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The Unwanteds
The Unwanteds
The Unwanteds
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The Unwanteds

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A riveting middlegrade dystopian novel from New York Times bestselling Wake author Lisa McMann that Kirkus Reviews calls “The Hunger Games meets Harry Potter.”

Every year in Quill, thirteen-year-olds are sorted into categories: the strong, intelligent Wanteds go to university, and the artistic Unwanteds are sent to their deaths.

Thirteen-year-old Alex tries his hardest to be stoic when his fate is announced as Unwanted, even while leaving behind his twin, Aaron, a Wanted. Upon arrival at the destination where he expected to be eliminated, however, Alex discovers a stunning secret--behind the mirage of the "death farm" there is instead a place called Artime.

In Artime, each child is taught to cultivate their creative abilities and learn how to use them magically, weaving spells through paintbrushes and musical instruments. Everything Alex has ever known changes before his eyes, and it's a wondrous transformation.

But it's a rare, unique occurence for twins to be separated between Wanted and Unwanted, and as Alex and Aaron's bond stretches across their separation, a threat arises for the survival of Artime that will pit brother against brother in an ultimate, magical battle.
LanguageEnglish
PublisherAladdin
Release dateAug 30, 2011
ISBN9781442407701
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Lisa McMann

Lisa McMann lives in Arizona. She is married to fellow writer and musician, Matt McMann, and they have two adult children. Her son is an artist named Kilian McMann and her daughter is an actor, Kennedy McMann. Lisa is the New York Times bestselling author of over two dozen books for young adults and children. So far she has written in genres including paranormal, realistic, dystopian, and fantasy. Some of her most well-known books are The Unwanteds series for middle grade readers and the Wake trilogy for young adults. Check out Lisa's website at LisaMcMann.com, learn more about The Unwanteds Series at UnwantedsSeries.com, and be sure to say hi on Instagram or Twitter (@Lisa_McMann), or Facebook (Facebook.com/McMannFan).

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  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    1st in series. In Quill, the annual Purge sends the Wanted children who obey rules and show intelligence to a military university and the Unwanteds who break the rules and show artistic abilities to their deaths. As soon as the Unwanteds are taken away, their families are expected to forget about them completely and immediately. Unbeknownst to the High Priestess of Quill, the man who is supposed to ensure the demise of the Unwanteds has instead built a magical place where art and imagination are not only valued but turned into weapons for a fight with the Quillary that will inevitably come some day. When twins Aaron and Alex are separated in the purge, they can't stop thinking about each other and Alex becomes determined to "save" Aaron, an action that could have disastrous consequences for the Unwanteds. A solid fantasy for middle school readers with an underlying message that the unusual kids of the world are of great value. Both male and female characters are given equal power and influence. Some parents may feel that kids using art, language, music, and drama as potentially fatal weapons goes too far but there is little actual death in the book, though some parts are quite scary.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I found The Unwanteds an entertaining read. I liked how the author, Lisa McMann, showed the Unwanted kids gaining self-esteem and self-respect as the story went along. They learned to depend upon themselves and each other and solve threatening situations. There's no "bad" language or extreme violence. The Unwanteds is a fun fantasy for all ages, though I think will be more enjoyed by the younger ones. *Disclaimer: I received this book from the publisher, Simon and Schuster for review. I was not required to write a positive review.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    This is a stupendous fantasy, dystopian story that young people will love. Lisa McMann does a first-class job of world building and character development. Alex and his twin brother (Aaron) live in Quill. Every year Quill goes through a "Purge" where all 13-year olds are divided into three categories: Wanted, Necessary, and UnWanted. Any kids that show creative tendencies are labeled UnWanted and destined to be put to death. The Wanteds go to the military academy and the Necessaries move on to menial jobs that keep the city going. But, the UnWanteds are traveling towards a different destination.... I was captivated by this story and as soon as I finished book one, I immediately ordered book two and started reading. The cover claims this is, "the Hunger Games meets Harry Potter." I believe this story is amazing in its own right and deserves a chance to fascinate you... Highly recommended!
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    The words that pulled the reader from the outside world into the world of the book
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    The magic, and that the author made it so interesting that you think you're the characters. I especially liked that one twin was good and the other was evil, which shows the inevitable balance between the two.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    "The Unwanteds" Was well written although I wish It had more sensory details such as smell touch etc.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    This book was great I really loved it. Especially all fantasy things in the story. So, I'd like to give a five star for this book. (I really love fantasy and a little comedy too) :)
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    3.5, maybe even 4 out of 5. (3.75?)

