Discover millions of ebooks, audiobooks, and so much more with a free trial

Only $11.99/month after trial. Cancel anytime.

The Thickety: A Path Begins
The Thickety: A Path Begins
The Thickety: A Path Begins
Ebook316 pages5 hours

The Thickety: A Path Begins

Rating: 4 out of 5 stars

4/5

()

Read preview

About this ebook

A spellbinding tale about a girl, the Thickety, and the power of magic. Fans of Neil Gaiman will love this thrilling world.

A dark, forbidden forest. Vicious beasts. Deadly plants. An evil spellbook. Secrets. Mysteries. Witches, both good and bad . . . Welcome to the world of the Thickety.

Full of action, set in an intriguing and dangerous world, and illustrated with gorgeous and haunting line art, The Thickety: A Path Begins is a truly stunning book.

A Path Begins is the thrilling start of a middle grade fantasy series about a girl, a mysterious forest, and a book of untold magical powers. Kara and her brother, Taff, are shunned by their village because their mother was a witch. The villagers believe nothing is more evil than magic, except for what lurks in the nearby Thickety.

But when Kara enters the forbidden forest, she discovers a strange book, a grimoire that might have belonged to her mother. The events she then sets in motion are both awe-inspiring and terrifying.

And that is just the beginning of the story—there are three more adventures in the Thickety to explore after this first book in the series.

  • Publishers Weekly Best Book
  • IndieBound Indie Next List
  • Publishers Weekly Flying Start
  • Amazon's Big Spring Books
  • Washington Post Summer Book Club
LanguageEnglish
PublisherHarperCollins
Release dateMay 6, 2014
ISBN9780062257277
Author

J. A. White

J. A. White is the author of the Thickety series, the Shadow School series, Nightbooks, and Gravebooks. He lives in New Jersey with his wife, three sons, and the ghost of their hamster, Ophelia. When he’s not making up stories, he teaches a bunch of kids how to make up stories. He wishes dragons were real because it would be a much cooler way to get to work. You can visit him online at jawhitebooks.com.

Read more from J. A. White

Related to The Thickety

Titles in the series (4)

View More

Related ebooks

Children's Fantasy & Magic For You

View More

Related articles

Related categories

Reviews for The Thickety

Rating: 4.049999916666667 out of 5 stars
4/5

30 ratings13 reviews

What did you think?

