscles had almost relaxed from my bush attack when my cell phone started ringing. I almost fell trying to get out of the shower rushing to my phone.

Hello?

Hey you up? That’s my best friend, always stating the obvious.

Well, I answered the phone, didn’t I? I gave her my best morning dose of sarcasm.

Serious Lacey. I mean are you out of bed? Did your parents go ballistic last night or what? She was crunching on something.

What are you eating?

Ok Miss avoidance … She half laughed and crunched some more. So are you grounded or what?

No, they didn’t ground me but they did go ballistic. I hesitated, the terrifying golden brown eyes flashing through my mind. They were already fighting before they realized I was home.

Your parents amaze me. Crunch Crunch Crunch.

Could you stop crunching in my ear? It’s a little early for that.

It’s almost 9! Jillian’s voice rose. I’m sure her parents were already up but there was no way Ricky was. What are we doing today? Wanna go to the mall?

Another day at the mall? We’d spent most of the summer at the mall and the movies. We needed something else to do; neither of us had a boyfriend, or even a prospect, and no other close friends to really speak of. We were loners, but by choice, and that choice was getting a little tiring (not to mention boring).

Jillian and I met when we were in second grade and had been practically inseparable ever since. I was there when she got her heart broken by Jimmy Lewis in Junior high and she was there for me when I had to put my beloved dog, Tippy to sleep. No topic was off limits for our conversations and no story that we didn’t know about each other. Except my father’s drinking; I shared that with no one.

What about the beach? Jillian chimed. She got an A+ for effort but I wasn’t sure a day in the sun was really what I wanted, but the alternative was fluorescent lighting and the same $1.50 movies playing at the Cineplex. Ok.

Don’t sound too excited! Crunch Crunch.

You’re crunching again.

Sorry! I need to eat before Ricky gets up. He’s going to take over the kitchen as soon as he emerges from his cave. He has some sort of track meet coming up and he’s been carb loading.

Yeah, whatever, just tell him he’s getting fat and move on. We both started laughing. Ok so I’ll see you in an hour?

Ok! Jillian was more enthused about this plan than I was.

I wasn’t back in the shower long when the phone rang again. I abandoned all hope of getting to finish as I crawled back out of the shower reaching for the phone. What now? I snapped figuring it was Jillian again.

Is that how you answer the phone at 9am? Oh great.

Mom.

Hey Mom. Sorry I thought it was Jillian. We are going to the beach today.

Well you need to pick up your room. Can you fend for yourself for dinner tonight? She hadn’t realized I’d been taking care of my own dinner for weeks.

Yeah. My response was bland; she wouldn’t be pleased.

Lacey Marie. Great, she pulled out the middle name.

Yes, Mother. I got off the phone as quickly as I could to set to the task of picking up my room. I guess I should’ve asked her what she was doing tonight that she wouldn’t be home, but the fact was, it didn’t matter. She wouldn’t be home and Dad probably wouldn’t either; that was nothing new. It left me a lot of freedom to hang out with Jillian and come and go as I pleased.

Jillian and I soaked up the sun on giant beach towels for the rest of the day. We shared magazines and books as chiseled men playing beach volleyball distracted us frequently. A sandy haired boy in his twenties came to retrieve their ball once and my body tensed slightly when the back of his hand brushed the top of my foot. I knew I needed to get out and expand my friend horizons to include some boys.

Wow … Jillian whispered as the boy ran away, looking much like an extra from Baywatch in his red board shorts. They don’t look like that at West Brooke.

That’s probably because that boy isn’t in high school. I didn’t take my eyes off him for the next hour. Sunglasses are the best invention ever; without them he may have filed for an emergency restraining order against me.

My parents were fighting by the time Jillian dropped me back off at home. Sure you don’t want to come home with me instead? She looked sympathetic. I’m sure everyone on our street could hear the argument.

No. It’s cool. I pulled out my headphones and dangled them between my fingers. I’ve got Blink to keep me company.

Jillian smiled. Ok, well, if Travis isn’t enough tonight, call, ok? I nodded and hurried up the sidewalk.

I watched longingly from the stairs as her Ford pulled out of sight. Taking a deep breath, I tried to hear what the argument of the night could possibly be. They were towards the back of the house, so their voices were too muffled to understand. I waited to see if they’d come back to the living room as a few neighbors walked by with their dogs and a few kids peddled by on bikes. It was just after dusk and the street lamps had started to illuminate the street with a strange amber orange

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