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ProductDescriptionTitle:Tripous__________________________________________
Evaluator:REYES,MaryFayeE.___________________________________________
1. Title of Product: Does the title effectively represent the product?
The title effectively represent the product, it was evocative and notable.

2. The product description? is it good, or does it need work? (Use specifics)

They were able to highlight a strong feature through the phrase wont have hard time in
carrying and setting up. Because I think it will surely capture the attention of the audience.
However, I do think that they can still improve the first and second sentences. First is by
categorizing the product or place the second sentence as its opening. Second, for it to be able
to reached out to general audience, using jargons such as camera dolly and flycam should
reconsidered.

3. Evaluate the content: Strong / Developing / Beginning

(refer to Rubric)

Identify any irrelevant information.

o

Indicate any gaps in the information

o

It is good to compare your product with other products existing in the market. But to make
it more effective, instead of identifying the problems of the other products, they should
just highlight the strength of their product that makes them different to their competitors.

They defined some of the materials making it clearer for the general audiences. However,
I think that it still need to be developed by incorporating more information about how
these materials are used and improved your product

Identify any information that seems inaccurate

o

I do not see any inaccuracies in the document.

4. Evaluate the organization:

Identify anything that is out of order or hard to locate or follow

o

Everything were delivered smoothly and intelligibly most specially the product
specifications. But to make the document more organized and easy to read for the
readers, the stated problems in the document in which I said earlier that is need to be
developed, should be placed wherein it can be read and locate quickly because this is a

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significant part of the document for this is where you are marketing your products
strengths or a part where you explain why they needed your product.
5. Evaluate the style:

Identify anything you misunderstood on first reading

o Everything can be understood on first reading exept the materials so I would suggest
them to have an extended definition for readers to understand more clearly.

Identify anything you couldn't understand at all

o I was able to understand the document, but for them to provide readers to picture their
product more clearly, extended definition should be used as well as developing some of
its parts.

Identify expressions that seem wordy, inexact, or too complex

o The part wherein they stated their materials and some problems about the other products
should be enhanced to provide a more intelligible message for the audience. I also would
suggest them to present the materials by incorporating some images so that it does not
seem to wordy or too complex for some readers. And again, the part where they stated
the other productt problem also should be developed in a way where readers can see
your strength and not the weaknesses of others.

6. Evaluate the design: (if provided)

Indicate any headings that are missing, confusing, or excessive
o They were able to present the headings clearly . However, I think they need to provide
headings that stated advantages, features, etc,

Indicate any material that should be designed as a list

o The part where they mention other products problem, the time when it is enhance I would
recommend them to deliver it in a bullet form so that it does not appear too wordy or too
complex.

Give examples of material that might be clarified by a visual

o

They were able to define the materials but for it to be deliver effectively I would suggest
them to insert some images so that reader can have a clearer picture of your product

Give examples of misleading or overly complex visuals

o No visual provided in the document.

List other problems with design

o The document was an easy to read they just needed to improve on where to locate some
of the information or the sequencing of the paragraph.

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7. Please suggest other ways of making this document easier to use

They presented their document in such a way where it can be understod by their target
market. However, if they want to broaden and reach out to a general audience, I would
suggest them to use more simple words, use extened definition in some most parts and
provide images that can help support the information of your product.

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