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Biters - The Reborn: JournalStone's DoubleDown Series - Book IV
Biters - The Reborn: JournalStone's DoubleDown Series - Book IV
Biters - The Reborn: JournalStone's DoubleDown Series - Book IV
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Biters - The Reborn: JournalStone's DoubleDown Series - Book IV

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The Double Down series continues with two novellas that explore very different post-apocalyptic worlds. Harry Shannon's Biters is classic noir set at the end of the world. Buck Ryan can't get enough of Sarah, but she's had more than enough of her husband. To win the girl for good, all Ryan has to do is kill the man, steal his money and survive the zombie apocalypse on the way back. Piece of cake. Marcus Ryder ended the Great War with one shot in Brett J. Talley’s The Reborn. He comes home to a brave new world where reincarnation is scientific fact and a simple blood test can reveal exactly who a person will be even before they are born. But when he is chosen for an elite unit that punishes people for their crimes in a past life and stops crime before it starts, Ryder begins to question what he knows about morality and justice. And all the while, the mysterious figure that plunged the world into war may be on the rise again.
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PublisherJournalStone
Release dateApr 11, 2014
ISBN9781940161556
Biters - The Reborn: JournalStone's DoubleDown Series - Book IV
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Harry Shannon

HARRY SHANNONHarry Shannon has been an actor, an Emmy-nominated songwriter, a recording artist, a music publisher, VP Music at Carolco Pictures and a Music Supervisor on “Basic Instinct” and “Universal Soldier.” His novels include “Night of the Beast," “Night of the Werewolf," “Daemon," "Dead and Gone" and "The Pressure of Darkness," as well as the Mick Callahan suspense novels “Memorial Day,” “Eye of the Burning Man,” and “One of the Wicked." His new collection "A Host of Shadows" is from Dark Region Press. Shannon has won the Tombstone Award, the Black Quill, and has been nominated for the Stoker by the Horror Writer's Association. Contact him via Facebook or at www.harryshannon.com

