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12. Litotes: A figure of speech using an understatement. Litotes are a discreet way of saying
something unpleasant without directly using negativity. EG: not the brightest bulb
not a beauty not bad
13. Metaphor: An implied comparison between two unlike things. Eg: He is a thorn in her
side. She was the star of the show.
14. Metonymy: the practice of not using the formal word for an object/subject and instead
referring to it by using another word that is linked to the formal name/word. Eg: "The
pen is mightier than the sword." This sentence has two examples of metonymy: The
"pen" stands in for "the written word." The "sword" stands in for "military aggression
and force."
15. Onomatopoeia: The use of words that imitate the sounds associated with the objects or
actions they refer to. Eg: buzz, whoop, woof
16. Oxymoron: A figure of speech in which contradictory terms appear side by side. Eg:
open secret, deafening silence
17. Paradox: Refers to the use of concepts/ ideas that are contradictory to one another, yet,
when placed together they hold significant value on several levels.
18. Personification: A figure of speech in which an inanimate object is given human qualities
or abilities.
19. Pun: A play on words, sometimes on different senses of the same word and sometimes
on the similar sense or sound of different words.
20. Sarcasm: a cutting remark that means the opposite of what one says.
21. Satire: The practice of making fun of a human weakness or character flaw. Eg: the TV
series South Park uses satire as it primary medium for drawing attention the flaws in
society
22. Simile: A comparison using "like" or "as" between two things that have certain qualities
in common.
23. Spoonerism: the first letters of some words in order to create new words or even to
create nonsensical words in order to create a humorous setting. While they are often
unintentional and known as a slip of the tongue, in literature they are welcomed as
witty word-play. Eg: flesh and blood being spoken as blesh and flood
24. Synecdoche: A figure of speech in which a part is used to represent the whole (for
example, ABCs for alphabet, long walk to freedom- the entire sequence of events that
led to freedom.
25. Theme: The main theme links all aspects of the literary work with one another and is
basically the main subject. In the play Romeo and Juliet was love with smaller themes of
sacrifice, tragedy, struggle, hardship, devotion and so on.
26. Tone: can portray a variety of emotions ranging from solemn, grave, and critical to witty,
wry and humorous. Tone helps the reader know the writers feelings towards a
particular topic and this in turn influences the readers understanding.
27. Understatement: A figure of speech in which a writer or speaker deliberately makes a
situation seem less important or serious than it is.
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In Detention Chris Van Wyk .......................................................................... 5
When to the sessions of sweet silent thought- William Shakespeare ...................................... 6
When I Have Fears That I May Cease To Be John Keats......................... 7
Futility Wilfred Owen .......................................................................................... 8
Old Folks Laugh Maya Angelou .......................................................................... 9
Rugby League Game James Kirkup ...................................................................... 10
Autumn-Roy Campbell ...................................................................................... 12
The Wild Doves At Louis Trichardt-William Plomer ................................. 14
Lake Morning In Autumn Douglas Livingstone ........................ 16
On The Move Thom Gunn.................................................................................. 17
Figures of Speech
1. Alliteration: The repetition of an initial consonant sound. Eg She sells sea shells
2. Anaphora: The repetition of the same word or phrase. Right, I want my money right
now, right here.
3. Antithesis: Two opposite ideas put together in a sentence to achieve a contrasting
effect. Eg It was the best of times, it was the worst of times
4. Anthropomorphism: Personification applies to non-living objects. When we give human
characteristics or divine qualities to living creatures (e.g. animals).
5. Apostrophe: Addressing/Talking to a non-existant being, abstract idea or inanimate
object. Eg: Twinkle, twinkle, little star, how I wonder what you are
6. Assonance: repetition of internal vowels in neighbouring words. Eg: boom, room
7. Chiasmus: A verbal pattern in which the second half of an expression is balanced against
the first but with the parts reversed. Eg: Say what you mean, and mean what you say.
8. Enjambment: Lines in poetry that do not have a full stop to indicate the end of a
sentence.
9. Euphemism: Using an inoffensive word to replace a blunt or harsh term eg:
failedretained
10. Hyperbole: the use of exaggerated terms for the purpose of emphasis or heightened
effect. Eg: I ate a mountain of ice cream!
