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Name:

Miss Taylor

Student Extract Example

Performanc
e Standard

Grad
e

Assignment 1: About Me

Tasks Within Assignment 1

Intro to
me

Clearly
explains
understandi
ng of the
selected
capability
or
capabilities
with
insightful
and
detailed
examples.
Explains
understandi
ng of the
selected
capability
or
capabilities,
with some
detailed
examples.
Given some
explanation
of what the
selected
capability
or
capabilities
are, with
brief
examples.
Given some
explanation
of what the
selected
capability
or
capabilities
are, with
limited
examples.
Given some
explanation
of at least
one
capability

Grade: C

Charact
er
Strength

Personal
style

Learning
style

Mindset

Pay it
forward

Interest
s and
skills

Capabiliti
es PPT

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and give an
example.

Miss Taylor

Assignment 1: About Me

Feedback:
Congratulations on having the positive work ethic and strength to resubmit your assignment.
This alone shows more about your capabilities as a person then any assignment could. Sadly,
that is not gradable evidence. Regardless, keep working hard and pushing through challenges.
It shows that you have the strength to take on the world and give it your all.
For your assignment feedback:
This task was focused on the Personal and Social Capability.
Intro to me
What you have done:
In your Intro to me Task you mention your interactions with your peers. You show a good
group mentality through your explanation of projects you have completed with the aid of your
friends. This shows how much you value teamwork and working with people.
Because of your good examples, this task has assisted you in passing this Assignment. You
dont have to make the edits for the other assignments. It is just feedback to keep in mind for
future assignments.
Character Strength
What you have done:
In your Character Strengths Task you give some nice examples of how you use your
strengths generally. If you had mentioned a specific example of when you had used this
quality or how it assists you in reaching your goals it would have really improved your grades.
That part stands at a C. You also add in a general sense how you could improve your two
bottom strengths. This keeps you at a C.
Because of your good examples, this task has assisted you in passing this Assignment. You
dont have to make the edits for the other assignments. It is just feedback to keep in mind for
future assignments.
Mindset
What you have done:
In you Mindsets task you were able clearly identify the difference between a fixed and
growth mindset. However, your reflection again is a little general. You give some answers but
without adding detail and examples of your growth or fixed mindset.
What you need to do to improve your grade:

PLP Assignment Marks\Feedback Miss Taylor

Assignment 1: About Me
To meet this capability better next time I suggest you add examples of different things that
you trying to improve your situation or personal skills. Giving examples of your personal
attitudes, your goals in life, how your skills, abilities or achievement relate to your goals in
life.
For example:
Give detailed examples of your fixed and growth mindset. Not just general, for example; I
have a fixed mindset in Maths. Instead you could say; I have a fixed mindset in Maths. This
can be seen in my lessons when I am faced with algebra. I dont understand it. My parents
cant help me either with my homework as they dont understand it either. I have always
thought that I got my lack of Maths skills from them. Expanding here could easily boost you
from a D to an A for the whole assignment rather than just the task upon resubmitting.