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The Chained King and the Castle of Mystery
The Chained King and the Castle of Mystery
The Chained King and the Castle of Mystery
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The Chained King and the Castle of Mystery

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Steven Risd is your everyday college kid—he likes having fun and hanging out with friends. But Steven is different in his own way, too. He absolutely loves stories of fantasy, magic, and adventure—even crazier, he soon finds himself in the middle of a tale that blows his imaginative mind. Waking up in a strange land, Steven meets a stalwart dwarf, whose love of epic tales may rival his own.

To find his way back home, Steven will have to join forces with his new friend to free a dethroned king from his chains—all the while fighting against a crafty witch who has been blinded by her own desires. Along the way, Steven will have to look deep within to find the courage, love, and even fear that will be the keys to his quest—and to finding out who he really is.

LanguageEnglish
PublisherMohamed AR
Release dateFeb 15, 2014
ISBN9780984310791
The Chained King and the Castle of Mystery
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Mohamed AR

Born in Dubai, United Arab Emirates. He published his first novel in 2009.

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  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Steven Reid hates the plant that has moved into his town, hates the choices he has at the local college. But the dutiful son reports to college to sign up for Engineering - when a friend tells him about the Lady of hte Woods, and her miraculous cures.Steven ditches his interview to visit this mysterious lady - who lives in a part of the woods he grew up in he has never seen before. She gives him a bottle of medicine, which causes him to fall into a beautiful dream of fantasy...he thinks.
    Then he begins to realize he cannot wake up and panics..
    Before he gets to far he is shown a mysterious jewel - which causes him to fall into yet another dream...
    Can Steven solve the mystery and find his way home, or will he be caught forever in this fantasy?
    It's a little slow starting, but the story is holding together thus far.
  • Rating: 1 out of 5 stars
    1/5
    There are novels that start with a bang, novels that are slow burning but get a conflagration going by the end, and those that never catch alight at all. One-third of the way through this fantasy there's disappointingly not much of a glow. There's very little action, and what action there is gets held up by too many words. The hero gets to do a lot of chuckling and exclaims "Wow!" from time to time and his dwarf companion "huffs" his way through conversations (both individuals do a lot of huffing, though whether from exasperation, tiredness or confusion is rarely clear). Nobody seems much concerned with the protagonist except when he draws attention to himself, but sadly, given his rather bland personality, this is not very surprising. In fact I'm not particularly drawn to the hero as first presented, who seems reactive except when being proactive means saying or doing something unexplained, almost out of character (such as a spot of cross-dressing, or telling a version of Aladdin).The initial plot mechanisms seem a little derivative (there are echoes of Twain's Connecticut Yankee and Alice in Wonderland, for example, in the way that the protagonist arrives in his parallel world from a 21st-century US town) and, though I lived in expectations of a surprise twist, the mechanism and rationale of arriving in a parallel world is vague. Set in somewhere like Narnia or Middle Earth or the country of William Morris' The Well at World's End, the parallel world appears to be in something like the Middle or Dark Ages, though references to anachronistic items, such as sweaters, and roles, such as waiters in cafes, rather override this impression.My final criticism is of those all too many wordy passages where a sense of incongruity is created by the strange misuse of words (for instance, "shined" instead of "shone" seems to crop up rather a lot), mock epic-language and pseudo-poetic phrases; whether this is deliberate or not I can't quite decide, but it makes for awkward reading, whether one is giving each word its due or simply trying to skim and scan the text. However, as the story finally starts to take off in the second half of the book it's to some extent possible to overlook these stylistic faults as this reviewer at least begins to be intrigued by how the chained king of the book's title might be released and how the character who has bewitched him might get her come-uppance. The plot positively steams along with few of the longeurs that marked the first part of the story, and it starts to become clear that not only is all not quite what it seems but that there are some life-changing experiences and lessons going on for the main characters.I sincerely hope that for the sequels the author manages to get his text properly vetted by a competent editor so that the ideas he clearly has no difficulties in generating are presented in a more polished literary style: it would be a shame if his imaginative efforts continued to be impeded by stylistic barriers. And the cover is quite impressive and atmospheric: an illustration that even reflects the storyline! The artist has evidently read and enjoyed the story. Sadly, enjoyment was what this reader was missing.