Film title: Recollection

Genre(s): Mystery/drama/thriller Target audience: Male, 35-55 years old, assigned/mainstream psychographics

Focus Comments Targets
Cinematography I like the split-screen, really conventional of
mystery/thriller genre.
The audience are intrigued as to whats going on has
you on the edge of your seat.

Could add some more camera movement.
Appropriate pace and content Fast pace throughout conventional

Gets a little confusing mid-way through perhaps add
some dialogue.
Reduce blank gap midway through slightly.

Character representations Good main character is apparent from the start.
Other characters are left down to the imagination.

Could represent secondary characters a little clearer
maybe through the use of dialogue.
Targeting the audience Audience targeted well thrillers are usually targeted
at males.
Storyline will appeal to psychographics.

Consider a secondary target audience perhaps.
Dialogue No dialogue.

Add some dialogue.
Music/sound effects Sound effects are very effective, especially the heavy
breathing conventional.

N/a
Editing Transitions are in appropriate places the struggle of
remembering is apparent.

Could have some snappy, cut transitions to make it
more conventional of thriller genre.

Additional focus 1: Shot variety Shot variation is good from full screen to split-
screen.

Film from the point-of-view of main character,
through his eyes.
Additional focus 2: Timing of shots w/ music Music and sound fit well together.

N/a