    I liked it. It wasn't literary genius but it was fun, I liked the world-building and I will read more. (In fact, I have already ordered the rest of the series.)

    I was sort of hoping for it to fill the Harry Potter void. The feel and tone actually reminded me more of the Pendragon books by DJ MacHale than Potter but that's not a bad thing.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    The Little BookwormIn Quill, people are divided at the age of 13 into three categories, Wanteds, Necessaries, and Unwanteds. The Wanteds are sent to university and get the higher level jobs, the Necessaries do the menial labor and the Unwanteds are sent to their death. But all is not what it seems because at the Death Farm, there is a magical world, Artimé, behind the gates that takes in the Unwanteds and grows their artistic talents (the reason they are Unwanted in the first place). Alex is an Unwanted with a drawing ability while his twin brother, Aaron, is deem Wanted. The two brothers are very different and that might cause the biggest problems of all between Quill and Artimé.I really did feel sorry for Alex and all the other Unwanteds. Sentenced to die for having creative ideas is terrible. But the High Priest is determined to keep everyone under her control and forward-thinkers would challenge that so out they go. But luckily for them Mr. Today, the so-called "Death Farmer," has created a magical parallel universe hidden from Quill to save the Unwanteds and not only foster their artistic abilities but to teach them magic based on their abilities. So the drawing students learn to paint themselves invisible and use clay to bind people and many other pretty awesome things. The Unwanteds thrive in this world. But they must say hidden from the land of Quill otherwise the consequences would be dire. It's a pretty neat concept and I liked the magic involved as well as the characterization of Alex and his Wanted twin, Aaron.I was expecting more older middle grade but this was read younger middle grade to me. The story was very simple and everyone was fairly straightforward. Nobody really had gray areas in their personality. But it was cute and I enjoyed it. The cover says The Hunger Games meets Harry Potter and that is far from the truth, having neither the grittiness of The Hunger Games nor the world-building of Harry Potter. It is still charming though. If I compared it to anything it might be Diana Wynne Jone's Chrestomanci series but it still lacks that intangible quality that makes those books great. What I'm getting at is that it is cute and fun and provides a largely one-sided view of creativity and that it is worth reading, but it lacks that something that makes a book a classic. Children will enjoy it, some adults will enjoy it as well. I would recommend it, just don't go looking for greatness.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    There are three categories of people in Quill: Wanteds (strong and important), Necessaries (they keep everyone fed and take care of maintenance), and Unwanteds (people who have shown creativity). When the day of the purge comes, Alex Stowe is upset because he has long guessed that he is going to be purged as an Unwanted. His twin brother, Aaron, is a Wanted. Alex can’t believe they will be separated. Unfortunately, all of the Unwanteds are going to be eliminated because of various things they have done wrong in their lives. Alex drew in the sand, another girl strung words together in a way that wasn’t speaking, another girl told stories, and the list goes on and on. Quill is not a place for such behavior! When the bus takes the Unwanteds to the place they will be eliminated, they are introduced to a world unlike any they have ever seen. A world in which creativity, dancing, singing, music and all of the arts are not only expected, but embraced. The amazing Mr. Today is a magician who has created Artime, a vibrant world, where just about anything is possible, unless the people of Quill ever find out about it. But who would tell? Is it possible for a world like this to live and prosper while Quill is so miserable right next door? Would it be better for Alex to have his twin right there with him? Is it possible to sever the ties between twins? What will happen if the head of Quill finds out about this world? Reading this book will make your imagination soar!