11. Irony: The use of words to convey the opposite of their literal/actual meaning. A
statement or situation where the meaning is contradicted by the appearance or
presentation of the idea. Eg: the elephants name was Tiny
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This South African poem is about a baby that is left on a rubbish dump. The
speaker first describes the setting: morning near Johannesburg in a township.
Then he describes how he saw dogs with blood all over them fighting over a
wriggling bundle - a baby. He threw a brick at the dogs and they ran away, but the
baby was now dead. The poem ends by saying that the 'pure' and 'innocent'
mother had disappeared.
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Understand the poem
1. What are 'our little houses' in line 7? (Use the notes above if you need to.)
2. Why do the dogs appear to be draped in red scarves (line 10)?
3. Who was the real 'Baby in the Manger' (line 19)? (You might need to ask
people who know Christian Bible stories.)
4. Many people struggle to understand the last four lines. Is the speaker being
ironic, saying the opposite of what he feels? Does he mean that the mother is
so ignorant that she is innocent of the crime she has committed? Or does he
mean that she lives in such an unjust system of Apartheid that she is relatively
innocent, because Apartheid has caused this to happen, not the mother? What
do you think?
Explore poetic devices
5. What images does the poet use in the first two stanzas that make the city of
Johannesburg's pollution sound disgusting and overpowering?
6. What do the images tell you about the way that the workers feel about
Johannesburg?
7. Why do you think the poet compares the baby to Jesus, and then says the
baby is lying on 'human dung' (lines 19-21) - what contrast is he creating?
8. a) What images does he use to suggest the mother's purity and innocence?
b) Comment on the description of the dew as 'untrampled'.
I threw a brick;
they bared fangs
flicked velvet tongues of scarlet
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and scurried away,
leaving a mutilated corpse
an infant dumped on a rubbish heap
Oh! Baby in the Manger
sleep well
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on human dung.
Its mother
had melted into the rays of the rising sun,
her face glittering with innocence
her heart as pure as untrampled dew.
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Mbuyiseni Oswald Mtshali broke new ground in South African poetry. His book
Sounds of a Cowhide Drum (1972) was the first book of poems to describe daily
life in the townships under Apartheid. It was a huge success and sold more than
any other book of poetry ever had in South Africa. He became involved in the
Black Consciousness movement of the 1970s, and his work was banned for
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3. Chimney sweepers in Blake's day were usually children small enough to fit into
narrow chimneys. Why would they cry?
4. The word 'blackening' refers to two things: (a) the church building becoming
black; (b) a criticism of the church by Blake. Explain these two meanings.
5. The word 'curse' refers to both something said and to a disease, such as a
sexually transmitted infection (in Blake's time it was often used to refer to
syphilis). Who else could the curse 'blight' in a marriage?
6. In the light of your answer to 5, explain what Blake means when he speaks of
the 'marriage hearse'.
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Chris van Wyk was born at Baragwanath Hospital in Soweto. He told his parents
he was going to be a writer when he was five! One of six children, he was brought
up in a happy home in the working-class suburb of Riverlea near Johannesburg.
He says his favourite pastime is to skinder (gossip). His latest book is his own story
of growing up in a coloured township in the 1960s. He says he interviewed many
people while writing the book, and got to hear all their gossip. 'I've been a writer
for 25 years and I find writing more exciting now than ever.' He was an active
member of anti-Apartheid movements in the 1980s. He says that humour is a
weapon in life and that he used it against Apartheid. He is married to Kathy, his
childhood sweetheart, and they have chosen to bring up their two sons in
Riverlea.
About the poem
During Apartheid, police were allowed to arrest people and put them into prison
without a trial. When you are held in jail without a trial, you are 'in detention'.
Many people died in detention. The police gave various reason for their deaths.
Some reasons were completely ridiculous. It was obvious that the police had
killed them. In the first three lines the poet uses three excuses the police gave for
these deaths. Then he mixes them up so that they sound more and more
ridiculous. He is making the point that the reasons given were made-up nonsense.
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old woes (4): By replaying his 'old woes' over in his mind, the poet is wasting
precious time that could be spent thinking more joyous thoughts. Hence 'my dear
time's waste.'
love's long since cancell'd woe (7): is the sorrow the poet had once felt over the
loss of his close friends; loss that has dulled over the years but now returns as he
thinks of the past.
