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The Florida Chase: Collectors Edition: The Florida Chase, #5
The Florida Chase: Collectors Edition: The Florida Chase, #5
The Florida Chase: Collectors Edition: The Florida Chase, #5
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The Florida Chase: Collectors Edition: The Florida Chase, #5

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When their father goes missing, two teens travel to Washington D.C to find answers. Their search for the truth takes them from the backstreets of the capital to the hurricane torn roads of the Florida Keys, where they enlist the help of the army in an attempt to save their father and stop World War 3.

Split into 4 parts, this story of adventure and intrigue will have readers eagerly turning the pages right through to the thrilling and action packed ending that no one will see coming. This collector's edition contains all 4 parts.

Follow the brothers as they head to Florida in an effort to uncover the mystery of why their father has suddenly disappeared. Read as they travel through the Everglades, survive a hurricane, almost get blown up, have their plane sabotaged, flee on bicycles through the wetlands and more!

LanguageEnglish
PublisherPaul Moxham
Release dateJun 9, 2014
ISBN9781498957526
The Florida Chase: Collectors Edition: The Florida Chase, #5
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Paul Moxham

Paul Moxham hails from Australia. He has written four novels, two novellas, and two short stories. Sign up for when he releases a new book - http://eepurl.com/tC4_v Check out his official website for more info - www.paulmoxham.com

