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Hitler rise to power.

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In 1919, Germany signed the Treaty of Versailles. This
made many consequences; as a result, Germany had to pay for
repairs. Nonetheless, the country lost much power and honor.
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What was the state of

Germany prior to Adolf Hitler
coming to power?

Q1 Sentence: After losing World War I the country progressively got increasingly poor.

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forced to sign the Treaty of
Versailles, which officially brought 1919 Germany signs the treaty of
the conflict to a close and imposed
Versailles.
very harsh penalties on Germany. Made many consequences.
The country had to cede some of its
Germany had to pay for repairs.
best industrial territories to the
Lost power and honor
victors, pay huge reparations
(moneys to compensate for the
damages suffered by its
opponents), and overall lost much
power and prestige.
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penalties - consequences
reparations - repairs
prestige - honor

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In 1919, Germany signed the Treaty of

Versailles. This made many consequences; as
a result, Germany **After losing World War I
the country progressively got increasingly
poor. Nonetheless, the country paid huge
reparations and overall lost power and
prestige

The country had to

pay huge reparations
and overall lost much
power and prestige.
huge reparations
and overall lost power
and prestige.
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In 1919, Germany signed the Treaty of Versailles. This made many consequences like huge
reparations and overall losing power and prestige( PG # 21 Don Nardo). As a result, after losing World
War I the country progressively got increasingly poor.
Don Nardo PG # 21

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F Transition Sentence Although Germany was slipping deeper into the depression, it created a chance for a new role as Furher.
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In 1933, both Germany and the United

states were in the grip of a severe worldwide
depression accompanied by massive
unemployment, social unrest, and the loss of
national confidence. In Germany, the harsh
provisions and high reparations imposed by
the treaty of versailles that followed
Germanys defeat in World War 1 were an
additional cause of national bitterness.
The worldwide economic depression had hit
the country especially hard, and millions of
people were out of work. Still fresh in the
minds of many was Germany's humiliating
defeat fifteen years earlier during World War
I, and The Germans lacked confidence in
their weak government, known as the
Weimar Republic. These conditions provided
the chance for the rise of a new leader

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Germany had suffered greatly from the depression.

Germany was un-confident about their
government.
Provided a chance for a new leader

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The worldwide
depression had hit
the country
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During the crisis, Germany suffered

greatly from the depression. This made
the country very unconfident about their
government; as a result, this created an
opportunity to elect a new leader.

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During the crisis, the worldwide depression had hit the country especially hard ( PG #
13 Berenbaum.) This made Germany very unconfident about their government; as a
result, this created an opportunity to elect a new leader.
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Hitler developed a remarkable skill at

this sort of manipulation and marveled
at his own ability to bend crowds to his
will. His success as a demagogue laid
in his ability to say what the disaffected

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Hitler taught himself how to publicly speak well

Had an ability to convince a crowd

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Manipulation - convince
Expressive - freely

masses wanted to hear, to speak their

language, to capture and exploit a
psychology of despair and invest it with
a new hope for a phoenix-like
resurgence of the nation. He was able
as no one else to give voice to popular
hatreds, resentments, hopes, and
expectations. He spoke more stridently,
more vehemently, more expressively
and appealingly than any of those with
a similar ideological message.

used a technique to get the crowd to the bad in the

country, but good in himself
spoke more freely than anybody else.

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Hitler developed a
remarkable skill at this
sort of manipulation
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Hitler had taught himself the best way to speak publicly.

He had developed a skill of manipulating the peoples
minds to see the bad in the country, yet the good in
himself. Overall, Hitler spoke more freely and confidently
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Hitler had taught himself the best way to speak publicly. Hitler developed a remarkable
skill at this sort of manipulation(PG # 25 Don Nardo) to control peoples minds to see the
bad in the country, yet the good in himself. Overall, Hitler spoke more freely and
confidently than anyone with the same idea.

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Although Hitler's intentions were good in his mind, the actions he presumed had negative outcomes.