Tap to rate

Review must be at least 10 words

  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    A dark and compelling story about a young girl, Kata, who discovers she is a witch in a superstitious village that persecuted witches. Her mother was killed by the townspeople for being s witch. As Tara learns about her mother's past and discovers her skills, she must face several foes and save her family. This story is well told, with a lot of excitement. It is probably too dark for the low end of the recommended age of 10.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    This is a debut novel for this author geared toward middle grade readers and tweens, but I have to say that as an adult, I found this book to be very entertaining and engrossing. The story is primarily about Kara and her family after Kara's mother was killed for being a witch in a society that purports to tolerate no magic of any sort. Kara doesn't believer her mother was a witch, but the rest of the village does, and treats Kara very poorly. Even so, Kara is determined to treat everyone with kindness even the animals. Then one day, Kara is lured into the thicket by a bird-like creature that has stolen her necklace. While there, bird creature leads her to discover a grimoire (a spell book), that Kara deduces must have been her mother's. From there, we follow Kara's endeavors to remain good and kind while wrestling with the power of magic that she never asked for. A great story - good vs evil, magical creature, human emotions, mystery, and a cliff-hanger at the end. I will definitely be reading the rest of the series as it comes out. In the meantime, I highly recommend this book to anyone with middle-grade readers, tweens, or to adults who happen to love a bit of fantasy. The book will be released in May 2014. Thanks to the author and the publisher for providing this advance reader's copy.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    This is probably my favorite (non graphic) novel of 2014. The first word that comes to mind as I think of how to describe it is sinister. White does not shy away from pure, unadulterated evil in this thrilling children’s novel. It’s inventive and fast-paced. The language is evocative while remaining concise. And it was a treat to read a book in third person past tense.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    The Thickety...A Path BeginsbyJ.A. WhiteEssentially...This is Kara's story. Her mother was a witch who was executed for being one. Kara is left with learning about her own destiny while living in a village where witches are despised.My thoughts after reading this book...Oh my...this book has all of the elements of fantasy that are so very addictive. There is the lovely mesmerizing writing. There is the opening...where Kara's mother is declared a witch. There is the aftermath...her father is out of his head much of the time...her brother Taff...the sickly baby born on the day of his mother's death...is Kara's delight and agony...he is always coughing...she alone worries about his care. There is the sad fact that she is treated poorly by the villagers in spite of the fact that she has done nothing to warrant this treatment. Even her mother's best friend has abandoned them. There is Grace...Grace with the white blonde hair and the shriveled leg and the evil bullying nature. Grace torments Kara and Taff and what she can't do her bodyguard/slave Simon will do...Simon who is just not"right in the head" after a time in the Thickety. Oh my yes...we have the Thickety. It forever tries to overtake the village. There are special "clearers" whose only task is to constantly cut down the growth that grows as quickly as it is cleared. The Thickety...mysterious, evil, dangerous...filled with darkness and an evil Master who calls to Kara. I believed that the Thickety was the worst thing that could happen to Kara until she found the Grimoire...OMG! What I loved about this book...Kara...I found her to be lovely, infinitely appealing, brave, and so wise. I spent my time with this book constantly cheering for her and biting my nails as she survived one danger after another! This book was so good! She has a way with animals...one of my most favorite parts of the book was early on when she healed a horse's...Shadowdancer's...injury. Readers will adore Kara...totally. Readers will fall in love with Taff. His sketching and his innocence and his love for Kara are so spectacular. Readers will hiss and boo Grace and Simon...the villains who are worse than Grace's father...the fen'de...the original village leader who executed Kara's mother. Grace...after possessing the Grimoire...is unfreakingbelievable...there is scene after scene of nightmarish evil things that she casts her spells to do. Kara...her love for creatures...amazing creatures...battling Grace...delightfully unbelievably scary...scene after scene after scene. And...just when you believe that everyone is safe and sound and happy and normal again....OMG! The ending? The ending...I think I held my breath throughout the last chapter and epilogue. It was that amazing! Final thoughts...I truly hate doing comparisons but if we are looking for a book/movie...that might steal our hearts away the way Harry Potter did...this might just be the one! Kara is the most magnificent example of goodness that I have encountered in a long time. I loved this book! And there will be more!The question is how long must I wait? This book, I believe is not coming out until May of 2014...sigh!
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    J. A. White's The Thickety: A Path Begins is an unexpected surprise for me. I generally avoid reading middle grade, as I'm usually annoyed by authors who pander to a younger audience and tend to make a book too simplistic for that very reason. I think this was why as a kid, I graduated myself fairly early on from books geared toward young readers. Even at that age, they annoyed me.I received The Thickety: A Path Begins in the mail last week, and shortly after was confined to bed with the flu and needed something that wasn't too challenging to read, so I thought The Thickety: A Path Begins would fit perfectly. From the prologue alone, I knew that I was in for something that was definitely not going to be pandering to a younger audience and would instead challenge young readers with more grownup themes that I wasn't expecting at all. (Not that I was expecting anything as I really didn't know what the book was about, but I know I didn't expect what I got out of it!)The prologue opens with a young Kara being kidnapped from her home and being accused, along with her mother, of being a witch. While Kara is able to convince the townsfolk of her innocence, it is too late for her mother. Skip ahead several years, Kara's father has fallen into a deep depression and her young brother is often sickly, so it falls to Kara to take care of her family and make sure that they are as well provided for as she can manage at such a young age. Kara and her young brother Taff are shunned by the townsfolk, as they fear that possibly Kara might follow in her mother's footsteps, as magic is the ultimate evil according the townsfolk. The epitome of this truth is the dark forest, the Thickety, that is ever encroaching on their village. Filled with creatures and evils, the town lives in constant fear of the Thickety, since being on an island only gives them so much space to share with the forest, so there is a constant battle to keep the forest from growing any further. (Clearers work day in and day out, clearing the new growth that is constantly sprouting as the forest constantly marches forward.) Everyone knows that you stay away from the Thickety, because if you are lucky enough to escape if you do enter, you are never the same again. Kara knows this, but when she is lured into the forest by a strange bird and led to a book that belonged to her mother, she begins to question everything she's ever been taught about her family, magic, and her place in the world.I think what surprised me the most in The Thickety was the fact that bad things did happen to people, and you had to learn that life went on. Kara's life seems to be one unfortunate event after another, but she's learned to persevere and take the