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  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    The Florida Chase: Collectors Edition by Paul Moxham is full of adventure as two brothers go on the hunt of their missing father. This is full of action as the boys travel from Pittsburgh to NYC, DC, to Florida. Kidnappers, break-ins, snakes, alligators, near plane crashes, hurricanes, they are met by so many obstacles along the way searching for their Dad. A fast-paced action book that I enjoyed reading.I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my honest review, rather it be good or bad.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    A very exciting story and one that keeps the reader wondering who the "Boss" is in this tangled up story of two teens trying to find thier father. It turns out that they have to end up rescuing him from a devious minded fellow who is out to futher his own fortunes. True the story may seem far fetched and not very realistic in places, but it does keep one's interest and the reader will struggle to come up with who the "Boss" is until the last few pages. An interesting book and one that should be interesting to younger readers. Interesting read.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I received this book free from Library Thing to read and review. In this book, two brothers go on a search for their father, who left on a business trip and has not returned. The search extends from Pittsburg to NYC to DC to Florida in the middle of a major hurricane. With thought bringing me to some of the Hardy Boys mysteries I read years ago, the boy encounter numerous obstacles in their search and ultimately a dramatic conclusion. However, though the plot is well thought out and organized, I stopped to wonder how two not quite adult boys could manage to do and accomplish some of the things these two boys did (like finding a pilot to fly his small plane into a hurricane area) or how they could come up with some of the ideas and ways they do things. They may have had some fantastic experiences and a great background, but the author spends little time on most of this and expects the reader to understand and accept that the boys do what they do and come up with what they do almost as a leap of faith. More character development probably would have helped explain things and made the story a bit more realistic. Nevertheless, this is a fairly good book and flows quite well from start to finish. I am looking forward to the next book by this author, since I fully expect it to be as well written and the plot to be as exciting as this one.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    The Florida Chase: Collectors Edition by Paul Moxham is full of adventure as two brothers go on the hunt of their missing father. This is full of action as the boys travel from Pittsburgh to NYC, DC, to Florida. Kidnappers, break-ins, snakes, alligators, near plane crashes, hurricanes, they are met by so many obstacles along the way searching for their Dad. A fast-paced action book that I enjoyed reading.I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my honest review, rather it be good or bad.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    I received this book as a Member Giveaway in exchange for a review. This book is about two brothers and their quest to find their missing father, and the adventures they have along the way. It reminded me of a Hardy Boys novel as I read it. I liked to two brothers and thought the conclusion of the book was very attention-grabbing and full of action. However, I felt the book was flawed in several ways. The characters of the two brothers wasn't explored very well, as to their thoughts as emotions, so It was hard to make any real connection to them. There were some serious plot flaws which need to be worked out, ex. the reason why the father didn't call the police after he escaped. The language use in the book was not consistent with a family that lived in Pittsburgh. The story needed major proofreading, editing, revising. The spelling and sentence structure, grammar, and poor editing was very distracting and it was hard to focus on the story because of this. I feel though, that there is promise here though, the plot was very action-packed, locations were interesting, although more description would be helpful., and the characters have possibilities. This story may have been updated since I received my copy, I hope so, as the story definitely has a lot of potential.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    When a father does not return home as scheduled, his two college aged sons begin a search. From Pittsburgh to NYC to DC to the Florida Keys the search leads the young men through break-ins, hurricane, fire, flood, snakes, alligators, and capture from would-be assassins. Never giving up hope of finding their father they follow the clues until they reach the end of their journey. The suspense keeps the story moving and the reader interested. The surprise ending brings the story to a valid conclusion.It is obvious from terminology that the author is not American even though the story is about Americans. But the book is very enjoyable--especially for the younger readers. A bit of proof reading would also do much for this book.I look forward to reading more stories from Mr. Moxham and hope to read about Australia in one of his next works.**Disclaimer: I was given a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    I got this book as part of the Member Giveaway Program at librarything.com in exchange for an honest review.I had quite high hopes for this book, the initial details made the book sound like a real page turner. Unfortunately, this was not the case. I found the story rather slow and a little confusing at times. The writing style felt more like a report to me, very clear on details but no emotion or reason behind actions, even ones that made no sense.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    First off, I threw my hat in the ring for this book as I am interested in just about anything with Florida in the subject. And I am happy to provide review in exchange as part of the Member Giveaway Program at librarything.com.I understood from the description that this was a series book for young adults/teens in the style of the Hardy Boys. I loved Nancy Drew growing up, so knowing that going in, I expected mystery, adventure, and maybe some comedy thrown in, most likely in the 1950's style. I have to say, the first few paragraphs had me perplexed. Did I miss something, were the the characters supposed to be from over the pond originally? Windscreen? Oh (smack on forehead) the Windshield (doh!). Unfortunately it took me over half of the book to set aside my frustration and forgive the author. This could have been avoided if the reader was warned or the characters set up to be originally from somewhere other than America where the story was taking place.Was this explained in a previous book or did I simply miss it? I am a mother of 4 boys, all men now and I can tell you, in all my years with my sons and all their many friends I have never heard a boy or young man speak like this. Maybe it was geared for the British market? Also, having grown up in Florida, although exciting to read, I can tell you, an encounter at an airport car rental counter, in middle of hurricane evacuation, asking for possible exceptions or workarounds when you missed the last plane...let's just say there would not be a polite conversation and smiles! And arriving at a hurricane shelter with a lull in the storm, a friendly local says "Lets go outside and sit down" and discuss your situation? Hmm. I did have to laugh when the boys arrived at a shelter totally soaked to the bone and the author describes them as 'drinking warm milk and being "rugged up"'!! Had to think on that,...oh, you mean he was bundled up in a blanket! Sigh. Ok, enough of my rant on language and dialog style. The overall story was exactly a mystery and an adventure, and I would even say in the Hardy Boys style. The places and facts were 'spot on' and I appreciate that. The descriptive language the author used and the level of detail tells me the author knows his stuff. He has done his homework well. I really think if only the language was tweaked (I so had my red pencil ready) this story would bring great enjoyment to the American market for kids 8-14. Notice I am not limiting to boys! I want to thank the author for respecting the intended audience with the subject, plot, and exciting twists and turns. I hope in my next read of his he also respects the language of the same audience (that is if it is intended at all for American youth audience). It is refreshing to know Paul Moxham is keeping the genre alive and well for generations of youth to come.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    A fast-moving story about a reporter and his two roughly college-aged sons. Chasing "the big story", he told his sons that he would take a trip to NYC, and when he did not return, the sons looked for clues on his whereabouts. They then tracked him down to DC and Florida. The plot of the story was good: fast-moving with the potential for suspense, as the sons moved around on the "bad guy's" trail. There were however a number of shortcomings in the style. The first was that I never got a real sense of the son's emotions; they had to be afraid at certain points, or adrenaline-filled at others. Lacking this, the story seemed difficult to believe. This lack of emotion extended to other characters, e.g. one of the hotel owners in the face of tragedy. It was also unclear as to why they would not call the cops at any point, preferring instead to do the sleuthing themselves. A more descriptive view of some of the locales would also be nice, considering that Florida was in the title of the novel. It was also difficult for me to believe that kids this age would have the funds to fly (buying tickets the same day), stay at hotels, and rent or buy whatever they needed at any given time. On a minor note, like too many self-published books, some proofreading was needed. These problems made me want to give up on finishing the book, but the plot was good enough to keep going. The ending was not quite what I expected, and I enjoyed the twist. Disclaimer: I got this book as part of the Member Giveaway Program at librarything.com in exchange for an honest review.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    I was excited to receive a review copy of this book (*insert disclaimer that my review is honest and not influenced by the fact that the book was free*) because it starts out in Pittsburgh, PA, my home town. Sadly, there weren’t many mentions of popular landmarks, but alas, the book did capture my attention from the get-go. Unfortunately, it did not hold my attention and I found myself skimming through several pages. I personally found the story line to be far-fetched (Without going into detail, it is hard to fathom that two teenage boys would have the resources to go to Washington, D.C. and Florida to find their missing father or that they didn’t get the police more involved.) and dragging at times.However, from the point-of-view of a pre-teen or teenage boy (Or girl! Let’s not be sexist.), this is an exciting story. For fans of adventure stories, I highly recommend this book.

