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Comments: On what two or three areas do you think this writer needs to focus before submitting this document?
Your evaluation memo is very solid: concise, to the point, and gives a good overview of the iFixit experience. The only thing I would
say could be improved (and this is a minor tweak so it might not be worth the trouble of editing and re-uploading the document) would
be the last paragraph: the shift into I from using we is stands out (The syllabus could include a better description of each of the
positions, and I can really only think of this as a way to improve the project on Ms. Bruces part) and it would be more professional
to refer to Dr. Bruce as Dr. Bruce, not Ms. Bruce. Other than that, good job on this (and the rest of your Weebly site, its very well
done)!