June ______, 2009

Dear _________________________________,

Here is some feedback on your research-based essay:

• I believe the writing you did matches your thesis statement. Yes No
• I think all of your paragraphs are about one idea. Yes No
○ Body Paragraph #1 made sense to me. Yes No
○ Body Paragraph #2 made sense to me. Yes No
○ Body Paragraph #3 made sense to me. Yes No
• I felt you provided factual information in:
○ Body Paragraph #1 Yes No
○ Body Paragraph #2 Yes No
○ Body Paragraph #3 Yes No
• I thought you provided a lot of specific information. Yes No
• I noticed that you spelled most words correctly. Yes No
• I found your piece easy to read (your conventions were good). Yes No

Yours truly,

Ms. Shubitz