    When I read The Unwanteds by Lisa McMann I didn't have any idea what to expect. I really enjoyed the world she created in Artime and think it would be fun to spend some time there. Magical spells and creativity blend some of my favorite things! I liked that the characters all seemed very real, not only did they have things I could connect to, but they also had traits that I might not of liked very much, making them seem all the more realistic. There were parts of this book that I didn't want to continue reading because I was afraid of what was going to happen. I did keep reading of course because I also needed to know what happened. There is definitely a lot of suspense! I would recommend this book to kids in fourth grade and up who like books about other worlds and fantasy adventures. This is my first book by this author but I did notice this was part of a series, and I'm definitely curious about the rest of them!
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    A dystopia crossed with Harry Potter means I tagged this book 'dystopia' and 'fantasy'. That's a change, since dystopias are so often science fiction. Anyway, it wasn't bad. It's a middle-grade book, which I don't tend to like as much as YA ones. It has a good ending, in that it feels like it can stand alone as a book just fine, you don't need to keep reading the series. I don't know if I will or not.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Every year in Quill, 13-year-olds are sorted into categories: the strong, intelligent Wanteds go to university, and the artistic Unwanteds are sent to their graves. On the day of the Purge, identical twins Alex and Aaron Stowe await their fate. While Aaron is hopeful of becoming a Wanted, Alex knows his chances are slim. He's been caught drawing with a stick in the dirt - and in the stark gray land of Quill, being creative is a death sentence. But when Alex and the other Unwanteds face the Eliminators, they discover an eccentric magician named Mr. Today and his hidden world that exists to save the condemned children. Artime is a colorful place of talking statues, uncommon creatures, and artistic magic, where creativity is considered a gift. . .and a weapon.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    A great option for students who are not ready for the Hunger Games quite yet. I very much like this book and thought while reading that this may be a series to hook students on prior to or after Harry Potter. Perhaps this series could get students unstuck from another series and is a great suggestion for a student who likes series. I also like that the main characters were boys. While Tuesdays at the Castle may appeal to female students, this book although suitable for both genders may be a hook for boy readers.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    When I got an invitation to review this one a couple of weeks ago, I jumped at the chance. It may very well be the first (and only?) dystopian middle-grade book out there. But wait! It's not just dystopia. It's fantasy as well, which is new to me. The combination, not fantasy itself, just to clarify.

    This one brings the best of both worlds out to play and I loved the way it meshed so nicely. We get a nice taste of what Quill is like (using words like 'quillitary' instead of military, which Ithought was seriously awesome) and an even better taste of Artime. I thought it was very nicely done.

    I've read other things by Lisa McMann, and this is by far my favorite. In fact, it's one that I plan on buying. I can picture reading it aloud with my kids and having them love it like it do. It's very appropriate for middle-grade readers and I can see where it would have classroom use as well as personal.

    The characters are kids that young readers will relate to and see themselves in. Heck, even I could pick out things about them that I related to, and they're only 13 for the most part! They're just really likable overall. The adults too. They're not stuffy, jump in to fix the problem kind of people. They're very much about letting the kids have a stake in their world. I think that's very important. Kids need to feel invested, and this book is a great example of that.

    Because I really loved it and because I think kids will love it too, I'm giving this a 'Pick Me' rating.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    The book was written in a way that many other writers probably could not have written.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    A very good read exiting yet not quite breath taking! Good for 11 year olds

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  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
     This was very abrupt. Everything happens so fast. There's really no time for processing or world building. Descriptive language is very sparse. Don't get me wrong, it's very enjoyable, I just wish they'd spent more than five seconds on the war the entire book was building towards.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    A witty imaginable read. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    This book is the awkward love child of The Hunger Games and Harry Potter, with a bit of City of Ember thrown in. It is so very flawed- the writing contradicts itself, the magic is entirely too easy and without any rules, it is all told and rarely shown; I could go on and on. However, the story was compelling enough that I missed my train stop going to work one day. I often find prophecy-driven stories to be a bit problematic. In this book, I like that any set of twins could have set the events of the story in motion, and it just happened to be Alex and Aaron.

    I don't expect the flaws to be a problem for any upper-elementary or middle school readers, and will probably gladly hand it out.

