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Draft script Scene 1 [Outside wylde green train station] [No speech for the first few minutes,

you see jack spot a deal happening with two drug dealers a few yards down the road.] Vic Is it all there? Anon dealer: Yeah its here. [Hands over a sample, Vic takes a boost] Vic- Yeah thats sweet. [Vic hands over the money and the dealer begins to count it] Anon dealer- Youre short, wheres the rest? Vic Tell ray hell have it tomorrow. Anon dealer- Youre taking the piss now Vic...You best have that money. [Vic nods nervously and the dealer drives away] [Cuts to Jack watching on, you see how he contemplates whether to steal off the dealer. Jack puts his hood up and remains hidden. A few moments later jack begins to follow Vic. Vic picks up his phone and rings Eddie] Vic- Alright Ed Ive got the gear (short pause) yeah its all here, Ill be there in 10 (pause) sound. [Vic puts his phone away and continues to walk, jack eyes opportunity to swipe the drugs as you see him sneaking upon Vic via an over the shoulder shot, jack grabs the bag but Vic struggles and holds on. To get away jack punches him in the face and gets away with the drugs] Vic- Oi kid, youre dead! [Gets up, Punches the wall and shouts in anger]

Scene 2 [Starts off with an establishing shot of the council estate, you then see Jack holding the bag as he walks towards where he lives. Jack is then seen jogging past where he runs to Bens house. He bangs several times on the door] Jack: BEN... LET ME IN. [Ben comes to the door and lets in an out of breath Jack. He immediately walks past Ben and sits down in the living room, where Shaun is also sat] Ben: Whats happened? Shaun: Jack? [Jack pulls the bag from his shoulder and opens it up, revealing the bag of drugs to his friends, Jack laughs where as Ben and Shaun looks on in shock]

Shaun: Where the fuck did you find this? Jack: My mate sorted me out. Scene 3 (Jack Taken) [Jack is badly beaten and we see him being dragged along the floor by Eddie as they leave the flat. Vic is following behind Eddie while pointing the gun at Ben and Shaun to ensure they do not follow and try and help jack] Vic- You two stay here! (Pointing gun directly at them) And you might just see your friend alive! [Vic leaves the building and walks towards the car. Eddie has jack by the car boot, Vic hits jack around the head with the gun to knock him out and Eddie tapes his mouth up, together they throw him in the boot and the car wheel spins of quickly] [Ben and Shaun run out the building to only see the car speed off with their friend jack in the boot] Ben- ARGH! [Kicks a can on the floor and punches the wall] only jack would pull something like this the tool Shaun- Ben! Whats done is done, what we gonna do about it? Ben- were gonna find them and were gonna hurt them, you hear me? Shaun- I hear you Ben but is Eddie! Youll know what hell do to us Ben- oh so you just gonna turn your back on jack then Shaun yeah that how it is? Shaun- thats not what I said Ben, what Im saying is Eddie will kill us, we need a plan {Ben interrupts} Ben- not if we beat him too it [Ben and Shaun go back up stairs to the flat Ben pulls up the carpet in the corner of his room and removes a large rectangular box.] Ben- Shaun remember when I told you I havent been all that truthful about my past? Shaun- Yeah what about it {Ben removes a black handgun from the box} Ben- I told you it was true Shaun, thats why Im, not scared of Eddie or Vic there nothing Shaun, Ive dealt with much bigger and badder dealers trust me Shaun- I always knew you werent right in the head Ben you mad head {Ben Smiles, and looks at Shaun} Ben- You ready or what Shaun- Lets av them {See Ben and Shaun leave the flat and shut the door behind them}

Scene 4 [Cut scene will show the pair of kidnappers dragging Jack out of the boot of their car in a completely unknown location] Vic- Alright you grab his legs Eddie- Fat bastard aint he [The pair drag Jacks body into the abandoned location and tie him to the chair, and begin having a serious talk with one another. You cant hear what they are saying but as the still shot stays on Jack who is clearly in a very bad state, you see that they both seem very worried about something.] Jack- [Stuttering due to his bad state] waaa what are you going to do with me? Youve got what you need Eddie- Never you fackin mind Vic What are we actually going to do with him, Eddie? Eddie Vic go check his pockets and give us his phone [Vic rummages through jacks pockets and pulls out his phone and hands it to Eddie] Eddie- lets give ya mates a call and see how much they want you back aye [Eddie calls Bens phone, en answers angrily and is instantly looking to seek revenge but in reply, knowing that the boys are not well off at all and are very out of their depth in the situation they have found themselves in, Eddie gives them an ultimatum; 30,000 in 24 hours or Jack dies.] Ben whatcha mean 30 grand, where we gonna find that sorta money on such short notice Eddie- not my problem, your mate shoulda thought about that before he decided to rob us, youve got 24 hours son [Eddie puts the phone down, Jack soon becomes very agitated as he knows the boys dont have that sort of money and he comes to the realisation that he may end up dead]

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