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This means that to get at least a 5 for task achievement we must give
some kind of overview. If we do not give any overview we will always get
below a 5. If we select the appropriate data to include in our overview
we get a score of 6 and if it is clear we get a 7 for this part of the exam.
If you know how to select the appropriate data and you practice writing
a clear overview, then you are likely to get the score you deserve in this
section.
What is an overview?
Overall, I notice that there are 7 regions. Europe, Asia-Pacific and North
America make up the majority, with North America being the largest.
Africa, India, Latin America and China make up a very small proportion.
We can then include these things in an overview paragraph:
Overall increase/decrease?
Peaks/lows?
Any similarities?
listening tests. In other words, if you know how to paraphrase you are
more likely to get the score you need.
The mental processes required to paraphrase will also help you to fully
understand the question then you can begin all of your answers in the
writing test by paraphrasing the question.
Example: Paraphrasing is one of the most important skills to
learn before doing your IELTS test.
Paraphrased: Prior to taking the IELTS test, mastering
paraphrasing is one of the most crucial things to do.
As you can see, the second sentence (paraphrased sentence) uses
synonyms to change some vocabulary (e.g., important for crucial and
prior to before and changes the grammar (e.g., Paraphrasing is one
of the most important skills for mastering paraphrasing). You can also
change the word order.
These are the three main methods you should use in the IELTS test to
paraphrase sentences. Ideally, you should try to use all three but
sometimes two will only be possible.
Method Number 1: Using Synonyms
Synonyms are different words that have the same meaning. For
example, humans is a synonym of people and attractive is a
synonym of beautiful. This method simply replaces words with the
same meaning in order to produce a new sentence.
For example:
My car needs petrol.
My vehicle requires fuel.
There were 3 out of four words replaced with synonyms to produce a
new sentence, with the same meaning as the first one. This is the most
common method that students use and it can be used effectively. The
biggest mistake students make is trying to paraphrase and the word
having a similar meaning, but not the same meaning. Similar meanings
are not good enough and will lose you marks.
Method Number 2: Change the Word Order
Changing the word order also allows us to effectively paraphrase a
sentence, but again, we have to be careful. Dont change the word order
without thinking about how this affects the grammar of the sentence. By
changing the word order, you may have to add a word, subtract a word
or change the form of the word.
The 100% rule applies again; dont change it if you are not 100% sure it
is grammatically correct. Remember that you are being judged on your
ability to produce error free sentences in the IELTS test as well as use a
range of grammar structures.
Fortunately, there are two straightforward ways we can change the word
order in most IELTS questions.
1.
You can easily change the order of the clauses, if the original
sentence has more than one clause.
You can also change the word order if there is an adjective or noun
in the question. You do this by simply changing the adjective into a
relative clause.
If we write all of our sentences in the IELTS exam like this, we lose marks
because they are too simple. What we need to do is put them together
to make complex sentences.
When should I use complex sentences?
In general, we should use simple sentences when making main points;
normally at the beginning of a paragraph. We should then use complex
sentences when expanding on the main point, for instance when giving a
supporting example or explaining your main point.
How do I make a complex sentence?
Remember that a complex sentence is just more than one simple
sentence put together to make one sentence. To make a complex
sentence we normally should have two things- a dependent clause and
an independent clause. A clause is a group of words with both a subject
and a verb.
An example of a dependent clauses is .because the weather was
cold. This is a dependent clause because it has a subject and a verb but
it doesnt make any sense on its own. To make sense we need to add an
independent clause.
As the name suggests, an independent clause can make sense on its
own. For example, I wore a warm coat. If we combine these two clauses
Alternatives to Synonyms
Instead of using synonyms you can use the following things to vary your
language:
1.
Examples
2.
Definitions
3.
If you cant think of a good synonym you can simply list an example or
two. So in the question above about computers it is perfectly
acceptable to say laptops and tablets. These are the exact things that
students use in class, so it is fine to write them. Like synonyms, just
make sure that the examples match the word 100%.
