Hot Desking

1. Does the narrative content at the start of my video work well with the
video or should there be some performance content added to break the
video up?
I dont think its quite clear that there is a break-up so perhaps give more
evidence of that (like a text message on a phone or a fighting scene)
I like what youve got so far. I would say that the narrative is relatively
ambiguous though, not that thats a negative.
It seems to work well with the music, there could be an added narrative
change to make the audience understand why a difference in the music
video has happened
Performance content would definitely help to justify the mood and genre of
the song and keep the pace a lot more interesting

2. Does the video show, and make sense that the two characters are
different or does it confuse you?
It somewhat confuses me so far, as there isnt much footage, and I jump to
the conclusion that the two girls are together and have broken up? Im not
sure if thats what you were thinking for it yet as theres not enough
footage to tell just yet.
I dont think its confusing, but I would say that as more content is added,
you could make it clearer.
I realized the characters were different people which was done well by
presenting them near different locations however there could be some
added in-between section
We need a better reinforcement of the first character, showing her attitude
and performance would definitely show the audience a better
understanding

3. Do you think the content of my video has a strong correlation to the genre
of the song? Are there any areas for improvement?
I think the correlation is very strong, its a very good concept for a video of
this genre. As I said before I would suggest that you add a clear break up
scene so there is a very clear narrative
Definitely matches the genre of music, if you continue like this, I dont
think there will be a problem identifying the genre.
The content within the music video works very well with the style of music
which is used and could further be developed with the style that is already
there
The correlation is strong, yet a better portrayal of the first character can
definitely help us to understand the message of the song

4. Do you think there are enough different shot types per scene, should there
be more? Does it make the video to boring, are the shots to similar, do
they show a relation between the visuals and the lyrics?
I like the amount of shots, the different close-ups and angles are really
good! I like the range and it certainly isnt boring at all. There is a definite
relationship between the visuals and the lyrics!
The range of shots per sequence, in terms of camera angles, works really
well, and how the split second shots interrupt shots, is really effective.
There is a good pace to suit the music building up with good
cinematography which adds to the scenes, the visuals are also
complimenting the lyrics, there could possibly be more to add to the video
but it is very suiting at the moment
There need to be more performance based shots but other than that the
narrative is clear between characters. The visuals link well and the
feelings shown to us by the first character fit well with the lines being
sung. Perhaps the editing of the second character could be a cleaner to fit
the lip-sync, visuals and lyrics