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Professor Batty
English 101
29 May 2017
Reflection
I did not state how or why Panorama High is significant to the Latino community. I
changed my introduction to address how Panorama High is significant to the Latino community
by stating how it impacts the Latino population of the school. I also added some things that make
the school specifically designed for Latino students. For that I explained how the only foreign
language offered at Panorama is Spanish and also how once a year the school hosts a Hispanic
themed event called Adelante Hombre/Mujer Latino/a. I talked about how the school impacted
the whole community. For example I stated how dangerous streets such as "Blythe" became
much less dangerous once the school was open. Lastly, I fixed up my MLA formatting and
proofread carefully.