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When Johnny Comes Marching Home Again: Three Soldiers, Three Wars
When Johnny Comes Marching Home Again: Three Soldiers, Three Wars
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When Johnny Comes Marching Home Again spotlights the stories of three soldiers in three wars.

Three soldiers. Each someone's Johnny. Father, son. Brother, cousin. Husband, lover. Just plain buddy.



Three conflicts. Civil War, pitting brother against brother, North against South, Yank against Johnny Reb. Vietnam War, North-South strife with Orwellian overtones. War on Terror, Afghanistan theater.



Three life-and-death stories in screenplay format:



"Owl Creek Bridge," based on the Civil War stories of Ambrose Bierce, and expanded to feature-film length by incorporating the Siege of Vicksburg.



"Sleeping With Charlie," adapted from the author's short story "Cu Chi."



"Dawn's Early Light," P.O.W. drama inspired by a Leo Tolstoy tale and a cinematic rendition thereof by Sergei Bodrov Senior.

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Release dateAug 8, 2005
ISBN9780595806522
When Johnny Comes Marching Home Again: Three Soldiers, Three Wars
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Littlebear Productions

Gregory G. Sarno earned a J.D. from Boalt Hall School of Law, U.C. Berkeley. He has written five screenwriting how-tos for a London-based film journal, www.scriptwritermagazine.com. Nonfiction books include Contemporizing the Classics: Poe, Shakespeare, Doyle; Threshold: Scripting a Coming-of-Age; and Lights! Camera! Action!: Crafting an Action Script.

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    Contents

    Preface to Second Edition

    Preface to First Edition

    Part One: Civil War

    1. Overture

    2. Owl Creek Bridge

    3. Notes

    Part Two: Vietnam War

    4. Overture

    5. Sleeping With Charlie

    6. Notes

    Part Three: War on Terror

    7. Overture

    8. Dawn’s Early Light

    9. Notes

    Bibliography

    About The Author

    When Johnny comes marching home again,

             Hurrah! hurrah!

    We’ll give him a hearty welcome then,

           Hurrah! hurrah!

    The men will cheer, the boys will shout,

    The ladies, they will all turn out,

    And we’ll all feel gay

    When Johnny comes marching home.

    The old church bell will peal with joy,

           Hurrah! hurrah!

    To welcome home our darling boy,

           Hurrah! hurrah!

    The village lads and lassies say,

    With roses they will strew the way,

    And we’ll all feel gay

    When Johnny comes marching home.

    Get ready for the Jubilee,

           Hurrah! hurrah!

    We’ll give the hero three times three,

           Hurrah! hurrah!

    The laurel wreath is ready now

    To place upon his loyal brow

    And we’ll all feel gay

    When Johnny comes marching home.

    Let love and friendship on that day,

           Hurrah! hurrah!

    Their choicest treasures then display,

           Hurrah! hurrah!

    And let each one perform some part,

    To fill with joy the warrior’s heart,

    And we’ll all feel gay

    When Johnny comes marching home.

    —Patrick S. Gilmore

    (1863)

    PREFACE TO SECOND EDITION

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    Like the first edition, the second spotlights the stories of three Johnnies in screenplay format: Owl Creek Bridge, set in the Civil War; Sleeping With Charlie, set largely in Vietnam; Dawn’s Early Light, set in Afghanistan. The current edition pays greater tribute than its forebear to the source works that inspired the wartime dramas featured herein.

    Chapter 1 reprints Ambrose Bierce’s widely anthologized short story An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge (1890), which suffuses the script that honors its title.

    Chapter 4 debuts the short story Cu Chi, which laid the groundwork for Sleeping With Charlie, and which was incorporated, nearly verbatim, in the author’s novel Solomon’s Bluff.

    Chapter 7 compares the Leo Tolstoy tale and Sergei Bodrov, Sr., film that inspired Dawn’s Early Light.

    The three scripts benefit from fine-tuning that occasions a number of minor changes.