You can also define the word if you cant think of a synonym. So for our
example above about travelling, you could say people going from place
to place. This is obviously much longer than a simply synonym, but it is
much easier sometimes to write about something in simple language
than think of one complicated word.
Finally, it is always acceptable to change the form of the word or
phrase. So instead of trying to think of a synonym of violent video
games (which is very hard to do) you could say video games that have
violence. All we have done is change the word from an adjective
(violent) to a noun (violence).
Summary
Only change a word if you are 100% sure the meanings are the
same.
Task Achievement
Lexical Resource
Grammar therefore accounts for 25% of the marks in your writing test.
You are assessed on two things:
1.
2.
Accuracy of grammar
Examiners look for how many error free sentences you have. You
therefore need to make sure each sentence has no errors. Even a small
mistake like an article in the wrong place or misplaced plural counts
towards this.
This is why it is so important to check your work after you finish writing.
Always try to leave yourself two minutes at the end to check your work.
Simple errors, which could be fixed with a quick check, will really bring
your marks down in this area.
Range of grammar
Describing Trends
There are two main grammatical structures we can use to describe
trends.
1.
Example:
There was a gradual rise in the price of oil.
There has been a sharp drop in the price of oil.
Possible adjectives
gradual
moderate
modest
sharp
dramatic
slight
steep
steady
significant
considerable
rapid
Possible nouns:
variation
decline
decrease
dip
drop
fall
peak
fluctuation
growth
increase
rise
slump
2.
Example:
The price of oil rose gradually.
The price of oil has risen dramatically.
Possible verbs:
rise
jump
grow
climb
increase
rocket
fall
drop
decline
decrease
go down
plummet
plunge
Possible adverbs:
gradually
moderately
modestly
sharply
dramatically
slightly
steeply
steadily
significantly
considerably
rapidly
slowly
Example:
The price of property fell sharply
The percentage of homes dropped dramatically.
2.
Example:
There was a fall in literacy levels.
There has been an increase in the cost of coffee.
3.
Using fractions
Example:
Example:
Overall, more people preferred public transport than taxis.
2.
Example:
A higher number for people preferred public transport than taxis.
3.
Example:
Taxis were more popular than public transport.
4.
Example:
The highest % of commuters preferred taxis.
5.
Example:
The least popular mode of transport was buses.
Summarising
Overall it is clear.
If the time is one point in the past, for example January 1990, then
we should use the past tense.
1.
Present Perfect:
We use this tense to show that something started in the past and has
continued up until now.
Example
Oil prices have been decreasing since July.
3.
Future Perfect
Past Simple
Use this tense to talk about an action that started and finished at a
specific time in the past.
Example
The price of oil fell from $150 in Jan 2014 to $50 in Jan 2015.
Approximations, Percentages and Fractions
Fractions
73%- nearly three quarters
51%- just over a half
49%- just under a half
32%- nearly a third
Task Achievement
Lexical Resource
Lexical Resource
Lexical resource refers to your ability to use vocabulary both
accurately and appropriately.
You will get a higher score for vocabulary if you:
2.
Bar Chart
3.
Pie Chart
4.
We use the:
when there is only one in the entire world: the internet, the
environment, the ozone layer, the atmosphere
with superlatives: the worst, the shortest, the lowest, the most
beautiful, the least impressive
to talk generally we drop the word the and use the plural: dogs
dont like cats, people with dyslexia have reading problems,
Japanese cars are very reliable, German products are very high
quality.
2.
Advice
Advertising
Food
Information
Knowledge
Education
Money
Traffic
Shopping
Travel
Entertainment
Happiness
Literature
Work
Research
3.
The verb must agree with the noun. If you use a plural noun, you must
use a plural verb and vice versa.
Example:
There is some dogs outside.
There is some food in the kitchen.
ing or to + infinitive
We use to + infinitive verb after the following verbs: learn how, would
like, want, seem, refuse, promise, prepare, offer, learn, hope, help,
deserve, decide, afford, and ask.