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Final say: I hope this author gets a second chance and a good heavy-handed editor because there's something worth saving here.Good stuff: This portal fantasy follows the journey of a selfish young man who falls asleep in his normal everyday life and wakes up in a wondrous world where he undertakes a personality-changing quest. Some of the characters, props and situations are an obvious nod to Tolkien, but still retain a freshness. The concept and tale are unique, and some of the character transformations near the end of the book are brilliant. I would be glad to see some of these characters again in the next book of the series.Not so good stuff: But if the writing style doesn't change, I won't be reading it. This book is so awkwardly written that it's actually stressful to read after the first couple of pages. My immediate impression was that The Longed Tales was written first in another language and translated to English. Some of the descriptives and phrases, along with the internal culture and sensibilities of the characters, simply don't resonate with Western thought. That's usually not a problem if the writing is top notch...but in this case, it's bulky and confusing. The inner dialog of the characters and their rapid mood swings from one sentence to the next (and sometimes in the same sentence) made one wonder if they weren't all psychopaths or schizophrenics. Better stuff:That being said, the author definitely has talent as a creative storyteller but could use a really good editor or perhaps even a ghost writer. His main characters had surprising levels of complexity, as it turned out, and the fantasy world he conceptualized was lovely and brilliant. There's definitely more to this tale and I hope it doesn't get lost. There's a charm and wonder here that deserves better writing if this series is to have a wider audience.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    The plot is quite interesting, it reminded me of my RPG days, Dungeons & Dragons or Baldur's Gate (for gamers). You have humans, dwarves, etc. So I thought I would read along and see if it lived up to my expectations.The English language was good, although the narrative was a bit clumsy in places, slow or disconnected, as if each paragraph was written independently from the others, therefore making the text disconnected, rather than having a feeling of unity.I have a problem with the main character and his point-of-view/characterisation: from the start, I am uneasy about the way he relates to others, as if he felt superior to other creatures (the encounter with the dwarf Grimdin is a prime example of what I mean - a paternalist attitude, perhaps?). The dwarf is treated no better than a child. Steven's language reflects that, it affected my reading and my perception of the story, and I am afraid that, while the plot is interesting, I cannot appreciate its main character, sorry!
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    The Longed Tales: The Chained King and the Castle of Mystery by Mohamed AR was a pleasant and entertaining read for me. We start off meeting Steven, who is just the normal teenager who is looking for more in life then the mundane activities of day-to-day life. He is creative and imaginative, but lets his anger get the best of him most of the time. He decides to go see 'The Lady of the Woods', a magical witch who helps locals with their problems, to see if she can give him something to help him sleep. Steven then finds himself in a mysterious world that you believes to be a dream. Reality finally strikes Steven and he must face his greatest love and fear in order to save a King and the friends that he has made along the way. Even though there are a few parts that start kind of slow or that drag on just a little bit, this book is written in such a way that it is easy for the reader to be wrapped up in the story with the characters. At first I was a little irritated by Steven and his attitude, but just like with all good books, the character goes through a transformation for the better. I was instantly in love with the cover of this book because not only does it look amazing, it has a great satin like finish that is soft to the touch. This book is suitable for all ages and would even be a good book to read to younger children.