The

Candy
Bar

By Brian
Brady

With every second it felt

like a million hours. I was
about to burst with joy. I
couldn't wait to make a
custom made Hershey's
bar. It was a beautiful day
and we were on our way to
Hershey Park.

There it was.
It looked like
candy land. I
could live
there and
never get
bored. We
walked in
and got our
pass. It was
so cool. I
was
sweating like
crazy.

We walked to the
custom made Hershey
bars.Hershey's park
had so many colors
red, yellow,orange,
pink, green, and blue.
Any color they had.

I couldn't wait until I found out

what avor they had. We
opened the door. Every
second with more mystery. We
scanned our passes and got
our hair nets. The lady on the
TV showed us how to put on
the hairnets. Me, my brother,
my dad and my uncle all
laughed like hyenas.

The candy room was so cool and so high tech.I

had never seen something like it in my life.
Finally I got to choose the flavor. I got an extra
chocolate with coconut that made it crispy and
carmel that made it nice and gooey. It would
take fifteen minutes for my candy bar to be
ready .I was about to explode.
It was finally ready. It was the best Hershey bar
I ever had.

About the Author

The author's name is Brian Brady.He lives in Lake
Placid. He has a family of 3 pets and a brother
and a sister. Also a mom and dad.He is eight .years
old. His favorite dessert is chocolate cupcake. His
favorite part of writing is that you can be creative.
His advice to other writers is "when you think your
done you just begun".