best that she can out of life. Other issues that are handled in the story, and not necessarily in a candy-coated way either: death, depression, addiction, bullying, poverty, slavery. Honestly, I forgot I was reading something that was being marketed as middle grade; I felt that what I was reading was something a little stronger than what I imagine most middle grade books being. White certainly doesn't pander to a younger audience, and this is a good thing. Another aspect of the book that I liked is there is no clear time frame for when this story is taking place. The villagers attitude towards witches and magic is certainly reminiscent of the witch hysteria of the late 1600s/early 1700s, but the island is so isolated, I kept getting the feeling that possibly the world outside had been progressing along while the community on the island remained stagnant. (I couldn't help but think of M. Night Shyamalan's movie The Village while reading.) Of course, this could never be explained, and the time frame is left up to the reader's imagination, but either way, I liked the fact that there is nothing set in stone here about a time, that it is just happening in the course of things.For a debut novel, J. A. White certainly has a home run with this book. His descriptions are excellent, his creatures are believable, the magic use in his world is unique, and his writing is very tight and spot on with the pacing, all the way up to the final twist (or two!) in the story, one that I did not see coming at all at first. I'm hoping that White will continue writing such compelling stories for years to come!
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    The Thickety by J. A. White tells a tale of evil with one small girl whose good trying to save everyone.Kara Westfall watched as the townspeople killed her mother when she was five and barely escaped death herself by commanding a beast to leave her alone. You see, the town believes in witches and preaches that all magic is evil. After her mother allegedly killed two people, she was captured and sentenced to death by the powerful Fen'de Stone, the religious and civil leader of the island. Since this death, the town watches Kara, waiting for her to reveal the evil within her when she finally uses her magic. Left with a greatly diminished father who cannot cope and raising her new born brother, Kara never fights the taunts leveled against her whether they be verbal or via pranks. She is mistreated most by Fen'de Stone's own daughter. Kara takes it all in order to raise her brother, whom she loves dearly.When Kara finds the grimoire, she discovers a desire within herself that she cannot control--the ability to cast spells. She's always been good with animals, but she finds she can control them. Will the intoxicated lure of evil pull her from her brother and lead to her own arrest and death like her mother or can she resist and save the town from the evil that resides within another witch?If you want a "scary" book, here you go. Usually, I say that I don't like dark novels. This one is better written and more engaging. The evil is dark but how dark and how evil is the question. It still stays easily in the fantasy genre but will satisfy those who like their stories more on the "terror"-ble side. Don't think you've figured it all out because the author has a surprise for you.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Potentially a good fit for Halloween season since it's about witches. This was darker than I expected, but well written. That said, I have reservations about one of the major villain characters being disabled. It felt a bit too much like the "Evil Cripple" trope for my taste. I've not read the rest of the series, and it sounds like this character makes another appearance later on, so perhaps this is subverted in later books.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Kara is a twelve year old who has become the head of her families household after her mother's hanging. You see, Kara's mother was hung for performing witchcraft and killing two people in the process. Kara's father has become debilitated by depression and can no longer take care of Kara and her little brother, Taff. The village where they reside view magic as akin to sin and the devil, and they alienate the family at best and abuse them more often than not. While I enjoyed following Kara and her families many misadventures following her mother's hanging, this in no way reads like a middle grade text. I had gotten a used arc of this after seeing it on Mercedes of Mercy's Bookish Musings booktube channel, I was taken aback by how graphic this text got since the publication information says its catered to 8-12 year olds. I'm by no means squeamish, but it opens with five year old character being forced to witness her mother's hanging and continues in that vein with a monster that uses an extra mandible to severe two fingers, tosses said fingers in the air, and uses a "fish-like" mouth to swallow them. For that reason, I'd probably enjoy this more if it was properly advertised. I will also say that Kara's voice reads as older than her 12 years, as well. Still worth a read, but not what I was anticipating.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Life has been lonely for twelve-year-old Kara and her younger brother sincetheir neighbors have shunned them after Kara’s mother was executed as awitch. The only thing more evil than witchcraft is the forbidden forest that surroundstheir village: the Thickety. One night a mysterious bird lures Kara intothe Thickety, where she finds a book that awakens her magical powers. But thesly village bully, Grace, learns of the book and will stop at nothing to get it, threatening all that Kara holds dear. Suspense builds to anexplosive, unexpected ending in this gripping fantasy novel about good and evil.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Kara is mistreated by many in the village who killed her mother for witchcraft. Kara works hard to care for her sickly brother, Taff, and her tormented father. When she is lured into the Thickety, she is led to a magical book and begins to learn how to be a witch on her own. Much information has been kept from her by the adults in her life. There is excitement as she goes head to head with Grace, a golden girl in the town with a serious mean streak. There were some world building problems I had with the book. But Kara was a strong main character.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    I picked up this book for my nephews thinking they might enjoy this book. I do a audit prior to giving them books to make sure it is age appropriate. Luckily I do this as this book was way darker than I expected it to be. Seeing as this book was labeled a children's book. The magic was not just a little cute magic but almost like dark magic. There was even talk of death and killing. Which in the end of the book someone gets killed not to mention that in the beginning of the story Kara's mother is killed as well. Not just be a brief moment of her hanging but in detail including a evil creature. For me I did not mind the darkness but again as I was looking at this book as a prospective for my nephews I did not feel it was a good choice. I will not be giving it to them to read. Also, while all of the townsfolk were horrible, I found Kara attitude to be awful as well. She was bitter and not the type I want to see in a younger audience story. I agree with other readers that the ending was bad. To read though this book to get to the ending that we got was disappointing.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    I'm still so very conflicted about this book. The truth of the matter is that no matter what I write, it's not going to be exactly what I want to say. I had to take a few days to mull over how I felt about The Thickety: A Path Begins before even trying to compose a review. It started out with all the markings of a book I would love. A Middle Grade book with a brave, young heroine, plenty of magic, and just enough action to keep things interesting. For the first few chapters I was completely immersed. This story doesn't have the happiest beginning, but it is one that sets our heroine on her path. Only time would tell where that path took her.