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Ok so, I thought the story/plot to this book was great! I love the adventure that Steven got to go on and it was cool to see the main character grow up throughout the story!I thought this book could have been awesome, but the way it was told did not live up to it. The author had the right idea in mind but I just don't think he was able to land it. It was very inconsistent and choppy. Sometimes I found myself totally confused and having to reread a chapter....and other times I found myself rushing through it because it was way too slow. The characters weren't my favorite.....I know the author wanted to illustrate how much Steven matures throughout the whole book but there were sometimes where he got so annoying! If I were Elisa, I definately would not have chosen an immature college kid such as Steven. He was scared to death half of the book.....but he did step up toward the end which I was very happy to see. All the other characters never really made an impression on me.The only other thing I have to say is that it was really hard for me to visualize the world Steven was in....I know the author tried to make these wonderful pictures at some points, but I just couldn't grasp it. But like I said in the beginning, I thought the story itself was great, if more were to come from then I could definately see myself reading it just to see how the adventure continues.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    In the Longed Tales: The chained King and the Castle Mystery, author Mohamed A.R., weaves a tale about an authority-hating young man named Steven Ried with an ageless and wild imagination and a passion for stories. Steven discovers himself within an adventure with a dwarf named Grimdin. In his journey with Grimdin, Steven has to rescue a dethroned king from the clutches of a shape-shifting witch.....all this to find his way home. In his quest, Steven must find himself and find the courage, determination and love to make it back home.I enjoyed reading this book as I love books about stories and adventure. It reminded me a bit of the Never-Ending Story. I found the book slow in places. I want to comment that if the author used more active verbs and used better choice of words, the book would have been even better. But the book is, like the main character--highly imaginative and highly descriptive. I would like to commend the author on a good job!
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    The Longed Tales by Mohamed ARReviwed by Moirae the fates book reviews. A shape-shifting witch... a dethroned king... a storytelling dwarf... and a young man with too much imagination for his own good! Steven Risd is your everyday college kid-likes to have fun... doesn't enjoy school that much... likes hanging with friends... doesn't trust authority figures, including his parents. But Steven is different in his own way, too... Young Steven absolutely loves stories of fantasy, magic, and adventure-but even crazier, he soon finds himself in the middle of a tale that blows even his imaginative mind. Waking up in a strange land, he quickly discovers that he's sharing a room at an inn with a stalwart dwarf named Grimdin, whose love of epic tales may rival even Steven's. To find his way back home, Steven will have to join forces with Grimdin to free a dethroned king from his chains-all the while fighting against a crafty witch who has been blinded by her own desires. Along the way, Steven and Grimdin will have to look deep within to find the courage, love, and even fear that will be the keys to their successful quest-and to finding out who they really are! Fall headlong into excitement, adventure, intrigue, and action in The Chained King and the Castle of Mystery, the first volume of The Longed Tales!(Synopsis provided by goodreads.com)The synopsis of this book intrigued me. I have always enjoyed books about other worlds, magic and all sorts of magical creatures that are found in those worlds. For me however, this book seemed very ‘choppy’. I am not sure if maybe it’s a translation issue or not as I am unaware if the book was originally written in English or another language. I also found it to be a little bit on the slow side.Aside from the choppiness, and the slowness, I really enjoyed the story itself. I found it to be wonderfully imaginative and very descriptive, possibly too descriptive in some parts. This is a first novel, so I can’t be too upset. I do believe that the author has promise and this is an author that I will be looking for a second novel from. AR does paint a beautiful picture for the reader with his description of the world that Steven enters into. I would recommend this book to others.My Overall rating:***3 out of 5 starsCover art:The cover art is beautiful! Obtained:I obtained my copy from the author himself on librarything. Thank you!

