Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Berkeley Branch,
California Writers Club
Write Angles April 2009
Table of Contents
Yes, Grammar Can YES, GRAMMAR CAN EVEN BE FUN
Even Be Fun 1 An old, and probably apocryphal, story has
an editor attempting to rearrange one of Winston
The View From the Helm
Churchills sentences to avoid ending it with a
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preposition. The Prime Minister is alleged to have
Guidelines for the scribbled in reply: This is the sort of bloody
July and August nonsense up with which I will not put. Whether or
Write Angles 2 not the response was really Winnies, we can
sympathize with the sentiment behind it. The rules
Member News of grammar sometimes seem like strictures to be tolerated, not instruments to
Anne Fox 3 be agreeably employed.
Making grammar less intimidating is the mission of Janis Bell, our
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featured speaker for the April 18 meeting. Author of the best-selling book
Tidbits 5 Clean, Well-lighted Sentences, Bell has been teaching writing since 1973.
She began her career as a composition and business writing instructor at San
Free Workshop for Francisco State University. She then worked for the San Francisco
CWC Members Only 5 Community College District, teaching on several campuses and in fifty
government agencies. Since the early 1980s, she has delivered on-site
Co-Publishing
writing seminars to a wide range of professionals and taught business writing
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at Golden Gate University.
Internet Social Networks as Bell has become familiar over the years with the grammar and
Platform 7 punctuation problems people are most likely to find troubling. She has also
learned how to explain solutions in language that is concise, easy to
Resource for Publications understand, and often humorous, as reflected in her writing seminars and in
Research her book.
Alex Campbell 7 At the April 18 meeting, well have an opportunity to benefit from
Bells experience. Who or whom? Affect or effect? Wishing I was or wishing
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I were? Only to the right or left of require? Comma or no comma? Colon
or semicolon? We can bring up questions such as these, take notes on the
solutions to our sentence problems, or ask about grammatical conventions
along with which we might feel disinclined to go.
Cover Photo Series: - David Baker
Distinguished Writers
of California
April Meeting:
William Saroyan Saturday, April 18, 2009.
Social Hour: 9:30 a.m. - 10:30 a.m.
Meeting and Program: 10:30 a.m. - Noon
Event Loft, Barnes & Noble Book Store
Jack London Square, Oakland.
JoAnn Ainsworth (March Write Angles interview) will have a book signing for Out of the Dark on
Saturday, April 4, 2 to 4 p.m., at A World of Books, 137 Pelton Center Way, San Leandro, CA 94577 (510)
September 2008
483-5587. This latest novel of JoAnns is a medieval romance with a touch of paranormal and a lot of
suspense. Refreshments will be served at the book signing.
Congratulations to Gary McIntyre, whose documentary film, Two Up Two Down Reunion, was
accepted into the New York and Los Angeles Film Festivals and may even go on to Cannes. This film has to
do with the Vietnam years, a period marked by political and emotional turmoil. More information to follow.
Janelle Moon, member of the Marin branch, transferred her membership to Berkeley.
Dorothy Benson, an Emeritus member of the Berkeley Branch inadvertently dropped from the rolls,
was reinstated.
Anejuelle Floyd rejoined the Berkeley Branch. Anejuelle wrote Keeper of Secrets, published in 2007.
Leslie Martin, an associate member, is working on a series of personal vignettes.
Michael Vernetti has published a nonfiction book.
Francine Howard has excited much interest in her current work of fiction. More information to
follow.
Alan Kite joined at the March 21 club meeting.
Applause is in order for Lucille Bellucci, who stars as first-prize winner of the 2008 WestSide Story
Contest, of which member Tatjana Greiner is founder and editor. Money also stars as the prize for Lucilles
story, Signora Petronio.
Risa Nye and her co-editors will be reading from and discussing their book, Writin on Empty, at the
Rockridge Library on Tuesday, April 28, at 7:00 p.m. Risas piece, The Long Road to Lulu: One Writers
Story of Self-Publishing, appeared in the December issue of Write Angles.
