Self-Editing for Memoir Writers
By Jill Kelly
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Written by a professional editor with 20 years experience, this guide to self-editing offers writers of memoir multiple ways to improve their writing and produce cleaner manuscripts to pitch to agents and editors or to self-publish. Includes 10 rules for avoiding errors in punctuation and syntax and creating clearer sentences and better description and dialog. Offers ideas for organizing the content of your memoir, knowing when your book is really done, and how to save money if you decide to hire a professional editor before pitching or publishing.
Jill Kelly
I began writing in 2002 with a memoir that was a finalist for the prestigious Oregon Book Award. Since then I've been writing most days in the morning for an hour or so and am currently working on book #10. It's just so fun. I'm a big reader of mysteries and thrillers and have written three of my own. I also enjoy exploring the relationships between men and women, and mothers and daughters. I'm a former college professor of literature and writing who's been a freelance editor for the last 25 years. I am also a pastel and acrylic painter and I make art deco needlepoint pillows (www.jillkellycreative.com). I live in Portland, Oregon, with my four cats who do all the chores so I can be creative 24/7.
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Self-Editing for Memoir Writers - Jill Kelly
Self-Editing for Memoir Writers
By
Jill Kelly, PhD
Smashwords Edition
Self-Editing for Memoir Writers
Copyright © 2014 by Jill Beverly Kelly, PhD
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Content
A Word from the Author
A Few Words about Writing a Memoir
Some Basic Advice about Self-Editing
10 Rules for Self-Editing Memoir
Rule #1: Don’t edit while you are drafting
Rule #2: Balance show
and tell
Rule #3: Review your dialog
Rule #4: Avoid -ly adverbs, if at all possible, especially in dialog
Rule #5: Keep a light and nimble hand on description
Rule #6: Make sure all pronoun references are crystal clear to the reader (unless you consciously want them to be confused)
Rule #7: Keep subjects and verbs close together in sentences
Rule #8: Avoid passive voice
Rule #9: Learn your way around standard punctuation
Rule #10: Write in a style that fits your story
Some Additional Suggestions
How to Know When Your Manuscript Is Done
The Is-My-Book-Ready Worksheet
Why Hire a Professional Editor?
Ways to Make the Best Use of the Money You Spend with an Editor
A Last Word from the Author
Helpful Resources
Basic Rules of Punctuation
About the Author
A Word from the Author
For the last 20 years, I’ve been editing fiction and nonfiction manuscripts, including memoirs. (I wrote my own memoir, Sober Truths: The Making of an Honest Woman, between 2002 and 2007 and published it in 2008. It was a finalist for the prestigious Oregon Book Award that year.) Before that, I was a college professor of language and writing. And I’ve always been an avid reader. When I changed careers in 1994, I wanted to help writers get better work out into the world, work they could be proud of, work I would enjoy reading.
Unlike some of my editing colleagues, I don’t see myself as a book doctor or as a fixer. My job is to empower writers, whether they’re writing only one book or whether they’re making a career of it. While I love to edit for writers, I know that some can’t afford to buy enough editing hours for a deep and thorough edit of their work. Others are confirmed do-it-yourselfers. What’s more, many of my clients