    As I followed along with Kara, I soon noticed that this story has a definite dark undertone. I'm a firm believer that young readers can handle a lot more than people give them credit for. That reading about anger, violence, and death can be good for them if it's portrayed correctly. This book just felt off, in that respect. Everyone in Kara's village loathed her family. Even the people she referred to as kind would turn on her in a moment if need be. It took her story into a very dark place and, as I soon discovered, it got darker from there. I'm not sure how I feel about that. Especially because, as I'll get to soon, it just didn't seem to have a point.

    See, Kara Westfall is a witch. After her mother was convicted, and murdered, for being a witch Kara still wants to pursue this. Okay, fine. I could get behind this because the magic that she was capable of was wonderous. Nothing dark, or scary. Yet. Enter Grace. The exact opposite of young Kara in every way. Once she was on the scene, all the magic in this story took a very sharp turn. There was death, and torture. That stark line between Kara's "good" magic and Grace's "bad" magic started to blur. Keep in mind that this society hinges on the belief that magic should be shunned. After reading this story? I'm apt to agree with them. No wonder they wanted to keep it out of their lives.

    My biggest issue, over everything else, was just that this story didn't seem to have an ultimate point. The Thickety: A Path Begins starts with a Kara who just wants to be accepted. To not feel like an outcast in her own community. She never really accomplishes this. The concept of "good" and "bad" magic is never hashed out. There's no final lesson, or anything to take away from this other than the fact that poor Kara has led a life filled with pain and chances are it isn't going to get any better.

    Looking at this from an adult perspective, I was unimpressed with everything except the writing. That, I can definitely say was well done. It draws you in and, obviously, kept me reading to the end. From a young reader's perspective, I'd have to say I might give this closer to a three star rating. I see them being quicker to forgive Kara, and maybe even understand her. They might have an easier time filling in the gaps that glared at me from the story. For this reader though? It wasn't what I was hoping for.

    1 person found this helpful

  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    really? unfair cliff hanger at end of book...it's like a bad TV show! IF you like it, be sure you have next book ready to go.

Book preview

The Thickety - J. A. White

Kara lay in bed thinking of names. Mother and Father had yet to settle on one, even though there were only six weeks left until she became a big sister. It was clear that they needed her help. Jonathan? No—too common. Nathaniel? Not that either—she knew a Nathaniel and he picked his nose. Samuel? She liked it, except everyone would end up calling him Sam, and that wouldn’t do at all.

I really want it to be Victoria.

Kara giggled softly. It was a pleasant thought, but she was positive the baby would be a boy. Mother had said so, and Mother was always right.

Philip? Edmund? Arthur?

Kara fell asleep.

When she opened her eyes, there were two men standing at her bedside. One was big and one was small. The darkness of the room obscured their features, giving them the appearance of living shadows.

The big one held a potato sack in his hands and shifted from foot to foot.

Sorry, child, he said.