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  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    The unwanteds is a great book. Has everything a fantasy reader would want.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    I liked the book, however it wasn’t very original. the cover says that the hunger games meets harry pottah, and that’s sorta true. me being a middle schooler, i don’t really like this book. i probably wouldn’t recommend it to friends. i doubt i’ll read the second book either. the magic wasn’t very limited. yes, there was “lethal” words that they didn’t know about, but the magic itself is too easy. like, what if some Wanted had paper lips and said propel? too easy magic. the writing also contradicts itself sometimes, and the writing is very cringe itself. the plot is interesting enough, but the writing and how some things are laid out isn’t very good.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    On the island of Quinn your future is decided at the age of thirteen. Once a year all the youths and their families gather for final judgment. By this point most know what role they will be assigned to. If you have been reported to the council as one who has expressed undesirable qualities, artistically inclined, then you are one of the Unwanteds. Alex had known for three years, his parents kept him informed that he was an Unwanteds. So, as he and his twin brother Aaron sat waiting for their names to be called out, he was reconciled to being sent on the Purge.
    Aaron was a “Wanted,” he had a bright future at the university and probably in the future government. Many of Alex’s friends joined the ranks of the Wanteds and the Necessaries, the rest of them where loaded on to the bus for the drive to The Death Farm.
    Once the Eliminator got their hands on these Unwanteds they would join a succession of generations of poor souls cast into the Great Lake of Boiling Oil. Shaking in their shoes and ready for the worst, they were surprised as their shackles magically fell to the floor and a white-haired, old man strode toward them and delivered the news, that he was Marcus Today the ruler of Artime, and they were all now part of the biggest ruse of all time.
    By the time they met all the other residents however, it did not take long to assimilate into their new life. Now circumstances happen—as they always do with twins—that brings to the attention of the residents of Quinn that something is just not right behind the gate to The Death Farm.
    “The Unwanteds” is the first in a series of a delightful world of young adult stories that feature a young male wizard. For my money this story is actually better than the other wizardry tales that came before and is an absolute gem that should not be missed by adults or teens.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    In the highly regimented land of Quill, children who exhibit even the slightest leanings toward creativity are Eliminated at the age of 13, sent to the Death Farm. Alex Stowe, who has been known to take a stick and draw in the mud, knew he was going to be Eliminated, but he consoled himself with the thought that his twin brother Aaron would not be. But Alex soon learns that the Death Farm is really the land of Artimé, where creativity is encouraged and magic is possible. Alex embraces his new life, but he wonders: why couldn't his twin have come, too? Will Alex's desire to rescue his brother from his gray, dingy life in Quill precipitate a war between the two lands?I had a really hard time getting into this book. I listened to the audiobook, narrated by Simon Jones. I've listened to other books Jones has read and enjoyed them, but even his narration was not enough to save this one for me. I just found the premise too hard to swallow: death for all children caught exhibiting creativity? Really? And everyone just went along with this? I also found the wise old wizard who rules Artimé way too Dumbledore-esque. Maybe that's because the publisher made the mistake of touting this at Harry Potter meets The Hunger Games, a level of hyperbole that's bound to get a mediocre book into trouble when harsh reality meets with high reader expectations. I do think some young readers will enjoy the art-based magic of Artimé and the interactions between the young characters, but it's not one I'd particularly recommend.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    If this book isn't made into a movie series, I'd be surprised. This book is really great and I'd give it more stars if possible!

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  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    It was too good, and it is hard to stop reading. The apocolyptic village, quill, is much like Hitler's vision and the book shows the flaws of quill.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    This one didn't quite hook me. Maybe it was the audio reader, or maybe it's this reading slump I'm in where very little is keeping my attention.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    Ugh. Great for youngsters--there will always be books (movies, tv) that are a thrill to a 10 year old but which don't hold up when returned to as an adult--and, like Gilligan's Island, The Bobbsey Twins, and Chitty Chitty Bang Bang, this will be one of them.

    As a grown-up, substantially so, I spent most of my time wincing. The tone of the story is the Dursley sequences of Harry Potter--people behaving in an extreme, unbelievable manner--like the worst people in Roald Dahl. In Dahl's hands, it's terrific--but this book seems to want us to take it seriously, and it's hard to when Nobody Would Ever Behave Like That.

    Examples: every family member is pleased as punch to be rid of their children, instead of emotionally shattered, people are whisked away to another world (so to speak) and then the whiskerer forgets to explain what's happened (and then explains that he forgets to explain), the entire world is threatened with destruction because people are given the option to shut off the contraption that would warn them, and so on and so forth.

    Painful. And then there's the weirdness. I like weird. But it has to come from a sensible place. In this book, much of the cast is made up of talking statues, or two types of animals somehow combined into one (e.g. a llama and an ocelot would become a llamalot), and can speak (or teach art), for no apparent reason at all.

