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I. Introduction
A. Background(ProvideBackgroundinformationforyourtopic)
1. HookIfyou'vebeendrivingforalittlewhileandnothing'shappenedto
youyetandyou'vebeentextinganddrivingyouthink,'Ohnothing's
goingtohappen.'Butallittakesisanaccidenthappeningwithoneofyour
friendsorGodforbid,somethinghappeningtoyou,toreallygiveyoua
wakeupcall.
2. BackgroundStudiesshowthatdriverswhoretrieveorsendtextmessages
arefourtimesmorelikelytobeinanaccidentseriousenoughtoinjure
themselvesand/orothers.
Talkingonacellphonewhiledrivingcanmake
ayoungdriversreactiontimeasslowasthatofa70yearold.
Ofallcell
phonerelatedtasksincludingtalking,dialing,orreachingforthephone
textingwhiledrivingisthemostdangerous.AccordingtotheNational
HighwayTrafficSafetyAdministration,textingwhiledrivingis
comparabletoconsumingfourbeers.
3. ThesisStatement
Textingwhiledrivingisdangerousbecauseit1)Isa
seriousthreattosociety,2)Isshowntobemoredangerousthandrunk
drivingand3)Itisconsideredbreakingthelaw.

II. Bodyofresearchpaper
A. ThesisSupport#
1. Textingwhiledrivingisadangerbecauseitisathreattosociety.
a. Teendriversages16to19arenearlythreetimesmorelikelythan
driversaged20andoldertobeinafatalcrash
b. In2012,3,328peoplewerekilledincrashesinvolvingadistracted
driver,comparedto3,360in2011.Anadditional,421,000people
wereinjuredinmotorvehiclecrashesinvolvingadistracteddriver
in2012,a9%increasefromthe387,000peopleinjuredin2011
c. (adddetailasnecessary)

B. ThesisSupport#2
1. Textinganddrivingcanbeproventobemoredangerousthandrunk
driving.
a. (FIRES)
b. Morethan3,000teensdieannuallyfromtextingwhiledriving,
comparedtoabout2,700fordrivingundertheinfluenceofalcohol,
accordingtoastudybyCohenChildrensMedicalCenterinNew


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HydePark.
c. Driverswhoaretextingwhilebehindthewheelhavea23%higher
chanceofcausingacrash.
d. (adddetailasnecessary)

C. ThesisSupport#3
1. Textingwhiledrivingisillegal.
a.
Furthermore,itisimportanttorememberthateveninplaces
withoutspecificlawsagainsttextingwhiledriving,doingitstill
mightbreakthelaw.
b. Punishmentsincludefines,whichgrowwithrepeatoffenses,along
withpointsagainstthedriver'slicenseinstateswhichusepoint
systems.
c. Inanylawsuitsstemmingfromanaccident,evidenceoftexting
whiledrivingmay
provenegligence
orrecklessness,whichoften
determinestheoutcomeofanautoinjurylawsuit.
d. (adddetailasnecessary)

D. CounterargumentTextingwhiledrivinglawsarepointless.
1. Mainidea
Eventhoughtextingwhiledrivingisknowntocause
distractionbehindthewheel,makingtextingwhiledrivingillegalwould
notsolvetheproblem.
2. RebuttalTextinganddrivingshouldbeillegalbecauseitisabig
problem.

III.
Conclusion
A. Textinganddrivingshouldnotbedonebecauseitisathreattoothers,more
harmfulthantextinganddriving,andisagainstthelaw.
B. TieThesistopicstogether
1. Textingwhiledrivingisadangerbecauseitisathreattosociety.
2. Textinganddrivingcanbeproventobemoredangerousthandrunk
driving.
3. Textingwhiledrivingisillegal.
C. Concludingthoughts


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