Grabbing Kara with one massive hand, he yanked her out of bed.

She screamed.

Don’t bother with that, the second man said. Ain’t nobody home but us.

Although Kara scratched at the big man’s arms and kicked her feet wildly, she might as well have been fighting a tree for all the good it did. Burlap scratched her cheek as he stuffed her into the sack.

The cord knotted tight above her head. A new, more suffocating darkness enveloped her.

This one’s got a demon’s spirit! the big one said. See here! She bloodied up my arm.

It’s just a scratch, Josef.

I should get some ointment after, in case she’s the same as her mother. Could be it’s a spreading type of thing.

Don’t be a fool.

Easy for you to say. She didn’t scratch you.

Floorboards creaked as the small man bent next to the potato sack. Kara listened to his short, sharp breaths less than a foot from her ear.

She ain’t dead, is she? Josef asked.

No, the man replied. She’s listening carefully. Aren’t you, little one?

Kara, despite her best efforts, let a whimper escape her lips.

Don’t be scared, he said. Even through the thick material of the sack, Kara could smell his breath, a mixture of boiled turnips and the clear liquor Father called moondrink. We ain’t gonna do you no harm. The head man himself sent us, and he told us that. ‘Be careful,’ he said, ‘but don’t hurt her. Not until we’re sure.’

There was a long pause, and then both men burst into laughter. Kara heard the pop of a bottle being uncorked and slurping sounds as each man drank from it.

I want Mommy, she said.

Good, the man replied. Because that’s where we’re taking you.

They tossed her into an open wagon and sped through the night.

The road was bumpy, and the wagon’s frame shook and rattled in protest, bucking Kara from one side of the flatbed to the other. Splinters and ill-hammered nails scratched bloody lines on her skin.

Finally the wagon came to a stop.

She was slung over someone’s shoulder—Josef, no doubt. He had the same moondrink smell as the small man and tottered a bit as he walked. Kara did not think it was from her weight.

The two men exchanged not a word, and their sudden silence discomforted her.

Where are we going? Kara asked.

No response.

Tell me where we’re going! As she spoke Kara pounded her fists against Josef’s back. He tightened his grip slightly but otherwise showed no reaction.

They continued onward. Kara listened carefully to the too-quiet night. Nothing but silence, save the measured, rhythmic patter of boots against earth.

Until someone coughed.

The sound came from Kara’s right. She supposed it could have been the smaller man, but Kara didn’t think so. It sounded like the cough of a woman.

They were not alone.

Help! Kara screamed. Please help me!

Kara’s pleas were answered by the creaking of stairs, straining beneath the huge man’s weight. The night air slipped its cold fingers around Kara and squeezed tightly.

Where are we? she thought.

Kara was dumped from the potato sack and given her answer. She was on a small scaffold in the unused field north of the village, one of the only places in De’Noran where crops refused to grow. The scaffold rose about ten feet off the ground and teetered unsteadily. In the distance the black-leaved trees of the Thickety swayed toward Kara and then away, as though beckoning her.

Kara had been in this field yesterday, picking wildflowers as she waited for news of Mother. The scaffold had not been there.

They had built it in the night.

Good evening, Kara, said a familiar voice.

Fen’de Stone bent down before her. He was tall, with a thatch of thick brown hair tied in a neat ponytail, and wore the crimson robe that befitted his position as leader of De’Noran. One eye was slightly larger than the other, though both were the same piercing blue. Predator eyes, Kara’s father called them—but only within the privacy of their home, and even then with a hushed voice.

Those unblinking eyes stared into Kara’s now, as though searching for something.

I apologize if they frightened you, dear. It would have been best to simply explain the situation and bring you here peacefully. But all of this has happened so quickly—we couldn’t take any chances.

Kara felt dizzy. She should have been asleep, not shivering in the night while speaking to the leader of her village about things she did not understand.

Where’s Mother? she asked. Where’s Father? Surely they would be able to explain.

Fen’de Stone looked surprised. The expression rested uneasily on his face, like an ill-fitting mask.

Why—they’re here, Kara, he said. We’re all here. Didn’t you notice?

He stepped to the side.

A sea of faces stretched out across the field. The entire population of De’Noran— men, women, and children—standing as still as scarecrows. All eyes on her.

Kara saw the old wagon that had brought her here in the distance. The crowd must have parted to allow them passage to the scaffold. Her friends and neighbors had been mere inches from her captors, knowing what was happening. Allowing it.