    I read it by listening to it via Audible--so it's possible that it's more tolerable in print--but I think it's unlikely.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    READ WHOLE SERIES!!! NEXT BOOK MUST COME OUT SOON!!!!! PLEASE I WILL DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (?)
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    This was a fun book, perfect for young fans of "Harry Potter" style stories. It's a blend of dystopia survival with magical elements and intrigue. While it's action packed and suspenseful, it's not frightening or gruesome, and would be an excellent read-aloud or independent read for grades 4-7.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    When Alex turns 13, he knows that he will be deemed "Unwanted" by his parents and doomed to execution shortly there after. His twin Aaron, however, is a perfect "Wanted." As Alex travels through the gate of the death farm, instead of dying he is welcomed into the hidden community of unwanteds sheltered by magic. All too soon, Alex misses his brother and the connection between the two threatens the secret existence of his new home. Clever idea - definitely a good recommendation for someone who liked both Harry Potter and the Hunger Games. It has the magical quality of Hogwarts with the "fight for your right to live" of Hunger Games...only less violent, but also a bit less captivating.

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The Unwanteds - Lisa McMann

The Purge

There was a hint of wind coming over the top of the stone walls and through the barbed-wire sky on the day Alexander Stowe was to be Purged. Alex waited in the dusty Commons of Quill and felt the light breeze cooling the sweat on his upper lip. His twin brother, Aaron, stood beside him; their parents, behind. And all around, the entire community of Quill watched and waited, the bland looks of sleeping fish on their faces.

Mr. Stowe pressed his finger hard into Alex’s back. A final poke in the kidneys, a last good-bye, Alex thought. Or a warning not to run. Alex glanced at Aaron, whose face showed the tiniest emotion. Scared, was it? Or sad? Alex didn’t know.

The High Priest Justine, her long white hair undisturbed despite the breeze, rose to her full height and observed the silent crowd. She began without introduction or ado, for a Purge was neither exciting nor boring; it just was, as many things just were in Quill.

There were nearly fifty thirteen-year-olds this year. The people of Quill waited to hear which of these teenagers had been marked as Wanted or Necessary, and, by process of elimination, which of them remained to be Purged.

Alex scanned the group and their families around the giant half circle of the amphitheater. He knew some of them, not all. Alex’s mind wandered as the High Priest Justine announced first the names of the Wanteds, and he startled only slightly as the high priest spoke Aaron’s name. Aaron, who’d had nothing to worry about, sighed anyway in relief when he was among the fifteen names called.

The Necessaries were next. Thirteen names were read. Alexander Stowe was not one of those, either. Even though Alex knew that he was Unwanted, and had known ever since his parents had told him over breakfast when he was ten, the knowledge and three years of preparation weren’t enough to stop the sweat that pricked his armpits now.

It was down to a mere formality unless there was a surprise, which there sometimes was, but it didn’t matter. Everyone stood motionless until the final twenty names were called. Among the Unwanted, Alexander Stowe.

Alex didn’t move, though his heart fell like a cement block into his gut. He stared straight ahead as he’d seen the other Unwanteds do in past years. His lip quivered for a moment, but he fought to still it. When the governors came over to him, he put his arms out for them to shackle with rusty iron bands. He made his eyes icy cool before he glanced over his shoulder at his parents, who remained unemotional. His father nodded slightly, and finally took his finger out of Alex’s back after the shackles were secure. That was a minor relief, but what did it matter now?

Aaron sniffed once quietly, catching Alex’s attention in the silent amphitheater. The identical boys held a glance for a moment. Something, like a jolt of energy, passed between them. And then it was gone.

Good-bye, Aaron whispered.

Alex swallowed hard, held the stare a second more as the governors tugged at him to follow, and then broke the connection and went with the governors to the waiting bus that would take him to his death.

Wanted

Aaron Stowe, the Wanted, watched his brother, Alex, board the rusty box of a bus, and then he turned his eyes to the formidable High Priest Justine. She retreated to her aging Jeep-like vehicle, flanked by two guards and her secretary, and they began the drive back up the dusty hill to the palace, leaving a trail of gray smoke and a sharp odor to linger in the heavy air. The rest of Quill slowly dispersed on foot.

Murmurs surfaced and drifted through the crowd. Not about the Purge, of course. That was already a cloudy memory for some. Instead they spoke of their plans for the rest of the day, for the day of the Purge was Quill’s one holiday each year. All of the Wanteds and most of the Necessaries, except those who tended to the farm animals, were free to do as they pleased for the rest of it.

Aaron knew what he would be doing. He turned to his mother and father and said with a decisive air, All set, then?

Mrs. Stowe nodded primly, and the three of them followed the crowd down the dusty path that led to Quadrant Four, where they lived. We’ll finish making your uniform and get your things packed for university, she said. Cut your hair, too. She looked at Mr. Stowe and asked, I don’t suppose we’ll get the Unwanted boy’s clothes and shoes back, will we?