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  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    First of the two, Biters, is (yet another) uninspired take on Zombie Apocalypse, profesionally written but oh-so boring.After enduring Brooks' book, the film and the TV series my capacity for fore and gruesome ends is utterly exhausted. Please, no more.Second one, The Reborn, had the beginning of what it could have been an interesting plot, but it got lost in development, and the unbelievable premises done stripped it of any chance of believability. Not very bad, but not that good.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    I received Biters and The Reborn from Library Thing Early Reviewers. Biters and The Reborn are from Journal Stone Publishing's Double Down Series. Biters by Harry Shannon is a post-apocalyptic zombie story and a love story rolled into one. This book is about survival of the fittest. This book is frightening and does not have a mushy happy ending for the main character. (Which is a good thing)The Reborn is by Brett J. Talley and is about a futuristic society that can tell from a simple blood test what type of person they will be. Parents can pick and choose their offspring; and whether or not to keep them. This is a mind boggling read about eugenics that left me not sure where I stand the issue. I am sure it will leave everyone else with many questions.
  • Rating: 1 out of 5 stars
    1/5
    I had high hopes for this one butcouldnt even finish the book. It was violent and crude. I can handle both of those if the story is interesting but I could find nothing worth keeping me reading. I received a copy of this book as part of the early reviewer program.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    I was a bit confused when I got to the end of Biters. I thought the Title was Biters—The Reborn, but then I saw that The Reborn is a second story. So I am only going to review Biters.I was immediately drawn into this story as if I were watching it on my television alone on a Friday night. The protagonist begins the story with the emotional baggage of survivor’s guilt. He alone survived a zombie attack while his neighbors and family members were attacked and turned into zombies. Next, the author introduces a desperate group of people who have banded together out of fear and necessity to survive the zombie attacks on their stronghold in the middle of nowhere. Each character reveals the darkest part of humanity as they cling to the idea of a society where the toughest and most enterprising control the weak. The protagonist thinks he loves a woman who betrays him while the pitiful dog he adopts proves herself to be his most loyal ally. This post-apocalyptic zombie story is reminiscent of a Twilight Zone episode with no happy ending for the hero and only a slim hope for his future survival.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    An interesting set up - two books in one. My 14 year old son liked them more than I did. I'd read The Void by Talley previous, and felt this one was somewhat better.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    This is an interesting book that contains two stories: Biters and The Reborn. Biters is a western-esqe zombie tale. Honestly, Biters probably needed more development. The characters weren't that interesting and the conflict wasn't attention grabbing. The second story, The Reborn, is a little bit better. It revolves around an apocalyptic theme. I will say the concept behind government control of birth is interesting, but it has been done better elsewhere (see Unwind by Neil Shusterman or The Handmaid's Tale by Margaret Atwood).
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    hooo...this was a tough one to review. I mistakenly thought that being "book 4", that this was the fourth in this specific authors series. So while I was reading Biters, I got hooked and then when looking for the rest, discovered there were no more! Biters is almost written like a western, Louis L'Amour sort of book, only there are zombies. There is a whole underlying understanding that the main character has some checkered past and a history with the female in the story and we do get some hints. But mostly its left to your imagination. if there were more books, I would of read them and probably enjoyed the story but alas, I am not a fan of short stories and that is what this truly is. I just hate getting all hooked and excited and then have an abrupt ending. Its like eating fast food....hate it. The other story was again...ok. A beat-to-death apocalyptic scenario with the all powerful government deciding who lives and dies. Boring. But not awful.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    I received 'Bites / The Reborn' written by Harry Shannon and Brett J Talley respectively in exchange for an honest review. Two stories in the same book. Each book has it's own cover. Interesting presentation. Each book starts the book and reader just flips book over after finished reading 1st story.Bitters was the first story I've read. The shorter of the two, it was a typical zombie story. For me, the characters' struggles (how they face an impossible situation, how determined they are to survive, how the handle the pressure and care about others around them) makes the story interesting. Unfortunately this was lacking in Bitters. To say my favorite characters as 'Dog' says a lot. 'Dog' is more a prop for the main character, Ryan. I could not care about any of them. Glad the story was short.The Reborn was twice the length of Bitters. An apocalyptic tale, where war had decimated the worlds population and the government decided who could or cold not be born based on their DNA. This was an interesting premiss. However, the story followed too closely other dystopic average of the mill stories. There is a little twist in the end, but it was not a surprise twist, making it less effective.Both books were average stories for their genre. This makes them easily forgotten. As I feel in a generous mood, I give them solid three stars.
  • Rating: 1 out of 5 stars
    1/5
    I will be honest. I wasn't able to even finish the first book in this duo-logy. The synopsis credits this book as being a Zombie apocolypse story and yet by the time i threw in the towel on this we had met 1 caged zombie. I prefer my zombie books to be filled with action and suspense and fear, and found this book to be lacking all of these.Would i recommend this book? NoWould I continue the book? No.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Still love the concept of the doubledown series and think both stories were good reads. Biters read like a lifetime movie produced and aired on HBO and Reborn had a bit more pacing and story development. I enjoyed reading both stories in this book. While neither of the stories were awesome they were solid reads with interesting characters, plots, and concepts. I blazed through these stories in a few nights and was in the worlds the authors created.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    I read Biters first and then Reborn - I didn't pay attention enough to note the stories were by two different authors at first, but it quickly became apparent. Shannon goes way too far into description, but he's working too hard to be poetic it seems. So that was distracting and the story was nothing exciting, with it seeming so cliche and done before.Talley's story though, being twice as long, he had more space for character and story development. He also didn't go overboard with adjectives leaving more space to build within. His story - the rise of a new Khan (Genghis not Ricard Montalban) and the general collapse of modern society was just much better. Sure, Shannon also had a collapse of modern society, but for saying so much, at the end, I felt like there wasn't much said. While that works for some stories, it didn't work there. In this case, I think less could have been more. Less adjectives, more story. As a rating, I give Shannon 2.5 and Talley 3.5 so averaging them together, the book as a whole gets a 3.