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The Florida Chase - Paul Moxham

Chapter 1: The Letter

The red sedan pulled up to a two-story house in Pittsburgh. Jordan Brody, a fair-haired youth with a muscular figure, strolled down the path and went inside.

Music blared throughout the house as he hurried up the stairs and rapped on a bedroom door. A few moments passed before his brother, who was three years younger than him and still in high school, cut the music and threw open the door.

Luke was shorter than Jordan and a bit more on the chubby side, but he had the same blue eyes and fair hair. I thought I saw you drive in, he said, smiling.

I came as soon as I could. Jordan entered the bedroom as Luke leafed through a pile of papers that were stacked three-feet high on his desk. What are you looking for?

You wouldn’t believe it if I told you. Just wait a minute while I find it.

It had better be good. I was supposed to meet Julie at the plaza at four. I’m gonna be late.

Found it! Luke grabbed a sheet of paper and handed it to his brother.

Jordan saw that it was a letter addressed to their father, dated one week ago. He read it aloud. Dear Mr. Brody. As soon as I received your information, I did some searching of my own. It looks as though you are right. We need to meet and discuss the situation. Do not let anyone else know about this meeting. It is imperative that we keep it a secret. You and I would not last long if this information got into the wrong hands. Please meet me at the park bench in Lansburgh Park near the Friendship Baptist Church this Thursday at noon. I repeat, under no condition reveal this information to anyone. Be careful, Richard Stone. Jordan looked up. Where did you find this?

The last time we searched the desk in Dad’s study, the middle drawer looked a bit weird. I had forgotten about it, and it wasn’t until I was in the study again that I remembered.

Was the letter hidden in the drawer?

Sort of. I pulled out all the drawers and found a hidden compartment attached to the back of the desk. After fiddling around for a few moments, I finally found the button to open it. The letter and some other documents were inside. Luke looked at his brother excitedly. Do you realize what this means? We finally have some evidence that proves that Dad may have been kidnapped after all. The police will have to listen to us now.

The letter only suggests a meeting place, Jordan replied. We don’t know if he even made it there. We need to get more information before the police will listen to us.

Then we’ll get some information.

Jordan looked at his brother in amazement. How can we get any more information? Are we supposed to track down Richard Stone ourselves?

I looked it up on my phone and mapped out the way already.

But wouldn’t there be more than one Richard Stone?

Of course. But there’s only one that lives in Washington D.C, and that’s where Lansburgh Park is.

Are you crazy? Haven’t you forgotten how far it is? Dad will probably come back safe and sound next week. Why not wait? I know he said that he hoped to be back on Saturday, and now it’s Tuesday, but you know how reporters are. If they get hold of a good story, they lose track of time.