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The Chained King and the Castle of Mystery - Mohamed AR

1.

Not all students knew what they want in life; those who did eventually learned that with enough hard work and determination, one should be closer to success than failure. And Steven Risd believed so, too. With a highlighter in one hand and the chemistry book opened on his desk, he read eagerly, marking the important passages in yellow. High grades meant a scholarship into the medical school, and being prepared was Steven’s only hope to make that dream come true.

He gazed out the window. A plain blue sky stretched from above. Wind swaying the pine trees underneath. The image of the Big City flashed in his mind’s eye, with all its reflective skyscrapers, its fine shopping malls, its subways and metros and the buzz of people from different sects flowing like a nonstop river. It had an intriguing taste to it. That was the future, Steven mused. It lay in the capital.

But then a metallic noise burst in and took Steven by total surprise. Birds fluttered away into the sky.

The clanging returned, louder and disturbing, sparking a change in mood. A man started shouting: How many times have I said not to leave the metal rods loose!

A quarrel grew outside, and the rumbling engine of a tractor joined in, followed by the reassembling of metallic rods. Steven sighed. His educational appetite would wane if the noise kept on coming. Getting into that mood took a while and lots of mental preparation, especially when procrastinating with something else seemed more fun and exciting. He craned his head outside the window and spotted the workers. They yelled as if it was their duty to do so. A man welded a huge steel board over a gate, trickling golden sparks onto the ground. Steven gazed away. There was no end to this. To him, this morning seemed beautiful and conducive for some intellectual activity. What a waste it would be if he stayed in this place.

He packed his book in a bag and rushed downstairs.

His mother was sifting flour into a bowl at the kitchen. The voice of the morning broadcast filled their space with life. His four-year-old sister sat her doll on a desk; dressing it in new fancy dresses.

Steven lowered the radio volume. Morning mom. He went right to the fridge.

Good morning, honey. Pancakes should be ready soon.

No thanks. Steven pulled some cheese and turkey slices from the fridge. Got to go. I won’t be home for lunch either. And he started preparing a sandwich.

Busy busy, where are you off to? she walked up to him with hands smeared in white.

Anyplace away from that noise.

His mother gave no comment on that subject. Before I forget, she passed him the mustard. Your dad asked if you could join him at four o’clock to meet a client who wants a new cupboard with some special electronics, or whatever you guys do…anyways, he said you would know.

Yeah, sure, I know about that. Thanks for reminding me. Steven licked his fingers. He liked the taste.

Listen. I know you have your own plans. So it’s okay if you don’t want to go. I’ll tell him.

No. I really want to. It’s a nice project.

Okay…and yeah, Peter stopped by. He said that they would be rehearsing for the play by the lake.

Oh shoot. Today! Steven sighed. Fine. I might stop by there later. My God, so many things already.

At the end of every year, a selected group of graduates performed the Final Play. A play that should—as the school preferred to describe it—wow Amberhill and get the newspapers going. They selected the finest. And this year’s play was Shakespeare’s most beloved tragedy: Romeo and Juliet. Steven was Mercutio. He never thought he had part of Mercutio in him: that strange, witty and uncontrollable fellow. The man was too much to handle, but after spending weeks molding himself to become Mercutio, his wild imagination joined in, and Mercutio grew in Steven so much that Steven felt this character was influencing him somehow.

But the best part of it all was Clarice. She was his Juliet, and Steven found her adorable. The thought of her being there was refreshing. He had skipped some of their rehearsal sessions already to prepare for the exams. He had taken things quite seriously, perhaps some time off would be better. Act normal, like all the other fellows at school? He did not know if that would be the best way to go at this stage. He packed everything and rushed towards the door.

Don’t be late for dinner. his mother’s loud voice came from the other side.

I won’t! Steven closed the door behind him. The Big City, he thought, there lay his dream. To live there, to become a doctor, and live the way the people in the Big City live. He took in a fresh breath to celebrate that thought. He had to get the highest marks to reach it.

The piercing noise of steel cut through his ears. The magnificent factory and its metallic towers loomed over their small house like a stainless steel giant. The golden sparks still trickled, and the loud shouts resumed. Three years putting up with such a sight, three long and tedious years. And yet there were two more years before it would be fully operational: Olden’s factory. The newspapers gave this factory a dedicated section. The promise was this: the billionaire’s factory would produce clean-energy products and sell them for half the market price. This would put most companies who had invested in their non-clean products in a critical situation. The business model would redefine all structures, but everyone doubted the reliability of Olden’s proposal.