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I like books like Biters - The Reborn, which have two stories with one on each end of the book. I don't like reviewing them so much, because when I like one story and not the other I have a hard time coming up with an overall rating. This was the case with this book, and unlike most of the other reviews I've seen for this book, the story I liked was "Biters.""Biters," by Harry Shannon, is a zombie story. Normally this would be a strike against it, because, as much as I like zombie stories, the trope is pretty much played out. Unless there's some new twist to the story, we really don't need any more books or movies about small bands of survivors trying to get by in a zombie filled world.Luckily, this isn't that sort of book. "Biters" is essentially a crime story which uses the post-apocalyptic, zombie-filled world as a backdrop. It's a tale of love, betrayal, and revenge. It's not one of the great classics of world literature, but it was entertaining."The Reborn" by Brett J. Talley wasn't as good. I can see why other people enjoyed it. It had all the elements of a god post-apocalyptic sci-fi thriller. Even the idea that reincarnation has been proven and the government is using that knowledge to weed out the reincarnations of murderers and rapists in utero is a pretty cool idea.The first problem I have though is that the way this idea is presented sounds like so much technobabble BS (though I could be wrong on this as I am not a biologist). Apparently reincarnation was discovered after a murderer was convicted by hair strand from which only a single strand of junk DNA was recoverable. A scientist was found who testified that that single strand was as unique as a fingerprint (unless my I'm wrong that strand would have been present in one of the man's parents, so right off the bat this sounds like BS). Then decades after the guy was executed, another murderer is found with the same strand of junk DNA. instead of assuming that the scientist was lying or mistaken, the courts throw out every conviction based on DNA evidence (despite the fact that only cases in which conviction rested on a single strand of junk DNA would have been called into question by this). Then someone discovers that after a criminal dies another criminal is born with junk DNA that matches the strand of that criminal's DNA (which would seem to invalidate the whole "this strand is as unique as a fingerprint" theory). Somehow, instead of interpreting this as evidence that this theory is BS, this becomes proof of reincarnation.On top of the fairly crappy sounding science, the protagonist goes through some fairly unbelievable personality changes for no apparent reason. Also the story relies far too heavily on the backstory of the DNA business and the rise of a man called Khan, which effectively makes this feel like two stories mushed together.If I could, I'd give "Biters" four stars and "The Reborn" three, but since they're one book the thing gets an overall 3.5.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    I enjoyed reading "biters" but couldn't get into"Reborn". The first was hard to put down, but second felt as if I'd come in part way through the story.
  • Rating: 1 out of 5 stars
    1/5
    So the zombiepocalypse has happened. Again. All the result of...something or other, big pharma gone wrong, I think.It would be easy to go on and say something erudite and witty about how bad this book is, but I don't really think I can be bothered. Bad prose, woeful exposition, and cardboard characterisation. This is not the zombie apocalypse book you are looking for. Assuming you were looking for one.I haven't thus far gotten onto the second story. The first one just sort of sapped my will.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Biters was just ok in my opinion. I liked the plot, but didn't really enjoy the story line.The Reborn, on the other hand, I enjoyed very much.The idea of being able to identify future criminals by their previous incarnations is so totally original, and made the book worth the read.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Between BITERS and THE REBORN, The REBORN is the stronger story. The premise that criminals from the past could be reincarnated and detected before birth was a fascinating concept to me. In a post apocalyptic world where all pregnant women must be tested to see if they are carrying one of these criminal babies -- these tests determined if your child was The Reborn (reincarnated criminal), A Marked baby (a criminal whose crimes did not warrant the death penalty and the baby could be born and watched. If they committed no crimes, then their DNA would be marked Clear.) And then there were the babies who were Clear from the get go. Reborns were aborted using a futuristic brain scrambling gun that didn't hurt the mother, just the baby.I really thought about this premise and asked friends their thoughts about it. If you KNEW you were carrying John Wayne Gacy reincarnated, would you abort? The book never deals with the topic of nurture vs. nature and the effects of a loving and attentive family on this baby. Would he grow up to be a degenerate again? In this new world, they didn't have the time, resources or the compassion to care. There was no discussion. There were a number of typos in the book and at one point, a character was named the wrong name but I managed to stay with the story. I did pause though and back up to see if I had missed something. I hadn't. It was just the wrong character. And although I felt Talley's writing was very good, the storyline felt rushed towards the end and I had a hard time continuing my suspension of disbelief during a certain critical moment. But overall, a good story. Talented author.BITERS wasn't bad, but it could've been so much more. The writing was good. The story okay. Zombies aren't generally my thing, but I have read Zombie books that have been fantastic. This was more a character study. I would have liked to have seen it fleshed out more. Although, this is an ongoing series, perhaps there are more entries from Mr. Shannon in this regard that I haven't read.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Post-apocalyptic stories can be a little hit-and-miss, particularly when they involve well-used tropes, but thankfully this double novella works incredibly well. Biters, by Harry Shannon, brings us a post apocalypse ravaged by disease. While never saying as much, the Biters of the title are clearly zombies, with their victims rising to join the horde. Women, medicine and other supplies are traded in this noir-tinged hell, and the story follows Buck Ryan, a drifter who wants to save a former girlfriend from a pitiless existence. He ends up adopting a dog who shows him the meaning of loyalty. It’s extremely well written, and I found myself saying “just one more chapter” every time I needed to put the book down. The characters are well-rounded and plausible, although it’s fair to say the only one who truly had my sympathy was Dog.The Reborn, by Brett J. Talley, takes a different tack, presenting a world following a genetic discovery of reincarnation – criminals are coming back for another crack at life, leading to a program of DNA testing on unborn babies. One such returning criminal is Genghis Khan, and his campaign against humanity leads to nuclear war. Marcus Ryder is a former soldier who loses his job with the police, due to the falling crime rates, and ends up working for an agency who terminate unborn babies who show the same DNA profile as executed criminals. It’s a tense read, and again it had me rapidly clicking through the story long past the point when I should have put the book down. Talley weaves the past and the present into a skilful narrative which unfolds at a good pace. Both novellas are difficult to put down, and if you like well-crafted post-apocalyptic tales then you’d do well to check them out.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    The Reborn is a mesmerizing post-apocalyptic story that captivated me from the start and continues to linger well after I’ve read it. The premise of this story is that through the use of a specific strand of DNA, it has been scientifically proven that reincarnation occurs. Although this seems like it would be a good thing, this causes all hell to break loose. It starts with prisoners being released en masse, society being destroyed, and a person in China who claims to be Genghis Khan reborn who has created an army of followers. Marcus Ryder is the soldier who killed the reborn Khan when the United States went to war with him, the strike that ended the war. He can’t adjust to his new life in an utterly ravaged United States where the entire West Coast has been destroyed by nukes and eventually winds up with an organization called the Shepherds. Now that authorities can identify murderers, rapists, and other criminals before they are born, there job is to eliminate them while they are still in the womb. Except things aren’t all that they seem to be, which leads Marcus into making hard choices.This is one of the most well-conceived and spellbinding post-apocalyptic tales I have ever read. The concept behind it is really neat. The world building is even better. Talley really thought things through in the way he constructed the story. From a purely mechanical standpoint, I like the way he weaved in the backstory. The writing is superb, but I expect no less from Talley, who has established himself as the best new writer I have read in recent years.Also enjoyable are the moral dilemmas that Talley presents. Ostensibly, it would make sense that if you knew that somebody would turn out to be a killer that you should eliminate them before they are born. The problem is that when Marcus and his colleagues are going after pregnant women, it just doesn’t feel right. Of course, things aren’t as they appear. Both Marcus and the tone of the story take a major shift. If I had one complaint, and it’s a minor one, is that there were thousands if not millions of followers of Khan in the US, who out of nowhere turned and began killing friend, family, and neighbor. This didn’t ring true to me. I realize there was once a Civil War, but this was divided along territorial lines and was based on generations of ideology that vastly differed from one part of the country to the other. I didn’t buy that ordinary people in this country would decide to kill their neighbors based off the words of a man thousands of miles away.This was an amazing story, the sort that will make you think long and hard and stay with you well after you read it. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and highly recommended it.Carl Alves - author of Reconquest: Mother Earth
