Feedback of Rough Edit Pros: Font effects work well Camera running with SFX done effectively Panning

ively Panning does well to show loneliness Score was a brilliant choice, creates tension Girl running is disorientating which fits genre Excellent disorientating editing of the girlrunning Framing of the shot from inside the house iseffective Panning creates tension The title at the end works well The flicker of the titles is disorientating Titles fit the genre well Shaking camera makes it surreal The girls breathing sounds good

Cons: Too many establishing shots Some of the panning shots are jerky Would be more effective with foleys The second landscape shot is to repetitive Adjust the volume on the flash backs as the boycannot be heard Try to get the title to come up on the beat of the score Only two titles are animated, maybe they should all be? The effect on the flash backs needs to be adjusted Title should fade or be brought up quickly