Steven found it hard to believe that a businessman would one day save the world without pocketing a hefty profit. This project would start more of its likes soon. There must be a business twist somewhere. All businessmen were magicians with numbers. They knew how to twist things up, but the calculation required too many brain cells to die. Steven found it best to leave that thought alone. He did not have a brain for business at all, and it assured him that leaving this place was the right decision for him.

He got his bicycle out from the backyard and fled away. Wherever he went, that screeching sound haunted him, like wax stuck in his ears. Always clanking in his head, so he sped on, turning to the only spot that could save his day—to where a blue lake mirrored the sky, and the oak trees stretched high, and the squirrels scurried along the branches, and the atmosphere hosted a symphonic play from nature. It was a place in the Eastern Forest: the most peaceful place on earth.

Soon he was at the bridge—which connected Amberhill to the Eastern Forest. But signs and road fences blocked the way, and a nonstop flow of trucks passed through into Amberhill. The workers blocking the road advised Steven to take the other bridge—five miles away. That wasn’t a good start of the day.

He pedaled for a shortcut, and slunk into the woods to his side instead. The sunrays barely found a way to pierce through the densely packed trees. They rendered the forest dim, as if the day had sped forward to evening time. Steven stopped, brushing some sweat of his forehead. He checked his surroundings, but noticed something out of place.

He took a quick look around him. Where is this?

A sea of autumn elm leaves scattered in all directions, dead from the chill in the wind. They lay between many identical trees. It was hard to orient himself.

Puzzled and a bit concerned, Steven walked back in the direction he’d come from, but he ended in the same spot, as if he was locked in a loop. He couldn’t have just lost his way. He had just entered. Besides, wandering through the woods was one of his greatest pleasures. How could he lose his way now? Something was different.

He propped his bicycle against a tree and sat next to it with his bag on his lap. He took out his sandwich, maybe it would fuel his memory and stomach. It was still cold, and it gave no memory, just the taste of turkey and cheese; it was a delightful combination, though. Somehow, being alone in such a place had a strange effect on him, like being taken to a secluded inner place where he was the king and his thoughts were his kingdom. He used to feel the same whenever he stayed back at home, or read a story or watched a movie, but such moments rarely ever happened anymore…thanks to the factory and its owner: Olden.

Ever since Steven had been a child, he’d spent his time watching his father busy at the workshop, hammering nails into wood. Creating shapes that had never been made. He often believed his father was an artist. There was a strange sense of commitment and precision about his father’s work that intrigued Steven. He was an expert carpenter. His workmanship was unmatched. He was someone who invented things rather than just building the basics. But, Steven’s heart lay somewhere else. His father in his turn took a profession different than his own father, who was a doctor. It seemed as if history was repeating itself once again. Steven aimed to walk in his grandfather’s footsteps. And although he knew how happy his father would be if Steven joined him in their business; his father urged Steven to pursue his own goals.

It’s your life, Steven, his father had told him. Follow your dreams.

But, Steven felt he would drag along on this journey a sense of guilt and obligation that he would never be able to bear. He often believed that it was a struggle to choose what to do in life. Still at this age, when most of his friends wanted to live the moment, and cared about the ongoing trends in their present time, Steven cared less about such matters. Peter told him to wing it, but Steven couldn’t just let things happen. He felt lost without a plan. The problem was that there were hundred of possibilities, all with an equal share of good and bad odds. And each route conceived a thousand more possibilities. Planning wasn’t a bulletproof thing here, and to come to the right choice was simply difficult. This part of deciding what to do in life was unfair. It was like following an unknown road. But, he knew in his heart, though, medicine could be a good match.

Looking up, he saw the trees stood so tall; stretching to where only those with wings could reach. The quietness of the planet came down through the rustling leaves, and swept in such thoughts, a sudden movement pulled Steven back to his surroundings. A bush rustled not far from him, and then, a squirrel scurried out from between the leaves.

Hey, Steven smiled.

The squirrel stopped in its tracks and watched. Blinking.

