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Witchlanders
Witchlanders
Witchlanders
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Some prophecies thwart danger. Others create it. “Fans of contemplative, psychologically rich (but no less action-packed) fantasies à la Ursula Le Guin will welcome this warm, inventive debut” (BCCB, starred review).

High in their mountain covens, red witches pray to the Goddess, protecting the Witchlands by throwing the bones and foretelling the future.

But it’s all fake.

At least, that’s what Ryder thinks. He doubts the witches really deserve their tithes—one quarter of all the crops his village can produce. And even if they can predict the future, what danger is there to foretell, now that his people’s old enemy, the Baen, has been defeated? But when a terrifying new magic threatens both his village and the coven, Ryder must confront the beautiful and silent witch who holds all the secrets. Everything he’s ever believed about witches, the Baen, magic, and about himself will change when he discovers that the prophecies he’s always scorned…are about him.

Laced with rich, imagined histories; miles of catacombs; and prophecies true and false, Witchlanders takes place in an evocative, tantalizingly vibrant world and raises equally evocative questions: Who gets to defines history? When does a legend become a crutch? And why does the enemy in war look a lot like the hero? Lena Coakley’s first novel is a lush, chilling story that is sure to send shivers through your finger bones.
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Release dateAug 30, 2011
ISBN9781442420069
Witchlanders
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Lena Coakley

LENA COAKLEY was born in Milford, Connecticut, and grew up on Long Island. After studying writing at Sarah Lawrence College, she moved to Toronto. She is the author of the acclaimed fantasy novel Witchlanders, winner of the SCBWI Crystal Kite Award, as well as the picture books On the Night of the Comet and Mrs. Goodhearth and the Gargoyle. The former administrative director for the Canadian Society of Children’s Authors, Illustrators and Performers, Oakley is now a full-time writer.

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  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    "He is not on our side. But . . . are we only allowed to care about people who are on our side?" (p.268)Witchlanders is Lena Coakley's debut novel, a YA fantasy story set on a world divided between two peoples. The copper-skinned, blonde-haired Witchlanders worship two goddesses and are governed by the red witches, who predict the future by casting bones. Their traditional enemies, the Baen, or "blackhairs," were driven out of the Witchlands into the Bitterlands in a great war several years before the novel begins. The Baen worship a male god and practice a form of magic that involves singing (they do not allow women to participate.) Animosity runs high between the two, with anger lingering over the war and crimes committed by both sides. But there are secret histories from the ancient past which neither side remembers that have the potential to change everything.The narrative follows two young men, one on either side of the border, one in each world, who are linked by a mysterious connection. Ryder is a Witchlander, although he is very cynical towards the witches. He lives on a small farm with his sisters, and a mother who was once a witch herself, and has developed a dangerous addiction to a swamp flower which she believes enhances her visions. When she tries to warn their village about an assassin, and monsters coming to attack them, Ryder doesn't believe her. Falpian is a young prince of the Baen. A disappointment to his father because he never developed the singing magic that runs in his family, he is sent to a lonely outpost in the mountains, on the borders of the Witchlands, to mourn for his dead brother. Falpian has only his loyal dreadhound, Bo, for company, but he is plagued by strange dreams - dreams which somehow Ryder shares.It turns out Ryder and Falpian share a magic bond - they are talat-sa, something like soul mates (though not romantically). They must unite to stop monsters and a plot to reignite the war between the Baen and the Witchlanders. I found Coakley's writing smooth and readable, but style-wise the prose didn't blow me away. The pacing was good and brisk, and the twists and revelations at the end were very satisfying. There is also a good message about learning to look past things like race, religion, nationality and history, and to realize that people are people wherever they are from and yes, there really are no sides. Witchlanders is definitely a solid read, and I'll be curious to see what Coakley comes out with next.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    So, I had no clue what this book was about when I picked it up. My sister had seen it at the library and asked me to pick it up when I went back because she thought it looked good. And it is a very pretty book. It's got a nice subtle cover that is amazing in it's quietness. After I got it home, I read the inside flap cover and decided that I had to read this book immediately.

    It's a fantasy novel through and through. It follows Ryder - a teenager that lives in the Witchlands. Their village is protected by the witches who live up on the mountain in their covens. The witches protect the village and warn of dangers. But Ryder is convinced that it is all a fake. He thinks that the witches are charlatans and that they are just stealing the villagers food and wealth through their tithes. This belief is reinforced when their village is attacked with no warning from the witches of the dangers.

    Then, there's Falpian. He's a Baen and the sworn enemy of Ryder. The two of them stumble upon each other and an unique connection and friendship forms between them.

    I LOVED this story. I resented any time that I had to put it down and was so upset when I finished it. I felt like I'd lost two new friends. I thought that Lena Coakley's writing was beautiful and poetic. She did a terrific job writing two different male points of view. The world was nicely developed. She didn't muddle up her story with romance for either one of the guys. It was just a nice development of a friendship and fighting an evil that threatened both of their ways of life.

    My only complaint is that the one time that I would really like for there to be a sequel in the works, I can't find any hint of one. Boo-hoo.

    I recommend this book for anyone who likes a good old-fashioned fantasy.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Something unique and different, very enjoyable.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    The witches on the mountain take a tithe and cast the bones to prophesy and keep the villagers safe. This is how it is, and how it has been since the terrible war when the black haired singing sorcerers were banished into the Bitter Lands.

    Now the prophesies are running amok and Ryder, who never believed in them in the first place, has to find a way to pull his mother back from madness and protect his sisters and save the Witchlands from danger. Because the war isn't over. It's beginning again and there are secrets in the mountain that will make all the difference in the coming conflict.

  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    This is a strong debut novel from author Lena Coakley. I was captivated immediately by this story. Centering on Ryder, who is a well written, strong, male protagonist, we journey along as he reluctantly follows his Destiny to join with the known enemy, question all his beliefs and knowledge and decide if he wants to stay safe within the boundaries or risk all to save not only his world but that of his enemy.

    Coakley imagines for us a well drawn world where I was easily able to envision myself as an observer to all that was occurring throughout the story. I could feel the bite of the air from the Chilling and cringed as I read of Falpian's mad rush to escape the Thief Spiders, feeling them fall on my shoulders as they fell on his.