And moan...sight (8): Some scholars interpret this line to mean 'I lament the cost
to me of many a lost sigh.' "'Sight' for 'sigh' was archaic by Shakespeare's time
and seems only to have been used for the sake of rhyme (see OED). Sighing was
considered deleterious to health; compare 2 Henry VI 3.2.61-3: 'blood-consuming
sighs . . ./Look pale as primrose with blood-drinking sighs', and 47.4." (Blakemore
Evans, 142). However, the ordinary word 'sight' also makes sense in this context;
that is, the poet has lost many things that he has seen and loved.
dear friend (13): Shakespeare's first use of the term 'dear friend' in the Sonnets.
All losses...end. (14): His friend is as great as the sum of all the many things the
poet sought but did not find.
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Sonnet 30 is a tribute to the poet's friend -- and likely his lover. The poet's
sorrowful recollections of dead friends are sparked by the lover's absence and can
be stopped only by thoughts of his lover, illustrating the poet's dependence on his
dear friend for spiritual and emotional support.
Notice Shakespeare's use of partial alliteration over several lines to enhance the
texture and rhythm of the sonnet. Here is one example:
When to | the Sess | ions of | sweet si | lent thought
I summ | on up | remem | brance of | things past...
About the poem
In this poem the speaker talks about how he remembers sad things in his past,
and how they make him sad all over again. He mourns people who have died, and
lost loves, and things he no longer sees. But if he thinks of his friend, his loved
one, all these sadnesses disappear.
Understand the poem
1. What word in the first line suggests that the speaker enjoys his memories in
some way?
2. What are the things he finds to be sad about?
sessions (1): the sitting of a court. The court imagery is continued with 'summon
up' in line 2.
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1. Explain the speaker's use of 'teeming brain' (line 2) in the context of the poem.
(2)
2. What does the image of 'the full ripened grain' (line 4), express about the
contents of the 'books' (line 3)? (2)
3. Examine lines 1112: 'Never have relish in the faery power of unreflecting
love'. Comment on the fear inherent in the speaker's words. (3)
4. Refer to lines 1214: 'then on the shore ... nothingness do sink.' Critically
discuss the significance of these concluding lines.
f) storehouses
b) See
g) great
c) Find
h) beautiful
d) Magic
i) you
e) Enjoy
j) coastline
6. What is the central theme of the poem? Fear of death, unfulfilled dreams, or
fear of ageing?
7. How does the speaker resolve his fears in the couplet? Use your own words to
explain.
war ended.) The speaker describes how the sun used to wake the dead soldier
back home in England, and later in France where he fought - until the morning
of his death. He thinks about the power of the sun: how its warmth makes
seeds sprout into life, and how once, millions of years ago, its warmth
started life on earth. Finally he asks, if the sun cannot bring the soldier
back to life now, why did the sun start life on earth in the first place?
rouse-wake
Wilfred Owen was the son of a station master, and the oldest of four children in a
poor family. After school he worked as an assistant teacher. In 1915, the year
after the First World War broke out, he volunteered to fight in the English army.
He was short, weak and often ill, but by that stage the army was not fussy about
who joined. In 1916 he was sent to the front line in Belgium (where soldiers
fought in deep trenches ditches-- against the German army). The next year he
was trapped by enemy fire with 18 other soldiers in a tiny, flooded, collapsing
trench for four days. He described the experience: 'each of us three-quarters
dead, all shaking uncontrollably and vomiting.' He was sent home suffering from
shellshock. He began writing poetry at the institution where he was sent. Five of
his poems were published, but were not noticed. The next year he was sent to the
front again. He was killed by German gunfire on a canal, as he was trying to
anchor a bridge. He was awarded a medal for bravery after his death. His parents
received the telegram informing them of his death on the day the war ended.
About the poem
The poem is a meditation on the purpose and meaning of life, prompted
by the death of a soldier. (The poet was himself a soldier in the First World
War (1914-1918) and was injured before being killed a week before the
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Maya Angelou overcame a sad childhood in Missouri, USA, to become a worldfamous novelist. She was born into a poor family and was raped by a family friend
when she was eight. The experience made her mute (unable to speak) for years.
She wrote movingly about this in her autobiography I Know Why the Caged Bird
Sings. She has been an actor, a singer and a dancer. She was the first black
woman director in Hollywood. She has a son and holds a lifetime appointment as
Professor of American Studies at Wake Forest University in North Carolina.