Steven tore a small piece off his sandwich and threw it few feet away. Go on, have some, He gestured his invitation.

The squirrel snapped out of its stance, picked up the piece, and scurried away like a thief being chased.

Such reaction got Steven laughing. He kept his gaze on the rodent until the squirrel disappeared behind the bushes. Time to go, I’ll rehearse with everyone, he thought. What was I thinking, Clarice is there and I want to study?

Now, there was a sudden urge to return back at once. The last piece of his meal filled his mouth, and as he munched, he picked his bag and dragged his bicycle along. Wandering through the trees got him back to nowhere. Going north and south did not change anything, either. The trees were all alike. And nothing led to anywhere. His disappointment grew bigger and bigger as his search proved pointless, until, as he wandered a little further, a whooshing sound brought a smile to his face. It was the sound of hope, coming to him as running water, humming through the woods.

The river, Steven couldn’t believe his ears.

The sound grew louder. It came from behind some tall bushes far off toward his right. He loped on, and instead of a river, a glittering spring, oval and small, lay ahead of him. To his surprise, there was a waterfall flowing from the heart of an oak tree that stood thick and short. The tree’s branches bent over a clear spring, tickling the water surface with its leaves. A beam of light tore down through the leaves, drawing a beautiful scene.

As Steven looked around, he glimpsed something blurry hovering in the distance. He cocked his head for a clearer view. And on the other side of the spring, a cottage appeared. It sat under the shades of the oak branches, and it seemed as if the cottage had just materialized. Small in size, cozy in appearance, the place had a strange charm to it. It was adorned with garlands of flowers and gems—like amber and emerald. All notions of evil, sorrow, hatred, and wickedness seemed distant, as if the place had come out of a fairy tale.

I’ve never seen a cottage in this area before. I must have wandered really far. I better ask for directions.

He propped his bicycle against the nearest tree and came to the teal entrance. It had a bronze knob and knocker that glinted in the straying light. He tapped the bronze knocker gently, sending a sharp thud into the cottage. Now, he waited.

No answer came.

He knocked twice more. Each tap sharper than the earlier one. And yet, no one answered.

Bummer. No one is there? Dammit. He sighed.

As he wondered what to do, he spotted the keyhole under the doorknob, glinting faintly as if its rim were made of real gold. He brushed his fingers against the door, feeling it. Its well-polished texture was surprising. What he found resembled the superb workmanship of a professional carpenter. Maybe as good or even better than his father.

He knelt and felt the sleek and gilded keyhole, then out of sheer curiosity—and the desire to go in to inspect further—Steven brought his eyes closer to the keyhole, and just like that, in a split second and before his dark eyes had peeked a glimpse of what lay behind the door, the knob turned, and the door lock ticked and opened. 

2.

That was startling. Steven stared at the knob for some seconds. From that tiny glimpse through the keyhole, it opened?

The door glided some inches inward and a faint glow seeped out. Steven peered in. He saw some candles burning wax and shadows dancing on the floor, the likes of which came from a fireplace. A strange feeling told him to walk away, but he often felt that in places which stimulated his curiosity. He could not turn his back now. He stepped in, careful with his moves. He came to what looked like a parlor, where the ornamental walls hung dried bellflowers, with many wilted lilies and fresh red roses. All nailed to the wall and organized in separate groups. A brisk breeze flowed in from the opened window, bringing the scent of daisies, peppermint, and chamomile, and a hint of burnt wood. Somehow the atmosphere relaxed him, and all the worries were gone. A memory of himself dabbling with herbs in his grandfather’s herbal shop resurrected in his mind.

To his side a rug lay underneath a red velvet sofa. It faced a fireplace that had a fire going, and that’s when the shock of surprise made Steven bristle in his place.

Standing between an oak cabinet and the fireplace was a beautiful lady. Confident in her stance. Elegant in her gown. She seemed in her late thirties. Her hair hung over her forehead, shining a yellowish glow as if it were made of strands of gold. Her hair brushed her darker eyebrows, while her long teal gown sparkled with freckles of purple gems, making the gown look majestic and stunning.