    Although this is not a screenwriting guide, unlike some of the author’s other books, each script is followed by critical notes (Chapters 3, 6, 9) that should help a screenwriter to critique his or her own wartime drama with the objectivity and ruthlessness required for an effective rewrite.

    The engrossing history texts and autobiographical accounts that, hopefully, imbue the scripts with an air of verisimilitude are celebrated in the bibliography. A handful of citations, inadvertently omitted from the first edition, are restored.

    The appendix, excerpting the Vietnam War-era portions of the script Birthmarks, is cut from this volume.

    PREFACE TO FIRST EDITION

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    Herein the stories of three soldiers in three wars.

    Three soldiers. Each someone’s Johnny. Father, son. Brother, cousin. Husband, lover. Just plain buddy.

    Three arenas. The Civil War, pitting North against South, Yank against Johnny Reb. The Vietnam War, North-South strife with Orwellian overtones. The War on Terror, Afghanistan theater.

    Three stories in script format:

    •   Owl Creek Bridge.

    •   Sleeping With Charlie.

    •   Dawn’s Early Light.

    The Civil War drama Owl Creek Bridge draws its lifeblood from Ambrose Bierce’s An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge. Veteran of Shiloh, Bierce wastes precious little ink setting the stage for the action.

    Aman stood upon a railroad bridge in northern Alabama, looking down into the swift water twenty feet below. The man’s hands were behind his back, the wrists bound with a cord. A rope closely encircled his neck. It was attached to a stout cross-timber above his head and the slack fell to the level of his knees. Some loose boards laid upon the sleepers supporting the metals of the railway supplied a footing for him and his executioners.

    Robert Enrico’s La Riviere du Hibou

    AKA

    An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge won an Academy Award in 1963 for best live-action short. The present script, aspiring to feature length, blends elements from the siege of Vicksburg, as well as other testimonials by Bierce, notably The Coup de Grâce and The Affair at Coulter’s Notch.

    Sleeping With Charlie covers the aftermath of a Vietnam Vet’s service with the First Cav and Tropic Lightning—and the horrific event that caused his apparent soullessness. The script issues from two chapters of the author’s novel Solomon’s Bluff.

    Dawn’s Early Light was inspired by Sergei Bodrov Senior’s Kavkazskij Plennik [Prisoner of the Mountains] and its uncredited source, Leo Tolstoy’s A Prisoner in the Caucasus. In the prose original, Abdul Murat commutes a debt by taking custody of two captured Russian soldiers, whom he plans to ransom for lucre; Murat’s daughter Dina helps one soldier to flee, while the second soldier buys his freedom by arranging payment of the ransom.

    Set in Chechnya, Bodrov’s film embraces a host of plot changes. Murat ambushes two soldiers, whom he seeks to exchange for his captive son. One soldier’s throat is slit after short-lived flight, as reprisal for slaying a shepherd. P.O.W. swap implodes when Murat’s son dies trying to bolt. Dina offers means of escape to the second soldier, Vanya (played by the late Sergei Bodrov Junior). Vanya refuses to leave, fearful of the repercussions to Dina. Seemingly intent on vengeance, Murat ushers Vanya past a graveyard, firing wide and thereby granting reprieve. Vanya tries, to no avail, to flag down Russian helicopters and prevent them from rocketing the village as payback.

    Galvanized by the Tolstoy/Bodrov gems, Dawn’s Early Light resets the P.O.W. drama in Afghanistan’s Panjshir Valley. Wholesale changes ensue. American soldiers replace Russians; Tajik Mujahideen supplant Chechens. The cast expands to nourish several subplots, and Dina transmutes from Murat’s 13-year-old daughter into an adult Afghan American niece, Laili.

    The appendix* excerpts Birthmarks, contemporary thriller with lengthy flashback to one Marine’s stint in the Vietnam War (American War in Hanoi/Ho Chi Minh City). The excerpt intimates the ripple effects of a Dear John sent to a combat zone.