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Tone:
Sardonic (mocking)
Critical (disapproving)
Cynical (negative opinion)
Disenchanted (unsatisfied)
Scathing (emotionally hurtful)
Line:
1. The speaker expresses his opinion, setting the tone for the poem.
2. Those depersonalises the men, suggesting their immaturity.
3. The speaker suggests their silliness by pointing out their strange way of
dressing. The contrast of long and shorts again suggests that the men are not
being sensible (their rugby game is supposedly opposed to the domestic lives they
should be living as grown men).
4. Edwardian suggests that the players look out-dated. This suggests that they
are out of place (they do not belong on a rugby field).
5. The speaker points out the rugby players physical signs of aging in order to
emphasise that they should not be on the field at their age (sport is best left to
the young).
6. Huge and fat is redundant (a description containing words of the same or
similar meaning and thus unnecessary). This is for emphasis. That their knees
ought to be the knees of heroes suggests that the players fall short of being
heroes.
7. The speaker lists some physical aspects of the game of rugby.
8. The speaker then mocks the courage displayed by the team, questioning its
necessity.
9. Good clean fun is an essential attitude of sports and sportsmanship, which the
speaker mocks by contrasting fun...
10. with solemnly. The rest of the line portrays their actions to be violent.
11. The players show such devotion to their violent game for the meagre purpose
of honour. This further mocks the rugby players.
12. The mockery continues as the goals to which the players seek are given as
pointless. Manliness, their team, their district side.
13. The speaker calls the players boys who, in a most humiliating and immature
way, roll each other in the mud.
14. That the players do this in public, for everyone to see, suggests their
foolishness.
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Summary:
The speaker expresses his views about a rugby league match played by middleaged men well past their prime. He sees them as pitiable and ridiculous as they
use the game to recapture their youth and escape the boring routine of their
married lives. The poem satirises the importance men place on sport and men
who try to regain their lost youth.
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15. Blind suggests that the players are unaware of their pathetic state of
existence.
16. The speaker believes youth to be dignified. It is ironic that the players are
trying to achieve youth, dignity, by playing rugby, which is seen as undignified by
the speaker. The speaker believes that the players are playing rugby in order to
escape their domestic lives. The bank is representational of finance and
occupation.
17. The wife represents married life, the pram of children and the spin drier of
domestic chores. The spin of a spin cycle may suggest the never-ending cycle of
the routine of domestic life.
18. Spartan suggests that the life that the players seek is one of discipline and
aggression and free from responsibility or material concern.
19. The speaker has a favourable impression of youth. The repetition of back in
the previous line and this one suggests that youth is something that the players
have not experienced in a long time.
20. The speaker describes youth as the ability to have hope for the future, to
believe that you were something were not and being free from the
responsibilities of domestic life.
21. The speaker expresses the opinion that youth was a happy time of pleasure
seeking...
22. and of great worth and achievement (as suggested by golden). The long a
and o sounds create a nostalgic tone, suggesting that the speaker is
remembering his own youth.
23. The middle- aged players try hopelessly...
24. to regain their youth.
3. Do you agree with the speaker's idea of sport? Give reasons for your answer.
Explore poetic devices
4. Why do you think the speaker chose to describe the socks as 'Edwardian'?
5. Why do you think the poet ended off the first stanza with the word 'heroes'?
6. Why does the poet use a rhetorical question in the second stanza?
7. What effect does the poet intend when he describes the aim of rugby teams
as running each other down (line 10)?
8. Why do you think the poet chose the 'bank' as the place where the men
might work?
9. Why do you think the poet mentioned a 'spin drier'?
a) What is the irony in the last stanza of 'back to the days when boys were men'?
b) Explain exactly what the poet is implying by this irony.
Autumn-Roy Campbell
associated with both aging and dying, however, there is the promise of the return
of summer. The poet recognizes that during autumn only what is the strongest
and purest will survive.
The first line of stanza one is a personal response to the season: I love to see.
The poet speaks of leaves that depart. They do not just fall to the ground.
They depart as in they die. Thus the poet uses personification to portray the
falling of the leaves. He continues with his use of personification when he refers
to the clear anatomy (line 2) that arrives anatomy being the structure of the
human body. What the poet is saying is that he loves to see the stark, bare trunks
of the trees in autumn once the leaves have left the trees exposed.
