TOM

I adore the pictures of old Fords your work is visually

very pleasing with a good combination of text & photos. I was very pleased to see that you cited your sources and credited your photos this is excellent. I think that picking a particular model of car and concentrating on its development through the decades was a clever idea, and made your project focused and interesting. o improve your work further, you could add your own analysis and opinion as a conclusion! "hat are the most important developments over the years# $ow are things better now than in the past# $ow has technology influenced the manufacture of the cars# %rs %onaghan 2 x MP CLASS COMMENTS: I like how you did today&s cars, and cars in the '(s, )(s, *(s, +(s and ,(s. %aybe do your handwriting neater. Michael -ce my dad would love this. Eve /ood detail and fantastic facts. 0eater writing. Megan My comment: