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Despite this, I did not feel challenged or inspired until I studied physics in senior high
school. With my fathers help, I delved into the minutiae of physics principles. My
father ignited my interest by illustrating complex theories by describing their practical
applications in diverse fields, such as the aerospace or auto industries. Inspired by
these practical applications, I decided to delve deeper through my undergraduate
studies at Huazhong University of Science and Technology. I declared my major in
Electrical Engineering to pursue research, projects, and further study in the subspecialty that interests me most.
Aware of the intense demand for well-rounded engineers, I pursued projects focused
on pragmatic social applications. For instance, I garnered support and funding for
campus programs in electrical engineering through meetings with CEOs of electrical
companies. Furthermore, I did research in audio systems and electrical vehicles to
enhance my knowledge, skills, and abilities in real-world contexts. Studying abroad
will afford me many opportunities in the social sphere that are otherwise unavailable
in China, and I look forward to discovering these applications and exploring my
passions.
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Comment [5]: Not celebrated.
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Comment [6]: Redundant. Edited.
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