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Think of it as your guide to fulfilling requirements on the rubric. SO helpful, right?! Right. Moral Journey Paper Self-Editing Sheet Indicate whether your paper fulfills the following criteria. (C) completely; (S) somewhat; (N) not at all. After you indicate your answer. Move on to your strategies for improvements. It is in your best interest to be as thorough and specific as possible.
_____ Begins with a strong introduction and draws your reader into the story with a scene, a conversation, an event, etc. _____ Appeals to the sensespaints a picture of your story by describing smell, sight, taste, feel, and sound _____ Answers who, what, where, when, why and how, and discusses specifics to draw reader into the story more fully _____ Provides a slice of life and fleshes out details by describing people, places, and events _____ Uses strong verbs and allows your sentences to pivot on strong verbs instead of too many adjectivestip: highlight verbs that sound too plain _____ Uses dialogue where appropriate to bring scene to life _____ Punctuates dialogue correctly _____ Voice comes through to show personality in word choice, selection of topics, and descriptions _____ Builds characters thoroughly by showing mannerisms, physical features, etc. _____ Connects ideas clearly and logically for a fluent paper _____ Is clear in phrasing and ideas to communicate message of story _____ Message of story is apparent _____ Conclusion of story is effective in wrapping up ideas and images throughout _____ Spelling and grammar correct _____ Reflection is effective in showing what you have learned
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