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    I received Biters/The Reborn as part of the early reviewers. I started with Biters by Harry Shannon and was pleasantly surprised. I'm not a zombie fan per se but always like a good post apocalyptic story. For zombies have started to become very cliche. I think the challenge for a writer who wants to explore some very used up territory is to look at in a different way. Now it may be that my film class is looking at film noir but I felt this had the film noir element moving it away from a horror story. Basically it was film noir against the zombie background including most the scenes occurring at night. As I said a pleasant little departure leaving me with the desire to know more about the world Shannon had created. The Reborn by Brett J. Talley had three major plots running through it and personally I felt the story deserved more than the 150 pages it was given. Any of the plots were enough for a novel in their own right exploring the vision of a dystopia. The reader is presented with a group of fanatics going on a killing spree ala Stephen King's The Cell, a post nuclear war America, a warlord bent on world domination and reincarnation/eugenics taken to an extreme. I know I said three the fanatics and the warlord are tied together. I understand that all three have to be present to have the ambiguous ending Talley was going for but it seemed like a lot crammed into what little space it was given. I enjoyed both stories and would probably pick them out as favorites in any post apocalypse anthology they were in. Which leads me to the biggest issue I have with the presentation. $16.00 seems to be a pretty high price for 2 stories topping out at 225 pages. Especially when one story blasts the reader with the idea that there is a pretty nasty world to be explore while the other story leaves the reader wanting the details to the big events barely scratched within the pages.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I received this book freein exchange for a fair and honest review.BitersThe plot is rather slow at first. I mean, while reading the first two chapters I kept wondering : “Ok, what is going on where are the zombies already? “(not that I am a great fan of them) But as the story continued and I began to get to know the main character, Buck, I realized that behind this cruel and somewhat rough exterior is a tender man wanting to love and be loved. Fortunately, the zombies, apart from the gruesome descriptions about human parts flying everywhere in certain scenes (thank goodness there weren’t that many ) are only a means of moving the story forward. The plot is somewhat predictable, although I must admit that there were times that I would like for it to have a different outcome (and others I didn’t since human nature is what it is), I was really pleased with the ending. The best “character” for me is Buck’s companion, a true friend who shows how kindness can change your life(and I won’t reveal why the word character is in quotation marks ). All I can say is that after finishing the book you will be asking for more.The RebornTruly captivating right from the start. The future described is not so far away as we would like to think. A true American hero, Marcus, former military and now police officer, always tries to do what believes is the right thing. But the problem is who he should believe and which side he should choose. And there the reader is standing in front of the same dilemma “Who is really right?” The plot is thickening right from the start, and as each side reveals its own agenda you really can’t say for sure who is the “good guy” and who is the “bad guy”(and don’t think you will be sure, not even at the end). The people in desperate need of peace, but at what cost? At a cost which brought on a new kind of Dictator. A story that at the very end left me with my mouth hanging open, because I REALLY DIDN’T SEE THAT COMING. As history tends to repeat itself, the story of Marcus and The Reborn will leave you with a funny taste of what the world may become. A book that you won’t be able to put down, once you start reading .
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    I can't say I was impressed with either of the stories in this book, but of the two Brett J. Talley's "The Reborn" was by far the better of the two. I'm not enthusiastic about the genre that stresses fantasies about the military experience, or that see a dystopian future as an opportunity for armed heroism. I'm particularly underwhelmed when the narratives offered are so unconvincing in detail and setting. But some people can't seem to get enough of it, and given that this book has generally seemed to receive favorable ratings I guess it's a runaway hit with a variety of reader whom I just don't understand. Neither of the novellas in this volume offer anything in terms of subtlety, and the sole nod to complexity is in "The Reborn", which for a great portion of the work plods along relentlessly with a sort of over-the-top, Starship-Troopers-like envisaging of the need to hunt down the baddies and avenge the shattered world before suddenly providing a sudden plot twist which erases what had become an ever-growing sensation that the author had up until that point been penning little more than a pro-law enforcement political screed moderated negligibly by a vague nod to the moral issues presented by killing fetuses to prevent crime. Actually, the premise of the story, that genetic signatures have confirmed that human souls can be reborn in a secular, nonreligious fashion complete with an ingrained predisposition to engage in crime and that society could be culled of these individuals prior to their being born, much less doing any harm, has a familiar, fairly classic sci-fi edge to it, reminiscent of classic Twilight Zone material. I've never seen the film Gattaca, but from plot descriptions it resonates there as well, and fits soundly in the sci-fi tradition. The problem is the writing style... it's not a polished effort, and the writer doesn't carry his concept well across the page. But for this review, of the 1 1/2 stars I've given the book overall, "The Reborn" accounts for 1 1/2 of them. That leaves "Biters" by Harry Shannon, and the news isn't good. I simply can't recommend it to anyone. A post-apocalyptic world ravaged by zombies, where despite the privations and destruction people seem to have more than adequate supplies of alcohol, gasoline, drugs and ammunition. A strip club with still-lit neon sign as part of the main setting. Gun-toting adventurism and a PTSD-scarred veteran of a main character. The first chapter concluding with the sentence "His penis twitched". A later vivid description of a small dog vacating its bowels, and shortly thereafter returning to a description of flies assembling around what the dog had expelled. Of all the zombie stories on the market, this is one of them. I recommend reading the others either first or instead.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Both of the stories in this Storm Journal double down are worth reading. They are thought provoking well written stories of “What If”…Biters by Harry ShannonHarry Shannon has written a gritty tale of what might happen in the USA if a virus caused major upheaval and an end of the world scenario. Buck Ryan is a survivor and has seen much. He has seen and done much to survive and has hope that this time he might make a good score, take the woman he remembers from his past with him and set up life somewhere for awhile that will be easier than it has been. This tale is of good and evil, right and wrong and includes a dog that is definitely a keeper. Well written, plausible and definitely worth reading, and at the end of the story I was hoping that Buck and Dog would find a safe place to land.The Reborn by Brett J. TalleyThis is another story that deals with life in the USA after a major catastrophe and set of world events occurs that leaves the world and country very different from what it once was. Some of the issues seem straight forward at first but nothing is as it first seems. I wasn’t sure where the story was going at first but as it unfolded I began to wonder more and more about what could happen if the events in the story were to ever take place. I take my hat off to this writer for a good job of writing and the creation of a story that really made me think about a number of issues.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I thoroughly enjoyed these two tales and read them in an evening. Biters breathes an old wild west environment with the classic woman jerks around a man storyline. There is revenge and the recurring theme of "kill it or let it go free". It reminds me of Cormac McCarthy's "The Road" novel. I believe both stories are Young adult and adult friendly. I believe males are a better intended audiance, but I enjoyed it as a female.The second story was about eliminating babies with a bad strain of DNA, a certain genetic marker. The newest member of the division that hunts down runaway girls goes rogue after he realizes that there are two sides to this story, and he isn't sure which one is the truth. Good story.