    She does not leave Ryder alone as the only well written character. She surrounds him with thoughtful and fully fleshed out secondary characters that you know will continue to play vital roles throughout what I'm hoping will be a series. I was surprised by Skyla's decision at the end of the story but believe that there may be ulterior reasons for why she made that choice.

    I could not put the book down. When I did I was slightly surprised to see that I was sitting in my living room and not standing on a mountain side.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    A nice after-the-war story, with an interesting world and conflict. I did wish that some of the minor characters had been more developed, but if there are more books to come (possibly hinted at but not necessary), that could change.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I so, so enjoyed this book. I don't stumble across a lot of new, high fantasy in the YA genre often, which is sad - because I do adore that genre.

    This book has everything going for it: a shady clan in the mountain, a few crazy predictions that are somehow coming true, a former enemy bubbling to the surface, vindication, revelations, twins - oh how the list goes on.

    What really impressed me was Coakley's ability to manage this rather complex storyline. There are actually two main characters in this novel (you'll notice I focused mostly on one and only briefly mentioned the second), and their stories are complicated and messy. But really, really well done. I noticed the book jacket description opted to focus on Ryder as well, and largely, I think it's due to the spoilers that are inherent to Falpain's most basic story. I actually wrote something, then opted to delete it because it was such an interesting, exciting thing that happened near the beginning of the book - I didn't want to give it away.