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back at the time , his dream was to

reunite the germanic people into a
mighty empire once again . each
year after beginning his rise to
power,hitler staged a rally in the
proud old city or nuremberg,hitler
promised the germans what they
wanted and needed to hear

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Hitler had ambitions to reunite the German empire

had a ceremony every year
told the German people what they wanted to hear
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reunite the germanic

people into a mighty
empire once again

Hitler had great ambitions to reunite the Germanic

people into a mighty empire once again. Every year he
had a ceremony in the capital city to announce his
plans. He promised the people what they wanted to
hear from the cause

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had a ceremony in the capital city to announce his plans. He promised the people what they wanted to hear from the cause.

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How did Hitler solidify power?

Hitler solidified power when he officially took office and forced the jews into
concentration camps.

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By 1932, Hitler had enough support

to run for president of Germany,
though he lost the election to Paul
von Hindenburg. However, on
January 30,1933, Hindenburg
appointed Hitler as chancellor of
Germany. Within a year and a half,
Hindenburg had died and Hitler was
able to take over both the position
of president and chancellor and
combine them into one position of
supreme leader, the Fhrer. After
legally gaining power in Germany,
Hitler quickly began solidifying his
position by putting those that
disagreed with him into
concentration camps. He created
massive amounts of propaganda
that strengthened German pride by
blaming all their problems on
communists and the jews.

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Hitler runs for president but loses

Paul von hindenburg wins but appoints Hitler to
chancellor
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position
began putting people who disagreed with him in
concentration camps
Created propaganda
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In 1932, Hitler runs for president but loses to Paul

von Hindenburg. Hindenburg overall, appoints
Hitler to the chancellor. Later Hindenburg dies and
Hitler is able to assume the president's position. To
solidify his power, he puts the people who disagree
with him in concentration camps.

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combine them into

one position of
supreme leader, the
Fhrer

CITATION:: Jenifer Rosenburg, About History

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In 1932, Hitler runs for president but loses to Paul von Hindenburg. Hindenburg overall, appoints Hitler to the
chancellor. Later Hindenburg dies and Hitler is able to assume the president's position. Hitler accepted this
obligation and used it to combine them into one position of supreme leader, the Fhrer. To solidify his power, he
puts the people who disagree with him in concentration camps.

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F Transition Sentence: Although Hitler had become the new president and promised to make things better he had strict guidelines.

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The Nazis did publish Hindenburg's alleged

political testament...containing
complimentary references to Hitler. The

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testament probably was a Nazi forgery and

was skillfully used as part of the intensive
propaganda campaign to get a big 'Yes'
vote for Hitler in the coming
plebiscite...about 95 percent of registered
voters in Germany went to the polls and
gave Hitler 38 million... votes (90 percent of
the vote)...Hitler could now claim he was
Fhrer of the German nation with the
overwhelming approval of the people. The
next day...mandatory loyalty oaths for all
public officials in Germany were introduced:
"I swear: I shall be loyal and obedient to
Adolf Hitler, the Fhrer of the German Reich
and people, respect the laws, and fulfill my
official duties conscientiously, so help me
God."
Hitler had achieved total power in Germany.

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Hitler had achieved total

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directly after the passage - i.e. (Ayer, 28)

B1

(Bulleted Out) Read the research info in EV Box a few times until you understand
what it says. When you fully understand it, cover it up so you cannot read what it says. Now
you are to write down, in bullets in your own words, what EV Box says.

C Synonyms: find synonyms using a

thesaurus and write them here

in EV Box,, underline the phrase

that youd like to use as your quotation
selection. Write it here with the
citation at the end. Make sure that it
doesnt exceed 10 words. When you
are finished copying the quote here,
cross it out in EV Box. MAKE SURE
YOU MODIFY IT IF NECESSARY TO
ENSURE IT MAKES SENSE - ellipses
when removing words, brackets when
adding words in

B2 (Actual Sentences) use the bullets from B1 and write them into sentences.

Use
sentence variety - use a * where you want to shove your Q. incorp (Box A). When finished,
look back at EV Box and compare what youve written here to it. If you use any of the same
words or phrasings, or if your sentences look similar structurally, REVISE IT.

CITATION::

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation:

sentence.

Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own