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Topic ( task1)( From Barrons essential words ): The chart below shows information about different species of birds

observed in WoodChuck County at different times of the year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons. Species Bluebirds Cardinals Crows Juncos Mockingbirds Orioles Vireos Woodpeckers winter X X X Summer X X X X X X X

The table above depicts the observant study conducted in WoodChuck. Eight different species have been spotted so far in WoodChuck. Precise study of the table reveals that five of the species live solely in the region in either summer or winter times. This situation suggests that those species are more likely to be migratory birds. To be more precise, Blue Birds, Mocking Birds and Orioles migrate to Wood Chuck in summer for breeding and raising their young while Juncos choose normally another region to spend their breeding season and overwinter in Wood Chuck afterwards. It seems that there exist suitable environmental conditions for the remaining three species including Cardinals, Crows and Woodpeckers to breed and inhabit in Wood Chuck both in summer and winter seasons. Information illustrated on the table also confirms this idea that Wood Chuck provides more favourable living conditions for those mentioned species in summer time compared to winter season. Finally, the following conclusion can be drawn from the summarized data shown on the table: Owing to the fact that most species are spotted in summer times, creation of well equipped accommodation as well as recreational facilities can attract tourists and biological researchers from all over the world to have a visit to WoodChuck in this season. Additionally, authorities in governmental affairs in WoodChuck can spend some of the revenue from this touristic activity to provide more protected and environmentally friendly conditions for those mentioned species. As a result, those species will no longer face any life threatening crises causing them to be endangered ultimately. $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ You seem to be so competent at using language. The problem is with the topic you have selected. You might as well switch to better topics. You can find them in CAMBRIDGE IELTS BOOKS 6,7,8. I think your style of writing is perfect enough to use a good source to boost your band score. I recommend Writing for IELTS by SAM McCarter.

Comment [Afarinesh1]: The first Task is a report writing task and so there is no place for a personal analysis. This part is not considered as a part of your report.

IELTS Writing task 2 (Cambridge IELTS 8) Topic: Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Childrens training affair is one of the challenging issues being discussed by social and psychological consultants. I reckon that both parents and schools play vital role in teaching children to acquire the required social and psychological education. The following two paragraphs will elaborate more about schools and parents essential training roles individually.

To the psychologists, parents have an extensive influence on their children. To be more precise, children attempt rigorously to imitate and follow their parents social and psychological behaviors. For instance, those parents with higher university education will automatically encourage their children to strive hard to apply for further education. Parents can also provide their children with required educational facilities as well as convenient and peaceful family environment to help them practice effectively their school exercises at home. As a result, these favorable educational situations will help children to learn effectively the education they receive at schools.

In Sociologists eyes, schools play crucial role to teach children both science courses and social interpersonal skills. The schools very striving for encouraging students to participate actively in athletic and recreational events as well as charity carnivals held by schools help students obtain social related skills and experiences. The excellent combination of both science courses and social trainings being received by school students will, therefore, help them surpass the expected educational, ethical and social standards demanded by a healthy society and graduated students can confidently progress to further educational pathways to their desirable universities.

To sum up, precisely designed educational programs in which parents and school teachers cooperatively consult and interact with each other to share the burden of social, psychological and scientific education of students will ultimately lead to the graduation of highly qualified students observing social and ethical rules to be considered as good people in a society.

Estimated Band Score: 8 Actually I must confess you are a perfect writer in essay writing task. It is clearly argued, in language which is thoroughly accurate. Cohesive devices are well used. One slight minus point is that you seem not to be able to display quite the flair and range of vocabulary and complex structures one might expect at this level. I think you have to work more on journalistic articles in magazines or refer to the articles written by prominent authors like (For and Against book by L.G. Alexandar) Good Luck

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