Catherine Anderson September 19, 2012 Annotated Bibliography Cover #1 What was challenging about this first draft

was understanding the way some of the sources were writing. For example, I used one online journal of an experiment conducted on sleep. These types of articles are typically read by other researchers or scientists and are written in a way that they understand. Being an average college student, I had a difficulty following along with what the author was saying. Other than that I found this assignment to be relatively easy. Im not quite sure how my annotations could be improved I havent seen any other annotation so Im still unfamiliar with them. I think the writing is well organized and easily understandable. I summarized each source and talked about their credibility. However, I did not talk about how they could be specifically relevant to my research. I believe my first annotation is the best. The book is a little older and is denser than books a typically read so I am proud that I was able to understand it. I feel like this annotation provides a good summary for the sections of the books that pertain to my research.