Name:MollyFenn

Task

Response

T+/T

Levitation
YowaYowaArtistpage
1stresponce
2ndresponse

Anexcellentstartwelldoneyouhave
demonstratedexcellentunderstandingofthe
process.YouranalysisonYowaYowacould
bealittlemoreindepth
YourfirstsetofobservationaregoodsI
particularlylikethewalkingintheairimages.

Zoomblur
Artistpage
1stresponse
2ndresponse
Photoshopresponse

Youdemonstrateaverygoodunderstanding
ofthetechniquebothvisuallyandinwritten
form.HoweverIwouldliketoseeyou
comparingyourworkwithother
photographersthathaveusedthistechnique.
Thenightshotsintakenofcarsare
particularlystrong

Longexposure
FrancescaWoodmanArtistpage
1stresponse
2ndresponse
Photoshopghostimage

Boththepracticalandwrittenworkshows
outstandingunderstandingoftheprocess.
Theimagesthatyouhaveanalysedarevery
indepthbutiwouldlikeyoutomake
comparisontoyourownvisualpractise.
Thephotoshopimageisexcellentandshows
yourstronggraspofphotoshoptechnique.

Lightpainting
MichealBosankoArtistpage
1stresponse
2ndresponse
Photoshopresponce.

BothYourclassworkandHomework
responsesareexcellentandshowagood
understandingofthetechnique.Iparticularly
liketheglowingchairithasrealimpact.
Howeverasyoumustanalysetwoof
Bossankoimagesandmakeconnectionswith
yourownvisualpractise.

Welldoneanexcellentsetofimagesthat
workreallywelltogether.

FinalPiece

WAG:B:

FinalComment:

Target:A

WelldoneMollyaverygoodprojectpleasereadthecommentsaboveandmakethenecessarychangestoyour
work.