In the feasibility study by the Accounting Management students entitled,

Establishment of BatStateU Travel and Tours in Batangas State

University Main

Campus I, the paper itself is indeed a helpful kind of service not just to the Borbonians
but as well as the future guests and incoming students and employees who are willing
to be part of the institution. As a new critique, I must say that their proposed idea is
effective and essential so that every trip would be purposeful to all.
The title itself lacks the company name; the rest of it is direct to the service idea.
On the other hand, the Table of Contents lack dots before the page number. Moreover,
they started their page number 1 in Summary of Project. Lastly, their List of Tables
doesnt have pages on it.
Chapter one, specifically the Background of the Study is simple yet an
enthusiastic introduction. However, it lacks impact to the readers. I suggest a more
fascinating and intriguing lead because from the title, the objective is so obvious so it
would be more compelling if they had insight at least a paragraph of

successful

agencies and how their version would be better than them. Moreover, they should
observe the redundancy of proper nouns, the correct pattern and tenses of the verb.
Also, they should have stated that it as the Phil. Tourism Code instead.
The objectives are straightforward. They determined what to look forward to in
the next chapters. Meanwhile, the Scope and Limitations of the Study proved the
validity of the feasibility. The estimations and the knowledgeable respondents were cited
which includes the students and faculty and mentioned that it doesnt include the

integrated school. Finally, the Definition of the Terms corner is composed of

comprehensive list of jargons which are explained well by the proponents. They even
quoted those theoretical definitions and manage to include the operational definitions at
the same time.
Overall, the proponents mostly followed the rules in these first parts of the
feasibility. Though they lack some information, they still maintain the essence of the
paper regarding to the service which might give a huge market to the institution.