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Eric Dahl
English 3307
15 May 2017
Psychosis, is first reviewed and diagnosed by a general practitioner. If the case is significant
enough, there is usually interest from analytical researchers to take on the case and investigate
further. With the consent of the patient or a legal guardian, the DNA of the patient is sent to a
sequencing lab in an effort to identify mutations or other abnormalities that may have caused the
disease. With a combination of luck and discipline, a specific gene can be narrowed down to be
In my current co-op at Boston Childrens Hospital, our team works to identify these
problematic genotypes every day. Specifically, I am most involved with the laboratory
procedures of DNA Sanger sequencing. I am able to take blood samples and identify the specific
nucleotide sequence that makes up the DNA within. In January 2016, my supervisor, Dr.
Catherine Brownstein, published the paper that determined the genetic origin of Childhood Onset
Deletion and Gain of Copies Variations Associated with Childhood Onset Psychosis was yet
The association between Childhood Onset Psychosis and 16p13.11 required the full
comparison of the two patients of interest. Similarities between the two case studies were
instrumental to the papers success. Indeed, the two patients share much in common, as can be
seen in the chart in the results section 1(p.1168). However, it would be remiss to not mention that
the chart can stretch the truth. Patient #1 is marked as having a parent with mental health
problems, although the paper states that patient 1s father is thought to have schizophrenia,
however, was not available for testing. Without definitive tests, it seems negligent to include the
On the other hand, the paper does a great job of convincing the intended audience,
genetics researchers, that mutations in the16p13.11 gene region can cause many disorders, not
just Childhood Onset Psychosis. For example, from the discussion section 1(p.1168):
deletion and 12 years with the duplication at the broader locus 16p13.
This discussion of the 16p13.11 gene not only successfully ties in Childhood Onset Psychosis to
find a place among the other genetic diseases mentioned, but also encourages further research in
the area. The abundance of neurologic disorders mentioned with gene 16p13.11 is intended to
reinforce the idea that any phenotype remotely related to mental illness is likely to have an
The citation of each paper that associates 16p13.11 with a specific phenotype also aids
the reader to identify the discourse community, as described by Swales. The goal of each
researcher mentioned, as well as Dr. Brownstein, has been to identify the genotype of the
problematic disease of interest. Interestingly, the individual investigations led by each researcher
has brought them to the same conclusion: mutations in the 16p13.11 gene can cause mental
illness that is likely to be passed from one generation to the next. By successfully identifying the
discourse community, Dr. Brownstein has made it tremendously easy for the reader to get
It is my hope that this genotype identification will eventually lead to a cure. The
utilization of gene editing techniques like the newly discovered CRISPR/Cas9, if properly
developed, can be used to effectively delete unwanted mutations in the human genome. As a
result, in just a few decades time, it could be possible to cure autism spectrum disorders by
editing mutations in the 16p13.11 gene described in this paper. If a CRISPR/Cas9 cure ever
comes to fruition, this paper by Dr. Brownstein will have served an extremely important purpose
between diagnosis and intervention. Unfortunately, ethics committees are drastically slowing
progress with CRISPR/Cas9 research until a consensus can be reached among geneticists across
the globe. So far, the most progressive agreement made is that CRISPR/Cas9 gene editing should
only ever be done in somatic cells, not in germ line cells 2. This serves to confine the gene edit to
one generation, instead of allowing the edit to be inherited for every generation thereafter.
Although CRISPR/Cas9 research is slow at current, I am optimistic that we will see many
I believe that my analysis of the paper perfectly aligns with my expectations of genetics
research. The current state of the genetics field involves the rapid identifying of gene functions,
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mostly due to the dwindling cost of DNA Sanger sequencing. This paper accomplishes that goal.
In addition, the paper is successful in mentioning all previously conducted studies that involve
the gene of interest. This serves the purpose of encouraging communication between researchers
involved, and also promotes further research. During co-op, I am afforded the opportunity to
work with many genetics analyzers and provide the legwork of data compilation. I am able to
observe trends in DNA mutations, but I am unable to identify them yet. However, I do believe I
am able to write at the level presented in the research paper. The text most suggests that an
important aspect of the discourse community of genetics is to read the latest papers that are
related to the topic you are studying. Reading related papers is essential to not only having a
gauge of the current state of the genetics field, but also to cite them as sources for your own
paper and gain authority in respect to the reader. Building off the information that each
independent researcher provides, and finding where your own research fits in, is the foundation
References
1. Brownstein CA, Kleiman RJ, Engle EC, Towne MC, D'Angelo EJ, Yu TW, Beggs AH,
Picker J, Fogler JM, Carroll D, et al. 2015. Overlapping 16p13.11 deletion and gain of
copies variations associated with childhood onset psychosis include genes with
mechanistic implications for autism associated pathways: Two case reports. American
D.C.: The National Academies of Sciences Engineering Medicine; [accessed 2017 May
http://www8.nationalacademies.org/onpinews/newsitem.aspx?RecordID=12032015a