Mr. Stowe, who had once been quite handsome but now had curled up a bit from years of backbreaking work as a burier, shook his head. No.

Well, that’s a waste. Aaron could use them. The shoes, at least. Wish I’d thought to take them before he left.

I wouldn’t want to wear them, Aaron said, and then he pinched his lips together before he said more.

Still, his mother narrowed her eyes and spoke softly, almost fearfully. You’ll do well to forget about him.

Aaron kept silent for a moment, thinking. You’re right, he said finally. It won’t happen again.

See to it, said Mr. Stowe.

After fifteen minutes they had reached Quadrant Four, a residential square mile of tiny, identical houses planted closely together like rows of sweet corn, each house the color of the dry, cracked desert that surrounded it. The crowd of people split up now and weaved their way between the structures until they reached their own individual homes.

Aaron and his parents nodded politely to their neighbors as they walked along. When Aaron saw a familiar couple around the same age as his parents, walking alone, he touched his mother’s sleeve. How odd, he said. Isn’t Mr. Ranger a milker?

Yes, she said.

Why’s he out and about instead of doing his job? Aaron’s eyes narrowed.

He must have been given the day off this year because of the Unwanted daughter. Did they know in advance, I wonder? She turned to Mr. Stowe.

Not that I heard. That’s a blow, Mr. Stowe said. He yawned as they neared their house, number 54-43. They’ll be cut off from reproducing now—this was their second offense. Mr. Stowe wrinkled his nose. They’ll be completely ridiculed by the Wanteds for poor production.

Mrs. Stowe gave her husband a disapproving glance. You’ll be careful what you say, she snapped. Lest you forget, we’ve a Wanted in our presence now.

Aaron raised his chin slightly as his parents stood aside at the front door, allowing the boy to enter before them for the first time. Yes, be careful, Father, Aaron said coolly, or I’ll have to report your insubordination for a comment like that.

Aaron took on a dignified stride as he made his way through the tiny kitchen to the even tinier bedroom that he no longer had to share. It’s true, he thought. Enough mourning. Alex has likely been eliminated by now. The twinge in his gut was soon dulled by thoughts of his now-secured future, and a tiny surge of power. He was Aaron Stowe, the Wanted. And he had a lot more to prove than most, having been born of two Necessaries. Not to mention overcoming the stigma of a worthless twin brother. It was, Aaron knew, a huge accomplishment to have made it to the top like this.

He began to pack his suitcase, a satisfied feeling growing inside him, for tonight would be his last night living with his Necessary parents. Tomorrow he would go to university to be with the others of his elevated status.

The Death Farm

No one spoke during the fifteen-minute bus ride to the Death Farm. It was stiflingly hot. Flies buzzed and darted at the closed windows, unable to escape. When Alex pulled out of his deep daze, he wiped the sweat off his forehead with his upper arm and looked around the bus.

In front of Alex, connected to him by a long chain over the high-backed bus seat, was his neighbor and friend, Meghan Ranger. It was a bit of a shock to see her in this group—she’d had only one infraction, as far as he knew, but it was a double. Singing and dancing. Alex had witnessed it, but it wasn’t he who had reported her. She’d had a pretty voice, too, but Alex was not permitted to think about that. Despite the heat Meghan’s face was white as the moon.

Across the bus aisle was Samheed Burkesh, who was well known to Alex but not necessarily well liked by him. Alex was surprised to see him here too, since the boy had privately boasted to Alex and Aaron only last week that he was going to be in the Quillitary. Samheed was obviously fighting tears and glared furiously when Alex’s eyes landed on him.

What are you looking at? Samheed said. But one of the younger governors gave Samheed a warning look. Unwanteds were not allowed to speak—their last words had already been uttered before the Purge.

Alex dropped his eyes and took in a few breaths, vowing silently not to look at Samheed again until… well, ever. Instead he turned his gaze to the seat behind his own, not having noted in the shock of it all who was attached to his other arm. He nearly had to stand in order to see over the high seat back to where the chain led, but he didn’t, since the governors were watching. All he could see was the straight jet-black hair and big, watery blue eyes of someone he was sure had to be a girl, but a tiny girl for thirteen, he thought. She didn’t turn away. Instead she held his gaze, blinking away her tears only once during the long moment.

