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Tyler McGehee
Mr. Damaso
3 May 2010
Long-Awaited Equality
All, too, will bear in mind this sacred principle, that though
the will of the majority is in all cases to prevail, that will to be rightful must be
reasonable; that the minority possess their equal rights, which equal law must
Thomas Jefferson
All around the globe, across the nation, and even right here in our backyard, there are
always signs of racial discrimination and segregation. About a week ago, Arizona passed one of
the most controversial bills in its history with Senate Bill 1070. This bill gives police officers the
right to pick out “random citizens” and ask if they are illegal or not, which violates the rights of
millions of American citizens and segregates them from the rest of society. Even through art
there are visible signs of discrimination. Through organizations like Football Against Racism in
Europe (FARE) to the popular rap of Public Enemy, glimpses of the separation of races can be
Natasha Trethewey can be seen as a true supporter for both of these ways to promote
change, for she writes on how the white population causes the oppression of the black race.
Natasha Trethewey is both a devoted writer of poetry and a professor of English at Emory
University (“Natasha Trethewey,” par. 5). She wrote her three books of poetry from 2000 to
2007, which were the release dates of her first book, Domestic Work, and her third, Native
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Guard (“Natasha Trethewey (1966- )”). Throughout these two books, along with her second
piece of work called Bellocq's Ophelia, her poems “Flounder,” “Native Guard,” and “His Hands”
are the three that best describe the type of poetry that Natasha Trethewey writes, and they best
displays her underlying message of racial inequality. Natasha Trethewey’s poetry attempts to
define the repression and mistreatment of the black population in the United States during and
after the Civil War, and the black communities’ reaction to this oppression.
Natasha Trethewey grew up in such a way that guided her down the path toward creative
writing and poetry. Born in 1966, she grew up in Gulfport, Mississippi, along with some time in
Atlanta, Georgia, but had no documented job other than engulfing herself in books at the library
(“Natasha Trethewey (1966- ),” par. 1). She attended the University of Georgia for her
Bachelor’s degree in English and creative writing, Hollins University for her Master’s degree in
the same subjects, and the University of Massachusetts for her M.G.A. in poetry (“Natasha
Trethewey Biography,” par. 3). There are many different things that may have influenced her to
become a writer of poetry and created her mindset on oppression. Her father, Eric Trethewey,
was also a poet, and her biography on Poetry Foundation says that “She credits her father for not
only encouraging her own writing but for teaching her that what is most important in life
demands hard work and taking risks” (“Natasha Trethewey (1966- ),” par. 1). Also, after her
parent’s divorce, she spent most of her summers with her grandmother in Decatur, Georgia,
which gave her a more feminist view on life in general (“Natasha Trethewey Biography,” par. 1).
The poetry of Natasha Trethewey generally touch on the separation of races through
constant mistreatment of the black population. She expresses a common genre of the
discrimination of black women and men during times of inequality in the United States
(“Natasha Trethewey (1966- ),” par. 3). Consisting of sonnets, traditional ballads, and free verse,
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Trethewey’s poems have been acknowledged by popular critics, such as F.D. Reeve, a journalist
for the journal Poetry, and Rita Dove, a former United States poet laureate (“Natasha Trethewey
(1966- ),” par. 3 and 4). Most of her poems have a basic theme of ordinary black people and
their physical and psychological battles through the oppressive state they are in (“Natasha
Trethewey (1966- ),” par. 3). Many personal experiences have influenced and created her
subject of writing. Great exposure to books as a child in a public library she visited often
probably pushing her into a life of literature (“Natasha Trethewey Biography,” par. 1). Also, her
book of poems named Bellocq’s Ophelia was inspired directly from the work of E.J. Bellocq’s
paintings in his collection called Storyville Portraits, which pictured mixed-race female
prostitution in the red-light districts of New Orleans (“Natasha Trethewey (1966- ),” par. 5).