    There are twists and turns in this one that are shocking (although the one depicted on the cover, I thought, was rather obvious) and Coakley does such a lovely job with the many plots. I would very much look forward to a sequel. A really wonderful, fun book to pick up and enjoy.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I read pure fantasy infrequently, though the ones I have read I have enjoyed for the most part. Witchlanders , the debut novel by Lena Coakley, falls into that category. Full disclosure: I picked it up only because I heard her speak at a conference recently, where she was accepting an award. I very much liked what she had to say and it made me want to read her book. I am happy to say that I do not regret my decision.Since his father's death, Ryder has been in charge of the small patch of scraggy earth he and his family farms to eke out a meager existence. On top of the grueling work, he also must look after his younger sisters and most of all his mother, who is descending into madness, reverting to her old ways when she was young and lived with the Red witches. She is eating Maiden's woe to cause the visions and is making crazy prophecies. But when a new magic comes and threatens the village, Ryder is forced to consider that his mother might not be crazy after all. If he wants to save his sisters and his village, he will have to rethink everything he has ever believed in.The best thing by far about this book is Coakley's lyrical writing style. The way she describes the Chilling, the coming of winter. The way magic works in the Witchlands, by singing voices. It is very beautiful her world. Though the story can be hard to follow- with many characters and all that world-building exposition necessary when you are creating a whole new place, it is worth while. The characters are well-rounded - flawed but well meaning. There are enough twists and turns to keep the reader doubting about the cause of the evil- red herrings well-placed and subtle. All in all, this is a strong first novel, with a different take on the way magic works. Although the book begs for a sequel, Coakley seems reticent to announce one. Will there? Won't there? I hope there will be.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Review courtesy of Dark Faerie TalesQuick & Dirty: A unique fantasy with a fantastic and believable world that revolves around magic, fascinating creatures, and well rounded characters.Opening Sentence: Ryder woke to the sound of clattering bones.The Review:Witchlanders by Lena Coakley is a world filled with magic and fantasy. Not only does Witchlanders contain witches, but it also contains a very detailed world and a culture full of religious beliefs.We begin the story with Ryder, the eldest son of a witchlander, who lives on the hills between the coven and the town. Along with his two sisters, they care for their land and also for their mother. One evening, Ryder finds his mother reading the future through bones thrown in a bowl. Regardless of the promise to never throw those bones again, she seeks for signs of danger in their future. In the midst of an ongoing war between the Witchlanders and the Baen people, Ryder is caught between his mother’s beliefs and his own. But who will he believe? What will he do to save his town from danger?A decision creates a ripple as fast as fire to dry bush, and Ryder must take a journey and own up to his responsibility and his actions alone. There are questions left unanswered, and some answers too surprising even for Ryder. Ryder grows up a lot on this journey, accepting changes physically and spiritually. Never believing in his mother’s beliefs, he finds that he holds magic, and possibly share the same beliefs after all.Falpian is the Baen, a young boy who has it all. Spoiled by riches and luxury, the one thing that he covets is his father’s approval. Without it, he feels he amounts to nothing. He mourns the death of his brother, and is somewhat exiled at the edge of the Baen border. Living in solitude, Falpian must find who he is and what his purpose in life is. Falpian meets an unexpected stranger and learns truths that shake the very core of his being. Who will he choose to trust and will he survive the journey to the truth?Coakley surprised me with the world that she created. I must be honest and say that I was expecting a female protagonist. Only because of the cover art, but that is neither here nor there. Coakley’s world is so imaginative and detailed, that it became real. The hills that belong to Ryder, or the landscape that Falpian saw each morning, I was there alongside them, taking it all in.The alternating point-of-views were a little confusing. I felt that a majority of the story belonged to Ryder, and that Falpian was an afterthought. I would have liked to understand Falpian more, and delve into his past and what past experiences made him who he is today. Both Ryder and Falpian each have their own struggles, and despite my wants and needs for this story, Coakley did a fantastic job writing their differences and conflicts, yet putting them in this linear timeline. They had symbolic parallels, adding to the engaging experience of the world.Notable Scene:Ryder had a moment to stumble out of the water and prepare himself. Then, like a heavy weight pressing down from above, the cold came. Ryder heard a hissing sound, like an intake of breath, as the water on his clothing froze stiff. He gasped, and Dassen let out a bellow of pain. Cold. Frigid cold.“Hurry up!” said Dassen. “Keep moving.” His words were clouds in the air now, and his beard was white with ice. Above them the clouds, like purple fingers, seemed to reach out to grip the valley. Winter had arrived.“The river will be frozen by tomorrow,” said Ryder. “What will we do about the creatures then?”“We’ll fight. And we’ll pray to the Goddess. What else can we do? We don’t even know what these things are or what magic made them.”What magic. Out of the blue, Ryder remembered the singing he’d heard in his mind, and he remembered the conversation he’d had with his mother that morning. Something even colder than the chilling snaked its way around his heart and tightened its grip.“Yes we do know, Dassen,” he said. “My mother told me. She said there was a Baen in the mountains. He must have made these things.”Dassen’s face hardened. Then he looked at Ryder and smiled grimly. “Well, we Witchlanders know how to kill a Baen, don’t we?”FTC Advisory: Simon & Schuster provided me with a copy of Witchlanders. No goody bags, sponsorships, “material connections,” or bribes were exchanged for my review.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    My opinion: I loved it!! I've had this book on my shelf for a while now and when I finally got around to reading it I had to ask myself why I waited so long! Ryder and his sisters and mother live in the Witchlands, and Falpian lives in the Bitterlands with his father, mother and sisters. The Witchlanders and the Baen (from the Bitterlands) are mortal enemies following the great war, at which time the Witchlanders drove all of the Baen over into the Bitterlands. But there is a connection between Ryder and Falpian that could change the course of events drastically.I am a new fan of Lena Coakley's and will definitely be reading anything she writes! Her writing is flawless, the pace of the book was perfect, and talk about character development! Even the secondary characters, which are as well fleshed out as the main characters, grew over the course of the book! There was enough action to keep you reading from the first page to the last, and I actually read it in 2 days because I couldn't put it down! The author describes the surroundings in such a way that you can easily see everything that is happening.Here is a perfect example of what I'm talking about: "It's all over, he tried to tell himself. Things will go back to normal now. But dread lay coiled at the pit of his stomach. He had the feeling that the future was stealing up behind him, about to tap his shoulder with a cold finger, about to break the spell of this perfect twilit night." I get a shiver just reading it again!Things were tied up to a point at the end of the book, but it felt to me as though it was being left open for a possible sequel. I've looked but can't find any information on whether this is going to happen or not. I have a message in to Ms. Coakley now asking her just that question, and hopefully I will be able to update this post when I get the answer! Be that as it may, I absolutely enjoyed reading this book and can definitely highly recommend it to all fantasy lovers out there :)
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Whoa, this is definitely not Narnia. I honestly don't know what gave me the idea to liken this novel to Narnia. But when I put them side by side, they seem good together. Except, Witchlanders isn't anything like C.S Lewis' books. As far as my memory is concerned, there are no talking animals in this book.Within the world created by Lena Coakley, there is danger, there is a feud, and there are witches. It's undoubtedly unique and it's different from all the other books I've ever read. Witchlanders is strangely enchanting and alluring, with magic that readers have never imagined before. Warts-be-gone. I'd picked up this book thinking it would be one great Halloween read with all those witches involved in the story. You know how witches are normally associated with warts, broomsticks, poitions and long noses? Well, that's not the case here. Sure, some of the witches here may be old, but Lena Coakley's witches are different from society's take. In Witchlanders, the witches pray to the Goddesses (another unique feat. in the story), throw bones and tell the future. The witches had to be the one thing that I was struck by. Lena Coakley's vision is creative and one-of-a-kind. I hadn't expected Lena to envision the witches this way and I enjoyed that she decided to do things differently. Points for creativity go to her. Oh, so you're talking now.Falpian and Ryder are two kick ass characters, and their personalities and backgrounds clash to make a great duo. But I found the dual POVs confusing. For one thing, I couldn't memorize everyone's names because they were unique names that were authentic to the story's setting. It's not that they were bad names (they were very unique and even beautiful), but they were the kind that I couldn't remember. I'd often forget who was who and I had to flip back to the earlier pages to find out who this person was (and I don't like doing that). So because it took a while for me to recognize the names of some characters, I had a hard time guessing the alternating POVs. In Witchlanders, readers have to assume who's POV it is and that can get a little confusing at times. It may even take a while for us to realize who's POV it is. I know I've had my fair share of that. There's a fine line between confusion and being unique. As I've mentioned a couple of times, the world of Witchlanders, is amazingly unique. But I often found myself being very confused while reading. Maybe it was the little information given at a time to the readers or maybe it was because I was just out of it. Maybe it's just because creating a whole new world by yourself is often harder than using an already existing one. Nonetheless, I'm glad Lena Coakley decided to be different. Different is good (in this case anyway).Bromance + Adventure? I'm in. Overall, I really enjoyed Witchlanders. It wasn't the kind of Halloween read I expected, but I didn't mind that. For one thing, there was no romance in this novel, but there was a strong sense of friendship and adventure. Lena Coakley's Witchlanders allowed me to take a peek into what originality was, as she created a compelling world. I'll be looking out for Lena's other novels because she has potential and I know she'll come up with other great ideas.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Witchlanders is a cleverly written brilliant tale of magic. Coakley is sure to draw her reader's in with fantastic world building, memorable character's, unique storytelling dymanics, and a mystical plot worth reading more than once. It possesses all the elements that will leave its audience clammoring for more, once they've turned the last page. The worlds that Coakley has created and illustrated in Witchlanders are simply unlike any other that I've personally read before. They are rich and lush in the detail, that she pays so careful attention to. Readers will want to sink into to the pages of this amazinglycomplex story, in attempts at getting closer to the truth. What they will be met with is great loyalty, the suspenese of lies and truth meeting at a sort of crossroads, and the importantance of family, honor, and a very undeniable strong sense of duty only to discover that all of this is bound together by magic. Questions will be formed in their minds, about what the main protagonist believed to be true all his life and what really is true, and the answers to them will slowly begin to unravel and come to light. There are so many fascinating things going on in Witchlanders that have the ability to possess so much imagination and creativity in things such as the Gormy Men and the bone-throwing witches, which were interesting and captivating. The level of originality presented by Coakley will definitely astound any reader. Witchlanders has a lot of things going for it, but the two things that I found the most refreshing about it, was the fact that it's not a romance and it's also narrated by two males which is not very common in a lot of the young adult fiction that I've found myself reading. Ryder is an interesting character that's been very well developed, with a lot of thought put into him. In fact, I would go so far as to say, that he's one of the most realistically written and easily believable character's I've read in young adult fiction in the last several months. He doesn't believe in the magic, because his mother spent so much time telling him that "boneshaking" was more of a parlor trick, than anything with real substance to it. Ryder rejects the belief in magic or anything that his mother has to tell him as a result of the boneshaking and her predictions that an assassin will soon be arriving to cause them all great harm. He's a strong, yet determined and sometimes an angry