Standing behind her now, Fen’de Stone placed one hand on her shoulder and squeezed gently.

Even your brother is here, Kara.

My brother?

That’s right. He was born last night.

A brother. Just like Mother said.

But if her parents were truly here, why did they not call out for her?

Kara scanned the crowd, searching for their faces. This was not easy, for De’Noran was a large village, and though the night was dark, few people held lanterns. Nonetheless Kara was able to make out one familiar face after another. Baker Corbett, who slipped her a fresh sweet roll each time she passed his shop. Gregor Thompson, the owner of the farmland adjoining theirs, who took his coffee in Kara’s kitchen most nights. And just beneath the scaffold: Grace, a girl about her own age, brilliant blue eyes glowing with excitement.

Finally she saw Father standing between two graycloaks. The crowd to either side of them had parted slightly, giving them space.

Father! Kara exclaimed. Father! What’s happening?

Her father did not respond, but his eyes met hers. They were wet with tears.

Father!

In his arms he cradled a small object in a plain, brown blanket.

I have a brother, Kara thought.

Father! Help me!

His mouth tightened and he looked ready to step forward, but the graycloak to his left clenched his ball-staff tighter and shook his head. With slumping shoulders, Father backed down.

I need you to see something, Kara, said Fen’de Stone.

Can I go to Father?

Maybe later. Afterward. If all goes well, you can hold your brother. Would you like that, Kara?

Kara nodded.

He’s beautiful. Pure. His name is Taff.

Taff.

The name had not been one of the possibilities they’d discussed, the three of them squeezed into bed together, laughing. But she knew it was the perfect choice the moment she heard it.

Taff.

Despite everything, Kara smiled. She had a brother.

I need you to look up, child. At that tree there.

But it was such a cold night. A newborn babe shouldn’t be out here right now. He should be home, by the fire. . . .

Fen’de Stone snapped his fingers in her face.

Look up. Now.

Kara did as she was told.

Mother’s hands had been bound together and hooked over a thick branch; her feet dangled fifteen feet from the ground. She was blindfolded and gagged.

Kara screamed.

At the sound of her daughter’s voice, Helena Westfall jerked against her restraints. A nervous murmur went through the crowd, the first sound they had made since Kara’s arrival.

Have no fear, Fen’de Stone told them. She no longer poses a threat.

A gnawing emptiness, not unlike hunger, spread through Kara’s stomach.

Until this moment Kara had been confused and frightened, but these emotions were now replaced by something more powerful.

Rage.

She turned on the fen’de, no longer caring that he was the most important man in the village.

You hurt her!

Kara flailed her fists against the man’s chest. He made no move to stop her, simply watched with cold amusement.

Your mother is a witch, Kara. A danger to De’Noran.

Liar!

She has gone into the Thickety and communed with the Forest Demon.

That’s not true! Mother is good!

She killed two people.

Stop it! Stop lying!

There were witnesses, Kara. Respected citizens of De’Noran. They saw her work black magic with their own eyes. Widow Gable. Master Blackwood.

No! No! No!

Fen’de Stone grabbed Kara’s fists and stared into her eyes.

Your father, girl! Your own father admits it!

Kara slumped to the wooden floor of the scaffold. She looked up at her mother, who had once again stopped moving. Then to Father.

Make him stop it, Kara said. Make him stop lying.

But her father’s eyes were unable to meet her own, and she knew then that Fen’de Stone spoke the truth.

The world began to spin.

How many years have you? asked Fen’de Stone.

Kara felt so sleepy. It was hard to understand what the words meant.

Your age, Kara. How old are you?

Five.

Five, the fen’de repeated. He sighed dramatically. It is too late, no doubt. But the Children of the Fold are just in all things, and we shall learn if you have inherited your mother’s powers. If you, Kara Westfall, are a witch as well.

It was then that Kara noticed the second tree. Smaller than her mother’s but with an identical peg pounded into its bark.

You understand, then, Fen’de Stone said, following her eyes. That’s good. Easier.

I’m not a witch.

The fen’de smiled, and Kara realized, with a sickening feeling, that the man was having fun.

A promising beginning, he said, clasping his hands together. But let’s find out for sure, shall we?

Josef and the smaller man—who Kara now recognized as Bailey Riddle, the gravedigger—led the creature through the crowd. It most closely resembled a dog, with jet-black fur streaked with gray and an elongated snout. Fur hung loosely from its frame, as though the animal had been cursed with an overabundance of skin.