For some reason, Steven expected a man—a carpenter maybe. But he was startled by finding a woman. He even tried to stare at some place other than her eyes, but he couldn’t. Those vivid doe eyes drew him closer into the woman’s inviting smile, as if she were his lost love and soul mate.

Caught in such a situation, after allowing for his curious self to walk him into her home without permission, Steven hoped for some grim reaction from the lady so that he could flee, but her smile said otherwise.

Hello young man. What a curious boy you are, her tone was pleasant. She rested the flask on the marbled mantelpiece and stepped forward. Is looking through someone’s keyhole a personal hobby? she asked with no smirk or mocking tone.

Heat surrounded Steven’s body as if the temperature rose at once. Actually, He itched his chin. Not really, he offered a shy smile to pledge on his behalf. I’m terribly sorry, he added, meaning it. Never in his life had he sweated like now. Drops on his neck, down his forehead, others stuck on his back. He could feel them all over.

But the woman did not seem offended at all. Don’t worry, she said. Sit, please. Make yourself comfortable. She tapped the red sofa.

I don’t want to bother you. I should be going really.

Oh, pity. That is alright then, There was disappointment in her eyes.

Umm, he said, trying his best not to sound crude. I actually lost my way. What a drag he was, saying that.

Oh, not to worry. I can help you with that, where do you want to go?

Well, I was heading toward the Eastern Forest, but now, I guess it’s too late for that, so I just want to find my way back to town.

The way back is simple. She pointed at the door—which was still opened. Head in that direction and you will find your town.

That’s it! Steven marveled, surprised to how simple that was. That sounds easy. Thanks!

You can also head in this direction, she added by pointing at the fireplace, and you will find the Eastern Forest. It’s close by, too.

Steven kept staring at the fireplace. He couldn’t believe it. Was I that close?

I really appreciate it. Thanks! he was overwhelmed. He shrugged his pack up on his shoulder, and smiled for farewell. Well…

What’s you name?

Steven stopped. Steven, Steven Risd. he said.

Nice name. I am Elisa. It’s nice to meet you. Do you live around here?

Steven nodded. Yes. I live across from Blue Earth Rock factory.

The woman kept quiet. Her eyes were smiling. Her face told him she didn’t know about it, and in that brief moment, he wondered how anyone couldn’t have heard about the most well-known project in the world.

But then a faint sound grew from the other room, like a teapot whistling its ready alarm. The woman’s eyes opened wide. They were filled with mirth. How lovely. Would you care for some tea, Steven? She looked excited. You can tell me all about that factory. There is still time before dusk.

Steven itched his chin, feeling his face warm again. He kept his eyes on the wooden floor. It wouldn’t be polite, now, to refuse her invitation after helping him and welcoming him in her house.

The impatient teapot whistled for mercy. Sure, why not. Steven nodded.

Lovely. Thank you. Just a moment please. And as she walked away, Steven saw something else that set the woman apart from the rest of Amberhill’s women. Her hair was so long that it almost reached her feet. He sat on the red sofa, and settled his pack down between his legs. The teapot’s whistle subsided, and the sound of plates clattering burst out instead.

Now, approaching footsteps came from the other side. Elisa’s shadow grew smaller on the warm floor until she was back, bringing her smile along. Her cheerful presence charmed the place.

She kept the silver tray on the side table. The teapot and cups, with a bowl of sugar cubes, were well arranged. She sat on a backless chair, pressed against the wall, gurgled some tea in both cups and dropped two sugar cubes in one of them. I prepare my tea a bit sweet. How do you like it?

Sweet is good.

She did the same for the other cup, dipped a small spoon in, and offered it to Steven.