young man, that's dealing with his own personal grief and realizing that he does have a certain sense of duty that he holds himself accountable to. These are wonderful qualities for any strong male protagonist to possess and the very reason, he's likeable in that sense that he's loyal and dependable. Coakley has this magical ability to ensure that all of her character's shine, whether they're main characters meant to move the story along with personal depth and growth, or they're smaller character's that server a sense of purpose all their own. They are all carefully crafted, well developed, and thoughout intelligent people who make the story worth the reader's time. In it's very essence, Witchlanders is a novel that is very compelling and eye-opening, with with an amazing world that has the ability to put the reader right there in the middle of it. This is fantasy at its highest level and I don't know any other way to say it, except to say that I fell in love with it - ALL OF IT - and I would gladly fall all over again willingly. Coakley just has this uncanny ability to convince the reader to put away everything and read this book. This is an author who writes with tremendous amount of integrity and it shows in her character's, in her world building skills, and her attention to detail by making all of the character's (small or large) shine in so many wonderful ways that it only illuminates the story being told more. Her villians are wonderful at being villians and she's mastered the art of having her character's look even further inside and question themselves and their motives. Her myth's and mysteries take on a life of their own. They captivate and intrigue the reader, enticing them to read further and delve between the pages of a phenomenally unique story being told that isn't compounded by teenage love at first sight and becomes more about the adventure, the journey of figuring things out and what they mean, of becoming that person who is so filled with honor and intent at protecting those around them from sheer evil forces, all the while learning to embrace what they've been taught were nothing more than parlor tricks for those easily bought. Witchlanders is just wonderfully amazing read that readers who enjoy fantasy, will not be disappointed in.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Lena Coakley's first novel "Witchlanders" is an ABC New Voices selection and a Juniors Guide Library Selection.For Ryder, magic and fortune telling was a hoax created by the witches so that they can collect their tithes. He has enough to worry about with trying to keep his farm going and keeping his family safe, than worrying about magic. That all changes when his mother foretells something that will change the lives of everyone. Ryder goes on a quest to determine what summoned a monster to destroy his village and along the way old feuds will be rekindled, new allies will be made and Ryder finds a little bit of magic.Reader's will like this fantasy, that makes you think about real life issues. Lena Coakley takes you on an adventurous journey of magic, courage and faith.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Cover. I really like this cover. The ice that seems to hang around the girl is interesting. The knife as a line is very innovative. And the fact that the red cloth is really the only color gives the cover a very artistic look. However, after reading the book while the cover still look beautiful and dynamic it does not make as much sense to me.Plot. The plot was not as interesting as I had thought it would be. That is how it always it is when I see a book and get overexcited to read it because of the cover or recommendations that I have read. Ryder does not believe in the prophecies that his mother does because his mother taught him that they are all false and only fools would believe. Yet his sister, who lived in the same house and was raised the same way, is obsessed with becoming a boneshaker. And that is an important distinction that must be made. The people on the mountain are not really witches. They throw bones down and they make prophecies. Ones that may or may not come to pass. The Witchlanders and the Baen hate each other for what was done to the other side during the war and would take any reason to kill someone of the other tribe or race. There were plenty of twists at the end of the book to be thrown by something so if you like to be surprised you most definitely will be. The characters of the book are not really shown in depth but a few of them are looked at extensively.Characters. My favorite character was Ryder's younger sister, Pima. Although she was not actually in the book all that much. I liked how Pima and Ryder interacted. Ryder loved his little sister and it showed. My second favorite was Bodread. He is a wolf-like animal with saber teeth. What more do you need to know about him to love him? How about the fact that he is the most lovable blood-thirsty cutie ever because of the fact that he had been pampered all of his life? He is also more intuitive than his owner. And cuter, although that could be seen as a matter of opinion. After Bodread, I would have to choose Ryder because I spent so much time in his head that it was almost impossible to hate him by the end. Disagree with a lot of was he said, yes. Hate, no. He is a hardworking guy who just wants to live life how he has always remembered. He doesn't believe in magic and the fact that you have to follow everything without question and it shows in his actions throughout the book.Recommend? Yes.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    My Review:Straight up, Witchlanders wasn't my cup of tea. It took me so long to get into the story. I started it, than started another books - finished them - then went back to this one. I just couldn't get into it. Witchlanders started out dull to me, there wasn't enough to keep me interested. Ryder, the main character, worked in the hicca fields to support his family. Mabis was dependent on a drug like flower and everyone wanted more than what they had. And there was some background information on the Witchlanders and the Baen, but as I said, there wasn't enough.Lena Coakley's writing wasn't terrible, I just couldn't get into it. Though after I finished about half the book, it started to look up! Ryder set out on an adventure and the story took shape. The characters grew, the plot thickened and I was captivated. But this didn't last till the end unfortunately. It was over within a few chapters.I really did like Ryder though, he was a strong character and it was nice to see a female author write a male main character and do it easily and make it work. Ryder has to take on a lot of responsibilities and his stubborn and reluctant attitude flow well with the story.The idea of witches, witch magic and throwing bones to see outcomings is original and I was definitely intrigued. But I just couldn't get into it. There were so many good moments throughout Witchlanders that had me on the edge of my seat, pushing me to read more, but not enough of those moments to make this debut novel a memorable read for me.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I picked this up off of S&S’s Galley Grab because I thought it looked interesting…and it was. “Witchlanders” is an incredibly intriguing story, one that will be hard to put down. I wasn’t sure what to expect going on. I was surprised, although incredibly pleased, to find out the story is told through two different male point-of-views. Lena Coakley managed to create two incredibly believable male characters: Ryder and Falpian.In the beginning, I found myself disliking Ryder, a witchlander. He’s grown up not believing in witches and magic. He’s believed that his mother found magic to be foolish, until he finds her throwing the bones. She sees danger coming and Ryder thinks she’s acting foolish, insisting that there is no danger headed their way. When the coven comes to decide if the village is in danger, as Ryder’s mother suggested, they tell her that she was wrong. And she willingly accepts their decision, for you do not question the witches. As they make their way back, the coven leaves with Ryder’s two sisters, leaving him alone with his mother. After speaking with his mother, Ryder sets off to the river in search of a fish for her, the only food she’s willing to eat. What he doesn’t realize is that she’s trying to keep him safe. For her bones were right, there is danger headed their way, a danger built from the earth itself – a danger that can’t harm them in the river.It isn’t until the attack that Ryder begins to realize his mother was right. He sets off to the coven, only to be told that his mother was responsible for the attack, something he swears isn’t possible. It’s hard not to sympathize with him at this point. He’s not sure what’s happened to his mother, his sisters are now living with the coven, and his father passed leaving him the man of the house. He could stay behind with his sisters, stay with the coven his mother hates, or he can fix things. There’s a baen in his head, he hears them in his dreams, and he’s going to find them and kill them.Trying not to spoil the rest of the story, I’ll go on to say this: “Witchlanders” is an engrossing fantasy novel. This is a book worth checking out.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    The Good Stuff Cover is hauntingly beautiful, found myself just looking in awe Leads are male which is unusual in YA fiction. Wonderful conflicted and interesting characters, from the lead right on down to the secondary character, with plenty of realistic character development I'm in love with Bo the dog Lots of action, twists and turns and surprises that you won't see coming Witches but at the same time has an almost Lord of the Rings feel to it (really wish I could explain that, but trust me) Just a fantastic tale that sucks you in from the first line and doesn't let you down. Lena is a born storyteller Nice morals thrown in about the stupidity of war, prejudice and forgiveness Wasn't majorly frustrated or lost as I often am with fantasy fiction involving different worlds & races - speaks to the magic of the storyteller that Lena is Vivid descriptions of the landscape make you feel like you are there One side is almost matriarchal and the other side patriarchal and the conflict between the two is fascinating Just go buy the thing, I don't have the right works to state how much I enjoyed it or why tonight -- damn you excessive heat keeping me up at night (BTW, this review was written July 6th)The Not so Good Stuff Some readers that would probably really enjoy (read males) may be turned off by more feminine cover Hoping there is a sequel planned or the ending would be a might frustrating -- there better be a sequel Lena, I need to know what happensFavorite Quotes/Passages"Ryder threw up his hands. "Yes, the Goddess and the lucky man. They're the ones responsible for this harvest. I might as well go back to bed.""They were beautiful in their opposition: dark and light, like morning and evening, like two sides of a coin.""No," he said. "He is not on our side. But Skyla, are we only allowed to care about people who are on our side?"Who should/shouldn't read Perfect for both male and female YA readers Anyone who enjoys fantasy especially involving magic and witches - you will totally dig this Quite frankly anyone who enjoys a tale will enjoy Passing it on to Natasha -- will be interested if she enjoys as much as I did4.75 Dewey'sI received this from Simon and Schuster in exchange for an honest review - Thanks guys this was fantastic!
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    In short: Witchlanders by Lena Coakley is a fascinating and original high fantasy debut with a refreshing Bromance.The synopsis for this book is a bit misleading. You would think the story was all about Ryder but it was really about two main characters and their relationship: Ryder, a Witchlander, and Falpian, a Baen. The synopsis also suggests, to me anyway, that romance is likely between Ryder and this "beautiful and silent witch" he must confront, but there is barely a hint of such a thing. Also misleading: the cover. There is no character in the book who has the features of the girl on this cover, pale skin and blond hair. In the world of Witchlanders, the Witchlander race has brown skin, blond hair, and blue eyes, whereas the Baen race has pale skin, black hair, and black eyes. Even the one mixed race character of note does not have the features of the girl on this cover. So that's odd.Even though I was expecting a much different book, I loved the book I ended up getting. Witchlanders is a high fantasy tale with a richly developed and creative world. Coakley created her own complex and involved history of the Witchlander and Baen people and their longstanding feud. I was just so impressed by Coakley's imagination, to create a whole new world, creatures, magics, and religions. The background information is integrated so well with the story; the reader is not removed from the action in the process of learning more about the lore. The world building was definitely the highlight for me in Witchlanders.Something else that I really enjoyed and found refreshing in Witchlanders was the lack of romance. Instead, we got a hardcore Bromance between Ryder and Falpian. It was interesting to follow their story as they find each other and learn their destiny. Something I was less fond of was the character building which I found a bit lacking. I just needed a bit more. Sometimes I found myself confused with certain character motivations that weren't explained as well as they could be. One character that I truly loved though was Bo, Falpian's sabre-toothed Dreadhound, who was intelligent and endearing. Though if you know me, it's really no surprise that I would be so taken with a charming dog in a book.The pacing was well done and flowed quickly and the final action sequence was especially intense and lengthy. The final clues as to the antagonist and the reasonings behind their actions were uncovered brilliantly. The immediate conflict in the story was wrapped up nicely and yet, a continuing conflict was left open. I am unable to find any evidence of a sequel, however, leaving me to believe Witchlanders is a standalone. I didn't even know standalones existed anymore.