If you don’t want to come, I’ll just go myself right away. After grabbing his backpack, Luke made his way to the door, but his brother beat him to it.

You know what happened the last time you went off by yourself, Jordan blurted. You would have been locked-up for two years for stealing that car if I hadn’t come along and proved your innocence.

That was different, Luke said, defiant. I was younger then. I’m not going to make the same mistake twice. I’m going to Washington to find Richard Stone and ask him what he knows about Dad.

Jordan hesitated as Luke moved to open the door. Resigned to the fact that his brother was going to go whether or not he liked it, he moved out of the way.

Good to see you’re not stupid, Luke said as he opened the bedroom door and went downstairs.

Jordan paused and tried to think about what he should do. He didn’t want to go on what would probably turn out to be a wild-goose chase, but what if their dad had been kidnapped?

He had already lost his mom in a terrible car accident three years ago, and so, not wanting to lose his dad, he hurried downstairs.

Luke was making a sandwich in the kitchen and looked up as Jordan entered.

What are you going to do for money? Jordan asked.

I’ve got my savings account.

Jordan smiled grimly. That would only last you for a couple of days.

What do you have in mind then?

We can use the credit card Dad just got me.

Suits me.

Oh, and one more thing. If we don’t find anything, we come back straight away. But, if we do, we go straight to the police. Agreed?

Agreed.

Okay. Make me a sandwich while I get some clothes. We’ll leave in five minutes. He ran back upstairs, opened his closet, and started throwing stuff in a backpack. After glancing around the room to make sure he had everything that they needed to make the 200-mile trip, he went downstairs.

He called to Luke to meet him outside and made his way to the sedan. After throwing the backpack in the back, he climbed into the driver’s seat.

His brother joined him a few moments later and Jordan put the car in gear and drove off. Luke leaned back in his seat, trying to get comfortable for the long drive ahead.

Chapter 2: Appointment with Richard

The Brody Residence, One Week Earlier

After getting home early from work, Mr. Brody glanced through the mail. Seeing that it was mostly bills, he was about to chuck it onto the table to read later, when he saw the address of the sender of the last letter. It was from Washington D.C. He quickly tore it open. A ghost of a smile broke across his face as he read it. It looked like his suspicions were correct.

Hearing his sons pull up, he stuffed the envelope into his pocket and made his way to the kitchen to prepare some lunch.

Hi, Dad, Luke said as he and his brother entered the room.

You’re home early, Jordan said.

The newspaper wanted me to do a story on the local police force. I came home to get some details off the internet and type up the story. I’ll head back to the office later to see if they like it.

I’m sure they will, Luke said. He munched down a salad roll that he’d bought on the way home.

Thanks for the encouragement, his father replied, grinning. Oh, I have to go on a trip and I’m not sure when I’ll be back.

Where to? Jordan asked.

New York. I’m meeting a close friend of mine and doing some research into one of my old projects.

Still hunting for that big story? Luke asked.

Mr. Brody nodded.

How long have you been working on this story of yours? Jordan said.

Well, it’s not the length of time it takes, but what the result is.

Jordan looked at Luke and made a face. Ever since their mom had died, their dad had been on the lookout for a big story – the story that reporters dreamed of. Something that would propel him, a small-time reporter, onto the cover of one of the big newspapers in New York or Los Angeles.

How about we move back to New York city after Luke finishes high school? Jordan asked.

Son, we have gone over that many times before. We’re not going to go over it again. Maybe when I get my big story, but not before.

Luke joined the conversation with, But why did we have to move from New York in the first place?

Because I needed to be away from all the hustle and bustle. After your mother died, I decided to take a break from my IT job and move here to Pittsburgh and—

Became a hot-shot reporter, Luke broke in. We know the story, but what happens if you don’t get that break? What are we going to do then?

We’ll cross that bridge when we come to it, Mr. Brody declared. He glanced at his watch. I’ve got to go now, but I’ll be home by seven. Remember, I booked that Mexican restaurant for dinner tonight. With that, he left the room.

After making sure that their dad was out of earshot, Luke glanced at Jordan. Do you think we’ll ever move from here?