History, both before Trethewey’s life and throughout it, affected her poetry and her
projection of racial segregation. William Logan writes on Trethewey that, “The daughter of a
black mother and white father, she was raised in the deep South of the Sixties, when the civil
rights acts had still not penetrated the backwaters of her state” (Logan, par. 1). She lived in a
time of disastrous segregation between her race and the white population, and it was especially
hard on her due to her mixed-race family. Other events in history show her influence for writing
her poetry on black oppression. The Native Guard was a group of the first black soldiers that
fought in the Union Army during the Civil War, and Trethewey uses this sanction as the title of
her third book of poems, Native Guard (“Overview: ‘Native Guard’,” par. 1 and 2). Trethewey’s
poems were influenced by both this and the citizens who lived under “the harsh realities of a Jim
Natasha Trethewey’s writing on the mistreatment of the black population by the white
race in the United States is portrayed throughout most of her poems, and is prominent in her live
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and her research on the topic. As stated above, the most likely event in her history that affected
her decision to take up the issue of black rights in her poetry comes from the civil rights laws in
the Sixties when Trethewey was only a child (Logan, par. 1). The South during that time was a
disturbing place to live in, for during her childhood only certain areas were being affected by the
new laws, while the other areas were left in the shadows and forgotten about. This ridiculous
way of living was ultimately ended once the laws spread throughout the rest of the South, but the
time that had passed from the start of the Laws to the finalization of them still had segregation
Trethewey’s general genre of poetry, which projects black oppression by the white race,
is best shown by her poems “Flounder,” “Native Guard,” and “His Hands.” In her poem
“Flounder,” you can see that there is a clear distinction between the two different races, instead
of having both of them morphed together as one (Hogue, par. 15). This poem is a reflection of
how the black and white races are the two ends of society in general. Cynthia Hogue, when
speaking about the poem, states, “the child will find herself flip-flopping between the absolutes
of white and black as she grows up” (Hogue, par. 15). We can also see in “Native Guard” that
the theme of black oppression applies by the continuous segregation of freed black slaves during
the Civil War (“Native Guard,” par. 6 and 7). This poem tells a story about the never-ending
oppression of the black race, for even when they are free, their white partners in battle still see
them as different. “His Hands” is the final projection of the black segregation, for it depicts a
scene showing how the white race will not accept the black people, even though it suffers and
offers everything it can for them (“Inscriptive Restorations: An Interview with Natasha
Trethewey,” par. 13). It is a poem about how the white race will not accept the black people into
their society very easily, but it still takes their possessions and benefits from their labor
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(“Inscriptive Restorations: An Interview with Natasha Trethewey,” par. 13). The sources used to
describe these three poems do not provide any bias, for Cynthia Hogue is a writer for The
Women’s Review of Books, Gale Cengage Learning is a coalition of different writers who
contextualized the description and criticism of the work “Native Guard,” and the source
describing “His Hands” was an interview with Natasha Trethewey by Charles Henry Rowell.