    The title of this volume comes from a Civil War-era song by Patrick Sarsfield Gilmore (composed, according to some sources, under the pseudonym Louis Lambert). Born on Christmas Day 1829 in Ireland, Gilmore emigrated to the U.S.A. two decades later. He performed as regimental bandleader for the 24th Massachusetts Infantry. Reportedly, Gilmore and his wards served as stretcher-bearers at Bull Run, Antietam, Gettysburg, and other bloodbaths.

    More than one title pays homage to the lyrics of Gilmore’s anthem. Take Dixon Wecter’s When Johnny Comes Marching Home (1944), which considers the status of returning vets when the guns fall silent. Professor Wecter observes:

    Generations of Americans, under the ambivalence of war-and-peace, have treated the soldier with fickleness—hailing him as a hero and then as a nuisance, a suspicious rather seedy character like a broken-down jockey or prizefighter.

    Witness, too, Mildred Aldrich’s When Johnny Comes Marching Home (1919), epistolary reportage from France during the Great War. Writes Aldrich:

    Johnny and his family tangoed, and fox-trotted, and turkey-trotted, and gambled, and strutted, each after his own self-centered interests, or tried, in his undisciplined way, to get on, or was leisurely happy according to his class, until the flag was unfurled, and all Americans, equal in service under the colours, became brothers of one family. I am wondering… if Johnny, who is the son of the nation, in his uniform under the flag for which he is ready to die, will be—if he lives—still the beloved son of the nation when he strips that uniform off?

    What awaits Johnny back home? asks Aldrich.

    Will he tango and loaf and once more think only of himself? I doubt it. Even if, in the first joy of his discharge and of his getting that uniform off—it is so unbecoming—he may for a moment seem unchanged; if for a brief space he longs to roll like a dog just unchained, and to rush about madly in pure delight of liberty, I have a conviction that he will carry home with him something beside the kit he brought over-seas, and I believe that these boys who, in the next decade, are to rule the country will soon be heard from and felt. It will take a bit of time for him to shake down, but if, When Johnny comes marching home again, he does not carry with him the soul he has found, in so many cases, over here, it will be so much the worse for all the world and fatal for the States.

    Prescient words in 1919. Prescient words now.

    A parting thought. That the three stories told here involve male protago- nists entails no slight to womankind, who have served honorably as nurse, spy, comrade in arms. Women’s heroics on the battlefield are well documented. See, for instance, DeAnne Blanton and Lauren M. Cook, They Fought Like Demons: Women Soldiers in the American Civil War (Baton Rouge: Louisiana State University Press, 2002); Maj. Gen. Jeanne Holm, USAF (Ret.), Women in the Military: An Unfinished Revolution (Novato: Presidio Press, 1982);

    Keith Walker, A Piece of My Heart: The Stories of Twenty-Six American Women Who Served in Vietnam (Novato: Presidio Press, 1985); Richard Worth, Women in Combat: The Battle for Equality (Springfield: Enslow Publishers, 1999); Karen Zeinert, Those Courageous Women of the Civil War (Brookfield: Millbrook Press, 1998).

    Part One

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    CIVIL WAR

    CHAPTER 1

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    OVERTURE

    Ambrose Bierce’s short story An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge (1890), primary source for the script reflecting its name, appears on the following pages.

    I

    A man stood upon a railroad bridge in northern Alabama, looking down into the swift water twenty feet below. The man’s hands were behind his back, the wrists bound with a cord. A rope closely encircled his neck. It was attached to a stout cross-timber above his head and the slack fell to the level of his knees. Some loose boards laid upon the sleepers supporting the metals of the railway supplied a footing for him and his executioners—two private soldiers of the Federal army, directed by a sergeant who in civil life may have been a deputy sheriff. At a short remove upon the same temporary platform was an officer in the uniform of his rank, armed. He was a captain. A sentinel at each end of the bridge stood with his rifle in the position known as support, that is to say, vertical in front of the left shoulder, the hammer resting on the forearm thrown straight across the chest—a formal and unnatural position, enforcing an erect carriage of the body. It did not appear to be the duty of these two men to know what was occurring at the centre of the bridge; they merely blockaded the two ends of the foot planking that traversed it.