Thank you. He picked up the cup with two hands as if it were a bowl. Its exterior felt like it was made of seashell and its inside was sleek and blue. The thought of drinking all this tea made him feel famished already. Nice cup. He puckered his lips and took a sip of what tasted different than any tea he had before. There was mint and chamomile, mixed together with another flavor he couldn’t recognize. He liked it and nodded in admiration. A bit too sweet for him, though.

But somehow, now that she was quiet, silence crept in, and anxiety sneaked into Steven. It was awkward not to have anything to say. He tried to act normal, but his body language gave him away. He looked ahead. Smiled. Took a sip. Smiled again. Stared at his bag. Took another sip. What should I say?...Oh yeah, she wanted to know about the factory.

How did you lose your way? Elisa said.

That was a different subject. But why not, Steven thought. Relief found its way back to him. Well, he started, I was trying to reach the Eastern Forest from the bridge, but it was closed. So I decided to go around through the woods, you know, a shortcut, but I lost my way, and here I am.

It must be something urgent that made you take the woods to get to the Eastern Forest, then?

Not really. Steven thought for a moment. Might be a good idea to share a little. It could build a good conversation until the tea ended. I go there often, to read.

Oh, That answer surprised her. What do you read?

Steven straightened his back, flattered a bit. Well, nothing fancy, just some school books. Today I wanted to prepare for the final exams. Still time, but there is a lot to prepare for. I need to be ready.

You like studying then.

Steven choked as the tea went down his throat. No. Not at all. He laughed while coughing again. God, no. Me liking to study, of course no, come on, no, no, it’s a drag to be honest. But, you know, studying is studying, you know, you got to do it. As mom says: if you want to get to what you want, you have to study hard for it. Hard work pays off.

So you know what you want, interesting, she sounded amazed, And what do you want?

Without giving it another thought, Steven was proud to share. I want to be a doctor, he said. I really need to do well on the exams. I want to get a scholarship so that I can go to the Big City and study medicine.

Elisa did not say anything. She watched Steven as if he had said something astonishing. He felt embarrassed now, like he was being put under the microscope. Her eyes went to his cup, and said, Can I ask you why?

Steven’s first impulse came with confusion. Why? he mumbled. He cleared his throat. That was a surprising question. Well. He thought for a moment. Um…hmm. He took another sip, and pondered on the matter as the woman waited with the cup between her hands. What a tough question, he pursed his lips, thinking hard.

For some strange reason, Steven couldn’t phrase his answer. To him it was more about following his intuition than having a plan. Well. I know I would love doing it, he began with what he knew was true. My grandfather was great at it, and I admired him a lot. I want to be like him. I know I would love to be a doctor. It’s my dream now. I really don’t have a main reason, I am following my heart on this one.

The woman, though, never took her eyes off him. They burned with curiosity. She stood up and walked toward the opened window. Don’t you want to know why you are so in love with this dream? she asked, now facing him. Don’t you want to know what makes your heart wants it?

That same confusion returned. Those were unexpected questions and hard ones. Somehow they made him feel vulnerable. I don’t know. I guess I would like to know, yes. But, well, hmmm, I really don’t know. I guess it’s always better to follow what you enjoy than what you don’t. He wanted to escape the answer in anyway possible, now. But his answer did not brighten her. Her face told him there should be something else.

Is this a trick question? Steven itched his thigh.

Not everyone can become what they want. But very few are lucky enough to know why they want it. It is a hard question. I know. Only fools could say they know the real answer to it immediately. Her words turned Steven curious and uncertain at the same time. But, learning the answer can be fun, my dear Steven. Sometimes it needs luck. And luck is a good friend to have along, she pointed, Luck does not come to anyone, only to the curious ones. And you seem to be a lucky fellow. It is your passion that brought you here. You are a curious person. So tell me, do you have other curious hobbies?

Steven understood the words, but the meaning felt a bit vague. Lacking something. I enjoy working with dad at the workshop. I think I like acting now. I also like reading stories. Yes, I like doing that a lot. I’m not sure if that answers your question, though. He gave a faint laugh.

What kind of stories do you read?

"All kinds. I read anything

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