Possible Theme: The Power of Suggestion in the Future Medicine

Outline of Final Exam Thesis:

First Paragraph:
Elaboration of the condition of medicine in the world nowadays, and its
role in healing patients.
The development of drugs invented and diseases that keep on
increasing in variety.
Explain about the mortality and morbidity rate in medicine.
What might happen in the future of medicine
Thesis statement: In the future of medicine, people may not relies entirely
in using chemical drugs, but instead, suggestion such as smile, placebo, and
trust in the treatment may play a significant roles.
Topic Sentence: In the world of medicine, it is not an unusual thing for a
treatment to fail in healing diseases.
Second Paragraph:
The definition of smile and happiness and what influencing them
How the smile can bring a positive effect and possible cure.
Fact based on available data
Topic Sentence: Smile is one of the simplest thing almost everybody can
do. However, the fact is many patients with critical disease are drowning in
sorrow that they forgot how to smile.
Third

Paragraph:
Definition and component of placebo
When to use placebo
How placebo has saved many lives

Topic Sentence: Placebo is a drug consist of harmless component such as

sugar, that are given in giving hope towards patients who are in desperate
need of hope.
Fourth Paragraph:
The importance of trusting yourself in the treatment available
Trusting in the doctors and others healthcare personnel
What it means when trusting yourself entirely in the treatment plan
Topic Sentence: Patients need to have a trust in the treatment plan and
healthcare personnel in doing their job in purpose of healing their disease.

Fifth Paragraph:
Raising hope and giving positive influence is the purpose of
suggestion, which may increase the number of disease cured.
Encouragement is needed from people surrounding the patients in
order to push the patients in their best condition.
Smile, placebo, and trust simply can make the future medicine world to
be brighter.
Topic Sentence: Without any doubt, the power suggestions will give good
impacts by pushing patients in their optimal condition and giving them hope
in them.
First Paragraph:
In the world of medicine, it is not an unusual thing for a treatment to
fail in healing diseases. Patients who have a critical disease are served with
the best treatment plans and efforts from the healthcare personnel in order
to reach their healthy condition. However, it cant be denied that as the time
gone by, variety of diseases are keep on increasing. Therefore, people are
trying their best to invent new medicine to fight these problems. Many
variety of antibiotics, steroids, and other category of drugs are invented to
works in different disease and methods, this way, we hope that the number of
diseases can be lowered in number and resistance toward a certain drugs can
be minimalized. No matter how well or best effort people are given, patients
are keep dying in the process and waiting, sometimes, the drugs might as
well not be working as good as it is predicted. Patients with critical disease
are well aware of this and somehow, they manage to get the best of them
and be positive thinking. Through lots of suggestion such as they believe that
they will be cured might increase their chances of getting healed. I think that
in the future, it would best to keep on improving the use of suggestion in
helping the treatment of patients. The suggestion can come in many forms
such as the simplest thing like smile, or placebo, and the belief of the
treatment plan they are in to.