The poet states that autumn is the paragon of art (line 3). A paragon is a
model of extreme excellence. This is indeed high praise for the season as it is the
epitome of artistic skill in that it creates unique and splendid images these being
the exposed, bare trees. In lines 4 to 5, the poet states that autumn kills all forms
of life and feeling except what is the strongest and can survive. This suggests
that autumn is a season of renewal and purification because it kills only is old and
what can no longer thrive (survive).
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In stanza two the geese are migrating to warmer climates. The poet uses
onomatopoeia in the words clanging chains (line 6) to describe the sound they
make as they fly. The poet also uses a metaphor as he compares the way the
geese fly to links in a long chain. Think about the V-shape of the geese as they fly
across the sky. The word harnessed (line 7) implies that the geese are tied to
the moon and are dragging it across the sky in the same way a horse pulls a
carriage. The word stripped (line 8) usually has negative connotations as it
means that the trees have been stripped of their bark. However, Campbell
suggests something positive in the use of this word. As the sun-clouding planes
(tall trees) and dark pines (lines 9) are stripped of their old, tattered bark, they
are bare and they allow the needles (line 10) or sun rays to shine through.
Notice the use of the pun in the word needles. The needles refer to the long,
thin shape of the leaves but also to the long, thin piercing sun beams. Once the
spring arrives, this warmth of the sun will allow new growth and regeneration. In
this way the natural cycle of life continues.
This poet was born and brought up in Durban. He won a scholarship to Oxford
University; but after a year he gave this up and went to live in various
Mediterranean countries. He quarrelled with a lot of his friends and wrote cruel
poetry about other poets. In the 1930s he supported the fascist leader Franco in
Spain (at a time when most young poets and artists were strongly opposed to
Franco). He also supported Mussolini in Italy, and he supported Hitler in Germany.
Then in the 1940s he joined the British army to fight against the Germans! He
died in Portugal in a car crash.
In his poem, Autumn, Campbell celebrates and pays tribute to the season as a
time of both purification and transformation. He recognizes that autumn is
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In stanza three, the poet speaks of the olive vines that blow or are strained in
the strong winds or gale (line 11). The branches of the olive trees expose their
white undersides that are like hoary wrestlers (line 12). The word hoary
means white haired with age. Thus the olive trees that are blown over in the
wind look like white haired wrestlers bent over with toil (line 12) or effort.
Think of two aging wrestlers holding each other, bent over, in a ring.
The fruits of summer, however, remain during autumn as the grapes and olives
have been picked and stored in vats (line 14). These fruits will be used to make
red froth (line 15) or wine and sun-gold oil (line 15) or olive oil. So even during
autumn, summer lingers (line14) it does not die but remains in the fruits that
it has produced. Notice the evocative, rich warmth of the colours: red and sungold.
In the last stanza, the poet states that the rotting wood from the vines and olive
trees will be used to create warmth in the hearths reviving pyre (line 16) or the
fireplace. The use of the word pyre is significant as a pyre is a pile of wood
associated with the burning of a dead body. However it has connotations of
renewal and rebirth. This suggestion of new life is emphasized by the word
reviving. So autumn is not just about death it is about new beginnings and the
energy and vitality that will return with the spring.
The poet deliberately creates an atmosphere or mood of warmth and cosiness in
the final stanza. The wine is compared to a ruby (line 18) because of the
richness of its colour. The wine pants fire it seems to be alive, energetic and
breathing as it is reflected in the lit crystal of the cup (line 20). There is a sense
of comfort and well-being. Even though it is cold and autumn is the season of
death, there is the promise of spring and the natural cycle of life will continue.
Notice the irony in order to bring rebirth, the old and the dying must be
destroyed.
1. With reference to stanza one, what two things does the poet admire about
autumn? (2)
2. How does the poet appeal to the sense of hearing (aural) in stanza two? (2)
3. Comment on how the olive trees and the simile of the wrestlers develop the
theme of the will to survive. (3)
4. Explain how the poet conveys the colours and richness of autumn in stanzas
three and four. (3)
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The poet, William Plomer, was born in the Northern Transvaal in 1903. He was a
novelist, broadcaster and editor in fact, he edited many of Ian Flemings James
Bond novels. Throughout his life, Plomer observed and commented on the issues
of race and culture in South Africa. He was called the father of modern poetry in
our country. Plomer died in 1973.
