Olivas 1

Alexis OIivas
Professor Batty
English 28
9 December 2016
Reflection
For this essay I decided to include another paragraph. As we learned in class having a separate
paragraph for the counter argument is important so I did just that. I added a paragraph explaining
how Trump did have valid ideas. There I would show how I dont completely go against Trumps
supporters but then after I explained how although Trumps ideas were not all bad Hillary

Clintons ideas were made more sense. In the original essay I quickly mentioned Enriques
Journey and since it was only briefly mentioned I forgot to add it to the works cited page but
now I did. I also assumed the audience knows what the book is about, which is not okay,
therefore I added a quick description of the overall idea of the book so the reader will not be
completely lost as to the significance the quote has.