Example:
It is important to learn how to speak English
Most people cannot afford to go on holiday every year.
I would like to study overseas.
Note: like can be followed by ing or to + infinitive.
We use verbing after the following verbs: suggest, recommend,
practice, mind, keep, involve, imagine, give up, finish, enjoy, deny,
consider, carry on, and avoid.
Example:
I would recommend checking your writing for mistakes.
You should avoid drinking coffee after 6pm.
Ive finished writing my essay.
5.
Some exceptions include the word of after the noun phrase: a wide
range of, an equal number of, a large/small number of, a
small/large/equal proportion of.
Exceptions: quite a few people, to a certain extent/degree
6.
Use of Commas
In the IELTS writing test we often use phrases called discourse markers
or liking phrases to link our ideas together, such as on the one hand,
on the other hand, however, for example, nevertheless, firstly, secondly,
in conclusion, in summary.
We normally use a comma after a discourse marker that introduces a
sentence:
On the one hand, motor vehicles are said to be the main cause.
Fossil fuels are mostly to blame for global warming, for example,
from cars and factories.
7.
Verb Tenses
Present simple:
o
Present continuous:
o
Present Perfect:
o
Past Perfect
o
Past Continuous
o
Past Simple
o
Future Simple
o
Future Continuous
o
Future Perfect
o
8.
Bad at (something)
Good at (something)
Surprised at (something)
About or with:
In:
rise in
decrease in
increase in
fall in
drop in
Between:
difference between
Of:
advantage/disadvantage of
example of
number of
percentage of
use of
9.
Apostrophes
Cannot-Cant
Do not- Dont
I will- Ill
Johns book
Marys brother
to or too
there or their
though or through
programme
accommodation
advertisement
beginning
business
commercial
country
environment
Wednesday
February
government
occurred
practice
IELTS TASK 2
IELTS Writing Task 2 requires you to write an academic style essay on a
common topic. You have 40 minutes to write at least 250 words.
Task 2 can be broken down and thought about more easily in 5 steps:
1. Question Analysis
You must first understand the question to know exactly what the
examiner is looking for. In order to do this, you must first identify the
question type, then identify the keywords in the question and finally
identify the instructions words in order to find out what the examiner
wants you to do with the question.
2. Planning
The students who get the highest marks plan before they write and they
often plan for up to 10 minutes. Planning helps you organise your ideas
and structure before you write, saving you time and helping you write a
clear essay.
3. Introduction
The introduction should tell the examiner what the rest of the essay is
about and also answer the question directly. This tells the examiner that
you know what you are doing straight away and helps you write your
main body paragraphs.
4. Main Body Paragraphs
This is where you give the examiner more detail. You do this by stating
your main points and supporting these with explanations and relevant
examples.
5. Conclusion
Here you provide a summary of what you have already said in the rest of
the essay.
Essential Writing Task 2 Skills
The Benefits of Planning
Writing an IELTS essay without a plan is like trying to put IKEA furniture
together without any instructions. You will get half way through it, get
lost and frustrated and you will lose control of your entire essay and end
up with something like this:
A good plan should be like a map that guides you through the essay and
makes sure you get to where the examiner wants you to go. Every
sentence should have purpose, if you are just writing for the sake of
writing then it wont be a very good essay. Less is more in many cases
and a good plan makes sure that every single sentence has a purpose.
How To Plan
Planning has 4 stages:
1.
Question Analysis
2.
Idea Generation
3.
Structure
4.
Vocabulary
Question Analysis
This is probably the most important stage. The number one problem
most IELTS students have is not answering the question properly.
So you must
Idea Generation
Instead of brainstorming we need to answer the questions directly. If one
of your friends asked you this question in a coffee shop, you would have
no problem thinking of an answer, so do the same in the exam. It helps
to frame it within Why? questions.