The main theme in The wild doves at Louis Trichardt is that Africa would be
good if it were not for the human beings that invaded the continent. Nature and
man used to be in harmony but the disruption of man has led to disturbance and
disharmony. Man and nature are no longer compatible and do not live together
harmoniously any more.
In the first stanza of the poem, the poet creates a sense of busyness and activity:
long files/ Of ants and men, all bearing loads. Notice that the men and ants are
working together and are involved in the same activity. The poet has created a
sense of harmony and cohesion (unity and togetherness) between human beings
and nature. People have not yet invaded or exploited Africa. The poet uses a
metaphor in The suns gong beats. In the same way that a gong calls people, the
sun calls people to work and sweat runs down as a result of hard physical labour.
Again the poet reinforces the idea that man and nature are in harmony. The poet
also suggests the intense heat of the day in using the image of the suns gong
beating.
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In line 4 a mason-hornet (a large stinging wasp) shapes his hanging house. The
word shapes suggests the attention to detail and the care with which the
creature builds his home. The poet uses alliteration in the image In a wide flood
of flowers to convey a sense of the abundance and beauty of nature. There is a
dignity in the crested cranes as they bow(ing) to their food. The final line of
stanza one introduces a foreboding (threatening) note that contrasts sharply with
the previous harmony and celebration of nature: From the north today there is
ominous news. There is no indication at this stage of the poem what his ominous
news is but it certainly invades the orderliness that the poet has developed in the
preceding (previous) lines.
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In the second stanza the poet focuses on the intense heat of the midday and the
high pitched sound of the cicadas (shrill sounding insects). The word mad
suggests the extreme din (very loud noise) of the cicadas in fact their sound is
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stanza it is apparent that this has changed. For the time being though, nature is
supreme.
About the poem
The speaker starts by describing the overwhelming heat and loud insect sounds of
the morning. There is tension over the 'news from the north', though we are not
told what that news is. In the afternoon, there is silence as people sleep
exhausted in the heat. But in the trees, wild doves make a beautiful, cool sound
that seems to say that without men, the natural world of Africa is at peace and
happy.
Understand the poem
1. What do you think the men are doing in the first stanza?
2. a) What animals and insects are named in this poem?
b) In view of the whole poem, why do you think the poet named specific
animals and their activities?
3. What are the two things that seem to make the environment uncomfortable
for people?
4. 'From the north today there is ominous news.' The speaker mentions this but
does not bring it up again in the poem. What could this line suggest about the
society he is describing?
5. What message do the doves seem to be giving in the last stanza?
6. What do you think the doves' message means? Do you agree with it?
Explore poetic devices
7. Find a metaphor in the first and third stanzas that describes the heat. Name
the two things that are being compared, and then explain why they are similar.
8. Why do you think the poet chooses such graphic images ('the sick, the shot
and the dead') to describe the reclining people?
9. What words does the poet use to make us feel that the doves and their music
are refreshing?
10. The title refers to the doves, but they are only referred to in the last few lines.
Why do you think the poet has chosen this title for the poem?
11.How does the poet celebrate the harmonious natural activity of both
creatures and man in stanza one? (2)
12.Refer to line 5 and show how the poet accentuates (emphasises) the mass of
flowers through his use of metaphor and alliteration. (3)
13.The tone of stanza two is harsh and oppressive. With reference to two poetic
techniques explain how the poet has achieved this tone.(3)
In the third stanza the poet describes mans reaction to the extreme heat. Man
cannot tolerate this fierce heat that is conveyed in the metaphor: Oven of
afternoon. The insects cope but man attempts to escape into shadow or
shaded rooms or by hiding faces in folded arms. The final line of the third
stanza refers back to line 7 in stanza one. The ominous news from the north
could be a reference to a war in the north of Africa as now the people sleep or
lie in attitudes of the sick, the shot, the dead. The poet is suggesting that man is
now out of harmony with nature as he needs to hide from its intensities.
Furthermore the poet alludes to mans violence and possibly even his corruption
and moral deterioration in his suggestion of war.
