are no citations, and there is no explanation. (0 points)
There are 1-2 quotes that
are sometimes explained and cited. (15 points)
More than three quotes
are introduced, cited properly, and explained. (20 points)
___/20
Thesis
There is no thesis or the thesis is
unclear and sloppy. Alternatively, the thesis does not match the topic. (0 points)
There is a thesis that is
incorrectly positioned, not concise, and does follow instructions for length. (10 points)
The thesis is clear,
contains three reasons, is correctly positioned, direct, and is one sentence. (15 points)
___/15
Thesis Support
The thesis is not stated after the
introduction, and is not supported or is poorly supported. The support contradicts the thesis. (0 points)
Most paragraphs contain
transition sentences that connect to the thesis, but the connections are unclear. (10 points)
Each paragraph begins
with a transition sentence that connects the contents of the paragraph to the overall thesis statement. The thesis is supported in the paragraph by quotes and explanation. (15 points)
___/15
Conventions
There are multiple errors in grammar
and spelling, with few varied vocabulary choices. (0 points)
There are few errors.
Vocabulary is somewhat redundant. (7 points)
There are no spelling or
grammar errors (including punctuation). There is an exceptional and varied vocabulary throughout. (10 points)
___/10
Organization/ Formatting
The essay is typed in Comic Sans :(
The essay is in a legible
font, paragraphs contain at least 5 sentences, and formatting is correct. (7 points)
The essay contains a
myriad (at least 5) of paragraphs which are formatted correctly according to rules of font, size, and color. Each paragraph should contain a minimum of 8 sentences. (10 points)
___/10
Additionally, the paragraphs do not
flow together, spacing is incorrect, there are less than 5 sentences per paragraph. (0 points)