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    This is a review for the ebook containing two rather good dystopian novellas. Unfortunately, in the copy I received they forgot to put a menu in. So you either have to read them in order, or try and find the beginning of the second one yourself. I think with the print version you just turn the book over and read from the back - if that makes any sense.The first novella: Harry Shannon's 'Biters' is a take on the rather overdone - or should that be 'done to death' - genre of zombies. Zombies seem to be everywhere these days - as I suppose they would be. The problem is one gets rather bored by shambling dead things, unless, that is, it's a classic. Like 'Return of the Living Dead' or 'Shaun of the Dead.' Actually, as both of those were films I'm not sure they count. Still, you know what I mean. I hope. 'Biters' isn't a classic, though I could see it being turned into a film. And I could see myself reading it again. Possibly.The second novella, 'The Reborn' by Brett J Talley, is masterful. If you're into really well written dystopian fiction without obvious trope then this is well worth the price of the book. I'd give 'The Reborn' five stars, but as the book has two novellas, as a whole it gets four.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Biters and the Reborn were both interesting novellas I read in a day apiece. Biters was a typical zombie story and reborn was about a cop hunting future criminals. Both were quite good and I would read more books by both authors.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    This review was done as part of the Library Thing Early Reviewers program.This book contained two post-apocalyptic Novellas written by Harry Shannon and by Brett Talley. These are the first works that I have read by either author.The first novella was Biters by Harry Shannon. Overall, I found this novel to be written pretty well. I enjoyed the story line even though there was not a complicated plot. The story is essentially about a man who is trying to make his way through an post-apocalyptic world where most of the human race has been transformed into zombies which the few remaining humans call “biters” because of their insatiable need to eat human flesh.Although the story line is light, the author seems to try and tackle a lot of morality issues. The lead character in the book, Ryan, is often torn about his responsibilities for helping out his fellow humans that are left or just saving his own skin. One of the best parts of the book is the relationship between Ryan and his mangy dog that he finds and calls “dog” so that he does not get too attached to his only friend/companion left in the world.Overall, this book was pretty good. I would like to read more by this author in the future. I would rate this novella as 4 out of 5 stars.The second novella was The Reborn by Brett Talley. I enjoyed reading this book very much. This novella is also about a man named Marcus who has lived through a great war and is now trying to find his way in the aftermath.The author expertly flashes back and forth between the present and the lead up to the great war which has wiped out much of the world's population and left the United States as a totalitarian state. Marcus is a cop that must go out and hunt down "The Reborn." The reborn are thought to be people who have the same genetic make-up of former criminals. Needless to say, there are a lot of morality questions that are brought up in the book.Overall this novella was very good. I thought the author laid down a plausable story about a great war and it's aftermath. The hunting of the reborn was not too over the top. I was kind of surprised that the book's questions made me sit back and think a little bit.I give this novella 4.5 stars. I'm definately going to read past/future works by this author! I highly recommend this book!
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    This review is based on a copy received through the LibraryThing Early Reviewers program.The first novella, Biters, is as tough as nails; Clint Eastwood in a post-apocalyptic nightmare world. Very fast paced, and in your face. Burk, the protagonist, wishes life was a lot simpler. But he learns he has to make more important decisions than just “headshot” or “gut shot”. Who to save and who to leave behind are some of the most important challenges he faces which he dispatches with twitchy certainty.The Reborn - the novella that makes up the last three-quarters of this book, has a more complex plot and an interesting twist ending. Unfortunately, I found it riddled with cliches and the main characters lacked the kind of complexity I need to feel engaged in the story.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    As usual I received this book for free in exchange for a review; this time from a LibraryThing giveaway. Despite that kind consideration I give my scrupulously honest opinions below.To start, I must admit that when I received this book in the mail I was immediately skeptical. I know it's a mortal sin to judge a book by its cover but this one looks rather low-quality and self-published. My doubts deepened as I read 'Biters' and found that the first 10 pages are littered with profound editorial blunders that are exceptionally distracting and clang around the reader's brain like bullets bounding down a drainpipe. However, after a few pages the style and writing do settle down and my doubts were quickly turned to rapt attention. "Biters" is a standard zombie motif with all the usual trappings of this popular theme. The dead are a bit quicker and more clever than those you typically see shambling about but they're essentially the same rotting rogues you've come to know and love from a dozen other books. What sets Shannon's work apart is the brutality of his portrayal. This author holds nothing back and his heroes do what they have to do to survive even if it might not endear them to the reader. Realities are harsh and vividly drawn in a way that I've not seen in any of the other weaker versions of this idea.Talley's "The Reborn" is a complex social allegory on eugenics. The real joy of this novella is that it sums up so wonderfully the moral ambiguity of the idea of picking and choosing our offspring based on their genetics. We see all sides of the argument as Talley very skillfully makes us change our alliance throughout the course of the book and at the end you realize that you've somehow managed to be on every side of the issue at once. Talley's skill is undeniable and for the first time in a long time I found a book that made me regret the necessity of putting it down. Eventually, you have to eat but I have at least discovered that I can cook dinner and read at the same time.In summary, I apologize furiously for my prejudice upon seeing this book in the mail. These stories are exactly the sort of grim, gritty and delightful retelling that make the apocalypse such a giddily popular topic. These two do the end of days justice and then some. Highly recommended from a former skeptic.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    This is a straight forward zombie horror story where Ryan is a war stricken ex solder who still suffers ocd and uses his war experience to live in a stricken world where civilization has ended and only zombies and those who haven't been bitten are at an eternal war where the zombies have to strike out to live and only live humans satiate their appetites and living humans must kill Zombies to avoid being bitten and changed into mindless rotting hulks trying to find someone to dine on. The story becomes a dialogue about the corruption caused by power and the depths that humans will fall when the trappings of civilization evaporate. Interesting play between truly evil women and power hungry men and the loners that move between these two groups. Constant action and maybe much of the salvaging for food is realistic for the purposed environment. No surprise but, the strong survive and thrive and the weak are exploited.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Biters - The Reborn is a book containing two novellas in a post-apocalyptic setting.Biters is a straight Zombie story. Buck Ryan is trying to survive in a world that has passed on. To win back his girlfriend he agrees to do one job for her: Killing her current lover who is on a drug run and splitting the load with her. If only there weren't no Zombies in the way.Biters did not quite convince me as a story. Even though it was entertaining, there were several sentences which disturbed the flow of reading and the story arc wasn't anything out of the ordinary. I give it a 3 out of 5.The Reborn is a post apocalyptic sci-fi thriller. Marcus Ryder returned from the Great War as a secret hero, having killed the oppositions leader with one bullet, however, in a world that no longer knows any crime he soon looses his job. Things start to get interesting, when he is approached by an elite unit whose job it is to find and eradicate reborn murderers to prevent them doing any harm in this life.The Reborn is a great novella. It is well crafted with a solid and intriguing back story, which was gradually revealed throughout the book. Just for this story alone it is worth to get this book. I give it a 5 out of 5.Overall I give this book a rating of 4.5, because The Reborn is the longer story and compensates for the shortcomings of Biters. If you enjoy writings in the vein of Philip K. Dick then you should definitely read The Reborn.

