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I.
Introduction
Body Paragraph #1
A. Topic sentence: every single person on this Earth has the same
rights.
B. Supporting evidence:
i. All human beings are born free and equal in dignity and rights
ii. You have the right to be treated by law in the same way as
everyone else.
iii. You should not suffer discrimination, or be deprived of any of
your rights, because of your race, colour, sex, language, religion or
political opinions.
C. Clincher sentence: everyone must be treated equally throughout
the population
on all people, regardless of who
Body Paragraph #2
A. Topic sentence: Supporting evidence: it will hurt others feeling.
B. Supporting evidence:
iii. White people have nothing to base their judgement on, except
for stereotypes.
C. Clincher sentence: A person should be proud of who they are and
embrace it,
not be ashamed of it
Body Paragraph #3
IV.
ii. Beethoven became unable to hear, but he can be a great musician in the
world with Symphony 9.
C. Clincher sentence: Everyone can be anything that they want to be,
even they have been
V.
insulted by others.
Conclusion
A. Rephrased thesis statement: Stereotypes shouldn't be the
control peoples
others
Have you ever heard an English idiom, "Don't judge a book by its cover ? Do you think
just the cover could tell you all of details in the story? Can the cover show you the books
quality? Same goes to stereotypes, we shouldn't judge people by what they look like or who they
are. Classes shouldn't be divided by materials or anything else. According to this, everyone has
the same rights, stereotypes dont affect oneselfs character, and stereotypes can hurt people.
Every single person on this Earth deserves to have the same rights. The very first article
of Universal Declaration of Human Rights states All human beings are born to be free with
dignity and rights.(n.d.) This means what it means, no matter the race or gender, people all have
dignity and rights that has to be respected all equally. The second article says You should not
suffer discrimination, or be deprived of any of your rights, because of your race, colour, sex,
language, religion or political opinions. When it comes to respect for your basic rights, it should
not matter what country you were born in, what social class you belong to, or how rich or poor
you are. Everyone should enjoy all the rights in the Universal Declaration of Human Rights. No
one should worry about oneself being different from others, just live on the rights that is given.
From the sixth article, everyone has to be judged the same by the laws. (n.d.) The seventh article
states that You have the right to be treated by the law in the same way as everyone else.(n.d.)
People have to be treated fairly by the law and the same way as everybody else. So everyone
must be treated equally throughout the population and the law should be laid on all people,
regardless of who they are or what they are.
Stereotypes don't at all affect a persons character. Stereotypes will hurt people, either
your feelings or your life. According to Los Angeles Times, Derek Batoyon, the author of this
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