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Witchlanders - Lena Coakley

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WITCHLANDERS

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To the memory of Agnes Mardi Short

Contents

Acknowledgments

Part One

Chapter 1: Flowers and Bones

Chapter 2: The Skin of the Sea

Chapter 3: The White Witch

Chapter 4: Barbiza

Chapter 5: The Right Hand of Aata

Chapter 6: Maiden’s Woe

Chapter 7: A Spot Upriver

Chapter 8: The Chilling

Chapter 9: The Coven

Part Two

Chapter 10: Haunted

Chapter 11: The Crouching Spider

Chapter 12: Assassin’s Heart

Chapter 13: Dreadhounds

Chapter 14: Assassin’s Key

Chapter 15: The Best Jokes

Chapter 16: The Goddess Has Stained Your Eyes

Part Three

Chapter 17: Talat-Sa

Chapter 18: In the Chamber of Aata and Aayse

Chapter 19: Yarma

Chapter 20: The Black Witch

Chapter 21: A Casting of Bones

Chapter 22: Thieves

Chapter 23: All the Nightmares

Chapter 24: The Tomb

Chapter 25: The Many Eyes of Kar

Chapter 26: The Gormy Man

Chapter 27: Raiken’s Farm

Chapter 28: The Bitterlands

ACKNOWLEDGMENTS

This book took many years to write, and in that time I have received the support of many wonderful writers and readers. Much of the first draft was written on Aino Anto’s dining room table, while she wrote twice as much in half the time and then made me tea. Patient readers of early drafts were: Karen Krossing, Richard Ungar, Cheryl Rainfield, Karen Rankin (twice!), Anne Laurel Carter, Georgia Watterson, Wendy Lewis, the students in Peter Carver’s writing class, and Peter Carver himself. Hadley Dyer was kind enough to use my manuscript in her Ryerson University courses on children’s publishing, and her students gave me some very useful comments. Most importantly, my writing group—Hadley Dyer, Kathy Stinson, and Paula Wing—read this book so many times they could probably recite it with me. Thank you all.

