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submission:
(a phrase, sentence, paragraph, idea,
move, punctuation, piece of evidence,
etc.)
1. Through analysis of the rhetorical
features audience, purpose, context,
style, and tone in posts made by
Kim Kardashian, Novak Djokovic,
and Michelle Obama, it is evident that
these three celebrities apply most
these conventions, but differ within.
An observation or question
I received from De Piero or
a classmate:
4. Organization of Paper
-Source #1 (Kardashian)
-Source #2 (Djokovic)
-Source #3 (Obama)
Yamada, Im wondering if
your paper would benefit
from re-structuring the
organization. Instead of
-Source #1 (Kim K)
-Source #2 (Novak)
-Source #3 (Michelle O)
Could your paper/argument
unfold a more
integrated/interwoven way if
you did something like:
-Idea #1 (and then
incorporate sources 1, 2, 3)
-Idea #2 (and then
incorporate sources 1, 2, 3)
-Idea #3 (and then
incorporate sources 1, 2, 3)?
Yawwwwwwwwn. Get me
hooked, Yamada! (PS: you
don't have to have a superepic "in today's world" or
"since the dawn of man"
opening -- feel free to get
right to it.)
I recognized my opening
sentence was majorly boring and
lame, and could deter my readers
to actually read my paper. I
modified it to a short and sharp
word to capture and interest my
reader to continue reading.
Chose commas or
parentheses. Not both.
Remember: you're using
punctuation to signal to
readers how you want them
to read.
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