FeedbackGood pointsThe lip reading was well synced together and the storyline of the narrative fitted well

with the song The black and white effects on the flashbacks made it clear which was the story and which was the man singing The contrast between the flashbacks and the artist singing really works The fades on the cutaways keep the story going and make it interesting The guy who is singing is good at personating a singer The use of light fits into the tone of the song well It looked professional

Improvements-

Some parts are a little bit shaky, but it doesnt really affect the quality so much

Some of the camera work is poorer quality than others but that might have something to do with the internet connection