First Draft Task

From
Thomas street
11025, apartment 14
London, UK
To
Shannon Street
Mercy Asylum
Liverpool, UK
Dear Dad,
First of all, I did not know what to put in my letter. It
took me a long time to put in my letter. So therefore;
I decided to include in my letter expressing my
feelings how I miss you, how I want you back home,
and expressing my gratitude for the things you have
done for me over the years.
Dad, you do not know how much I miss you; I miss
you very very much , just like the earth misses
water. This is very usual from a girl who misses her
father so much. I miss a lot of things in you; our
hangouts together, the surprises you make for me at
Christmas, and also at my birthday. All of these
things make me pleased as a daughter.

I am very surprised how you did not recognize me

when I visited you. How you did not remember this
jovial face, this face that loves and admires her
father so much.
Also, I want to express my feelings to thank you for
the things you have done for me over the years .
Such as putting me in one of the best schools and
universities. Also, I want to thank you for raising me
the best raising ever, in which the raising was better
than any father who raised his daughter.