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Biters - The Reborn - Harry Shannon

Biters

JournalStone’s DoubleDown Series, Book IV

By

Harry Shannon

JournalStone

San Francisco

Copyright © 2014 by Harry Shannon

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ISBN: 978-1-940161-54-9  (sc)

ISBN: 978-1-940161-55-6  (ebook)

ISBN: 978-1-940161-56-3  (hc – limited edition)

JournalStone rev. date: April 11, 2014

Library of Congress Control Number: 2013958204

Printed in the United States of America

Cover Design: Denise Daniel

Cover Art: M. Wayne Miller

Edited by: Aaron J. French

For the readers. May it always be a Happy Halloween.

Biters

It Began

The mysterious plague appeared suddenly and spread rapidly. It ravaged the entire United States within a matter of months. Some said Ground Zero was actually the CDC in Atlanta, where a drug-addled scientist had walked out with one solitary microbe on his shoe and ended up murdering most of North America.

The bug was nasty. The infected died at once or were driven mad. These—soon termed Biters—were left ravenous for the flesh of fellow humans. The plague spread by those bites and any other exchange of body fluids. Some even said it mutated and passed through the air, though that was never proven. Whatever it was, it eventually died down and left only the Biters and a few desperate people behind.

It didn’t take long for them to essentially wipe us out.

This story is true. It all happened in Nevada, not long after the end of the Old World. By now the worst of it had come and gone, leaving some scattered survivors, many hiding high in the lonely mountains or way down in the scorching desert, all of them exhausted and frightened. These were panicked people struggling to defend what was left of their small towns. They fought together against the growing horde of ravenous Biters. Sometimes they won, often they lost. The Biters didn’t seem to care one way or the other.

The humans also fought each other. They bickered amongst themselves, while they foraged for ever more scarce supplies; seeking gasoline, weapons, food and medicine. They hunted constantly, tried to plant gardens, but it was never enough. So they stole from each other. They raided abandoned military bases and broke into outlet malls, anything to buy another day, week or month of life.

Folks got ambushed by the Biters on a daily basis. Civilization eroded rapidly. Men killed over some perceived slight, over women, food bars, even harsh words. The women killed just to keep breathing.

Eventually leaders emerged, as they always do, usually only the most ruthless of men. Law and order became a distant memory. Tiny compounds sprang up, surrounded by barbed wire and barricades and stacks of bricks. Towns defended by armed guards with hunting rifles. Life was, as people used to say long ago, particularly nasty, brutal and short.

Still, people adapted. They did what they had to do. And things settled down for a while.

Chapter 1

A beautiful night. Bright stars scattered motionless above the desert, winking like tiny diamonds on black velvet. One wisp of cloud hung from the pale half-moon like a torn silk scarf. Down below sat a lone compound, a safe zone created from an old casino and strip joint once called The Pussy Parlor.

Beyond the tall barbed wire that surrounded those buildings, only darkness and the herds of Biters. The spooked humans clung together, their isolation complete. Nothing was visible for miles but a long string of Christmas bulbs that ran off a sputtering generator. They’d been placed there for security purposes, the melancholy sight dangling from tall poles stuck haphazardly into rocks and dirt.

A cold night. The wind blew around a few clenched fists of dried sage. The air smelled of dust and decay and the growing pile of burned bodies buried just outside the barbed wire. A bored guard with an AK-47 steadily patrolled the inner edge of the security wire surrounding the compound. He wore a bandana over his nose and mouth to cover the stench. As he spotted something down the road, his eyes flinched against the floating dust.

The sentry paused and squinted. Biters ruled the night. There shouldn’t have been people out there, not this far after dark. Maybe he’d imagined it.

No… there, to the north...

White headlights appeared, edging closer. They crept wearily along a desert highway coming from somewhere, leading to nowhere. The tired guard made out just one car, an old Chevy truck. Curious now, he used a pair of NV goggles he’d stolen from a dead soldier years ago. The world went green, black and white. He studied the truck. As it drove closer he eventually made out a single large man hunched over the wheel, apparently alone.

