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, Patric Devitt
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Summary This article aims to assist readers with developing an abstract for a conference in order to have a paper accepted for presentation at a conference,
whether it is in poster or an oral format. This is important as the authors argue that
use of conferences as a method of disseminating research findings and good practice
is expanding each year. Drawing on author experiences, both as members of scientific review panels and as submitters of abstracts, the article includes a practical
review about the meaning of an abstract, how to get started and then breaks down
in clear sections what reviewers look for in a good abstract. There are also some key
points on the actual process of review, which are helpful in understanding of what
happens to an abstract following submission.
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Research dissemination;
Abstract writing;
Conference
presentations;
Steering committees
Introduction
The use of conferences as a method of disseminating research findings and good practice is
expanding each year (RCN, 2004). Ordinarily, prospective presenters have to submit a short abstract of their presentation for review by the
conference scientific committee. The aim of this
article is to assist you to develop a successful abstract for a conference presentation, whether it is
in poster or an oral format. Whilst, we have drawn
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E-mail address: j.coad@bham.ac.uk.
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Getting started
Cook (2000) suggests that time taken to consider
and plan your work is always time well spent. The
first and crucial step is to ensure that you target
your paper to an appropriate conference. This
means that you should always spend some time
ensuring that the focus of your paper is adapted
to reflect the themes of the conference.
The first essential thing to do is to review the title and aims of the conference. You must make sure
that the stated objectives, guidelines and themes
of the conference are reflected in your abstract
and in some cases the title of your proposal. Whilst
conferences in exotic locations may be tempting,
you should ensure that your paper meets these elements. If the focus of a conference is education
such as the Nurse Education Tomorrow conference,
there is little chance of a paper on encouraging
breastfeeding in public being accepted (unless the
focus could be developed into an educational one).
Secondly, despite stating the obvious you need
to make sure you read the information provided
by the conference organisers. Starting with the
easiest task, which is ensuring that your abstract
will be received before the closing date. We have
both have missed closing dates, so we strongly recommend that you put a note in your diary at least a
week before the very last date of submitting your
abstract. Many conferences have a relatively short
turnaround period from receiving your abstract to
when the scientific committee meet to make their
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First impressions
First impressions are important, poor presentation
is often taken to reflect a lack of interest or a lack
of academic rigor. In all cases you should word process your abstract. You should ensure that you use
an appropriate font size and most commonly this is
requested as font size 1012. It may sound pedantic, but papers have been rejected because the
font size is too small for the reviewer to actually
see. The use of too large a font gives the impression of trying to fill space as a result of having little
to say. It is important not to overload the reader so
try to keep your points concise and to the point.
Some conferences provide a box and/or word limit
(e.g., 250 words). This criterion must be adhered
to. We have both found from experience that there
is little point in spending hours trying to expand
these boxes. However using a true font such
as Arial or Times New Roman does allow the maximum wordage within a limited space.
Good practice indicates that your abstract should
be written in the past tense and that it should remain
constant, i.e., you should not mix tenses. A good literary style is not essential but is very helpful to the
reviewer and if the abstract is accepted, it will also
help the delegates to make their choice. If you feel
you may have a stylistic problem we recommend
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that you ask a colleague to critically read your paper. Whilst this exposes yourself to criticism and
may cause you some disquiet it can be very helpful
in helping you to have your abstract accepted. We
recommend that you photocopy the abstract form
several times or save back up electronic copies. As
your colleague(s) provide feedback then you can
regularly update the abstract until you are happy
with its overall flow and coherence. A criticalfriend may also be useful at this stage, especially
if they do not share your professional background.
If your abstract is not clear or contains hidden
assumptions this friend is often able to identify
them. Do not be fooled into thinking that if an abstract is full of jargon littered with unnecessary
technical terms and complex language that it will
impress the reviewers. Remembering your potential
audience is important as many may not have English
as their first language and so being able to express a
complex idea simply is far preferable for every audience you are likely to attract. There are a number of
excellent guides to help you use English in a clear
and simple way one example is: Plain English Campaign (2004). Another example of language to avoid
are colloquialisms such as; placed on an observation chart and pushing fluids although conjuring
up interesting images should be avoided. Standard
abbreviations can be used but they should always
be written in full the first time they are used for
example: General Practitioner (GP); United Kingdom (UK) or Kilograms (kgs). Try to avoid abbreviations that are non-standard no matter how
commonly they are used in professional conversation for example: obs for observations. Remember
also that if you are addressing an international audience they may well be familiar with different abbreviations, or more worryingly the same abbreviations
with different meanings.
It is also essential that you check your abstract
for any spelling mistakes. It is hard to overemphasise the poor impression given by simple avoidable
Aims
Gives a general statement of the
goal to be achieved
Does not give an indication of
how the goal is to achieved.
May emphasise the value of the
goal
Figure 1
Title
Aim to keep your title clear and concise. As outlined previously, you should ensure that your title
reflects the overall aims and themes of the conference. Some authors are able to think of eye-catching, punchy titles but make them so obscure that it
is not clear what the delegate should expect from
the presentation. It may also be worth checking
previous conference proceedings to see whether
the organising committee appreciates clever or
humorous titles.
Learning outcomes
Derived from the aim
Describe the desired end-state in
terms of knowledge, skills and
attitudes.
Usually take the form of a
behavioural statement i.e. at the
end of the session the participants
will be able to
Defining characteristics of aims and learning outcomes (adapted from Quinn, 2000).
Content
In the main section you should take the opportunity
to include some of the key, background literature
to the paper. It is important that this is informative
and not over-verbose in its message. If your paper
is a literature review then this section makes up
the entirety of the abstract, otherwise a short paragraph to set the scene and gain the readers interest will suffice.
If your abstract is in relation to a research study it
is relevant to summarise the process. A few clear
sentences about each element such as sample,
methodology, data collection and analysis is all that
is usually required. However, if the focus of the conference is research, or your paper is primarily about
the process then this section needs to be increased
in both length and depth.
At the end of your abstract you should take the
opportunity to reiterate your message about what
your presentation is about in a summary of one or
two sentences. Remember, a punchy and/or
thought provoking conclusion may be useful in
focusing the readers attention.
References
It is also crucial that you submit your abstract with
a sample of references on the topic using the referencing style requested, most commonly, this being
Harvard. Some conferences limit the number of
references to be used, often to three. You should
carefully read and abide by the conference instructions. The rule is; if references are limited ensure
that you choose wisely. You should aim to include
references that are current, can be easily obtained
and are relevant to the central focus of your paper.
It is well worth the time to ensure they are correct,
as wrongly cited references give an impression of
lack of care and rigor.
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conference organisers instructions? Have you eliminated every single misspelled word, typographical
error and grammatical mistake? Finally, all the
listed authors should read and agree the final draft.
Now it is ready for submission!
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conference. It is not good fortune that allows some
prospective presenters to have their abstracts accepted whilst others suffer serial rejection. If you
follow the guidelines above you are not guaranteed
to be successful with every abstract submission.
You will however increase you chances of success
considerably. We hope to meet you at a conference
and hear or see the fruits of your labours soon.
Acknowledgements
Thank you to the members of the RCN Research in
Child Health (RiCH) Group who encouraged us to
commit these ideas to paper.
J. Coad, P. Devitt
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