But even with all that help, this book would have been so much less without my agent, Steven Malk of Writers House, and my editor, Caitlyn Dlouhy. Thank you both. If this book sings at all, it is because of you.

I’d also like to gratefully acknowledge the City of Toronto, who gave me a grant to complete this novel through the Toronto Arts Council at a time when I needed it most.

And finally I’d like to thank my family, especially my late grandmother, Agnes Short, who read me so many books as a child that I still have her voice in my head when I read to myself. This book is for her.

WITCHLANDERS

PART ONE

The Great God Kar sings the world into being. He is singing even now. If he stopped, everything from the mountains to the oceans to the ink on this page would disappear.

Kar’s magic comes from harmony, and yet the God is alone, singing with his many mouths and tongues, watching mankind with his thousand eyes.

Once, all men could hear his songs. They joined their voices with their brothers, imitating the harmonies of creation, until they made a magic that rivaled even Kar’s.

And so the jealous God sealed up their ears to his music.

He created war and discord. Now few can hear his songs—and those who do, find that their brothers are scattered to the winds.

The Magician’s Enchiridion

iamges CHAPTER 1

FLOWERS AND BONES

Ryder woke to the sound of clattering bones. A red curtain separated the sleeping area from the main room of the cottage, and he could see the faint flickering of candles through the fabric.

Skyla, he whispered.

Even in his sleep he’d known there was something wrong. A feeling of dread lay heavy in his stomach. Next to him in the long bed, Ryder’s two younger sisters were quiet. Pima, the little one, lay diagonally with the covers bunched up around her. Her mouth was open, and she was snoring gently. Skyla was pressed into the corner.

Sky . . . , he began again.

I know, she said. There was nothing sleepy about her voice. He wondered how long she’d been awake.

Why didn’t you do something? Ryder flung off the bit of tattered blanket that covered his legs. Why didn’t you wake me?

The dirt floor was cold under his bare feet. He’d grown tall in the past year, too tall for the low door frame that led to the main part of the cottage, and he hunched a little as he peered around the red curtain.

Mabis, his mother, was squatting on the floor, picking up bones. A goat’s femur, a horse’s rib. They were dark with age and etched with thin lines. She placed each one into a wooden bowl as large as the wheel of a donkey cart.

Tell me who it is, she murmured. Tell me. Smoke from the fire hung around the room, making rings around the candles.

Skyla slipped in beside Ryder, and together they watched as their mother rose from the floor. Mabis looked furtively around, squinting toward the sleeping area, but they were well hidden in the shadows. She seemed to satisfy herself that she was alone, and staggered to the lit fireplace, grabbing an iron poker.

Did you check the fireplace? Ryder whispered. I told you to check the fireplace.

I did, Skyla insisted.

Mabis climbed onto a wooden chair and up onto the large table their father had made. She was wearing her reds. It was the traditional costume of the mountain witches—loose-fitting pants and a quilted tunic with embroidery along the edge. Ryder had seen his mother wear reds only a few times before. They had a dramatic effect on people that Mabis liked to keep in reserve. Usually they were packed carefully at the bottom of a wooden blanket chest; now the tunic was buttoned up wrong, and there was a greasy stain down the side of her leg.

Her sleeves slid down her brown arms as she reached up with the poker. From the rafters fell a cloth bag tied with string. Ryder cursed inwardly. He’d thought he knew all her hiding places.

Mabis knelt on the tabletop and set down the poker. Greedily she opened the bag. A shower of black flowers, each the size of a baby’s fist, fell to the table.

Maiden’s woe, Skyla breathed.

Ryder nodded, noticing the black stain on his mother’s lips; it wasn’t the first she’d had that night. Maiden’s woe was a river plant whose flowers bloomed in the shallows. Ryder had pulled up all he could find, but the plants grew like weeds this time of year; if he missed even the smallest bit of root, they came back twice as thick. As he watched, his mother pushed two of the black flowers into her mouth and grimaced.

She promised, Skyla whispered.

Promised, Ryder muttered as if the word were a curse. He started forward, but Skyla grabbed him by the arm.

Wait! she said. Just . . . wait. Ryder frowned but held back. His first impulse was to confront his mother, but Skyla’s judgment was usually sound; perhaps she had some reason to suspect a second hiding place.

Mabis had left the table now and was kneeling over the great bowl, shaking it with both hands. She could do this half the night, Ryder knew: stir the bones, shake them, mumble at them, then pour them out onto the floor and pretend to read like some ancient witch doing a casting.

When Ryder’s father was alive, Mabis threw the bones only for customers. Telling the future was something she did for money. Of course, the villagers in the valley knew that she was not a real witch, not anymore. She didn’t live in the mountain coven, devoting her life to the Goddess and studying the teachings of Aata and Aayse; she had given that up long ago. But real witches didn’t concern themselves with the daily problems of the village, and Mabis’s prophecies were full of common sense, if vague, and so she had a tidy business.

What villagers never saw was how Ryder’s father would frown when the door closed behind them, how Mabis would laugh, jingling their coins in her hand. Any fool who believed a pile of bones could tell the future didn’t deserve to keep his money—that was what she used to say.

Yet here she was—holding a bowl of bones over her head. She shook it one, two, three times, then spilled its contents onto the floor with a loud clatter. The room fell silent. Mabis looked toward the sleeping area and cocked her head, listening, but Ryder and Skyla stayed quiet. Ryder glanced back at Pima, but his littlest sister was still asleep.

Finally Mabis turned back to the bones, circling them like an animal stalking prey. Skyla seemed to hold her breath; she lifted herself up on her toes, craning her neck. Ryder could see his sister was trying to make out the pattern the bones made on the floor, but what did she think was there? After a while, Mabis moved back to the table and popped two more of the dark blooms into her mouth.

I’ve seen enough. Ryder stepped forward again, and again Skyla pulled him back. What in Aata’s name is wrong with you? he hissed. There’s always another hiding place, Skyla. We can’t just watch . . .

