Causal Argument Essay

by Dillon McCoy

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 No Personal words- No I, you, we, us,
"one", et c
WC

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 Coll.

S/V Agreement

Awk.

Awk.

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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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QM No Personal words- No I, you, we, us, "one", etc

QM WC
Word choice error:
Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very dif f icult
to do. Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too
hard to come up with a f ancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a
handy tool when you're trying to f ind a word that's similar to, but more accurate than, the one
you're looking up. However, it can of ten introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it
has exactly the same meaning.

Comment 1
need more here...you seem to just throw this in

PAGE 2

Comment 2
need more here

Comment 3
need another sentence to tie paragraph together...

PAGE 3

QM Coll.
 Inappropriate use of slang, clichd phrases, or idiomatic expressions:
T he use of slang, clichd phrases and idiomatic expressions can conf use your readers and
destroy the f ormal tone of your writing.

QM S/V Agreement
Subject-verb agreement:
Subjects and verbs should match in number and person. Singular subjects require singular
verbs; plural subjects require plural verbs.

QM Awk.
Awkward:
T he expression or construction is cumbersome or dif f icult to read. Consider rewriting.

QM Awk.
Awkward:
T he expression or construction is cumbersome or dif f icult to read. Consider rewriting.

Comment 4
need another sentence

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QM WC
Word choice error:
Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very dif f icult
to do. Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too
hard to come up with a f ancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a
handy tool when you're trying to f ind a word that's similar to, but more accurate than, the one
you're looking up. However, it can of ten introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it
has exactly the same meaning.

Comment 5
you never really go back to cost as a negative...

QM WC
Word choice error:
Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very dif f icult
to do. Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too
hard to come up with a f ancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a
handy tool when you're trying to f ind a word that's similar to, but more accurate than, the one
you're looking up. However, it can of ten introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it
has exactly the same meaning.

Comment 6
unnecessary
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