Next we need to put our ideas into a structure. This is very important
because it helps us organise our ideas in a coherent way, just like the
examiner wants us to.
Paragraph 1- Introduction
Sentence 1- Paraphrase Sentence
Sentence 2- Thesis Statement
Sentence 3- Outline Statement
Paragraph 2- Why advantages are strong
Sentence 4- Topic Sentence
Sentence 5- Explanation
Sentence 6- Example
Paragraph 3- Why disadvantage are weak
Sentence 7- Topic Sentence
Sentence 8- Explanation
Sentence 9- Example
Paragraph 4- Conclusion
Sentence 1- Summary of main points
Vocabulary
Another common problem students have is repeating the same words,
especially words from the question, over and over again. This lowers our
mark for vocabulary because it shows that we cant think of synonyms. A
solution to this problem is to identify words in the question that we
might need to use more than once in the question.
One of the consequences of improved medical care is that the people
are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the
disadvantages?
We can think of the following synonyms:
Improved medical care- enhanced medical treatment
Living longer- improved longevity
Life expectancy is increasing- the length of time people live is
rising
Advantages- benefits
Disadvantages- drawbacks
IDEAS FOR IELTS WRITING TASK 2
One of the biggest fears students have is opening up the writing paper,
looking at task 2 and having no ideas. Idea generation in IELTS writing
task 2 is something students worry a lot about, but it doesnt have to be
that way.
IELTS writing part two questions are biased towards Western countries
and are mostly First world problems. For example:
In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or
travel for a year between finishing high school and starting
university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages
for young people who decide to do this.
Fortunately, questions like these are rare and most of them will be on
familiar topics that most people have an opinion on, such as health,
education and the environment. Remember that this is a language test
not a general knowledge test.
Do my ideas have to be entertaining?
Many students also worry that their ideas are not interesting enough or
they are too boring. The examiner is not looking for you to entertain her.
They are looking for you to demonstrate an ability to write an essay in
English supported by evidence and relevant examples. There are no
extra points for interesting ideas. What the ideas must be is relevant to
the question being asked. You can have the most boring ideas in the
world and still get a band score 9, as long as your ideas are relevant.
Solutions
1.
2.
3.
Mind Mapping
4.
5 Questions Method
5.
method below, set yourself a time limit and practice with some old past
exam papers.
1.
This simply means knowing the 10 common topics that come up in the
exam and learning some vocabulary associated with these repeated
topics. The wider your vocabulary the easier it will be for you to think of
ideas. If you have time, dont just stick with the 10 most common topics,
go even further.
When you have free time, have a look at some English newspapers and
identify some topics that might come up in the IELTS test. When you do
this you should be doing two things. The first is simply noting down any
unknown vocabulary, try to guess the meaning from the context and
then look up the meaning to confirm on your smart phone or dictionary.
This will really help you, not only for writing part 2 but also for all the
other parts of the IELTS exam.
2.
Brainstorming
Mind Mapping
A good technique is to place the keywords in the middle and then place
the micro-keywords on the branches.
The only disadvantage to this method is that some students spend too
much time creating the perfect mind map. There are no points for
creating beautiful mind maps; they are only there to help you with ideas
so do it quickly.
4.
5 Questions Method
The method is simple. I ask students to imagine they are sitting with
their friend or family member in a coffee shop and they ask your opinion.
In an exam there is a lot of pressure on you and you often find it difficult
to think, but if you were in a relaxed environment with a friend you
would have no problem giving your opinion.
To think of more ideas you just imagine that your friend has the opposite
feelings to you about the topic and write their ideas down.
Lets look at the example below:
Your friend- Do you think its a good idea that young people take a year
off between school and university to work or travel?
You- Yes. Many young people are not mature enough to go to university
at 18 and travelling or working will help them mature. Working for a year
could also allow them to save money and gain valuable work experience.
If they go travelling, they will get to experience different cultures.