In the final stanza the poet celebrates the supremacy of nature. While man is
overcome by the extremities (excessive temperatures and sounds), the wild doves
begin bubbling their coolest colloquies (conversations). Notice the contrast that
the poet establishes between stanza three and stanza four. In stanza four there is
a sense of calm, coolness and serenity. The pace is slow and smooth. The doves
have neat silk heads and bubble with eagerness and delight. The poet uses a
metaphor to compare the doves heads to silk implying that their heads are
smooth and cool to the touch. This coolness is enhanced by the use of the
refreshing word liquidly in line 25. The alliteration coolest colloquies
emphasises the enthusiasm and pure joy of the birds as they coo and converse
with one another. From their tent of leaves in the trees the birds appear to
announce their formulae or solution: Men being absent, Africa is good. This
formula is pronounced with conviction and Clearer than man-made music
could. Again the poet stresses the dominion (superiority and power) of nature.
There is a suggestion, though, that this could be temporary as the war in the
north could move down and man could exploit and spoil nature. In the first stanza
it was suggested that man was in sync (in harmony) with nature but by the final
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here from Malaysia when he was ten. He studied biology at university and
became a marine biologist at Natal University. He was in charge of research into
sea pollution. His poetry is strongly influenced by his work as a scientist in the
natural world. He won many awards, both in South Africa and overseas.
Douglas Livingstone was regarded for many years as South Africa's best Englishspeaking poet. He was not born in South Africa, however. His family brought him
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13.Suggest why the speaker uses the words 'his' and 'he' to refer to the stork. (2)
14.Study lines 610: 'he, too tired beak on chest'. Discuss how the diction used
in these lines contributes to your understanding of the stork's condition. (3)
15.What does the phrase, 'his invisible tunnel of sky' (line 20), suggest about the
stork? (2)
16.From your understanding of the poem as a whole, comment on the
appropriateness of the metaphor, 'pillow of his body' (line 2). (3)
17.Explain lines 6 7 in your own words. (2)
18.How does the poet personify the bird in stanzas 3 and 4? (2)
19.Provide a possible explanation for your answer to question 7. (1)
20.Why would the bird be early (line 14)? (1)
21.What does the word regally in stanza 6 reveal about the poets attitude
towards the bird? (1)
22.Comment on how the pace in the last stanza contributes to the meaning of
the poem. (3)
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Stanza 3: These bikers do not know where their toughness will take them. They
come from known addresses, but have no destination. Scared off by the bikers,
the birds (representative of nature) have to give in to the will of humans. Humans
make amazing machines (like the motorcycle), and even think they can make
souls too. But our control of these machines is imperfect - they don't always
work. People try to shape their future with their machines.
Stanza 4: Our machines, and how we control nature, are a partial solution to our
problems. The speaker says we are not condemned for lacking direct instinct like
the birds, and we don't have to live out of harmony with nature. People just find
themselves in movements or organisations that divide society. We are the cause
of this division (the hurler), and are affected by the division (the hurled). We are
always moving on from one thing to another.
Stanza 5: He hears the noisy bikes only for a minute, then they move past. They
only come in order to leave again. They move off with a burst on the machines
(bikes) they have created. They travel through towns that have no nature in them,
and that lack a spiritual purpose. While birds (nature) and saints (holy people)
might complete what they set out to do, regular people are constantly on the
move. By always moving on from one thing to another, human beings are always
getting nearer and nearer to their final destination, although they never reach it.
9. If we interpret the title literally, the speaker talks about (a) _ and (b) _ being
'on the move'. Complete the sentence.
10. Line 10 uses a simile - 'as flies hanging in heat'. How do 'the Boys' resemble
flies?
11. Identify and explain the figure of speech in lines 11-12: 'their hum / Bulges to
thunder'.
12. Name and identify the figure of speech in stanza 4 that tells us that human
life consists of a series of changes.
13. Identify the figure of speech in line 33.
14. Find an example of repetition in the poem and show how it contributes to
the meaning of the poem.
15. Refer to the epigraph: 'Man, you gotta Go.' What does the epigraph
highlight about man? (2)
16. Refer to lines 15: 'The blue jay poise, or both'. Account for the poet's
focus on the birds. (2)
21. Examine line 10: 'Small, black, as flies hanging in heat'. Discuss the
effectiveness of the image used in this line. (3)
22. Comment on the appropriateness of 'At worst, one ... not keeping still'
(lines 3840) as a summing-up of the central idea of the poem.