Her eyes were deep and soulful, with wet black lashes all clumped together from crying. After a moment Alex attempted a half smile. He doubted that she could see his mouth if he couldn’t see hers. But her eyes crinkled the tiniest bit in response, and for some reason it made Alex feel just a little bit good.

There was no one else on the rickety old bus that Alex knew. He thought for a moment about being here alone with the governors. And for some selfish reason he couldn’t quite explain, he felt a rush of something glad, knowing Meghan and the others were there with him. That he wasn’t the only Unwanted in the entire land of Quill.

The bus chugged past the nursery where all of Quill’s trees stood, past the cattle ranch on the way out of town, and along the stark, dingy, gray south wall of Quill for several minutes before the equally bland houses disappeared and the land grew untended and desolate.

Alex’s stomach churned when the driver braked and the bus slowly groaned to a stop in front of the black, solid iron gates of what the people of Quill called the Death Farm.

None but the High Priest Justine and the governors had ever been inside the gates and returned alive, and they didn’t speak of it. Only the people of Quill, in hushed voices, would talk about it now and then, and speculate about how long you might be held there before the Eliminators disposed of you. And just how did they do it? Was it painful? Did they sedate you before tossing you into the Great Lake of Boiling Oil? Alex tried hard not to think of these things, but the harder he tried, the more he thought of them. And so it was almost with relief that he heard the bus door creak open and the governors tell all of the Unwanteds to stand and disembark.

There was a distinct smell—pungent—when the children walked off the bus and gathered along the black gate that led to the farm. It was an uncommon odor, different from the fried smells that came from the Quillitary vehicles. Alex assumed it was burning oil wafting off the nearby lake. He had never been this close to it before, since no one was allowed near it. No one could even see the lake, because the towering cement-block walls that surrounded the land reached all the way up to the barbed-wire ceiling, forty feet above. No one, that is, except the Unwanteds.

Alex glanced at the black-haired, blue-eyed girl next to him. The protective barbed-wire ceiling that crisscrossed and covered the entire land of Quill made a shadow box on her face, capturing a tear. She shook silently. She was not thirteen, Alex decided. In a brave moment, with nothing to lose, he whispered, I’m Alex. It’ll go quickly. He wasn’t sure why he said that. It was the only comforting thing he could think of.

She blinked and turned her face up at him, making the shadow boxes race across her face like they did across everything, everywhere. Lani, she whispered back, and shook her head. And no. It won’t.

Alex didn’t know what to say. He stood at attention as a governor took a key from a string around her neck and unlocked the gate. Summon the Eliminators, the woman said.

Another governor obliged by pounding on the gate. When the enormous gate creaked open, the governors stepped away and began boarding the bus again.

Lani watched them go, tears streaming down her face. Good-bye, Father, she said as a slight, gray-haired man boarded. The senior governor paused in the doorway for a split second and then, perhaps heavily, continued up the steps without looking back. He took a seat on the opposite side of the bus. Lani turned away and roughly whisked the tears from her cheeks. The bus drove off as the giant black iron door to the Death Farm widened enough for the chained children to enter single file.

Inside were four enormous Eliminators robed in black. Their heads were covered in cloth, but their beady red eyes pierced into the already frightened souls of the children. Lani now appeared to be the only calm one. She held her head high as the long chain of children walked inside.

What are they? Meghan gasped, and reached awkwardly for Alex’s hand.

Alex grasped Meghan’s hand and gave it a frightened squeeze. I don’t know, he whispered. He felt like his chest was going to collapse. Breathing in and out slowly, Alex closed his eyes for a moment and shivered as the gate groaned and closed with a loud clang, the lock clicking automatically on the other side, separating them from Quill forever. The Eliminators took the ends of the chains and trudged slowly, the children following.

They were in a small, cement yard. A gray stone building stood before them, and a steaming black lake boiled beyond it. Alex shuddered. That’s where they’ll do it to us. The oily stench seemed to grow stronger as they shuffled across broken cement, past bundles of burned-looking weeds, toward the building. It was more desolate than the most wasted section of Quill. Even the sky was clouded and gray here, although there was no barbed wire—just open sky. None of them had ever seen an uninterrupted sky before.

Everything was eerily silent but for the clanking of the chains and the scuffle of shoes as the Unwanteds moved forward. The seconds felt like hours. When the Eliminators stopped walking and turned their eyes to the sky, Alex followed their gaze.