His sister looked up at him with somber eyes. Her pale eyebrows stood out against her brown face, and even in the dim light, her hair glinted like polished metal.

You can’t go now. You’re not supposed to interrupt a witch’s reading once the bones are thrown.

What witch? What reading?

Those eyes again. His sister looked like Fa sometimes with that wise look. Maybe . . . maybe she really can see the future. Maybe something bad is going to happen. Shouldn’t we know?

Ryder swallowed his annoyance. He knew all he needed to know: Throwing the bones was just his mother’s excuse for taking the flowers, and the mad visions she had afterward were not the future, just the inside of her own bewildered mind.

You really are getting gullible, Sky, he said, and before she could stop him again, he strode into the main room of the cottage.

Mabis’s head snapped up when he entered. In spite of himself, Ryder was taken aback. Her yellow hair was loose and tangled, and her eyes glittered strangely in the firelight. His recriminations died on his lips.

Do you see it? she asked, gesturing to the casting. Her voice had a kind of fragile hope, as if pleading to be believed. Someone has arrived. There’s a stranger in the mountains.

Go to bed now, he said. Please. His mother just stood there, swaying slightly.

The walls of the cramped cottage seemed to lean in on him. No one had put the cheese away, he noticed—good market cheese he’d bought for a treat, not their own homemade. Dirty wooden plates were stacked by the door, waiting to be washed in the river. Mabis had sent her children to bed insisting she would clean up, and Ryder had been so tired from his other chores that he’d decided to believe her.

Mabis, he said firmly. Listen to me—we need you now. The hicca will freeze on the stalks if we don’t get it harvested. He crossed toward her. I can’t do everything. The chilling could come any day.

Watch your feet! Mabis took his elbow. Watch out for the bones. She gestured to the floor. Try to see it, Ryder. Just try. Start with the anchor bone—the small one—that’s the key. See how it touches the shadow man? Place the pattern in your mind and the vision will come.

Mabis, you’re talking gibberish. She never did this, never tried to teach her children how to read, though Skyla had often asked to learn. Mabis had always said the witches made it all up, so why bother to pass it on? Don’t you understand? If you don’t help with the harvest, we might not have enough to eat this winter.

The stranger in the mountains is just the beginning. Terrible things are coming.

Stop it! Stop it now. You sound like a madwoman.

She turned away from him in disgust. Your father would have believed.

Ryder frowned, stung by the bitterness in her voice, as if he were the one disappointing her. Could it be that she really saw something? He let himself consider the idea for just a moment before shaking his head.

No, he said firmly. If throwing the bones were real—which it isn’t, you’ve told me a hundred times—but if it were, then there would be witches in the coven doing it right now, doing it better than you. And if there was something terrible coming, they’d tell us—they’d have told us already. Isn’t that why they’re up there? Isn’t that why we pay our tithes? So they can guard the border and keep us safe? Mabis had stopped listening to his argument and was looking blankly into space. Mabis?

Her eyes startled him when she looked up; they were so bright and blue and wild. I see the future, she whispered. I’m seeing it right now.

You’re not. His voice quavered a little. Stop it. You’re not even looking at the casting.

A great witch doesn’t need bones. I can see the future written in the flecks of your eyes. She touched his face with cold hands, holding him by the chin. Stay still. I almost have it all.

Worry stabbed through him. She was like a feral creature gazing out at him from a deep wood, seeing and not seeing. It frightened him. He should have gone to the river every day and made sure every bit of that weed was gone.

An assassin is coming. She seemed alarmed now, afraid. An assassin in the mountains. Right across the border. He mustn’t succeed! His mother’s gaze left his face and slid to the table by the fire. Just one more flower and I’ll know everything.

No, Ryder said, stepping away from her. No. This is nonsense. In three long strides he crossed the room and gathered up every one of the black blooms.

What are you doing? Mabis stumbled forward and bones scattered. Ryder looked around the small room, flowers in his hands. His eyes lighted on the fireplace.

Don’t! she shouted. Lunging forward, she lost her balance, bones under her feet. She fell heavily onto one knee. Ryder seized the opportunity and tossed the maiden’s woe into the fire. The black trumpets hissed and popped, sending sparks up the chimney.

Mabis struggled to her feet and ran toward him. I need them! she pleaded, sounding desperate. Just in time, Ryder grabbed her wrist and stopped her from plunging her hand into the flames. Mabis turned on him. Her face, lit by firelight, was twisted with rage. Before Ryder could do anything, she slapped him across the cheek. Hard.

Silence.

Skyla rushed in from behind the curtain. Mabis, stop it! she cried. But by then there was nothing to stop. Mabis was leaning against the fireplace, avoiding their gaze, her breath coming in shallow gasps.

Do you see? Ryder hissed at Skyla. This has nothing to do with the bones, with the future.

His sister’s eyes were wide with fright. From the sleeping area, Pima’s voice came loud and shrill.

Maba, I want Maba!

Just go help Pima, will you? Ryder told his sister.

I’ll go, said his mother. Her voice was small, and she still didn’t meet his eyes.

No! Pima can’t see you like this.

His mother winced. Skyla took a breath and nodded, then went off to comfort the crying four-year-old. When she was gone, Ryder turned to his mother. This has got to stop.

I’m so sorry, she said. She sank to the floor with her back against the wall.

Sorry, he repeated, putting his hand to his cheek.

He dropped down next to her on the floor, and for a while neither of them spoke. Outside, trees creaked in the wind. The stones of the fireplace were warm against his back. He tried to hold on to his anger, but as he sat there he felt it slipping away from him, leaving a hollowness in his chest. Skyla was singing softly to Pima in the other room—a lullaby of Fa’s—and without warning, a feeling of loss pierced him. He’d become used to it since Fa died, surprise attacks of emotions that came out of nowhere, left him breathless. But he realized it wasn’t his father that he was missing so painfully at this moment. It was his mother. His mother as she used to be. Mabis had been like iron once. She’d been like stone. Nothing could break her. And he’d felt entirely safe.

Slowly Mabis got to her knees and reached for something under the table. One of her bones, the smallest one, had skittered there in the scuffle. She tossed it into his lap before sitting heavily back down.

What’s this? he said.

