H5 Correct/ improve these sentences:

- Par3, 1st sentence: There are a few ways to accomplish these goals.
- Support will keep growing for these protestors if only a bigger crowd gets attracted
by the media.
- This is one of the ways to achieve more media attention. You can also use social
media like Facebook. There are a lot of people who use Social media like Facebook.
Social media has a big community. This could be very useful. People can post
messages or videos. It is a useful way to spread non-violent protesting.
- The famous film producer called Julia Bacha went to the Middle East and was
touched by the way several Palestinians were protesting to make an end to the war.
- Unfortunately, the main case what is blocking them is that they hardly reach the
news. Because the media does not find this interesting enough. Once it does not
contain dead, blood and guns it seems to be boring and otiose. Therefore this form of
resistance is invisible for the world. But if we all start to notice what is truly going on,
we may start to see the power of attention.
- Without any violence they were actually able to win the conflict, because the Israelis
were surprised by their way of protesting and that is why they eventually succeed.
- Non-violence does not have any victims. The people who are in protest do not use
any violence and the people, where they are against, cannot use violence, because
they would look bad. Those people cannot do anything about non-violence and there
protest. That is why those people are afraid of non-violence.
- There was this film about non-violent protest by Julia Bacha. The state of Israel
started building a wall. Palestinians started non-violent protesting. The media is an
important factor in non-violent protest.
- (par2) The state of Israel started building a wall between Israel and the West Bank,
because the people in Israel where scared for Palestinian terrorism including suicide
bombing.
- There is a reason for violent protests are effective, because of the huge amount of
people who die. The newspapers will only use their front pages for violent crimes
because everything thats violent will reach the attention of the readers.
- Non-violent protest can succeed but the reason everyone knows about little of it is
that it is rarely showed on the news.
- This is a letter about the non-violent protest in the Middle East.
- They want to show the people that to make clear what their statements are also is
possible without violence.
- In countries in the Middle East are a lot of conflicts.
- Me and my partner with who I wrote this summary both agree.