The other children looked up too. From the sky over the boiling black lake, a large bird—or something—slowly approached. The Eliminators seemed to be waiting for it, and they stood, huge, hulking, silent, as a four-legged winged creature landed with an ominous thud directly in front of them.

Elimination

The creature was an extraordinarily beautiful yet frightening tortoise with long wings that were covered with glistening white feathers, tipped in black. The mosaic-shelled beast stood on all four legs, stretching out its neck to view its audience, and, even on all fours, was more than half as tall as the smallest child, Lani. The spectacular creature bobbed its head to the Eliminators, and then it looked each Unwanted in the eye. In turn, each dropped his gaze and instinctively drew back as far as his chains would allow.

After a few moments the tortoise appeared satisfied. When it spoke—to the utter shock of the children—it was in a deep, agonizingly slow voice.

Wel… come, the tortoise said, low and grim, and the word caused a chill to run up Alex’s spine. We’ve been—it paused for a breath—ex… pect… ing you.

Samheed, the glaring boy from the bus who had been silent all this time, muttered an oath under his breath and raised his fists, ready to fight, but Alex and the others were fearfully mesmerized by the odd creature that stood before them.

What was this thing? Was it going to attack? What did it have to do with this decrepit farm that contained nothing but the smell of death? They watched the tortoise, almost afraid to look at its grim face, but not quite able to look away, either.

The tortoise blinked a long, slow blink. Craning its long neck to look behind it, it lifted its round front leg and held it next to its mouth, as if to cup its words. Mar… cus, it called out in its slow, grim voice. It’s time.

What in the name of Quill is it doing? Alex wondered. A moment later a tall, thin figure emerged from the gray building and lifted his hand.

All at once, Alex felt dizzy, as the space around him seemed to swirl, the oily lake whirling with the gray building and the wall behind them until everything was a spinning charcoal haze. He blinked rapidly and wondered if he and all the children had already been eliminated—if it was over. Nothing on his body hurt, yet the charcoal blur of everything around him now faded, softened, cooled to white, and then grew steadily brighter, nearly blinding him. This was nothing at all like what Alex expected to feel when immersed in the Great Lake of Boiling Oil.

Meghan, who could not help herself, cried out, What’s happening?

Alex squeezed her fingers, more to assure himself than her that they were still together. He sucked in a breath but couldn’t answer.

Another moment later the white melted and color emerged. The small, desolate lot had transformed into a huge world so full of color, Alex could hardly see.

The sun shone in a cerulean sky. The cement turned to a lush carpet of grass, and water fountains emerged from the earth. A thousand trees sprouted and grew to full height, scattered far and wide. The boiling lake softened into a calm sea of blues and greens, and the single gray building expanded into an enormous, sprawling fieldstone mansion. The gnarled weeds at the children’s feet wavered and transformed into wide-eyed animals, both common and fantastic.

Even the Eliminators transformed. Their black cloth coverings disappeared, and all four grew even taller, with animal-like heads and sleek, long necks that melded into huge, stout, strong bodies like the Unwanteds had never seen. The newly transformed Eliminators were covered in a fine layer of shimmering black hair that reflected the sunlight, and their previously frightening red eyes grew kind and intelligent, a rich amber-brown.

As the Unwanteds gawked, the shackles on their arms unbuckled and fell to the ground. They took in a collective, awed breath, rubbed their sore wrists, and checked to see if the others were all still there.

The tall, thin figure that had emerged from the gray building—now mansion—was a man dressed in a flowing multicolored robe. He strolled toward them. A fluffy shock of white hair stood up on his head as if he had just been struck by lightning.

Greetings, friends, said the man. His voice, warm and clear, pealed like a pleasant-sounding bell. He opened his arms wide. I am Marcus Today. Welcome to Artimé. He paused, touching a finger to his lips, and then he smiled brightly. Tell me, children. How does it feel to be eliminated?

Mr. Today

It was as if Alex and the others were mute. And indeed the colors of this magical place alone would have been enough to shock any Quillen, for Quill was a bland world whose brightest color was the green of the leafy trees in the nursery. In Quill all the trees were confined to one place so that no one would get notions about introducing such a bright color into the housing quadrants.

But here in Artimé, all of the colors felt warm, from the deep, foresty greens of plants to the soothing blues of the sky and sea. The strand of beach was not a dingy gray like the cement walls around Quill—it was clean and white with tiny bits of silver and gold sparkling in the sunshine.

A cool breeze whisked away the odor of burning oil from the children’s

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