You’re right. It’s got to stop. Her eyes were already beginning to clear. Maiden’s woe gave Mabis a burst of frenzied vision, but the effect soon dissipated, leaving her moody and tired—until she took more and it all started again.

Ryder picked up the fragment of black bone. Unlike the others in the set, this one had no marks scratched into it. It was a piece of vertebra most likely, but it was so worn he couldn’t tell from what animal it had come. He’d never noticed it before, had never cared enough about his mother’s bones to distinguish one from the other, though they’d sat on the high shelf above the kitchen pots all his life. His mother had always been so quick to deride them, to belittle anyone who believed they had something to reveal. I don’t understand. Why are you giving this to me?

It’s the anchor bone, Mabis explained. It’s very old. A casting wouldn’t work without it. She pressed his hands around the small black knob. You keep it for me. Without it, I won’t be tempted.

The meaning of his mother’s words began to dawn on him. Could it be that simple? Could hiding this little thing really keep his mother away from the maiden’s woe? He should have thought of it before. He would have tossed the whole set of bones into the river if he thought it would stop her from taking the flower.

And you were right about something else, she said. The witches in my coven, they must see the assassin too. I’ve got to speak to them about it. Ryder, we’ve got to build a firecall.

What? Tonight?

Please, I won’t be able to stop thinking about it. . . .

Ryder was about to refuse. He knew the witches wouldn’t come, wouldn’t allow themselves to be summoned by the village fortune-teller. But then, maybe being ignored by the witches was just what his mother needed to bring her back to herself. He glanced at the shuttered window for any sign of light slipping in between the cracks. As yet, dawn hadn’t reached them, but he was beginning to suspect he wouldn’t sleep again that night.

And if we build this call and the witches don’t come, will you promise to stop all this? Will you face the fact you can’t see any visions in the bones?

Mabis smiled, and Ryder could see the black stains on her teeth. I’ll promise anything you like, she said. She pulled herself up from the floor, brushing the dust off her dirty reds. But the witches won’t ignore a call from me.

*  *  *

On the other side of the border, Falpian Caraxus watched the column of greenish smoke rise up over the shoulder of the mountain. Dawn was breaking. Behind him, his father’s men hovered around cooking fires, rolling up blankets or talking softly over last cups of steaming tea, careful not to disturb his thoughts. Some had already taken their leave with a nod or a silent bow and were leading their horses down the steep path.

Falpian stood in the dewy grass on the edge of the plateau. The mountains were a stunning sight. The zanthia trees had changed their color, turning every peak to crimson.

The witches are in their reds, he said to himself. Here, so close to the border, it was easy to see how the Witchlanders could believe in Aata and Aayse, the witch prophets. Even the red trees seemed to honor their customs.

Bron, his father’s kennel master, came up quietly beside him, his great shadow spilling over the lip of the plateau. Firecall, he grunted, frowning up at jagged peaks.

Falpian hadn’t considered that. At first he’d thought the rising smoke must be a funeral pyre, but then he remembered that Witchlanders didn’t burn their dead; they buried them in the ground, or worse, preserved them in dank catacombs.

Black for war, green to gather, red when the coven is under attack, Falpian recited. He turned to Bron. Some witch calls for a gathering with that smoke. Do you think they know something?

Bron took a moment to answer. What is there to know?

I’m not a fool.

After another pause the kennel master said quietly, It’s always best to assume the witches know every move we make. And every move we’re going to make. He turned to Falpian now, as if to use his face to make the point. Falpian was used to the cruel scars that slashed from left to right across Bron’s features—souvenirs of war—but seeing them now made him flinch. Witchlanders were a vicious people.

Maybe I should just go home with you, Falpian suggested hopefully. These are dangerous times.

Are they?

Behind them on the plateau, some of the others had noticed the smoke and were murmuring and pointing. They were young men mostly, too young to be veterans of the war like Bron, too young to remember when the fire-calls all burned black.

It’s all right! Bron shouted, but his words were for Falpian as much as for them. I expect a call’s a common enough thing in these parts! In a lower voice he went on, There’s nothing to fear. The witches won’t break the treaty.

I don’t want to go back because I’m afraid, Falpian snapped. Bron raised an eyebrow at Falpian’s tone. Although a servant of Falpian’s father, he demanded respect from someone so young. I’m sorry, Bron. It’s just . . . I should be home. I should be training with the others.

Others?

Why do you pretend not to know what I’m talking about? There wasn’t a spare bed the day we left—there were even boys sleeping in the stables.

Men have always sent their sons to your father to learn their battle skills.

Never so many sons as this year.

Bron pursed his lips and stared out at the scarlet mountains as if he enjoyed the view. He must be under orders, Falpian thought. He’d tell me if he could.

We’ll await you in the gorge, someone said to Bron, and the last of the men and horses began to make their way down the path.

Falpian watched the last horse disappear and felt a weight settle over him. Soon Bron would leave as well, and Falpian would be alone, alone at Stonehouse for a hundred days with only the dog for company—and even Bo’s company couldn’t be counted on. He was off chasing rabbits now, enamored of his new freedom.

Of course, Falpian would want for nothing during his stay. His father had sent crates of poetry, bags of flour, jars of honey, barrel after barrel of dried fish—everything he’d need and plenty of things he wouldn’t. Somehow the man could make even bounty seem like a slap in the face. In the old days he would have told his son to live by his wits, that hardship would make him strong; he would have scoffed at the idea of reading poetry and insisted Falpian study logic or military history. Now he didn’t seem to care.

I can’t be completely useless, Falpian said to Bron. Surely there’s something I can learn to do. He pointed to the smoke over the mountain. "I hate them as much as everyone else. If there’s another attack planned. If it’s war—"

Shh! Bron warned. The men were gone now, but he looked to the mountain’s crooked peak as if, from their high covens, red witches were listening. You are in mourning, child. This is a time of grief for you—a time of meditation and prayer.

Falpian waved his words away. There are a dozen retreats where I could spend my mourning season. But Father sends me as far as he can, for as long as he can. Am I being banished? He bit his lip, remembering how cold his father had been when they parted, barely taking the time to say good-bye. "You don’t have any magic in you either, but at least my father can stand to look at you. This was the heart of the matter, Falpian knew. His lack of magic. All those men and boys back home, how many of them will have the gift? One or two, if

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