Their kind has become rare, a shadow of their former selves, Fen’de Stone said. In the Old Stories, these beasts walked proudly with the great hunters and helped them track witches to the darkest corners of the World. The leader’s eyes grew distant, reimagining the former glory of his people. We used to call them by their true names. Gant-ruaal! Thrandix! Danik Juzel! In these ignorant times, however, they are known as nightseekers.

The strange creature was having trouble navigating the stairs. Josef gave its chain a vicious tug, and the nightseeker, emitting a low-pitched squeal, dragged itself forward on folded-back paws. Despite her terror Kara felt a rush of sympathy for the thing. When it finally reached the top of the scaffold, it looked at her askance, with violet eyes that would have been pretty on a less monstrous frame.

Fen’de Stone nodded to Josef, who slowly untwisted the chain from his arm and set the creature free.

Go, Fen’de Stone said, clicking his tongue and gesturing toward Kara. Tell.

The nightseeker eased itself to its feet and made its way forward. Kara tried to move, but Riddle held her in place.

Watch this, he whispered in her ear. "It’s something."

The nightseeker shifted forward until its long snout made contact with the scaffold, and then it extended its rear legs, revealing two large, hairless paws. Its front legs unfolded next, the cracks of shifting bones reverberating loudly through the silent night as the creature grew before her eyes. Soon it was twice its original size, three times. The makeshift scaffold groaned in protest under this surprising new weight.

The nightseeker sat back on its haunches. Its whimpers grew to a piteous whine as a translucent needle, as long as Kara’s forearm, emerged from its front paw. The beast looked up and bared its teeth, revealing large, jagged incisors that had not been there a moment ago.

I would take a step back, Bailey, Fen’de Stone said softly, if I were you.

Kara’s arms were released half a moment before the nightseeker leaped across the scaffold and knocked her to the floor. It placed one massive paw on Kara’s chest and gazed into her eyes. Warm slobber dangled from its mouth.

Kara did not realize the needle had pierced her arm until the nightseeker sat back and regarded the blood at its tip. At first Kara thought it might lick it, but instead the nightseeker plunged the needle deeply into its nostril. With a shudder of its massive body, it sucked up her blood and snorted deeply.

After a considerate pause, the nightseeker straightened, as though a decision had been made. It raised its needle paw high into the air and angled it toward Kara’s right eye.

No! she screamed. Please!

The nightseeker’s other paw was an impossible weight on her chest. No matter how hard she jerked and twisted, she could not move a single inch. Each breath was a struggle.

Judgment has been delivered! Fen’de Stone proclaimed. It looks like we’ll be ridding the world of two witches tonight! A return to glory for the Children of the Fold!

The crowd erupted into cheers.

No, Kara said, but her voice was quiet now. I’m not a witch.

The needle inched closer to her eye until it was all Kara could see, a clear pinpoint in the night.

I’m not a witch. I’m not bad.

She stared ahead, wanting to close her eyes but needing to see.

I’m a good girl.

The crowd began to clap. A steady rhythm.

Don’t hurt me.

Looking past the needle, Kara met the violet eyes of the nightseeker.

Don’t hurt me!

The creature shuddered and made a noise deep within its throat. The crowd had grown far too loud for anyone to hear it, but it wasn’t a growl, not exactly. There was no fury in it.

With one swift motion, the nightseeker backed off Kara’s chest, the needle already retracting into its paw. By the time it had gone three steps, its body had shrunk to its original, innocuous form. Looking tired and drained, the creature tottered toward the stairs.

The crowd grew silent.

Fen’de Stone regarded Kara, his eyes narrowed to dangerous slits.

What did you do?

Kara shook her head. She hadn’t done anything.

A spell. You cast a spell, didn’t you?

Kara shook her head again.

You bewitched this creature and—

That girl didn’t do nothing! From her position on the scaffold, Kara couldn’t see the speaker, but it was a woman’s voice.

That’s right!

That creature of yours made its choice, all right.

She ain’t no witch!

Let her go!

This last voice Kara recognized. Her father.

Others joined in, murmuring their agreement. The bloodlust of the crowd had been extinguished by shame. Whereas before they had seen a demon in a child’s skin, all they saw now was a little girl, shivering with fear.

Fen’de Stone raised one hand into the air, commanding their silence.

Of course, he said. He wore a smile of relief on his face, but Kara knew that it was just for show. It appears as though she’s not a witch after all. How fortunate.

