yoursework Moderation [inex H Janna Ajaj Feb) & |e to salese Hey Ms Sales, | was just wondering how the moderation went so | could update my workin the holidays? Like where | need to improve and so on, if you ‘can thats. Thank youll Enjoy your holiday, Janna’ ) Emma Sales (HCACP} Fob 14 a tome & Hi Janna, They ware impressad by your posts but the one area of improvement thay gave was to make sure you come back to audience more consistently. Link all of your choices back to the audience and their interesis Anather way to improve isto link to theories - including in ‘your planning pests/analysis of your oun products (@ g you could anailyse/deconstruct your ovm advert) Miss Sales, Privacy and Confidentiality Notice ‘The information, attachmonts and opinions contained in this messago are intonded sclely for tho uso ofthe individual or entity to whom