    Beyond one of the sentinels nobody was in sight; the railroad ran straight away into a forest for a hundred yards, then, curving, was lost to view. Doubtless there was an outpost farther along. The other bank of the stream was open ground—a gentle acclivity topped with a stockade of vertical tree trunks, loopholed for rifles, with a single embrasure through which protruded the muzzle of a brass cannon commanding the bridge. Midway of the slope between bridge and fort were the spectators—a single company of infantry in line, at parade rest, the butts of the rifles on the ground, the barrels inclining slightly backward against the right shoulder, the hands crossed upon the stock. A lieutenant stood at the right of the line, the point of his sword upon the ground, his left hand resting upon his right. Excepting the group of four at the centre of the bridge, not a man moved. The company faced the bridge, staring stonily, motionless. The sentinels, facing the banks of the stream, might have been statues to adorn the bridge. The captain stood with folded arms, silent, observing the work of his subordinates, but making no sign. Death is a digni- tary who when he comes announced is to be received with formal manifesta- tions of respect, even by those most familiar with him. In the code of military etiquette silence and fixity are forms of deference.

    The man who was engaged in being hanged was apparently about thirty- five years of age. He was a civilian, if one might judge from his habit, which was that of a planter. His features were good—a straight nose, firm mouth, broad forehead, from which his long, dark hair was combed straight back, falling behind his ears to the collar of his well-fitting frock-coat. He wore a

    mustache and pointed beard, but no whiskers; his eyes were large and dark gray, and had a kindly expression which one would hardly have expected in one whose neck was in the hemp. Evidently this was no vulgar assassin. The liberal military code makes provision for hanging many kinds of persons, and gentlemen are not excluded.

    The preparations being complete, the two private soldiers stepped aside and each drew away the plank upon which he had been standing. The sergeant turned to the captain, saluted and placed himself immediately behind that offi- cer, who in turn moved apart one pace. These movements left the condemned man and the sergeant standing on the two ends of the same plank, which spanned three of the cross-ties of the bridge. The end upon which the civilian stood almost, but not quite, reached a fourth. This plank had been held in place by the weight of the captain; it was now held by that of the sergeant. At a signal from the former the latter would step aside, the plank would tilt and the con- demned man go down between two ties. The arrangement commended itself to his judgment as simple and effective. His face had not been covered nor his eyes bandaged. He looked a moment at his unsteadfast footing, then let his gaze wander to the swirling water of the stream racing madly beneath his feet. A piece of dancing driftwood caught his attention and his eyes followed it down the current. How slowly it appeared to move! What a sluggish stream!

    He closed his eyes in order to fix his last thoughts upon his wife and chil- dren. The water, touched to gold by the early sun, the brooding mists under the banks at some distance down the stream, the fort, the soldiers, the piece of drift—all had distracted him. And now he became conscious of a new distur- bance. Striking through the thought of his dear ones was a sound which he could neither ignore nor understand, a sharp, distinct, metallic percussion like the stroke of a blacksmith’s hammer upon the anvil; it had the same ringing quality. He wondered what it was, and whether immeasurably distant or near by—it seemed both. Its recurrence was regular, but as slow as the tolling of a death knell. He awaited each stroke with impatience and—he knew not why— apprehension. The intervals of silence grew progressively longer; the delays became maddening. With their greater infrequency the sounds increased in strength and sharpness. They hurt his ear like the thrust of a knife; he feared he would shriek. What he heard was the ticking of his watch.

    He unclosed his eyes and saw again the water below him. If I could free my hands, he thought, I might throw off the noose and spring into the stream. By diving I could evade the bullets and, swimming vigorously, reach the bank, take to the woods and get away home. My home, thank God, is as yet outside their lines; my wife and little ones are still beyond the invader’s farthest advance.

    As these thoughts, which have here to be set down in words, were flashed into the doomed man’s brain rather than evolved from it the captain nodded to the sergeant. The sergeant stepped aside.