Black oppression and segregation is shown in Trethewey’s poem “Flounder.” This poem
shows the urge to solidify the difference between the two human races of black and white (see
Appendix A) This is shown by a number of different lines in the poem, like in line 45. “I stood
there watching that fish flip-flop …” (Trethewey, “Flounder” line 25). From this poem, it is
shown that both races can be seen by the flipping and flopping of the fish, but nothing is done
about it; nothing will stop the flipping between the two races (see Appendix D). This sense of
division is also shown in lines 22-24. “A flounder, she said, and you can tell/'cause one of its
sides is black./The other is white, she said.” (Trethewey, “Flounder” lines 22-24) This line shows
how there is a distinct separation between the two races of white and black people, but also
creates an image of the two matrixes of society that cannot be changed (Hogue, par. 12; 14). But
this also offers hope, for if they cannot be changed, then the black population will always exist,
and will not be engulfed and killed off by the white race. This poem in general shows how the
two races are still part of the same body, but are separated by racial oppression, just like in
““Native Guard” by Natasha Trethewey shows how the black race during the Civil War
was still mistreated even though they had been declared free (see Appendix B). In the overview
of this poem, edited by Ira Mark Milne, it states that this poem “laments the loss of life, dignity,
and freedom” (“Overview: Native Guard,” par. 2). This can be shown by lines five through six
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of this poem, which describe this sense of false freedom. “I thought to carry with me/want of
freedom though I had been freed …” (“Native Guard,” par. 6 lines 5-6). This fragment of the
poem shows that these soldiers have a sense of freedom, but something is stopping them from
feeling fully free, and this thing is the white people still segregating them from society. Just
because they are legally free doesn’t mean they are socially free. This sense of false freedom is
““His Hands” by Natasha Trethewey creates an image of true isolation of the black race
in society by the white population. This poem recreates the theme of black oppression by the
clashing black and white races that have the chance to create a loving relationship with each
other, but instead keep separate and segregate the black population (see Appendix C). “Still he
tries/to prove himself in work” (Trethewey, “His Hands” lines 11-12). This section of the poem
shows the black race is trying to show the white race that they are good and beneficial for
everyone, but he has been working for years and still nothing has changed in their relationship
(see Appendix E). Trethewey also tries to show that the black race has no chance of equality
with this white society when he states “’His Hands’ by Natasha Trethewey/will never be large
enough.” (Trethewey, “His Hands” lines 1-2). The hands of the man symbolize the beneficial
actions that can be done by the oppressed black race, but Trethewey’s word choice of “never”
shows that these actions won’t change the position the black population is situated in (“Inscriptive
The musical artist named K’naan wrote his song “Wavin’ Flag” for the celebration of
freedom and love across the world, and unlike Trethewey’s poem “His Hands,” it offers hope
that things can change between the races of our society. The song “Wavin’ Flag” is connected to
the theme of black oppression because it hints on how oppressed people of the world dream of
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freedom, but they do not achieve it because they are always pressed down (“Maclean’s
Interview; K’naan,” par. 4). K’naan is a Somali-Canadian who had moved from Somalia during
a time of war to Rexdale, Ontario, and most of his songs speak about how he wants Somalia to
end war and live in peace and freedom. His song “Wavin’ Flag” was created in 2009 in time for
the World Cup of soccer in South Africa in 2010, and has been designated the official theme
segregation because it tells of a group of people’s need to be free from oppression. This song is
about how global freedom and the elimination of oppression should occur in our world today, but
do not due to the selfish needs of the dominant populations of society (see Appendix F). The
specific lyrics were created to provide hope for the people in this world that are still trapped
without any freedom. This inspirational song, which came out during Natasha Trethewey’s
lifetime, touches on how these trapped people just want to be free, just as the black population
wanted to be during the time of the civil rights laws in the Sixties. K’naan’s song isn’t just
related to Trethewey’s work; it also has relevance to the paintings of Jacob Lawrence.
The painting by Jacob Lawrence called “Panel No. 17: “Tenant farmers received harsh
treatment at the hands of planters” shows the white man forcing slave labor onto the black
people. Lawrence’s painting and Trethewey’s literary thread of poems both touch on the
segregation and discrimination of black citizens in the US (“17.-20. Jacob Lawrence (1917-
2000),” par. 10). Jacob Lawrence, a painter and story teller, painted pictures of the African-
American struggle during the twentieth century (“17.-20. Jacob Lawrence (1917-2000),” par. 1).
Although this piece of art was published in 1940-41, which is about 25 years before the birth of
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Natasha Trethewey, the subjects described by his piece of art were still important and relevant
Jacob Lawrence’s painting “Panel No. 17” projects the theme of black oppression in
Trethewey’s poems because it describes the domination of the black slaves by the white race.
