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Alex Enfield
Text from my initial
WP submission:
(a phrase, sentence,
paragraph, idea,
move, punctuation,
piece of evidence,
etc.)
An observation or
question I
received from De
Piero or a
classmate:
Although it
may not always be
acknowledged, there
are conventions that
surround different
genres. Conventions
do not necessarily
apply to every piece
of writing within a
genre though. It is
still important to
study these various
conventions in order
to improve upon
ones own writing
skills (Enfield, Big
Bloggin Al).
As I was scrolling
through my Facebook
account looking for a
few light-hearted posts
to brighten up my
mood, I came across a
very atrocious statistic
stating that, there have
been more mass
shootings than days this
year(nbcnews).
When I searched
Twitter for Northern
Arizona University
shooting, a lot of
news accounts had
reports about the
tragedy as well as
links that directed me
to the news channels
websites. There were
many pictures of the
victims, the criminal,
and of the students
grieving the death
and injuries of their
fellow classmates.
When looking
specifically at Twitter,
one specific convention
that separates this social
media site from others,
is the fact that only 140
words and emojis are
allowed. This is not a
lot of room to write
about a serious topic,
which is why Twitter
does not tend to stir up
serious debates between
people.
Didn't some
political figures
I hadnt considered
discussing people
Instagram also
includes the week in
review, which
includes what the
majority of people
have searched and
liked.
OK, I'm
wondering: so
what? What does
this have to do with
your argument?
I elaborated more on
how the week in
review is an
important feature on
Instagram because it
connects many
Americans to
tragedies that have
struck, such as the
NAU. People were
able to show each
other support and to
stir up a debate.
It is important to
understand that social
media sites are not
reliable sources and to
I deleted out my
entire blog post
because I felt that it
made me look like a
appropriate to take
huge chunks from
your thlog/blog and
use them for this
paper; they're two
separate things.
Although many
similarities do exist
between each
articles rhetorical
features and
conventions,
differences also exist
depending on the
authors purpose of
the article.
Is all of this
necessary? Can you
just say (in more
sophisticated
language) "here
comes purpose"?
An authors use of
rhetorical features
varies on the structure
that they want to build
for their article.
I realized that my
topic sentence was
not even discussing
what I went into
detail in throughout
this paragraph. I
completely omitted
my original topic
sentence.
Article 3
incorporates ethos,
logos, and pathos.
There is really no use
for conceptual or
operational
definitions within
this article since it is
so short and written
to a more general
audience
Is this misplaced?
How does this
relate back to the
previous
sentence/idea? Or
the next?
Worth
describing/defining
what you mean by
"moves"?
I decided to use a
direct quote here
because I felt that it
will make me appear
as a more credible
source. My audience
doesnt just have to
take my word for it,
they can read
Elizabths words for
themselves.