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The alternating shades of blue and green, The powerful wind whips my hair covering my face The smell

of salty sea water and sea breeze relaxes my mind The soothing sand massages my feet as I walk along the shore, The children laughing joyously on the beach building sand castles and swimming in the wide open sea, The crystal water sparkles as the suns rays hit curling waves, The white mane of horse galloping towards the shore, The habitat for dozens of creatures, hidden underneath the waves The big blue beautiful stretch across the horizon, The Jet skis skating across the water as their engines roar as loud as an angry lion, vroom vroom, Beautiful but yet mysterious and treacherous, an adventure lies ahead where no key can unlock There is nothing more beautiful than the way the ocean refuses to stop kissing the shoreline no matter how many times it gets sent away

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The children laughing joyously on the beach building sand castles and swimming in the wide open sea, The crystal water sparkles as the suns rays hit curling waves, The white mane of horse galloping towards the shore, The habitat for dozens of creatures, hidden underneath the waves The big blue beautiful stretch across the horizon, The Jet skis skating across the water as their engines roar as loud as an angry lion, vroom vroom, Beautiful but yet mysterious and treacherous, an adventure lies ahead where no key can unlock There is nothing more beautiful than the way the ocean refuses to stop, Kissing the shoreline no matter how many times it gets sent away,

Second Draft

The alternating shades of blue and green, the powerful wind whips my hair, covering my face, The smell of salty sea water and sea breeze relaxes my mind, The soothing sand massages my feet as I walk along the shore, The children laughing joyously, on the beach building sand castles and swimming in the wide open sea, The crystal water sparkles as the suns rays hit curling waves, The white mane of horse galloped its way towards the shore, The habitat for dozens of creatures, hidden underneath the waves, The big blue beautiful stretch across the horizon, The Jet skis skating across the water as their engines roar as loud as an angry lion, vroom vroom, Beautiful but yet mysterious, a treacherous adventure lies ahead where no key can unlock. There is nothing more beautiful than the way the ocean refuses to stop kissing the shoreline, no matter how many

Fifth Draft

times it gets sent away.

The alternating shades of blue and green, The powerful wind whips my hair, covering my face, The smell of salty sea water and sea breeze relaxes my mind, The soothing sand massages my feet as I walk along the shore, The children laughing joyously, on the beach building sand castles and swimming in the wide open sea, The crystal water sparkles as the suns rays hit curling waves, The white mane of horse galloped its way towards the shore, The habitat for dozens of creatures, hidden underneath the waves, The big blue beautiful stretch across the horizon, The Jet skis skating across the water as their engines roar as loud as an angry lion, vroom vroom, Beautiful but yet mysterious, a treacherous adventure lies ahead where no key can unlock. There is nothing more beautiful than the way the ocean refuses to stop kissing the shoreline, no matter how many times it gets sent away.

Fourth Draft

The alternating green, The my hair, covering The smell of salty sea breeze relaxes The soothing sand my feet as I walk The children on the beach swimming in the The crystal water suns rays hit The white mane of galloped its way The habitat for hidden underneath The big blue across the horizon, The Jet skis the water as roar as loud as vroom vroom, mysterious, a adventure lies key can unlock. beautiful than the refuses to stop no matter how many

shades of blue and powerful wind whips my face, sea water and my mind, massages along the shore, laughing joyously, building sand castles and wide open sea, sparkles as the curling waves, horses towards the shore, dozens of creatures, the waves, beautiful stretch skating across their engines an angry lion, Beautiful but yet treacherous ahead where no There is nothing more way the ocean kissing the shoreline, times it gets sent away.

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