This particular piece of work shows two black slaves doing slave services for a white farmer (see
Appendix G). In this painting, there are many different perspective views that can be used to see
the image of oppression. It is pointed out in the description of the painting that the white man is
“literally and metaphorically higher in the composition,” showing a position of power over the
black slaves (“17.-20. Jacob Lawrence (1917-2000),” par. 10). The painting shows the reasons
for why the black population in the South moved north, and these reasons were still imperative to
Natasha Trethewey and her poems on black oppression are directly related to
Trethewey’s childhood of civil rights laws and past oppression in the South, along with K’naan
song “Wavin’ Flag” and Jacob Lawrence’s painting “Panel No. 17.” All of her poems relate to
the problems with the segregation of black people by the dominant white population in past
events in the United States. Her theme of black oppression throughout all of these sources can
also be seen especially in FARE, the rap of Public Enemy, and the Senate Bill 1070 passed in
Arizona recently. From these examples, this issue of racial oppression that Trethewey is writing
about is still happening throughout the world today. If we look around, there are always these
pockets of oppression all across the globe, and Natasha Trethewey is calling on us as her readers
to change this. Her style and subject matter apply to the whole world so that her message can be
spread to anybody, and all people can do something to stop this issue of racial oppression.
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One really good thing that you did was using a lot of sources. You had a lot of evidence
to back up your points and your literary thread, but I think your thread can be narrowed down
because it long and a little confusing. For example: “Natasha Trethewey’s poetry attempts to
define the repression and mistreatment of the black population”, when you say this you could
narrow it down to “Natasha Trethewey’s poetry displays the repression of African Americans”.
Also, when you add at the end “, and the black communities reaction to this”, what does that
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---.---. “His Hands.” African American Review. Terre Haute: Indiana State University, 1995.
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Appendix A
Appendix B
If this war be forgotten, I ask in the name of all things sacred what shall men remember?
Frederick Douglass
November 1862
Appendix C
Still he tries 10
to prove himself in work,
his callused hands heaving crates
all day on the docks, his pay
twice spent. He bring home
what he can, buckets of crabs 15
from his morning traps,
a few green bananas.
Appendix D
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Appendix E
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Appendix F
When I get older I will be stronger
They’ll call me freedom just like a wavin’ flag
And then it goes back, and then it goes back
And then it goes back, and then is goes
When I get older I will be stronger
They’ll call me freedom just like a wavin’ flag
And then it goes back, and then it goes back
And then it goes back, and then it goes
And then it goes
Appendix G
“Panel No. 17: “Tenant farmers received harsh treatment at the hands of planters” by Jacob
Lawrence, 1940-41.
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Appendix H
Emulation Poem
Here, she said, put this on your head. “Soccer Ball” by Tyler McGehee
She handed me a hat.
you 'bout as white as your dad, After Natasha Trethewey
and you gone stay like that.
Here, he said, put this on your face.
Aunt Sugar rolled her nylons down He tossed me some sun block.
around each bony ankle, You have fair skin like your mother,
and I rolled down my white knee socks and I don’t want you lookin’ like a rock.
letting my thin legs dangle,
Uncle Eugene walked toward the sideline,
circling them just above water his lack of strength causing a slow pace,
and silver backs of minnows and I pulled up my soccer socks,
flitting here then there between strutting slowly across the field’s base,
the sun spots and the shadows.
arriving at my position on the field
This is how you hold the pole as a shrieking noise by the whistle of brass
to cast the line out straight. started the game, and the black and white
Now put that worm on your hook, panels turned gray rolling across the grass.
throw it out and wait.
Chase the ball down, son,
She sat spitting tobacco juice to trap them in the space.
into a coffee cup. Search for a way to close them down
Hunkered down when she felt the bite, and win the ball with haste.
jerked the pole straight up
He relaxed on the sideline,
reeling and tugging hard at the fish taking down an energy bar.
that wriggled and tried to fight back. Not paying attention once the ball was won,
A flounder, she said, and you can tell But his immediate reaction was bizarre,
'cause one of its sides is black.
jumping and screaming to push onward
The other is white, she said. to guide the ball past the defensive wall.
It landed with a thump. They’ve got possession, he said, ‘cause their
I stood there watching that fish flip-flop, feet are surrounding all sides of the ball.
switch sides with every jump.
The black and white panels fused in color,
I ran down the field looking very lean.
Examining the ball’s changing colors as it
rolled down the discolored pitch of green
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