My Grad School Application Essay

The statement that accompanies a student's application to graduate school in Science can be an
amazing thing to read. I know that these statements are very difficult to write, and I surmise that
some students are not given much guidance about the content and tone of the statements.
Furthermore, some students do not yet have their research interests very well focused. These are
not fatal errors if the overall application is strong.

I am always impressed when I read a well-written, focused statement that has interesting content.
These students are at an advantage not only for admission but also for recruiting scholarships. An
applicant can be admitted to graduate school with an unsophisticated statement, but obviously it's
preferable to have a good statement. I'm sure that the requirements for a good statement vary
from place to place, but here are a few basic things that I like to see (or not see) in an application
statement, especially for a Ph.D. program:

1. What do you want to do in graduate school? You do not have to be intensely focused on a
narrow topic at the time of application. There is time to figure that out once you start your
graduate program. Even so, if your statement gives faculty the impression that you are applying
because you don't really know what else to do and maybe you'll give grad school a try.. that's not
good. Present yourself as a serious student with sincere interest in the general field of study for
which you are applying. This part of your statement should have content based on your experiences
thus far.

2. Do not discuss your childhood. Most faculty don't care about your childhood chemistry set or
your shell collection or even the telescope your great-aunt set out in a field one summer night to
show you the immensity of the universe. Do not describe a walk on the beach with your dad when
you were 5. Do not mention your favorite teacher in 4th grade, not even if she let you watch a
cocoon being built. Do not talk about how awesome it was the first time you read Isaac Asimov or
Carl Sagan or even Richard Feynman.

3. What are some significant academic or work experiences you have had that are relevant to
your application for graduate school in Science? Relevant items here would be research
experiences and rigorous classes.

4. Make some effort to tailor your statement to the department to which you are applying, but
don't go overboard about it. Just show that you have a realistic reason for applying to a particular
department. Be sure to check over your statements carefully before submitting them so that you
don't send a statement to University Y that says that your dream is to study at University X.

I am not going to take a stand on the issue of whether one should start the essay with a quotation. I
personally prefer quotationless statements, but certainly wouldn't hold it against a student, unless
they quote Emily Dickinson.

Fortunately, my actual graduate application statement has been lost to the sands of time -- I am
sure it would be very embarrassing to read now. I have no idea what I wrote, but it was likely very
naive. In the absence of the original, and because I have been reading so many of these statements
lately, I just now decided to write my own statement (again). Instead of trying to write a good
essay, though, I decided it would be easier and more fun to write an awful essay, ignoring the
boring 'rules' I listed above.

Disclaimer: My fake statement is not meant to be contemptuous of actual student efforts, as that is
not how I feel when I read these statements, however bizarre, even though I am a curmudgeon.

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A Sample Essay for an Application to a Science Graduate Program, Inspired by Real Essays
but not quite to the point of actual plagiarism

How many roads must a man walk down, before they can call him a man?

Bob Dylan wants to know the answer to this question and so do I. I have always loved quantifying
impossible things, and I want to continue to do so in graduate school. I would not stop at counting
roads, though, because counting roads means looking down. I also want to look at the sky.

How many times must a man look up, before he can see the sky?

That's another thing that Bob wants to know, but in this case we disagree about the important
question. I want to know how many times must a man look up before he can really know the sky
and what is in it. The sky has always been a mystery to me ever since I was a child. What is the sky?
We must know this before we can count things in it. I do not like science fiction though. I
love science.

In the classes I have taken as an undergraduate, my professors have attempted to teach me many
things, but the things I want to know are not in books.

I have always collected things: shells, pebbles, cats. I even tried collecting staplers for a while to
try to get over my fear of them, but although that didn't work well, it shows that I am not afraid to
face obstacles and at least try to overcome them. Now my passion will be collecting data.

I think that the graduate program at the University of X is the best one for me because you have a
lot of faculty who count the atoms in our universe and our planet. Some of these atoms even make
up Bob Dylan, his roads, and the sky we both want to look at and know.

Definition and Nature of the Work
Biochemists are scientists who study the chemistry of living things. Their
work includes studying the complex chemical combinations and reactions
involved in metabolism, reproduction, growth, and heredity.
Some biochemists do basic research that expands scientific knowledge
about the chemistry of living things. Others do applied researchthat is,
they work to create new products or to solve practical problems. In the field
of medicine, for example, biochemists doing basic research may study the
ways hormones are formed. Biochemists doing applied research may use
the basic findings about hormone formation to develop synthetic hormones
that can be produced on a large scale.
Biochemists working in medicine are sometimes called molecular
biologists. They study bacteria, viruses, and other organisms to better
understand the chemical basis of life. They also determine the effects of
chemicals on medical problems such as cancer, aging, or obesity.
Biochemists in nutrition analyze food products to measure their vitamins,
proteins, carbohydrates, and minerals. They research the effects of freezing
or cooking and compute the caloric value of foods.
About half of all biochemists work for colleges and universities, where they
teach or do research. Many are employed by private firms such as
breweries, drug companies, petroleum producers, and manufacturers.
Others work for nonprofit research centers or government agencies. A few
biochemists are self-employed consultants who advise government or
industry.
Although their jobs may differ widely, almost all biochemists do laboratory
research at least some of the time. They plan research projects to test
theories or to develop new products or processes. They are often assisted by
laboratory technicians or research assistants. Biochemists perform a
number of tasks, such as weighing chemicals, filtering liquids, distilling
ingredients, and growing cultures of microorganisms. They use a variety of
tools and instruments, including test tubes, beakers, flasks, electron
microscopes, centrifuges, and spectrophotometers. Sometimes they make
use of radioactive isotopes. Biochemists must use exact scientific methods
in their work. They are often aided by computerizedBiochemists conduct their
research in laboratories and then use scientific methods and computer programs to analyze
their data. (USDA-ARS.)data. Biochemists generally write up their findings for
scientific journals and report them before groups of scientists


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