    II

    Peyton Farquhar was a well-to-do planter, of an old and highly respected Alabama family. Being a slave owner and like other slave owners a politician he was naturally an original secessionist and ardently devoted to the Southern cause. Circumstances of an imperious nature, which it is unnecessary to relate here, had prevented him from taking service with the gallant army that had fought the disastrous campaigns ending with the fall of Corinth, and he chafed under the inglorious restraint, longing for the release of his energies, the larger life of the soldier, the opportunity for distinction. That opportunity, he felt, would come, as it comes to all in war time. Meanwhile he did what he could. No service was too humble for him to perform in aid of the South, no adven- ture too perilous for him to undertake if consistent with the character of a civilian who was at heart a soldier, and who in good faith and without too much qualification assented to at least a part of the frankly villainous dictum that all is fair in love and war.

    One evening while Farquhar and his wife were sitting on a rustic bench near the entrance to his grounds, a gray-clad soldier rode up to the gate and asked for a drink of water. Mrs. Farquhar was only too happy to serve him with her own white hands. While she was fetching the water her husband approached the dusty horseman and inquired eagerly for news from the front.

    The Yanks are repairing the railroads, said the man, and are getting ready for another advance. They have reached the Owl Creek bridge, put it in order and built a stockade on the north bank. The commandant has issued an order, which is posted everywhere, declaring that any civilian caught interfer- ing with the railroad, its bridges, tunnels or trains will be summarily hanged. I saw the order.

    How far is it to the Owl Creek bridge? Farquhar asked.

    About thirty miles.

    Is there no force on this side of the creek?

    Only a picket post half a mile out, on the railroad, and a single sentinel at this end of the bridge.

    Suppose a man—a civilian and student of hanging—should elude the picket post and perhaps get the better of the sentinel, said Farquhar, smiling, what could he accomplish?

    The soldier reflected. I was there a month ago, he replied. I observed that the flood of last winter had lodged a great quantity of driftwood against the wooden pier at this end of the bridge. It is now dry and would burn like tow.

    The lady had now brought the water, which the soldier drank. He thanked her ceremoniously, bowed to her husband and rode away. An hour later, after nightfall, he repassed the plantation, going northward in the direction from which he had come. He was a Federal scout.

    III

    As Peyton Farquhar fell straight downward through the bridge he lost con- sciousness and was as one already dead. From this state he was awakened— ages later, it seemed to him—by the pain of a sharp pressure upon his throat, followed by a sense of suffocation. Keen, poignant agonies seemed to shoot from his neck downward through every fibre of his body and limbs. These pains appeared to flash along well-defined lines of ramification and to beat with an inconceivably rapid periodicity. They seemed like streams of pulsat- ing fire heating him to an intolerable temperature. As to his head, he was con- scious of nothing but a feeling of fulness—of congestion. These sensations were unaccompanied by thought. The intellectual part of his nature was already effaced; he had power only to feel, and feeling was torment. He was conscious of motion. Encompassed in a luminous cloud, of which he was now merely the fiery heart, without material substance, he swung through unthink- able arcs of oscillation, like a vast pendulum. Then all at once, with terrible suddenness, the light about him shot upward with the noise of a loud plash; a frightful roaring was in his ears, and all was cold and dark. The power of thought was restored; he knew that the rope had broken and he had fallen into the stream. There was no additional strangulation; the noose about his neck was already suffocating him and kept the water from his lungs. To die of hang- ing at the bottom of a river!—the idea seemed to him ludicrous. He opened his eyes in the darkness and saw above him a gleam of light, but how distant, how inaccessible! He was still sinking, for the light became fainter and fainter until it was a mere glimmer. Then it began to grow and brighten, and he knew that he was rising toward the surface—knew it with reluctance, for he was now very comfortable. To be hanged and drowned, he thought, that is not so bad; but I do not wish to be shot. No; I will not be shot; that is not fair.

    He was not conscious of an effort, but a sharp pain in his wrist apprised him that he was trying to free his hands. He gave the struggle his attention, as an idler might observe the feat of a juggler, without interest in the outcome. What

    splendid effort!—what magnificent,

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