Attention, Members: Dont let that manuscript, article, wisdom on paper, mope in the murky depths of a desk
drawer. Who will publish you or give you a prize for your writing if you dont get your work out into the light
of day? Keep us posted on any morsel of writing youre doing or have done or contemplate doing. Whether
youve written a letter to the editor, a filler, a puzzle, fiction, nonfiction, jokes ,a book review, greeting cards,
screen play, or been in a contest, in an interviewall is worthwhile and a source of inspiration for CWC
members. Please send the exciting news to Anne Fox, writefox@aol.com.
Centennial Plans
The State Central Board (CB) is considering several matters and will likely vote on these choices when it meets in
Oakland on 4/19:
1) Plant a tree at Joaquin Miller Park, a CWC tradition that got lost
2) Print and distribute the Literary Landmarks Map displayed at BB March meeting
3) Provide updated information on CWC and the Memorial Grove for a display at the JMP Ranger Station
4) Signage on Highway 13 from Caltrans and/or signage from the city on the Joaquin Miller Road and at the JMP
park entrance.
5) Bench at the CWC Writers Grove
6) Renovation and repositioning of the 1941 sign in JMP dedicating the CWC Writers Grove
The CWC Centennial logo is available on vests, jackets, and maybe other clothing items ordered through Lands
End. Ordering details will be communicated.
BB October meeting occurs during the state-designated California Writers Week, October 18-24, 2009.
All these activities above require some help from members. Choose an activity youd like to help to make happen.
Several organizations are interested in partnering with the CWC (e.g., have us speak to their members, print articles
in their newsletter or Web site, offer historical knowledge, and perhaps grant money).
Several branch librarians are interested in workshops, especially for children. Anyone willing to take on this project?
Oakland Metropolitan Chamber of Commerce newsletter will carry information about our meetings and speaker
programs to its 15,000 readers.
Centennial logo items, book bags, pens, cloisonn lapel pins will be available for sale BB club meetings.
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- AL Levenson
I write because, in simple terms, I enjoy it and it fulfills me. Writing seems to be my path. I hate to use terms
like path because Im loathe to sound like one of those people who describe their compulsion to write in Gar-
boesque tones but rarely write much of anything beyond occasional journal musings. My path is rocky at times. Im
blessed with more perseverance than talent. Still, writing keeps life fresh because my next challenge is never farther
than the next blank screen.
- W.E.Reinka, past president of the Berkeley Branch
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I write because it is an important part of who I am. It is a way to communicate more fully with the world
around me. I write to touch people about our environment, to help them learn more about themselves through their
own histories, to bridge the commonalities we share with one another. For example, my
efforts to trace the early history of the California Writers Club and the Berkeley Fire of
1923 led to some published articles. As an Oral Historian, I have helped develop several
bodies of work and individual works for nonprofit organizations.
More recently, I have been writing for friends and family to share compassion about
our losses of loved ones, in an effort to inspire courage, hope, and faith. Struggling more
often with my own losses has given me added insight into this life-and-death experience,
with new philosophical wisdom to share.
Finally, I write to bring the joy of life to my own experience and to those around
me. Sometimes I combine this writing with my photography.
- Therese Pipe joined the Berkeley Branch of the California Writers' Club in the 1980s and is a nonfiction
writer, editor, and occasional poet.
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I began to write because I liked telling stories that others wrote, and then I liked telling stories that I made up.
I never got over it. And I never looked back.
- Lucille Bellucci, Berkeley Branch member for over 12 years
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I write because of the pleasure-pain principle. If you have a talent, some activities are rewarding. You produce
better work with less effort and receive social approval. If you lack a talent, some activities are frustrating. You try
harder and produce work that everyone considers inferior. I am good at handling words and numbers but have poor
physical coordination. (The medical term for people like me is klutz.") That is why I write poems but never became
an artist, a ballet dancer, a circus clown or a dentist (and that is just the first four letters of the alphabet).
- David Mathew Gray, Berkeley Branch member since 2008, usually reserves his middle name for his byline.
Born in New Jersey. he grew up there and in Florida. According to his resume, he earned a BA at the U of Miami (in
English), an MA at the U of Minnesota, and a PhD at the Union Institute (both in social psychology), worked mostly
in public health administration, and is a widowed grandfather who lives in San Francisco. Most of the facts in his
resume are true.
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