How Immigrants Affect Texas

Economy
by Cruz Sanchez

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Comment 2
T his is a good idea, Cruz, but you must work on presenting an unbiased report.

Comment 3
Do not use the degrading labels that have been applied to immigrants, such as "the

undocumented" and "illegals."