Maybe. Who knows? All I know is that is that I don’t want to be stuck in this town forever. Once I finish college, I’ll be off to New York. What about you? Are you happy here?

Well, it’s a roof over my head. Anyway, we’ll see what happens.

The boys parted ways. Jordan went outside for some basketball practice while Luke headed to his bedroom to study for the SAT.

After typing up his report, Mr. Brody climbed into his white sedan and headed toward Pittsburgh. After presenting his story to the boss, he made his way to a big department store and purchased camping equipment. He put the equipment into the back of the car and took out his cell phone. After taking a business card from his pocket, he dialed the number on it.

It was an anxious few moments as he waited for someone to pick up the phone. If no one answered, his worst fears would be realized. After letting it ring ten times, he hesitated, then hit the end call button on his phone. With a heavy heart, he made his way to the car. He hoped that nothing was wrong, but he would soon find out. He looked at his watch. Time had flown and it was nearly five p.m.

Mr. Brody arrived home to discover that Jordan was out and Luke was studying in his room. Hoping that he wasn’t going to be disturbed, he quietly went into the basement and, after picking two fairly large backpacks, made his way to the kitchen. He was halfway through putting food into one of them when he heard the music stop upstairs and the bedroom door open.

Throwing a glance around the kitchen hoping to see a place to hide the bags, he heard footsteps descending the stairs. He stuffed the two backpacks into one of the lower cabinets. A moment later Luke walked into the room. He mustered up a smile.

Hi, Dad, Luke said. I didn’t hear you come home.

I only just got home a few minutes ago. Have you seen Jordan around? It’s nearly time to leave for the restaurant.

No, Luke said. I’ve been studying in my room the whole time. He looked at his dad curiously. The phone has been ringing almost non-stop all afternoon. I picked it up once or twice, but, when I told them that you weren’t home, they hung up. What’s going on?

Nothing, Mr. Brody said as he tried to conceal his worry. It was probably just a persistent salesman. You know what they are like. They’ll do anything for a sale.

Maybe, Luke replied, looking oddly at his dad.

Noticing the weird look, Mr. Brody decided to change the subject. How about we go out and play some one-on-one basketball till Jordan comes home?

~

As the pink dawn spread across the horizon, Mr. Brody climbed into his car and drove off. He left a note at the kitchen table to remind his sons that he was going to New York and that he would be back in time for Jordan’s basketball game on Saturday.

Midmorning found him nearly at his destination. Having stopped only for a quick bite to eat at a fast food place, he’d made excellent time. The drive to Washington D.C was a long one, but he had plenty to think about. Twice, he called the number that he had tried yesterday, but there was still no answer.

He turned off the interstate and headed for Lansburgh Park. It was early, but he wanted to make sure that he could find the place. A quarter of an hour later saw him arrive at the recreation area. He grabbed a folder from the backseat of the car, locked the vehicle, and made his way to the park.

There were only a few people about, and most of them were children who were playing on the swings. After looking around, he decided to sit next to one of the trees and wait. According to the letter that he had received the other day, Richard was due to arrive in ten minutes.

Time passed, and he was about to give up any hope when he saw a figure dressed in a black raincoat approach a nearby seat and sit down.

Not knowing what Richard looked like, he could only assume that it was him, so he went over to the park bench and sat down. The other man didn’t move for a few seconds and Mr. Brody wondered if he had made a mistake. Then he got the shock of his life. The man opened the left side of his coat and revealed a gun!

Mr. Brody quickly threw the pile of papers into the man’s face and started to run toward his car. He had parked on the far side, so he would have to travel near the children who were playing in the park.

Wishing that he had parked somewhere else, but knowing that his safety relied on him reaching the car, he sprinted for his life. He shuddered as he heard the man fire his pistol and saw the bullet smack one of the nearby trees.

As he approached the play equipment, he hoped that the man would stop firing once he saw that people were around. He did stop shooting, but not for that reason.

Mr. Brody had just reached the far side of the swings when he rounded a tree and was knocked to the ground by another man coming in the opposite direction. Quickly, the man pulled out a handkerchief and put it over his mouth. He

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