The driver spotted the feeble Christmas lights around the town. He shifted gears and sped up. He peered into the night, relief sweeping over him. From far down the empty road, the darkened compound, with its one strip club sign flickering, waited like the neon maw of a hungry beast. It wasn’t safe, but it was there, and a town meant other human beings.

The guard took off the NV goggles. He whistled for company. Another man joined him. The two waited patiently for the stranger to arrive. They kept their shotguns handy. You could never be too careful.

The old Chevy crawled faster, tires crunching over gravel and dirt as the driver closed in on the corrupt oasis. Inside the vehicle, an ancient cassette deck played an old Randy Travis single. The weary driver wore cowboy boots, a work shirt, torn jeans and a thick belt with an unpolished silver buckle. He was large with bleak eyes and a weathered face. He drove slowly through the threatening dark, on the lookout for Biters. The compound loomed larger as the Chevy truck humped carefully across the railroad tracks. The driver stopped at the gate and kept his hands in sight on the steering wheel.

That’s far enough, called the first guard.

The man put the car in park. He exited the vehicle, still with his hands in sight. What, do I look like a Biter?

The second guard spoke in a reedy tenor. You might have got bit.

Not me, no way. Name is Ryan. I’m just looking for a cold drink and a few supplies.

What you got to trade?

The stranger kept his face blank. Enough.

See any Biters back that way? The first guard relaxed now, letting the shotgun slip a bit as if to signal welcome.

Some, Ryan said. Spotted a decent-sized herd headed west last night, but they were still a long ways off.

We heard about that one. We’re all hoping they don’t spot us.

You going to open up? It’s cold as a cast iron toilet seat out here.

The two sentries exchanged glances. Shrugged. The second opened the wire gate and pulled it aside. The splintering wood and rusty metal hinges screeched like witches burning at the stake. The split gate left two deep trenches in the rocky sand.

The driver got back in the Chevy. The country song played. He drove into the compound, a ragtag collection of thrown together shelters: camping tents, cardboard shipping crates and half-assed wooden shacks. He passed under the familiar red and white neon sign that shrieked NUDE NUDE NUDE NUDE in a gibbering visual loop. Buck Ryan wondered for a moment why they bothered to power it up. He guessed it added both a bit of cheer and some extra light to fight by, should the bad guys storm the fence. Still, it seemed melancholy, ablaze but all alone out here in the darkness.

Ryan parked outside the main building, The Pussy Parlor itself, just as the country song faded into silence. He turned the cassette deck off, left the engine running and sat for a spell. It felt good to be inside the compound, particularly after so much time alone. Outside, a few shapes moved in the shadows, mostly people watching his vehicle with curiosity. A car with gas in it was worth stealing, as Ryan knew all too well, but most folks would rather stay safe behind the wire than take their chances outside. He was a rare breed that way. Most would ponder over stealing the truck but back down. At least that’s what Ryan was counting on. He listened to the rhythm of human life. Garish light and the muffled thumping of dance music filled the air.

He rubbed his short hair for good luck.

It was about that time.

Tires crunching through dry leaves and pebbles, Ryan drove the rest of the way onto the dusty parking lot. He took up two spaces, stopping at a sharp angle so that he could see both entrance and exit clearly.

He turned the engine off and sat listening to it tick in the summer heat, that faint, steady rhythm immediately out of synch with the relentless pulse of that incongruous bass drum. Of all the things to have survived the Old World, a strip club seemed the least appropriate.

A rattling, snuffling sound got his attention. Ryan rolled down the window and caught a whiff of the stench. His hand grabbed for a weapon but relaxed. A few yards to the left of the entrance, someone had locked a Biter inside a large cage. Its hands and feet were free, and it now paced like a panther behind the bars. Ryan had never seen anything quite like this before.

The creature had once been a black man, tall and athletic, dressed in a suit, but the disease and constant fighting had rotted and torn its flesh and clothing and left it one-eyed, ragged and leering. Bloody drool ran from the side of its open mouth. The sight seemed as pathetic as this lonely, isolated bar.

Ryan supposed the angry and frightened townspeople kept the Biter around for revenge purposes. It gave them something to torture. Maybe imprisoning it also lent them some illusion of safety. Who knew? People were stranger than ever now. After all, this was the end of the world. No one had any expertise on how to behave.

Ryan surveyed the rest of the nooks and crannies, soaking up information, locating two forms frantically coupling in the alley and another two on their knees behind the overflowing metal trashcans. He spotted a junky shooting up and a drunk sprawled on the ground.

He carefully studied the entire parking lot in case he had to come out shooting. He counted six cars, five of them badly used and in various states of disrepair. At least someone had a running vehicle, and Ryan figured he knew who that was. It was rare to see a big old Lexus, much less one with barely a scratch on it. The car was still in remarkable shape. Likely the woman was, too.

She was here.

Ryan lit up his last cheap cigar. His own truck was a beat-up white Chevy with a black replacement hood. Money. That had always been the difference between them. She’d always found money.

He smoked, listened, watched and waited. The compound seemed quiet. Nothing felt off about it. The dark hissed no particular warning, though the sight of the caged Biter was rather jarring. Still, he began to relax. Nothing had changed for the human race inside, only on the outside. Smiling, he thought, The asses are on the seats, and the girls are up on the poles. All is right with the world…

BAM! Someone exiting the club slammed the metal door. Buck Ryan felt his pulse jump, and just like that he was back on point, scrambling through the dirt, getting shot at by friendly fire. He remembered a Biter emerging from low in the rocks to grab a guy called Zeke—who was still a boy really—but the Biter grabbed the kid by the leg and bit down hard. Ryan remembered the way Zeke had screamed like a little girl and clutched his wound. Jesus, the way he’d started begging to be shot and not left to turn. But Ryan couldn’t do it, couldn’t shoot the boy right away; he had to watch it happen, just to be sure. And of course it did happen. So fast.