So you see you have just thought about all the ideas you will need for
this question. You can write your ideas down (recommended) or just
think about it for a minute.
This idea gives you a very clear idea about your opinion on the question
and will help you stay relevant and write a clear, coherent essay. Like
any method it takes practice, so try it out with a few past questions.
What do the examiners want?
For:
Fairness
Equality
Prevent discrimination
Against:
There are certain phrases we can use to explain our ideas such as:
Use one of these phrases to explain what your topic sentence means,
the reason why, or the result of your topic sentence. You dont need to
do all three, just one. Make sure that anyone with no knowledge of the
subject can understand what your main point is.
Supporting Examples
The last part of a good supporting paragraph is a relevant example.
Examples give your points more authority and make your argument
stronger.
The two main problems here are not being able to think of examples and
examples not being specific enough.
In the IELTS test, if you cant think of a good example, make one up. In
school or university you should research and use real examples, but in
the test it is fine to make them up. It is not a test of your knowledge; it is
a test of your written English. The examiners will never check the
examples and they are only worried about how the examples support
your ideas.
Two good ways to make up examples are using newspaper articles or
university research. I often do this when I am writing sample answers
and they also help you be more specific (see below).
2.
3.
Vary your language. Just because you are restating the ideas
you have in the rest of your essay, doesnt mean you use the same
language. Instead you show the examiner you have a wide
vocabulary by paraphrasing.
4.
5.
6.
Linking Phrases
First you should start with a linking phrase, but some are better than
others . Here are some examples:
Finally
In a nutshell
In general
In conclusion
To conclude
Finally isnt really suitable because it indicates that you are making a
final point and therefore a new idea. Finally belongs in the main body of
your essay, not the conclusion.
In a nutshell is too informal and we should never use it in IELTS
conclusions.
In general tells the reader you are going to talk generally about a topic.
This is not what we are going to do in our conclusion and we should
therefore not use it.
In conclusion and to conclude are the only two linking phrases you
should use to start your conclusion. They tell the reader exactly what the
paragraph is about and they are formal.
How to Write a Good Conclusion
There are two elements to a good conclusion:
1.
2.
Luckily we have already stated our main points in the introduction, so all
we have to do is look back at the conclusion and paraphrase this.
We can also add a prediction (what we think will happen) or a
recommendation (what we think should happen) to our conclusion.
Cohesive Devices
This makes our message more succinct and our writing easier to read.
But, does that mean we should use as many cohesive devices as
possible?
Overusing Cohesive Devices
The biggest mistakes many students make is to use cohesive devices in
nearly every sentence.
If you look at the IELTS Writing Marking Criteria it states that a Band 7
uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there
may be some under-/over-use. This is typical of a student who knows
the meaning and how to use cohesive devices, but thinks that using
them as much as possible will get them a high mark.
However, using them too much often leads to students using them
incorrectly. It is stated for Band 5 that makes inadequate, inaccurate
or over use of cohesive devices. In my experience, most students
get a Band 5 in this category for this reason. They think that using them
as much as possible will get them a high mark, but dont consider the
meaning and how each of them should be used in a sentence.
Band 8 and 9 students tend to only use cohesive devices when
necessary and they use them appropriately and effectively i.e. correct
meaning and grammar. In fact, many students have criticised Band 9
answers because they dont have enough discourse markers. Take a
look at the extract below from an academic journal (The Power of Human
Rights by Stephen C. Ropp).
Meaning and Grammar
The next problem students have is learning long lists of cohesive devices
and not learning the meaning of each word or how it should be used in a
sentence. If you use the wrong word it confuses the reader and this
lowers your mark for both coherence and grammar. It is better to use
no word than use a word incorrectly.
Learn just the words you need and learn them 100%. By 100% I mean
that you know exactly what that word means, when it should be used
in a sentence and how it should be used in a sentence. Until you know
all of this 100%, dont use it.
Finally, dont try to use very complicated words and expressions, if you
are not already comfortable with the simple terms. Being able to use