He held out a hand to Kara.

Allow me to help you to your feet, dear. I am so sorry if we scared you—but I’m sure you understand. One can never be too careful about these things.

My mother, she said.

Oh yes, the fen’de replied, and his smile transformed into something far more genuine, far more terrible. Your mother.

Afterward the crowd began to shuffle toward the village, conversations already turning back to practical matters such as livestock and fertilizer. The sun had risen in the sky, the day’s work begun.

Kara’s father stood at the base of the stairs. The baby in his arms wailed fiercely.

He’s hungry, Father said. There was a large, red welt on his cheek where one of the graycloaks had struck him. He refused to meet her eyes.

Kara looked at the small bundle in his arms.

Can I hold him? she asked.

Father nodded, passing the baby to Kara with a relieved expression on his face. He collapsed to the earth as though holding his son had been the only thing keeping him on his feet.

I’m sorry, he mumbled. I’m sorry. I’m sorry. I’m—

Kara left him and started toward the village.

Gently folding back the blanket, Kara regarded the newest member of her family. She hadn’t seen many babies before, but she could tell that Taff was small, even for a newborn. His eyes, barely open, were light like their father’s.

Hello, baby brother, she said. My name is Kara.

The morning was cold, and Kara held him close, trying to pass her warmth into him.

I have sad news, Baby Taff. You’ll never get to meet Mama. But you don’t have to worry. I’ll always be here. I’ll always protect you.

Kara took one last look across the field. Her mother’s body had been removed. Workers were already dismantling the scaffold. The only sounds came from a group of giggling children tossing pinecones at Bailey Riddle, who spun round and round and screamed girlishly in mock pain.

No one is ever going to hurt you, Kara whispered to the baby.

She stared at Bailey Riddle until he finally looked up and met her gaze. Unlike Taff, Kara had her mother’s eyes, black as a forest night.

The man gasped.

No one, she said.

Kara held her brother close the entire walk back to the village. By the time they reached their house, he had fallen asleep in her arms.

Bailey Riddle died later that night, viciously attacked by some sort of wild animal. There were no witnesses, and as Bailey was not especially well liked, he was simply buried and forgotten.

These things did happen.

BOOK ONE

SIGNS

"A witch often hides behind an innocent face.

That’s why you must know the signs to look for."

—The Path

Leaf 17, Vein 26

Hand in hand, the witch’s children walked down the empty road.

The girl, twelve and as thin as a willow branch, wore a simple black school dress with a white collar, patched in several places but immaculately clean. Her dark hair was coiled in a tight bun. Sometimes she allowed a few rebellious strands to hang across her forehead, but not today.

Her name was Kara. Mostly she was called other things.

Taff, her brother, was small for his age, with sandy hair. The morning was cold, and twin blooms of red spotted his pale cheeks. Without thinking, Kara reached over and checked his temperature with the back of her hand.

In the distance a figure approached.

It was early, even for the few farmers who used this road to transport their goods to the main village. Past hills of plotted land, sunlight peeked through the sky-scratching branches of the Thickety like an uncertain visitor.

Taff squeezed his sister’s hand.

The figure drew close enough for Kara to recognize the plodding gait of Davin Gray. He lived on the edge of the island but spent most of his time traveling from farm to farm, making repairs. She had once asked him to patch their roof when Father had been in a bad way. Davin Gray had laughed in her face.

Despite this, Kara knew her manners.

Good morning, Mr. Gray, she said. She squeezed Taff’s hand, who surrendered a quiet, Morning.

Refusing to meet their eyes, the man spat on the ground and traced a path as far from the pair as the road would take him.

Evil, he growled. Just like the mother.

When Davin Gray had passed, the children, used to such encounters, continued their journey. Perhaps Kara held her brother a bit closer. That was all.

I don’t want to do this, Kara thought as they approached the farmhouse. She started to turn around but then remembered her desperation last night upon boiling water and finding nothing—literally nothing—in the cupboard to cook. What Kara wanted wasn’t important anymore. It was all about need.

Before she could change her mind, Kara trudged up the wooden steps, dragging Taff behind her. The farmhouse had recently been whitewashed, and an expensive Fenroot branch hung across the door so Timoth Clen would recognize the residents’ devotion upon his Return. It reminded Kara that she needed to chop some firewood before night fell.

She took a moment to straighten her dress before knocking on the door.

Be good, she told Taff.

Enjoying the preview?
Page 1 of 1