Ryan tightened up sitting there in the truck, willing away the looped sight of that unforgettable moment, the way that young human face had just crumbled into something blank, unknown and evil. God, the boy had just changed. And a few seconds later Ryan’s wickedly clean shot had echoed through the crags of the Utah valley, Zeke’s head gone, the other men still shouting and scrambling through the rocks, Ryan laying down covering fire. It had to be done.

It still felt like murder.

His stomach rolled. Ryan closed his eyes. He saw the quick sparks of flickering muzzles. He heard ghostly rounds peppering the rocks around and behind his weary band of survivors. The Biters had been fucking everywhere around them that day. The experience was long gone but vivid memories ate at his heart, fed on him like the Biter had fed on his companions, one by one until it was all over.

Ryan was the only survivor.

He grunted. The past lived on. His ghosts whispered obscenities in his ear and caressed the nape of his neck. The pictures flickered behind his eyeballs.

Some kind of PTSD shit.

Any loud noise brought those fucking zombie images back, and they just ran through his head like an endless, lurid snippet from a nasty horror movie. The meth he’d done, a relief at first, had just made it worse in the long run. He never touched the stuff these days, but he knew it had left deep trails in his brain’s neural circuits, kind of like claw marks in the gray matter.

He experienced both visual and auditory hallucinations. Even in his waking dreams, Ryan had to take a few deep breaths to calm himself. He did so now and waited it out, like always. Eventually his pulse returned to normal. The flashes of color went away. The awful screams faded. The dark stopped whispering. The Biters all went back beyond the wire.

Except for the one in the cage.

It was eyeing him like he was a rare burger. It seemed wrong in there, obscene somehow. Why keep one captive this way just to torment it? It had already suffered enough.

Kill it or let it go free, Ryan thought. Make up your goddamn mind.

Drained, Buck Ryan flipped his last small cigar out the window. It landed like fireworks, a lawn sprinkler of sparks erupting on the cracked pavement. The night was dry and cold but the days were scorching hot. They left the sage and dirt sucking for moisture that wouldn’t come. The music pounded under the drunken voices like a frantic heartbeat.

Ryan hunched down a bit, slid out the driver’s side quickly to avoid being a target under the overhead light. Never could tell these days, someone might want to take him out just for the Chevy, to steal his weapons and gasoline. People went crazy on a dime. He locked the truck and chained the door.

The guards were still watching him, wondering why he’d frozen in place. He stood up, closed the door and got to his feet, using the car for cover and the brush for concealment. He examined the building. It had been such a long, long time. Had he ever really thought of any of this was fun? He supposed so, back before the end of the Old World. Back when his dick had come to attention over any passing thought of female flesh. Now the sounds and sights of this funky strip joint made him feel hollow inside. Everything had gone to hell yet men were still jerking off over bare tits as if nothing had even changed.

Guess I’m older and wiser.

Funny what a few years and a lot of dying could do.

Ryan walked down the edge of the parking lot, staying well back from the light. The caution born of his PTSD annoyed him sometimes, but it always won out. In the end he’d just found it easier to give in to a habitual paranoia. The Biters were everywhere and so were armed meth heads, thieves and bands of religious fanatics. Anyway, recklessness didn’t pay. Ever. Caution always did.

The guards were still watching. He kept moving.

The rolling impact of his work boots on cement and gravel rasped loudly in his ears. The drums boomed. He could hear the shouts and whistles coming from inside. He sped up as he passed the caged Biter. It moaned with hunger and reached for him.

Impulsively, Ryan forced himself to stop. He turned and looked the tortured thing in the eye. The bloody socket drooled dark fluid. It reeked of decay. It flinched back as if expecting abuse. Poor bastard, someone should kill him or let him go, Ryan thought again. It looked at him and stopped growling. Ryan studied it for a long time, perhaps hoping to face down some of his own dark memories.

I’m in jail too, Ryan said, for no particular reason.

The Biter gazed back. It stood motionless, head cocked as if listening; then it snarled.

Ryan turned his back and walked on.

He came to the thick metal door. The music was louder now, obnoxious stuff, some kind of old techno fused with heavy metal. Someone had been screwing around with computer samples, someone with little or no talent. Ryan yanked the door open. It moved but no one had been using WD-40 on the ancient hinges. They screamed an electric guitar solo. The sound brought back another kind of memory. Buck Ryan’s mouth twitched and something like a dry grin stalked his face. His penis twitched.

Chapter 2

The Pussy Parlor was rank and unwelcoming, but considering the complete chaos just outside the wire, it felt like a friendly face. It stank worse than ever, with the reek of booze, unwashed bodies and unrequited lust. Hell, people had always smoked their asses off in this part of Nevada, and no one expected to live long enough to die of cancer anymore, so the air was as thick and cloudy as chicken broth.

Ryan watched, surveying the room, letting his vision adjust. He blinked his eyes rapidly to gain night vision, an old Army trick. Time had frozen here; you could almost forget the world had ended. Almost, but not quite.

One bored girl dangled from a giant barber-striped pole, shaking her ass for a few drunken males. One young kid seemed pretty embarrassed. His face was as red as a ripe tomato. The bleached-blonde dancer was working it hard, her eyes focused on looking for life in another galaxy. She wore a G-string thong and the carpet didn’t match the drapes. Ryan watched her gyrating thin buttocks, but even after so long without a female, the effect was more sad than stimulating.

He walked behind two drunken truckers and stood back to let a topless waitress pass. Her wide brown eyes appeared dulled by pills, alcohol abuse, fear of the unknown and a mindless rage. Her expression reminded Ryan of the Biter in the cage outside.

The girl ignored him, balancing a tray full of trembling drinks

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